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Who To Chose? [My First FanFiction]
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Posted 11/10/08 , edited 11/11/08

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Kawaii!!! Have u posted it up on FF.Net yet?


Thank you, and no, not yet!! Ok now I did!
I signed up...at least....
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iluvshaoran wrote:

Kawaii!!! Have u posted it up on FF.Net yet?


Thank you, and no, not yet!! Ok now I did!
I signed up...at least....


Told you! You shoulda let me put it on.. It'll be so much more quicker. Cuz you still need to wait 2 days to post
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Posted 11/11/08 , edited 11/11/08

iluvshaoran wrote:


paigegotkisses wrote:


iluvshaoran wrote:

Kawaii!!! Have u posted it up on FF.Net yet?


Thank you, and no, not yet!! Ok now I did!
I signed up...at least....


Told you! You shoulda let me put it on.. It'll be so much more quicker. Cuz you still need to wait 2 days to post


Oh, lol. Thats ok, I don't even kow how to post yet!!
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Posted 11/12/08 , edited 11/13/08
REVIEW PLEASE, MINNA! =D~
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Posted 11/14/08
i want the next chappy...
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Posted 11/14/08
Haha Havent read this storie in ages
=] Getting much better
just dont like the tadase and amu part lol
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Posted 11/15/08

Muppie wrote:

Haha Havent read this storie in ages
=] Getting much better
just dont like the tadase and amu part lol


Oh, thank yoi.
Lol XD
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Posted 11/15/08 , edited 11/18/08

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i want the next chappy...


Ok, Im writting it now =)
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Posted 11/19/08
yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay
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Posted 11/19/08 , edited 11/20/08
Ok you guys, Im really going to try to get this updated soon!
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next chapter plz!!! i can't wait!!! >.<
oh n by the way, ur story is really good! *both thumbs up!* ^^
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next chapter plz!!! i can't wait!!! >.<
oh n by the way, ur story is really good! *both thumbs up!* ^^


Aww, thank you!
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Chapter 5- Emotions

Tadase and I arrived at the park.

I felt nervous, and my chest wasn't feeling right. So I let go of my not so tight grasp on his hand, and turned my back on him. I looked down at the ground, my heart was pounding quickly, and the wind was blowing my smooth hair along with the soothing wind. This wind was just perfect for the mood. Not!

Awkward silence.

I sighed and looked up at a bright red swing. I walked slowly over to it, and sat down on the seat. I began to rock myself back and forth.

I looked over to were Tadase-kun was standing just a minute ago, but he was not there.

Suddenly, I felt a great forceful push on my back, and the swing swept my feet off the ground. I have to admit it, I was scared for a moment until I looked back only to see Tadase-kun smiling gently at me. I looked back in front of me as the swing was pulling back towards the ground. My hair blew in the wind as a smile took over my face.

I then felt another push on my back, not as much strength was put into it as the first unexpeceted push.

"T-Tadase-kun! Stop it!" I shouted at him while blushing lightly.

"But you look like your having fun..." He said as he continued pushing me.

The next time I came swinging back towards the ground, expecting another push, I didn't.

My swing just kept swinging me back and forth, back and forth, my hair blowing in front of my face, then behind my face.

As the swing finally came to a stop, I sighed, then looked behind me for Tadase-kun. He was staring into the sky. All there were was clouds and the shinny bright sun...oh gosh...don't tell me...and X Egg!?

I quickly dashed off my swing an ran over to him. "Tadase-kun, Character Transformation!" He nodded.

"My Own Heart, Unlock" He and I said.
"Character Transformation: Amulet Heart!"
"Character Transformation: Platinum Royale!"

He looked over at me and said cheerfully, "Ah! Amulet Heart!" He was definitly blushing.

I looked down at the ground with a frown, for I, knew what Tadase-kun was thinking, 'oh, its Amulet Heart! The positive and bright girl I've never met anyone like before! My true love!' I sighed. Thats igsactly what he was thinking! Why do I like a guy like him? A guy who likes the person I want to become...but most likely never will...and...

I started getting carried away in my thoughts until Tadase-kun interrupted me.

"Amulet Hea- I mean, Hianmori-san! Nows your chance!"

There he goes again! Again with Amulet Heart! This is not me! This is not the me I want Tadase-kun to like!!
I shifted my dangiling hands into fists. I felt my eyes get watery.

I character transformed back into my regular self, not bothering to purify to X Egg. I was too caught up in thoughts, and the words I have heard from Tadase-kun!

I looked up at him with sad, watery eyes and said while raising my fists, "You know what Tadase-kun, I'm tired of it always being about Amulet Heart! Why can't it just be the regular me you like? Am I not positive enough for you? Am I not cheerful enough for you? What is it!? Tell me! Actually, don't!" I felt warm tears run down my cheeks, and my face getting red with frustration. "Tadase-kun, I don't know why I ever even liked you to begin with! Just don't talk to me anymore, because everytime I look at you, I think of how you only think of Amulet Heart, and not the regular me. Im done! I geuss I truly did like you still a bit, but now I know I don't! I'm done with you! You hear me?! Done! I'd be better off with Ikuto, hes the one that truly likes me for who I really am, and he understands me! So...lets just be friends if anything...ok? No more liking you...no more Amulet Heart...no more...I'm done liking you...thanks for everything, I hope we can at least still be friends though...ok? S-See you a-around...!" I said as I turned around and began to run off in a who knows where direction, with tears pouring down my face.

"Hinamori-san wait, its not...its not like that!" I heard Tadase-kun call.

Psh...of course its like that...

I finally let it all out...all of my frustration I was holding inside, and my feelings...I let it all out!

I began to stop running, and just walk. I was still crying. What should I do? The only person I really want to talk to now is Ikuto...but who knows when I'll see him again! Now I have no one...except the Charas...but...their different.

This was definitly to much for one day...now I feel exhausted. I walked over to a bench and layed down on it. And once I closed my eyes, I silently drifted off into an unkown wonderland...

3 Hours Later...

Was I awake? Or was this a dream? I felt silence around me except for the footsteps below me. I then began to notice more things. I felt warm strong around carrying and supporting me up bridal style, and I felt my head leaning agenst a manly chest. My eyes were still closed as it all started to accur to me that someone really was carrying me, and this was definitly real.

But who? Who could it be...I hope its not Tadase-kun...I geuss I'm going to have to struggle to open my eyes to find the answer to my question. As I tried opening my eyes, they were burning, and felt puffy. Maybe from all the crying? Most likely; probably. Oh well, no pain, no answer.

So I then shot open my little cute honey eyes and flinched at the 2 second burn. I geuss the mysterious person carrying me noticed because I felt a pair of eyes on me.

Now that I've gotten through the tough parts, it was time to see who the mysterious person who was carrying me was!

I looked up, only to meet a pair of beautiful sapphire eyes. All it took was one look into the eyes to realize who it was, and as I realized, my honey eyes widened.

"I-Ikuto...is that y-you...?" I asked.

"Your awake, Amu?" A husky voice asked.

"Ikuto! Yes Ikuto! I am awake!" I said cheerfully and blushed while smiling a big happy smile.

He chuckled and said, "You sure are a happy person when you wake up from sleeps..."

"N-no I'm not! I'm only happy because I get to see you, right now! This is all just so unbelieveable! I have so many things to say! Like, where did you find me? Why are you carrying me like this?! Arnt you supose to be away, working for easter? A-and-"

He cut me off. "Woa there kid, one at a time." He teased.

"Don't call me a kid!" I portested.

"Anyway, I just had a feeling something might have happened, and plus I wanted to see you so I went looking for you. Ha, I knew you would be near the park...where we kissed...thats how and where I found you. And how else am I supose to carry you?! Did you want me to just leave you there like that?! I don't think so. Now for Easter, they hirred a new girl in my place since I was never around or doing what they told me to do, so now, here I am." He said and smirked.

"Oh...ok. Wait, new girl...?" I asked suspiciously.

"Haha, is little Amu jelous? Don't worry, I don't like her or anything like that."

I crossed my arms, and looked away while saying, "Why would I be jelous? And what have I told you!? Don't call me little!"

"Your not foolin' me..." He said.

"Ah whatever." I replied.

He hopped up onto my balcony and put me down.

I blushed and said, "Well, thank you, Ikuto. Goodnight..."

"Amu...I didn't even get to ask questions yet, but you did!"

I giggled a bit and replied, "Haha, oh yeah? Well go ahead and ask them."

"Ok. I only have 2 questions, unlike you." He teased. I rolled my eyes.

"Shutup! Can you just ask the qestions already...sheesh..."

"Fine, fine. One, did you miss me? And two, why are your eyes all puffy and red?" He asked.

"Uh..." I blushed and looked down. I wasn't getting out of this one. "Yeah, I missed you...and two...well...all I was doing was crying, its not a big deal." I said cooly.

"Aww, you missed me! But wait- why were you crying?!"

"Ah gosh..." My eyes got watery from just thinking about it again.

"Amu...?"

I looked down, trying to keep strong, but its been hard to do that lately. Suddenly Ikuto came up to me and pulled me into his chest. Then he wrapped his warm arms around me, and I liked it. I blushed a deep red.

I was frozen but managed to say, "I-Ikuto..."

"Amu, you have no idea how it is for me not being with you, but then to see you upset like this...you don't have to tell the story if you don't want to..." He whispered into my ear.

"I-I'll tell you if we can just stay like this through to whole story..."

"Thats fine with me." He said.

"Ok..." I said, then wrapped my arms around him, closed my eyes, and smiled.

And so, I told him the story.

"Wow...so...who do you like now kiddo?"

I gave him the death stare and said while blushing, "Well, you. I-I realized that..."

"That?"

"That...I'm i-in love with y-you!" My face flushed red. Ah! How embarrasing to say!

And before he replied, or did what he did, I thought to myself, Ikuto...

Wow, I really liked this chapter, it took me a while. I was really into this chapter, so I hope you all will be too! Thank you everyone for reading, and please, please review! Thank you.
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ahhh! soo good!!!
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ahhh! soo good!!!

Wow, thank you!

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