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Who To Chose? [My First FanFiction]
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Chapter 1- Running into trouble; Being helped.

The names Hinamori Amu. I'm a 5th grader at Seiyo Acamdemy, soon to be in 6th grade. I live a hapily norma- ok, well its not normal, but I'm satisfied with it! Alot of things have happened over the year...that includs getting closer to Tadase-kun! Speaking out which, I better get going to school if I want to see Tadase-kun before class starts!

I grabbed my brown bag, slung it over my shoulder, fixed my belt, and rushed downstairs.

"Good morning mom, I'm off to school, bye!" I shouted as I ran out the door.

"Bye Amu-chan, have a good day!" I heard my mother call out as I ran down the steet.

"I feel like today is going to be a wonderful day!" I said to myself and smiled.

Finally, I arrived at school with 5 minutes to spare. I looked around for Tadase-kun.

"Darn, I think I just missed him..." I said dissapointedly, then sighed.

Suddenly, I felt a warm hand touch my shoulder from behind. Being the scardy cat I am, I jumped into the air and let out a high-pitched scream.

After I was done screaming, I turned to see who it was. "Tadase-kun!" I said hapily, forgetting what had just happened.

"Good morning, Hinamori-san, sorry for startling you."

"Ah! G-Good morning! Startling...? Oh, that! Thats o- I mean, I was just a little startled...Thats all." I replied nervously, trying to keep my Cool and Spicy character I was known to have.

"Oh. I see. Ok then, shall we walk to class then?" Tadase-kun asked me.

Together?! Oh no, I'm feeling even more nervous now, what should I do!? I said to myself in my head.

"Uh...Sure, sure! We only have 4 minutes left to get to class!" I said to him.

Suddenly, as we approached the school gates, and X Egg flew right past Tadase-kun and I.

"Tadase-kun! Did you see that? Theres an X Egg! What should we do!?" I said dramaticly as I pointed to the X Egg that was saying, 'useless...useless...'.

"Well...um...we don't have much time left to get to class, but its our jobs as guardians to go after it though..."

"Jobs...?" I whispered to myself.

"Thats right, Tadase-kun! Its my job as the Joker to go after the X Egg and purify it! I'll take care of the X Egg, just tell the sensei that...that something came up with me, and that i'll be a bit late, please! Thank you!" I shouted off to him, as I ran away from Tadase-kun, but towards to X Egg.

I looked back at Tadase-kun as I ran after the X Egg. He was just standing there, staring at me, with his mouth open, not that much though. Then, he gave me a thumbs up, and ran towards to school building. He didn't look back...

As I finally caught up to the X Egg, I shouted at Ran to come out of my little Red pouch the Guardians gave me when I first joined to do a Character Transformation.

"Okay Amu-chan!" She said hapily as she came out of the Red pouch.

"My own heart, unlock!"

"Character Transformation, Amulet Heart!"

"Ready Ran? Lets go!" I said to her as I leaped into the air, trying to grab the X Egg.

"Moa, stay still!" I shouted angrily since it kept dodging my attempts to grab it.

But suddenly, as I was turning around to attempt to grab it again, it vanished into the trees.

"Where did it go? Which tree is it in?!" I said, while searching all the trees.

Then, as I was searching a tall tree, cautiously, I heard a screaming 'useless' coming towards me; getting louder, and louder.

BAM!

I felt like I just got punched extremely hard in the back. I geuss I wasn't cautious enough.

I started falling to the ground fast. I was in to much pain to move, but i'd be in even more pain if I hit the ground like this...What should I do now?! Ah! Its too late!

Just as I was expecting to feel a great amount of pain throughout my body, I felt warm, strong arms?

I looked up, only to see a familiar enemy that I havent seen in a couple of months. Ikuto!?

My heart immediately started to beat much faster than it usally does, and I felt my face get hot. Was I blushing!?

"I-Ikuto?! W-What are you doing here!?! Put me down!"

"Ah, Amu, I came to save you, is that so bad?" He said in a jokingly voice as he smirked.

"Whatever, put me down you old perverted cat man!" I shouted at him as I blushed even more.

"Aww, but its been such a long time since I've seen you Amu...Can't I hold you longer? And arn't you going to thank me for saving your cute self?"

"What?! Your the one whos never around anymore, and no, put me down right now! And NO Ikuto! Even if you wern't here, I can take care of myself!" I screamed at him as I managed to squirm out of his grasp.

"Amu, your just too cold...so I geuss I won't save you next time then."

"Fine. Ah! Ikuto, now the X Egg got away because of you!"

"What are talking about, idiot! I didn't do a thing but save you, anyway, i'll be taking my leave now. I hope I see you again soon...Amu." He said while smirking as he leaped into the trees, then dissapeared.

"Ikuto, wai- moa! That stupid cat, always messing up things...but it was kind of nice of him to save me...hes not so bad I geuss." I said to myself while blushing lightly.

I looked around for the X Egg once more, before changing back. As expected it was definitly gone, so I changed back.

I sighed.

"Don't worry Amu-chan, we'll get it next time for sure!" Ran cheered, which made me smile a bit.

I lightened up. "Your right! We will get it next time! Anyway, lets go to class now, I'm probably in lots of trouble now with the sensei! I hope Tadase-kun helped me out on this one!" I said to Ran, as I ran towards the school building, heading for class.

Tadase-kun...Ikuto...

Thanks people for reading, sorry its bad! Please review, thanks alot!
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Please tell me what you all think!
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Is anyone going to comment...or review...please?
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Nice job XD but you need to work on your spelling like when you said puch you meant pouch right?
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not bad for your first fanficton
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Gafoogleshankerz wrote:

Nice job XD but you need to work on your spelling like when you said puch you meant pouch right?


Thanks! Oh! Lol. I'll go fix that, thank you.
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mariah10 wrote:

not bad for your first fanficton


Thank you!
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its okieee
But amu seems a bit too perkyyy/hyper sometimes,and I dont think you should say the obvious like waht should we do with the X egg lol it kinda makes her sound like a ditz lol
great for ur first fanfic
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You use big word and vocabularies which is real nice and i love it!
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Muppie wrote:

its okieee
But amu seems a bit too perkyyy/hyper sometimes,and I dont think you should say the obvious like waht should we do with the X egg lol it kinda makes her sound like a ditz lol
great for ur first fanfic

Oh...lol, but thank you!
Should I continue the story?
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Kiesara wrote:

You use big word and vocabularies which is real nice and i love it!


Really?! Wow, thanks so much! Should I continue the story?
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Continue lol just keep on going and u'll get better and better every single time =]
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Continue lol just keep on going and u'll get better and better every single time =]


Oh, arigato!
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Chapter 2- Apperances

After I got to the classroom, the sensei questioned me as expected.

"Himamori-san! Where have you been?" He questioned.

"Its Hinamori, not Himamori! Ugh, its none of your business anyway..." I said to him as I sat down and crossed my legs and arms. I noticed the sensei give me a stare.

"None of your business?! Thats so cool Amu-chan! Cool and Spicy!" I heard two girls sitting behind me shout.

I sighed.

I looked over at Tadase-kun, and he was staring at me! I automatically blushed and looked away.

The rest of the day went by normally, and like always I didn't talk to Tadase-kun, because he was always around his friends, and it wasnt my character to just go up to him to talk with him. Never...

There was no Guardian meeting after school today, so I just started to walk home alone.

I was looking around, seeing so many beautiful trees, and the sky and clouds looked real pretty too, but not that dark colored egg that flew past in the sky. Wait! Could that have been and X Egg?!

I started chasing after it, hoping to catch it this time.

"Ran, character change!"

"You got it, Amu! Hop, Step, Jump!" Ran pratically yelled.

I was chasing it for a very long time, and it wouldn't stop moving! But I can't let it get away now, I've come to far! It was starting to get dark outside.

"Shoot...Mom is going to be mad..." I said, loosing focus of the egg.

But suddenly, out of the blue, something blue flew up in the sky towards the egg.

"A big blue claw...? That looks firmiliar...Oh! Thats-"

"Hey Amu." I heard a husky, yet handsome voice call out.

"No way...Not him again...Ikuto...!" I yelled, as he wrapped the X Egg in his big, long claw that came out of his tan arm. He was standing on a thin branch of a really tall tree.

"Ikuto, no! Thats my job, let go of it!" I shouted flying towards him to get the egg back.

"Amu, come here!" He teased while he held one arm out open to me.

"Ah! Ikuto!" I blushed, already to close to him to fly back now at his stupid comment.

He then grabbed me by the waist with his arm that he held out to me, and brought me close to his chest; he was warm, and thats a fact.

I felt my heart beat increase within seconds. "I-Ikuto! Let me go!" I said to him while blushing, and struggling to get out of his arms.

"Why Amu...You just got here, you came flying towards me didn't you? Why the change of heart?" He said to me jokingly while he smirked.

It was no use, he wouldn't let go. He kept wrapping his arms around me tighter, and tighter, yet still holding that X Egg in his hand. I felt like my chest was about ready to explode!

Since I could no long move my arms because of his extremely tight grasp, I tried kicking him, but I kept missing.

"Darn you Ikuto!" I said still throwing my legs everywhere untill my right leg stomped on the brach that was supporting us hardly.

Ikuto started to laugh a bit, but while that was happening, I could have sworn I heard the branch crack.

It did. Suddenly, I found myself flying out of Ikutos warm arms. My eyes widened, as I fell from such a high place.

I saw Ikuto jumping from the bigger trees to the smaller trees that were close to me. Was he trying to save me?

I then closed my golden eyes.

I heard Ikuto shout, "Amu!"

Then I heard another firmiliar voice shout, "Holy Crown!"

I opened my eyes as I heard Tadase-kun's voice, and I felt my body bounce off something like jellow.

"Ah! Whats going on!?" I shouted, as everything in my vision was spinning.

Too many things are going on at once! I started to feel a bit dizzy.

Things started to slow down a bit as I felt like I was being carried by someone. Was it Ikuto!?

"Hinamori-san! Hinamori-san!" I heard Tadase-kun shout out to me.

It was Tadase-kun's arms I was in, and they wernt as warm as Ikuto's arms...

"Tadase...kun...?" I said.

Ikuto then finally reached the ground, a little to save me...if he was trying to.

Tadase put me down on the ground, looked up at Ikuto with angry eyes and said, "Tsukiyomi Ikuto! What did you do to Hinamori-san!?"

"I didn't do a thing but hold her tight, oh, and capture the X Egg. Amu fell on her own." He replied with a not so caring voice.

"You hugged Hinamori-san!?" He said as he looked over at me, then back at Ikuto.

"Thats right little kiddy king! Here Amu, this is for you since I couldn't save you in time, see ya." He said to Tadase-kun, then he turned towards me and tossed me the X Egg, then left.

I got up, catching the X Egg.

"Ikuto, wait!" I shouted to him, but he was gone. Wait! He said he couldn't save me in time...so that means he was trying to save me! How nice. Wait a second, why am I thinking this!? Ugh!

"Hinamori-san, are you okay?" Tadase-kun asked me.

"Yep, I'm perfectly fine, thanks for saving me. Now lets purify this egg!" I said, smiling and blushing. I then held up the egg, and winked.

After the egg was purified, and went back to its owner, Tadase-kun and I headed opposite ways to go home.

As I was walking home, all alone in the dark, I thought to myself, Tadase-kun...Ikuto...


Well thats chapter 2! I hope you all enjoyed that! Please review and comment and stuff, lol, thank you!
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it's not bad.. Could do better though. Need a beta or throughly edit your work. I'm a beta, so I have higher expectations. I'm currently beta-ing for 7, now 8 ppl. So a bit hard..
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