GuiLun FanFiction 2~
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Posted 10/17/08 , edited 10/17/08
After Aaron and GuiGui left the room they didn't utter a single word to each other.They merely walked hand in hand, slowly and silently along the street.Tears continued to roll down GuiGui's cheek as she thought about what had just happen.Upon seeing this, Aaron's heart ached.He didn't know whyit ached,but he knew he wanted to protect this girl, he didn't want her to see her cry like this ever again.He grabbed GuiGui's hand a little tighter, hoping to give encouragement.

After 5min...

Aaron:(softly and gently)GuiGui,we've been walking for quite some time.You must be feeling tired.

Without further ado, he tugged lightly at her hand and directed her to the nearby park where they settled side by side on a merry-go-round.GuiGui didn't say anything, she simply sat there silently, leaving Aaron in a quandary on what to do.Then, she spoke

GuiGui:Ya Lun,you must be laughing at me...I wasn't in a very nice situation when you found me you know...

Aaron:Well...But i am glad i was the one to be able to help out when you were in that type of situation.

Silence....

GuiGui:(SLIGHTLY more cheerful now)Eh.Ah Bu, how you know where i was?i mean that i was feeling....

Aaron:(Looks into the sky and laughs)Your heart was screaming for me

GuiGui:(Playfully)Oh really?What did it say?

Aaron:(Thinks for a while)Well...It said "You very very handsome and cute AhBu,GuiGui needs you now beacuse she misses you terribly!"

GuiGui:(Glares at Aaron,Laughs)Ha!As if!.....(becomes softer and slower)But...Thanks for coming.

Aaron smiles at her sweetly as GuiGui places her head on his shoulders.Aaron looks into her eyes and his smile disappeared.Despite GuiGui smiling, Aaron saw the sorrow and sadness in her eyes.She was still hurt...

Aaron:(Places his hand on her face and dried the tears)There, a beautiful girl shouldn't cry over a small issue.Not for that guy....

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The next day, GuiGui dragged her feet all the way to school.She didn't want to go to school.She was afraid to go to school.This was because she was not only in the same school as WangZi, but also in the same class.

As she entered her class, her heart was thumping wildly.She felt cold as chills ran down her spine.She was afraid to see WangZi or anyone that had witness the arguement.She was scared to be mocked at,scared that she would not be able to control her emotions and cry once again.Keeping her head down,she quietly walked to her seat.Just then, she saw something on her table.She quickly walked up and realised that it was a lunchbox.Beside it was a note.

GuiGui:(frowning and muttering) "Morning lovely Gui~Feeling better already?Thought you would cheer up upon seeing this breakfast which i prepared with love.HAHA.Just kidding.See you after school! -Aaron-"

Immediately , GuiGui's burst into laughter, catching some of her classmates' attention including WangZi.

MeiMei:What's that?WOW! Free breakfast!From who?!

MeiMei teased GuiGui as she snatched the note away from GuiGui and giggled as she read it.

MeiMei:(whispering into GuiGui ear she she laughed teasingly) Breakfast made with love huh...From your AhBu!

Just then, GuiGui heard a sharp cute voice.

Yatou: WangZi~I made breakfast for you!

Upon hearing this, GuiGui's heart stopped....





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to be continued

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Posted 10/17/08
erm...anyone want to give suggestions on how you would like the story to continue?
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hope u will upload soon...sound awesome
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Posted 10/20/08
HAHAHA. I know.
Next epsiode guigui can tell wangzi that she giving him up
MUHAHAHA
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Posted 10/22/08
how about firstly guigui still cant get over wangzi
wangzi is actually luv her..but everytime ya tou come interrupting

during this time, aaron is the one who always accompany guigui (put many many sweet things on this )
n after some time he realized that he really luv guigui
but he thought guigui's luv is only for wangzi

instead, guigui has changed heart though she is not sure yet..she scared to be hurt once more
because before when she was with wangzi, he also treated her so caringly but at the end he dumped her

finally aaron confess his luv...but guigui still cant answer..she knows by heart that she feels so comfortable to be with aaron.
but she need to make sure that she has thrown away her feeling towards wangzi first.bcuz she doesnt want to hurt aaron as he is so nice to her...

n at this very time, wangzi also confess his luv to guigui n said that he has left yatou n regret what he has done before. guigui becomes confused. seeing this, aaron almost decide to give up because he assume dat guigui will be happy with wangzi

but whenever guigui with wangzi, she cant get rid the thinking of her sweet time with aaron
so guigui realised that her luv is truly only for aaron rite now
she then said to wangzi that it's been too late for him cuz she has giving up on him since long time ago
then guigui n aaron get together...n end up with kissing scene^^

hahahha
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Posted 10/22/08
owhhhh!i got new ideas
i think it's even better to show us the competition between wangzi n aaron to attract guigui..
like they both want to send guigui home after school n guigui has to choose,
or they r in the same tv show n in a game both of them want to partner with guigui
n add some media role to stir up conflicts between all of them!
perhaps also aaron confess his feeling in front of the media!haha...

well, i think about my previous post, u can just ignore them..coz when i reread that it seems a bit too ordinary plot..
but i hope it can give u some new ideas:)

looking forward for the next part.n pleaseee,, write many sweet things between aaron n guigui^^lol
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Posted 10/23/08

Agrove_g1na wrote:

owhhhh!i got new ideas
i think it's even better to show us the competition between wangzi n aaron to attract guigui..
like they both want to send guigui home after school n guigui has to choose,
or they r in the same tv show n in a game both of them want to partner with guigui
n add some media role to stir up conflicts between all of them!
perhaps also aaron confess his feeling in front of the media!haha...

well, i think about my previous post, u can just ignore them..coz when i reread that it seems a bit too ordinary plot..
but i hope it can give u some new ideas:)

looking forward for the next part.n pleaseee,, write many sweet things between aaron n guigui^^lol


wahaha u must be a big big fan of guilun~
i love them too
sounds good.thx for ur suggestion
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Posted 10/24/08

wznaz wrote:


Agrove_g1na wrote:

owhhhh!i got new ideas
i think it's even better to show us the competition between wangzi n aaron to attract guigui..
like they both want to send guigui home after school n guigui has to choose,
or they r in the same tv show n in a game both of them want to partner with guigui
n add some media role to stir up conflicts between all of them!
perhaps also aaron confess his feeling in front of the media!haha...

well, i think about my previous post, u can just ignore them..coz when i reread that it seems a bit too ordinary plot..
but i hope it can give u some new ideas:)

looking forward for the next part.n pleaseee,, write many sweet things between aaron n guigui^^lol


wahaha u must be a big big fan of guilun~
i love them too
sounds good.thx for ur suggestion


YES..i am..hahaha...i'm firstly a fan of guiwang..well, i still am..
but now i prefer GUILUN more..hehe~
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Posted 10/24/08

Agrove_g1na wrote:


wznaz wrote:


Agrove_g1na wrote:

owhhhh!i got new ideas
i think it's even better to show us the competition between wangzi n aaron to attract guigui..
like they both want to send guigui home after school n guigui has to choose,
or they r in the same tv show n in a game both of them want to partner with guigui
n add some media role to stir up conflicts between all of them!
perhaps also aaron confess his feeling in front of the media!haha...

well, i think about my previous post, u can just ignore them..coz when i reread that it seems a bit too ordinary plot..
but i hope it can give u some new ideas:)

looking forward for the next part.n pleaseee,, write many sweet things between aaron n guigui^^lol


wahaha u must be a big big fan of guilun~
i love them too
sounds good.thx for ur suggestion


YES..i am..hahaha...i'm firstly a fan of guiwang..well, i still am..
but now i prefer GUILUN more..hehe~


yeah same here.i love guiwang! but i love guilun more and lots more xD
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Posted 10/26/08

wznaz wrote:


Agrove_g1na wrote:


wznaz wrote:


Agrove_g1na wrote:

owhhhh!i got new ideas
i think it's even better to show us the competition between wangzi n aaron to attract guigui..
like they both want to send guigui home after school n guigui has to choose,
or they r in the same tv show n in a game both of them want to partner with guigui
n add some media role to stir up conflicts between all of them!
perhaps also aaron confess his feeling in front of the media!haha...

well, i think about my previous post, u can just ignore them..coz when i reread that it seems a bit too ordinary plot..
but i hope it can give u some new ideas:)

looking forward for the next part.n pleaseee,, write many sweet things between aaron n guigui^^lol


wahaha u must be a big big fan of guilun~
i love them too
sounds good.thx for ur suggestion


YES..i am..hahaha...i'm firstly a fan of guiwang..well, i still am..
but now i prefer GUILUN more..hehe~


yeah same here.i love guiwang! but i love guilun more and lots more xD


i love GuiLun...base it on them please!!

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OMG!!! can u be my teacher... teach me to how to be soo..... CREATIVE, COLORFUL WITH STORIES!! omg... i dont no what to say... ur TALENTED.. i hated to read in my whole life... ur the first person made me want to read.... PLZ. CONTINUE!!!!!!
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candy93069 wrote:

OMG!!! can u be my teacher... teach me to how to be soo..... CREATIVE, COLORFUL WITH STORIES!! omg... i dont no what to say... ur TALENTED.. i hated to read in my whole life... ur the first person made me want to read.... PLZ. CONTINUE!!!!!!


haha thanks i will try to upload asap.But it might take some time because i am feeling a little lazy~
anyway, for now, you may want to go to winglin.net

they have awesome fanfictions too
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OMG you are so talented
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