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Who To Chose? [My First FanFiction]
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i read a few of that was really good but im not bothered to read them all

hehe....


Oh...So my story doesn't intrest you enough? Be honest!
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well i got work to do and im a bit of busy
so you don't need to crazy and angry about it
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well i got work to do and im a bit of busy
so you don't need to crazy and angry about it


Oh no, I'm not angry or anything, I just wanted to know what you thought, thank you.
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Oh i thought it was really good that's all
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Oh i thought it was really good that's all


oh, then thanks alot, lol.
Hey, check out my amutos videos i have on youtube!
My youtube account name is paigegothugs
Heres a good amv of mines!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u4Xak2UgUFg
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Chapter 3- A Confession?!

The next bright morning, I woke up, looked at my Pink alarm clock, and screamed.

"Oh no! This isn't good! I'm going to be late for school, again! Why didnt you Charas wake me up?!" I shouted while throwing pillows around, flying my little body out of bed, and rushing over to the Charas to ask them that question.

They then popped out of their eggs, looking tired.

"Amu-chan, what are you screaming about? Todays Sunday, so stop shouting!" Miki said to me.

"What!? Are you serious, thats just wonderful." I said sarcastically.

They gave me confused looks and went back into their eggs.

Well, I geuss since I'm up, I'll go out window shopping! I said to myself.

"See you guys later!" I said after I changed into reasonable clothes, and walked out my bedroom door, then out of my front door.

I started to walk around, looking everywhere, seeing beautiful birds, trees, flower, and animals. I also saw couples, familys, and huh...Ikuto?

He looked over at me, and waved, then he started to walk towards me.

"Ah! Moa, why is he everywhere I go?!" I whispered anoyyingly to myself.

"Yo." Ikuto and his Chara Yoru said.

"Ugh...hi. What do you want...?" I said while crossing my arms.

"Oh come on Amu, don't be like that...your not fooling me with that act." He said with a small grin.

I sighed. He always could tell when I put up an Cool and Spicy act...I wonder why?

"Gosh...Anyway, what are you doing here?" I asked, changing the subject.

"Looking for you, Amu." He replied smoothly.

I blushed immediately and said, "Yea right! And out of this whole city, how did you know I would be here?"

"I have my ways..." He said with an evil Smirk.

I just gave him a freaked out stare.

"Amu..."

"What?"

"I...really have been wanting to tell you something..." Ikuto said seriously.

"W-What is it...?" I asked.

"Well...I...I love you, alot." He said and looked away at the ground.

I blushed an extreme Red, as my Golden eyes widened. Is he out of his mind? I decided to laugh it off.

"Ikuto, haha, you can't be serious! Haha, sorry, but you didn't fool me this time!" I said while laughing in between.

"Amu! Its not a joke, I always try to be around you, but instead, most of the time your with that Little Kiddy King!" He shouted.

I stopped laughing right away. "R-Really? How come your telling me this...?"

He sighed, then looked up at me with a soft expression, and began to speak.

"Thats because, I wanted you to know. I wanted you to know my feelings before I leave."

"Oh? Wait! Your leaving? Whats that about?" I questioned.

"All I can say is, Easter, its their doing, and I might not see you for a while. Thats why I told you my feelings Amu, and I want you to think about me, and not Tadase!" He said, and boy was he serious!

"Oh...well..." I blushed lightly, looked at the ground, and was speechless, I didn't know what to say.

"So, I gotta go now..." He said as he approached me.

I was still gazing at the ground; thinking. Thats until I felt all of my deep consintration disapear, and my eyes widened as I looked up to see Ikuto, a little too close to me, and then, his soft, lips, on mine.

I couldn't move. Why didn't I move? Why was I still standing there? Was it because I...liked it...?

All those thoughts flew so quickly through my mind, then vanished as I closed my eyes, blushed, and kissed Ikuto back...

Ikuto drew back, his soft lips seperating from mines.

He smiled at me and said with a grin, " See ya, Amu..." And those were his final words as he dissapeared.

I can't believe what just happened! Ikuto, and me, kissed?! Unbelievable!

My heart was beating fast, faster than ever before. I then traced my smooth lips with my left index finger.

"Ikuto's...leaving? When will he be back...?" I felt worried as I whispered those words to myself.

Suddenly, my body acted on its own as I felt I had to say this, "Ikuto, you better come back soon! Ok!?"

After I said that, I started walking home, not even bothering to go window shopping, and I felt my eyes get watery after I replayed that scene that had just happened over and over in my head.

"What is this? Why do I feel like this...? Could it be that I love Ikuto? But I thought I loved Tadase-kun..."

I reached my house, and before I opened the big Red door to go inside, I thought to myself, "Ikuto...Tadase-kun..."

Ok! I hope you all enjoyed this chapter also! Please review and stuff, please! =)
The next few chapters are gonna be good, since this certain event happened...HEHEHEH!
Ok, anyway, please don't forget to leave your opinion and review, thanks!! ^_^
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PLEASE TELL ME WHAT YOU ALL THINK! THANK YOU!~
Lmao I think I should stop this Fanfic...
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Itz awesum ./..but dont u think amu should keep a bit more of her cool and spicy character in front of tadase and ikuto??
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Itz awesum ./..but dont u think amu should keep a bit more of her cool and spicy character in front of tadase and ikuto??


Thank you! And yea your right, but when shes with them, she kinda forgets about it...aww, lol.
but thank you for telling me your opinion, i apperciate it very mucho!~
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lilmisschocolat wrote:

Itz awesum ./..but dont u think amu should keep a bit more of her cool and spicy character in front of tadase and ikuto??


Thank you! And yea your right, but when shes with them, she kinda forgets about it...aww, lol.
but thank you for telling me your opinion, i apperciate it very mucho!~



No problem, and ur rite~ amu does lose her cool in front of amu and tadase^^
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paigegotkisses wrote:


lilmisschocolat wrote:

Itz awesum ./..but dont u think amu should keep a bit more of her cool and spicy character in front of tadase and ikuto??


Thank you! And yea your right, but when shes with them, she kinda forgets about it...aww, lol.
but thank you for telling me your opinion, i apperciate it very mucho!~



No problem, and ur rite~ amu does lose her cool in front of amu and tadase^^


Lol thanks. You mean Ikuto and Tadase? XD Lol.
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lilmisschocolat wrote:


paigegotkisses wrote:


lilmisschocolat wrote:

Itz awesum ./..but dont u think amu should keep a bit more of her cool and spicy character in front of tadase and ikuto??


Thank you! And yea your right, but when shes with them, she kinda forgets about it...aww, lol.
but thank you for telling me your opinion, i apperciate it very mucho!~



No problem, and ur rite~ amu does lose her cool in front of amu and tadase^^


Lol thanks. You mean Ikuto and Tadase? XD Lol.


Oh yeah, hahaha...

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paigegotkisses wrote:


lilmisschocolat wrote:


paigegotkisses wrote:


lilmisschocolat wrote:

Itz awesum ./..but dont u think amu should keep a bit more of her cool and spicy character in front of tadase and ikuto??


Thank you! And yea your right, but when shes with them, she kinda forgets about it...aww, lol.
but thank you for telling me your opinion, i apperciate it very mucho!~



No problem, and ur rite~ amu does lose her cool in front of amu and tadase^^


Lol thanks. You mean Ikuto and Tadase? XD Lol.


Oh yeah, hahaha...

Lol~

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Chapter 3- A Confession?!

The next bright morning, I woke up, looked at my Pink alarm clock, and screamed.

"Oh no! This isn't good! I'm going to be late for school, again! Why didnt you Charas wake me up?!" I shouted while throwing pillows around, flying my little body out of bed, and rushing over to the Charas to ask them that question.

They then popped out of their eggs, looking tired.

"Amu-chan, what are you screaming about? Todays Sunday, so stop shouting!" Miki said to me.

"What!? Are you serious, thats just wonderful." I said sarcastically.

They gave me confused looks and went back into their eggs.

Well, I geuss since I'm up, I'll go out window shopping! I said to myself.

"See you guys later!" I said after I changed into reasonable clothes, and walked out my bedroom door, then out of my front door.

I started to walk around, looking everywhere, seeing beautiful birds, trees, flower, and animals. I also saw couples, familys, and huh...Ikuto?

He looked over at me, and waved, then he started to walk towards me.

"Ah! Moa, why is he everywhere I go?!" I whispered anoyyingly to myself.

"Yo." Ikuto and his Chara Yoru said.

"Ugh...hi. What do you want...?" I said while crossing my arms.

"Oh come on Amu, don't be like that...your not fooling me with that act." He said with a small grin.

I sighed. He always could tell when I put up an Cool and Spicy act...I wonder why?

"Gosh...Anyway, what are you doing here?" I asked, changing the subject.

"Looking for you, Amu." He replied smoothly.

I blushed immediately and said, "Yea right! And out of this whole city, how did you know I would be here?"

"I have my ways..." He said with an evil Smirk.

I just gave him a freaked out stare.

"Amu..."

"What?"

"I...really have been wanting to tell you something..." Ikuto said seriously.

"W-What is it...?" I asked.

"Well...I...I love you, alot." He said and looked away at the ground.

I blushed an extreme Red, as my Golden eyes widened. Is he out of his mind? I decided to laugh it off.

"Ikuto, haha, you can't be serious! Haha, sorry, but you didn't fool me this time!" I said while laughing in between.

"Amu! Its not a joke, I always try to be around you, but instead, most of the time your with that Little Kiddy King!" He shouted.

I stopped laughing right away. "R-Really? How come your telling me this...?"

He sighed, then looked up at me with a soft expression, and began to speak.

"Thats because, I wanted you to know. I wanted you to know my feelings before I leave."

"Oh? Wait! Your leaving? Whats that about?" I questioned.

"All I can say is, Easter, its their doing, and I might not see you for a while. Thats why I told you my feelings Amu, and I want you to think about me, and not Tadase!" He said, and boy was he serious!

"Oh...well..." I blushed lightly, looked at the ground, and was speechless, I didn't know what to say.

"So, I gotta go now..." He said as he approached me.

I was still gazing at the ground; thinking. Thats until I felt all of my deep consintration disapear, and my eyes widened as I looked up to see Ikuto, a little too close to me, and then, his soft, lips, on mine.

I couldn't move. Why didn't I move? Why was I still standing there? Was it because I...liked it...?

All those thoughts flew so quickly through my mind, then vanished as I closed my eyes, blushed, and kissed Ikuto back...

Ikuto drew back, his soft lips seperating from mines.

He smiled at me and said with a grin, " See ya, Amu..." And those were his final words as he dissapeared.

I can't believe what just happened! Ikuto, and me, kissed?! Unbelievable!

My heart was beating fast, faster than ever before. I then traced my smooth lips with my left index finger.

"Ikuto's...leaving? When will he be back...?" I felt worried as I whispered those words to myself.

Suddenly, my body acted on its own as I felt I had to say this, "Ikuto, you better come back soon! Ok!?"

After I said that, I started walking home, not even bothering to go window shopping, and I felt my eyes get watery after I replayed that scene that had just happened over and over in my head.

"What is this? Why do I feel like this...? Could it be that I love Ikuto? But I thought I loved Tadase-kun..."

I reached my house, and before I opened the big Red door to go inside, I thought to myself, "Ikuto...Tadase-kun..."

Ok! I hope you all enjoyed this chapter also! Please review and stuff, please! =)
The next few chapters are gonna be good, since this certain event happened...HEHEHEH!
Ok, anyway, please don't forget to leave your opinion and review, thanks!! ^_^



nice ...wished it would really happen in the anime -_________-" that would be awsome!!!!!
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I agree with twilightxd. THat would be the best! I cannot wait till Ep 60!

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