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Who To Chose? [My First FanFiction]
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I also agree with twilightxd and also iluvshaoran!! It was a BEST!! The chapters seem to get better the futher along you write paiqeqotkisses!! I LOVE IT!!
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I agree with twilightxd. THat would be the best! I cannot wait till Ep 60!

Getting better. You can get more reviews on Fanfiction. Did you post this there yet?


Ahh sorry for the late reply!
Thanks so much, I cant wait till episode 60 either! -squeals!-
And no I didn't...I don't have an account on there! XD Haha.
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Chapter 3- A Confession?!

The next bright morning, I woke up, looked at my Pink alarm clock, and screamed.

"Oh no! This isn't good! I'm going to be late for school, again! Why didnt you Charas wake me up?!" I shouted while throwing pillows around, flying my little body out of bed, and rushing over to the Charas to ask them that question.

They then popped out of their eggs, looking tired.

"Amu-chan, what are you screaming about? Todays Sunday, so stop shouting!" Miki said to me.

"What!? Are you serious, thats just wonderful." I said sarcastically.

They gave me confused looks and went back into their eggs.

Well, I geuss since I'm up, I'll go out window shopping! I said to myself.

"See you guys later!" I said after I changed into reasonable clothes, and walked out my bedroom door, then out of my front door.

I started to walk around, looking everywhere, seeing beautiful birds, trees, flower, and animals. I also saw couples, familys, and huh...Ikuto?

He looked over at me, and waved, then he started to walk towards me.

"Ah! Moa, why is he everywhere I go?!" I whispered anoyyingly to myself.

"Yo." Ikuto and his Chara Yoru said.

"Ugh...hi. What do you want...?" I said while crossing my arms.

"Oh come on Amu, don't be like that...your not fooling me with that act." He said with a small grin.

I sighed. He always could tell when I put up an Cool and Spicy act...I wonder why?

"Gosh...Anyway, what are you doing here?" I asked, changing the subject.

"Looking for you, Amu." He replied smoothly.

I blushed immediately and said, "Yea right! And out of this whole city, how did you know I would be here?"

"I have my ways..." He said with an evil Smirk.

I just gave him a freaked out stare.

"Amu..."

"What?"

"I...really have been wanting to tell you something..." Ikuto said seriously.

"W-What is it...?" I asked.

"Well...I...I love you, alot." He said and looked away at the ground.

I blushed an extreme Red, as my Golden eyes widened. Is he out of his mind? I decided to laugh it off.

"Ikuto, haha, you can't be serious! Haha, sorry, but you didn't fool me this time!" I said while laughing in between.

"Amu! Its not a joke, I always try to be around you, but instead, most of the time your with that Little Kiddy King!" He shouted.

I stopped laughing right away. "R-Really? How come your telling me this...?"

He sighed, then looked up at me with a soft expression, and began to speak.

"Thats because, I wanted you to know. I wanted you to know my feelings before I leave."

"Oh? Wait! Your leaving? Whats that about?" I questioned.

"All I can say is, Easter, its their doing, and I might not see you for a while. Thats why I told you my feelings Amu, and I want you to think about me, and not Tadase!" He said, and boy was he serious!

"Oh...well..." I blushed lightly, looked at the ground, and was speechless, I didn't know what to say.

"So, I gotta go now..." He said as he approached me.

I was still gazing at the ground; thinking. Thats until I felt all of my deep consintration disapear, and my eyes widened as I looked up to see Ikuto, a little too close to me, and then, his soft, lips, on mine.

I couldn't move. Why didn't I move? Why was I still standing there? Was it because I...liked it...?

All those thoughts flew so quickly through my mind, then vanished as I closed my eyes, blushed, and kissed Ikuto back...

Ikuto drew back, his soft lips seperating from mines.

He smiled at me and said with a grin, " See ya, Amu..." And those were his final words as he dissapeared.

I can't believe what just happened! Ikuto, and me, kissed?! Unbelievable!

My heart was beating fast, faster than ever before. I then traced my smooth lips with my left index finger.

"Ikuto's...leaving? When will he be back...?" I felt worried as I whispered those words to myself.

Suddenly, my body acted on its own as I felt I had to say this, "Ikuto, you better come back soon! Ok!?"

After I said that, I started walking home, not even bothering to go window shopping, and I felt my eyes get watery after I replayed that scene that had just happened over and over in my head.

"What is this? Why do I feel like this...? Could it be that I love Ikuto? But I thought I loved Tadase-kun..."

I reached my house, and before I opened the big Red door to go inside, I thought to myself, "Ikuto...Tadase-kun..."

Ok! I hope you all enjoyed this chapter also! Please review and stuff, please! =)
The next few chapters are gonna be good, since this certain event happened...HEHEHEH!
Ok, anyway, please don't forget to leave your opinion and review, thanks!! ^_^



nice ...wished it would really happen in the anime -_________-" that would be awsome!!!!!


Thanks, me too! I would die from happyness, or my brother killing me because I would be screaming so loud and stuff, then he'd say shutup and I won't, then he'll come in my room and get me XD Lol...
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I also agree with twilightxd and also iluvshaoran!! It was a BEST!! The chapters seem to get better the futher along you write paiqeqotkisses!! I LOVE IT!!


Thanks soo much!
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ahhhhh!!!! that waz sooo good!!! i cant wait until the next chapter!!!
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Wow, u have a really good imagination
That was so good ^_^
Keep writing....plzplzplz

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ahhhhh!!!! that waz sooo good!!! i cant wait until the next chapter!!!


Oh thank you, your all are so nice!
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Wow, u have a really good imagination
That was so good ^_^
Keep writing....plzplzplz

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Thank you so much, I will!
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iluvshaoran wrote:

I agree with twilightxd. THat would be the best! I cannot wait till Ep 60!

Getting better. You can get more reviews on Fanfiction. Did you post this there yet?


Ahh sorry for the late reply!
Thanks so much, I cant wait till episode 60 either! -squeals!-
And no I didn't...I don't have an account on there! XD Haha.


Do you want me to post it online for you? I'll post it on my account if you want. But everytime you update, you have to PM me so I can put it on. I just recently updated my story!

Reviewers: Yeah she finally did..

Mitsuki Sakura Uchiha (my FF account): I know!! And thanks for the total of 41 reviews
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paigegotkisses wrote:


iluvshaoran wrote:

I agree with twilightxd. THat would be the best! I cannot wait till Ep 60!

Getting better. You can get more reviews on Fanfiction. Did you post this there yet?


Ahh sorry for the late reply!
Thanks so much, I cant wait till episode 60 either! -squeals!-
And no I didn't...I don't have an account on there! XD Haha.


Do you want me to post it online for you? I'll post it on my account if you want. But everytime you update, you have to PM me so I can put it on. I just recently updated my story!

Reviewers: Yeah she finally did..

Mitsuki Sakura Uchiha (my FF account): I know!! And thanks for the total of 41 reviews


Oh wow, hm...I geuss ill make an acocunt to save you the trouble XD
Cool, I wanna read your story! Send me a link...please?
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paigegotkisses wrote:


iluvshaoran wrote:


paigegotkisses wrote:


iluvshaoran wrote:

I agree with twilightxd. THat would be the best! I cannot wait till Ep 60!

Getting better. You can get more reviews on Fanfiction. Did you post this there yet?


Ahh sorry for the late reply!
Thanks so much, I cant wait till episode 60 either! -squeals!-
And no I didn't...I don't have an account on there! XD Haha.


Do you want me to post it online for you? I'll post it on my account if you want. But everytime you update, you have to PM me so I can put it on. I just recently updated my story!

Reviewers: Yeah she finally did..

Mitsuki Sakura Uchiha (my FF account): I know!! And thanks for the total of 41 reviews


Oh wow, hm...I geuss ill make an acocunt to save you the trouble XD
Cool, I wanna read your story! Send me a link...please?


Okay... Here
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4585905/1/One_and_my_Own

Oh, and it takes 2 days for u to be able to post something after you make an account
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iluvshaoran wrote:


paigegotkisses wrote:


iluvshaoran wrote:


paigegotkisses wrote:


iluvshaoran wrote:

I agree with twilightxd. THat would be the best! I cannot wait till Ep 60!

Getting better. You can get more reviews on Fanfiction. Did you post this there yet?


Ahh sorry for the late reply!
Thanks so much, I cant wait till episode 60 either! -squeals!-
And no I didn't...I don't have an account on there! XD Haha.


Do you want me to post it online for you? I'll post it on my account if you want. But everytime you update, you have to PM me so I can put it on. I just recently updated my story!

Reviewers: Yeah she finally did..

Mitsuki Sakura Uchiha (my FF account): I know!! And thanks for the total of 41 reviews


Oh wow, hm...I geuss ill make an acocunt to save you the trouble XD
Cool, I wanna read your story! Send me a link...please?


Okay... Here
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4585905/1/One_and_my_Own

Oh, and it takes 2 days for u to be able to post something after you make an account

Oh, ok, thank you!
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Chapter 4- Feelings

After I walked into my dark room, I plopped down on my big bouncy bed, not bothering to turn on the light.

"Amu-chan? Is that you desu?" I heard Suu ask.

"Yeah yeah..." I replied blankly.

I heard Suu fly over to me, while the others didn't. I geuss their sleeping still.

"Whats the matter desu?" It was silent for about a minute before I began to speak.

"Ugh...well you see...I was going to go window shopping, but I bumped into Ikuto along the way, and...and then he said he loved me,-"

"What!?" I heard Suu scream out in a high pitch.

"Ah my ears! Jeez...let me finish! Anyway, then I questioned him a bit until he said he had to leave...because of Easter...and I may not see him again for a while...a-and then, he k-k-kissed me...and I geuss you could say I k-kissed him back...but then he left...you know Suu, I don't know just what I feel, I mean, I thought I loved Tadase-kun, but after that k-kiss, I feel...I feel...I feel like I love Ikuto!" I finally said then threw my pink blanket over me. I closed my eyes.

All I heard Suu say was, "Oh..."

After that, I feel into a deep, soothing sleep.

As the hours went by, I was finally awoken by a pink alarm clock. I jumped up and panicked.

"Ah! Wh-what time is it!?" No response.

I grabbed the clock and looked at the time with worried eyes. 8:50am.

"Are you kidding me!? I only have 10 minutes to get to school!" I then undressed out of my...going out clothes? You mean I feel asleep after I got home...for this long? Wow... After I was done remebering, I threw on my uniform, brushed my puffy pink hair, and fixed my belt to look 'Cool and Spicy!" Then I busted out the door saying bye to my family.

I was running fast, and I mean super fast, probably faster than ever!
Pant. Pant. Pant.

I finally got to my classroom right as the school bell was ringing, and sighed in relief.

I took a seat at my desk, which was right next to Tadase-kuns, but...he wasn't sitting there. I looked all over the classroom, trying to find that blond haired prince that I loved...wait- do I still love him?

As I was in my train of thought, someone knocked on our brown classroom door. Tadase-kun?! Hes late!

Nanami-chan let him in, then the brown haired sensei started shouting, of course.

"Hitori-san! Your late! What is your excuse for this!?" He yelled. Everyone flinched at his tough words, except me, for I, was use to his yelling now, since I have been coming late to class recently.

"I...I...To tell you the truth, I am late, but thats because I was waiting for Hinamori-san!" He said as he blushed a bit. Suddenly, every pair of eyes in the room turned to stare at me. I blushed a deep red, how could he do that to me?! But wait...what does he mean he was waiting for me?

"Oh! So now your excuse is, you were waiting for Himamori-san?" The sensei said in a non-believeing way.

My honey eyes narrowed, I jumped out of my chair, causing a big commotion, and began to spoke.

"Ok sensei! Thats enough! First off, its Hinamori, not Himamori! Secondly, you need to trust and believe your students more often, and be more nicer to them! Tadase-kun is rarely ever late, and whenever he is, its because of me! Got that!?" Oh dang, I've done it now. At least my cool and spicy character was showing.

"Wah! As expected of Amu-chan, cool and spicy!" I heard to girls in my class say in an admiring voice.

"How dare you Himamori-san, speak that way to me! Get out, now!!" He screamed, which made everyone shut up again.

I rolled my eyes, grabbed my bag, and began to walk out of the classroom. Before I exited, I glanced at Tadase-kun, whos expression showed confussion, then cleared up.

"I'm going with you, Hinamori-san!" Tadase-kun said.

The whole class was in a state of shock, the sensei too. And with that, we walked out together.

"That was really brave of you to do, Hianmori-san." Tadase-kun said to me.

My face was still a bit red with fustration, but then I breathed in and out, and cooled down. Then I spoke, "Yeah...well, thanks, ive just about had it with him! But you didn't have to come with me you know..."

"Yeah, I know." He smiled. "At least now I can be with you the whole day...if thats ok with you of course."

I blushed. "U-um...sure, its fine! But wait, earlier you said you were waiting for me? Whats that all about?"

"Well," He began, "I was really waiting for you, to get to school that is. I wanted to walk you to class, but I couldn't find you. I decided to wait a bit longer, and before I knew it the bell had rung."

My eyes were widened. How sweet of him! I looked up at him to reply, but as soon as I met his eyes, I remembered what had happened with Ikuto, and I immediately looked away.

"Something wrong, Hinamori-san?"

I looked at the ground as I said, "No, its nothing..."

"Well, want to go to the park then?" He asked.

"Um...sure, I geuss..." I said nervously. Great. Why am I getting nervous around Tadase-kun? I thought I didn't love him anymore, but Ikuto instead.

When Tadase-kun heard my answer, he smiled hapily, then grabbed my hand and began walking towards the exit of the school, leading me to the park. I blushed deeply and my heart was beating quickly.

I thought to myself, what am I going to do? How am I going to get threw this?! Ahh!

I felt as if I would rather spend this time with Ikuto, not Tadase-kun...but I geuss I am a little happy to be with Tadase-kun, alone. Maybe I still like him a bit, but not love!

And as we kept walking silently, hand in hand, I thought to myself, Ikuto...Tadase-kun...

Well, that was chapter 4, I really hope you all enjoyed that! Hm...whats going to happen at the park? When will Amu see Ikuto again? What all will happen in chapter 5? Stayed tuned to find out, and please review, if you do, I'll write/type faster! Yey, thank you all!!
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