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Episode 1: Paladin Power !!

(15 years ago... )

Boy: hey ... is this a toy ??
Paladin Dragon: who are you calling a toy !!
Boy: waaa , it talks !!
Paladin Dragon: i'm hungry ...
Boy: Here !! Have a drumstick ..
Paladin Dragon: you are kind .. i will see u 15 years later ....

Soon the Dragon disappear and 15 years have passed ...

(The Present ...)

Guy: Great .... i just got fired by my boss ...

This Guy name is called Kira Fujiwara , 20 years old . He lost his parents at the age of 7 and now he is staying alone ...

Kira: *sigh* i'm hungry ....

Soon Kira went out of the house , after finished eating on his way home . He saw a small dragon laying on the ground .

Kira: Is this a toy ??
Paladin Dragon: i'm not a toy !!
Kira: waaa , it talks !!

Paladin Dragon looked at kira and turn one round and smiled happily .

Paladin Dragon: YES !! i found u!!
Kira: who are you ??
Paladin Dragon: Remember me ?? 15 years ago ??
Kira: You are that dragon from 15 years ago !!
Paladin Dragon: Glad you remembered ...
Kira: This isn't a good place to talk , lets go my house .

Soon they reached back home ...

Paladin Dragon: Lets form a contract !!
Kira: Contract ??
Paladin Dragon: Give me your hands.

Kira placed his hands and soon a light appeared and it disappear immdiately.

Kira: What happen ??
Paladin Dragon: Contract Complete !!
Kira: What did you do ??
Paladin Dragon: Only a body fuse ..
Kira: What ??
Paladin Dragon: Means i will be with you for the rest of your life .
Kira: You got to be kidding !! Never mind ..

Soon Kira went to his room and played the piano .

Paladin Dragon: Nice music , when did you learn piano ??
Kira: After my parents died .
Paladin Dragon: Why suddenly want to play piano ??
Kira: I always wanted to play piano but my parents forbidden it . Before my parents died, he had already build this piano . But the strange thing is that strange monsters keeping appearing in town and this piano will auto play by itself .

Soon Piano started playing on its own ..

Kira: A monster !! Close the windows !!
Paladin Dragon: Calm down lets go out and check !!
Kira: Are you crazy ??

Soon Paladin Dragon drag him out of the house as they saw the monster .

Kira: What is that monster ??
Horse Zombie : Give me your blood .
Kira: i'm outta of here !!
Paladin Dragon: No !! you must fight !!
Kira: How ??

Soon Paladin Dragon became a mystic ball and flew to Kira as it changes to a belt and Diskette appear at Kira's right hand.

Kira: What am i suppose to do ??
Paladin Dragon: Place the Diskette in the belt.
Kira: ok ...

Kira placed the diskette into the belt . The belt announced: Red Mode !! Soon he became KR Paladin , His armour and eyes are red in colour as his arms and legs are black in colour .

KR Paladin: wow ...
Horse Zombie: That won't scared me ..

Soon KR Paladin punched a few times as the Zombie flew a metre away .

KR Paladin: Time to finish it !! But what should i do ??
Paladin Dragon: Remove the diskette and put in again .

KR Paladin remove the diskette and put in again , the belt announced: Full Power !! As KR Paladin jump and delivered a kick as the zombie burned in ashes .

KR Paladin: Yes !! i done it !! How to do i change back ??
Paladin Dragon: Remove the diskette and press the circle button on the belt .

Soon KR Paladin remove the diskette and press the circle button on the and became back Kira as the belt and diskette changes back into Paladin Dragon .

Kira : This is unusual ..

End of Episode 1 ^_^
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hmmm... its pretty good lol the piano reminds me of kiva though with the violin lol check out mines and comment
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Episode 2 is on the way !! cuz today is my birthday i decided to post later ..
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Posted 10/26/08
Hmmm... this is a little bit like Djloi's Kr hercules... lol
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i didn't copy his ............
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Episode 2: His name is Paladin

After the battle , Kira was shocked about the battle and was thinking what to do about it .

Paladin Dragon: Calm down will you ??
Kira: How can i ?? After that battle ...
Paladin Dragon: Just stay calm ...
Kira: i will try.
Paladin Dragon: How about a rest ??
Kira: Sure ...
Paladin Dragon: where do i sleep ??
Kira: i have a small corner beside my bed .
Paladin Dragon: i like it !! Thanks !!
Kira: Ok ... good night ...

After a long night sleep, the next day Kira wrote up after having a nightmare .

Kira: waaa !!
Paladin Dragon: Ouch !! What happen !!
Kira: There is this dark figure ..
Paladin Dragon: Dark figure ??
Kira: i don't know .. everything was blur ..
Paladin Dragon: How about a breakfast ??
Kira: Sure !! I will buy you some breakfast .

After Kira brush his teeth and went out of the house , Paladin Dragon was thinking about the nightmare ..

Paladin Dragon: Dark figure ??

After Kira came back and ate his breakfast , he started playing the piano ..

Paladin Dragon: Interesting music !!
Kira: ya i like it too .

Piano started playing on its own ..

Kira: Not again ..
Paladin Dragon: Lets go !!

Soon they ran out of the house .. a zombie appeared .

Spider Zombie: Blood ....
Kira: why do they need blood ??
Paladin Dragon: For them to continue surviving .
Kira: Lets do this !!

Paladin Dragon became a mystic ball and flew to Kira as it changes to a belt and Diskette appear at Kira's right hand.

Kira: Henshin !!

Kira placed the diskette into the belt . The belt announced: Red Mode !! Soon he became KR Paladin.

KR Paladin : Nice !!
Spider Zombie : catch me if you can . haha !!

Soon the spider zombie created a spider web all over the place .

KR Paladin: What must i do ??
Paladin Dragon: Focus !!

Soon KR Paladin grab the spider web and pull the web as the spider zombie fell onto the ground .

Paladin Dragon: Now !!

KR Paladin remove the diskette and put in again , the belt announced: Full Power !! As KR Paladin jump and delivered a kick as the zombie burned in ashes .

KR Paladin : Alright !!

KR Paladin remove the diskette and press the circle button on the belt and became back Kira as the belt and the diskette changes back into Paladin Dragon .

Kira: Lets go back .

Soon they reach home .

Kira: Lets give a name for the kamen rider . Who is your name ??
Paladin Dragon: my name is Paladin Dragon .
Kira: Thats it !! Lets name it Kamen Rider Paladin !! I'm Kira Fujiwara !!
Paladin Dragon: I like it !! Nice to meet you Kira !!
Kira: I will call u Paladin !! Lets go bath !!
Paladin Dragon: Sure !!

End of Episode 2 ^_^
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i do episode 3 later or tomorrow ...
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Episode 3: An old classmate

After giving a name for Paladin Dragon, Kira was thinking about finding a new job .

Kira: I wonder what job i will do in the future ??
Paladin Dragon: If i were you, i will be thinking about the zombies attacking the city .
Kira: Ya, that too .. Hey Paladin , do you remember anything about the past besides me ??
Paladin Dragon: no , i don't ..
Kira: I see ...

Soon there was a knock on the door . Kira place Paladin Dragon on the table as a plush toy and open the door .

Natsume: are you Kira Fujiwara ??
Kira: Thats me !! you are ??
Natsume: Kira !!
Kira: who are you ??
Natsume: ooh.. i am a junior from your school !!
Kira: you are younger than me by two years right ??
Natsume: Yup !! i'm 18 .

Soon Natsume went in the house and stare at Paladin Dragon.

Natsume: Thats a cute plush toy !!
Kira: ya i guess so ..
Paladin Dragon: i'm not a toy !! oh no ..
Natsume: Its real ...
Kira: I think i need to introduce u two .. Paladin Dragon , this is Natsume Aisaka . Natsume , this is Paladin Dragon but i like to call him Paladin .
Natsume: Nice to meet you , Paladin !!
Paladin Dragon: Nice to meet you too ..
Kira: So why are you here ??
Natsume: my parents have gone overseas, and my aunt died , i have nowhere to stay .. Can i stay here ??
Kira: ok then ..

After Natsume bring her baggage in , she told them about the news .

Natsume: you heard this mysterious person ??
Kira: Mysterious person ??
Natsume: His armour and eyes are red in colour ..
Kira: no way ...

Piano played on its own ...

Kira: Lets go Paladin !!
Natsume: Wait where are you going ??

Soon they saw the zombie and tol Natsume to run but she ran behind the building and watch them ...
Paladin Dragon became a mystic ball and flew to Kira as it changes to a belt and Diskette appear at Kira's right hand.

Kira: Henshin !!

Kira placed the diskette into the belt . The belt announced: Red Mode !! Soon he became KR Paladin.

KR Paladin: Lets do this !!
Fish Zombie: Bring it on !!

KR Paladin punched the zombie but the zombie counter back with his fist as he moved a few steps back ..

KR Paladin: Wait a minute , Fish can't stay out of water for too long .. maybe ...

Soon KR Paladin used his hands and cover the fish zombie gills. Soon fish zombie began to breathe diffcultly..

Fish Zombie: Can't breathe ..
KR Paladin: Time to end this !!

KR Paladin remove the diskette and put in again , the belt announced: Full Power !! As KR Paladin jump and delivered a kick as the zombie burned in ashes .

KR Paladin : Alright !!

KR Paladin remove the diskette and press the circle button on the belt and became back Kira as the belt and the diskette changes back into Paladin Dragon .

Kira: Lets go back .
Paladin Dragon: ok !!

Before they started walking , Natsume was standing in front of them .

Natsume: Kira, you are the mysterious person ??
Kira: Oh no .....

End of Episode 3 ^_^
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Natsume: my parents have gone overseas, and my aunt died , i have nowhere to stay .. Can i stay here ??
Kira: ok then ..

lol. that was easy.


As KR Paladin jump and delivered a kick as the zombie burned in ashes .

i'm cracked! this is like the zombie purposely burn itself into ash.


KR Paladin remove the diskette and press the circle button on the belt and became back Kira as the belt and the diskette changes back into Paladin Dragon .

Natsume: Kira, you are the mysterious person ??
Kira: Oh no .....

nago: wataru, omae...kiva ka?
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haha aegis..ur comment was funny..XD
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Episode 4: Paladin Cycle !!

After Natsume found out Kira was KR Paladin, He drag Natsume home .

Kira: I beg you !! Don't tell anyone about this ...
Natsume: Sure !! i won't ..
Kira: Phew ..
Paladin Dragon: She knows our sercet ....

Meanwhile a motorbike shop called ...

Kira: Hello ??
Motorbike Shop Keeper: Is this Kira Fujiwara ?? We have fix your bike, please come and take it .
Kira: Ok ...
Natsume: Your bike huh ...
Kira: Ya !! i will get it now !!

Soon Kira went to claim the bike and drove back home .

Kira: Glad that this bike is in one peace !!
Natsume: ya ..
Paladin Dragon: Not bad huh its white in colour...

Piano started playing on its own ...

Kira: Lets go Paladin !!

Soon he drove the bike out , Paladin Dragon became a mystic ball and flew to Kira as it changes to a belt and Diskette appear at Kira's right hand.

Kira: Henshin !!

Kira placed the diskette into the belt . The belt announced: Red Mode !! Soon he became KR Paladin.
Soon he saw the zombie ..

KR Paladin: Alright time for you to get burned !!
Rat Zombie: Bring it on !! You must the one that killed our comrades !!

Rat Zombie rushed at KR Paladin , as he flew and hit the wall and land on the ground .

KR Paladin: He's good !!

Soon Rat Zombie rushed at him once more but this time he jumped over the zombie as soon as he turn back , the rat zombie punched him as he flew a few distance away . As he got up quickly , the zombie was already gone ..

KR Paladin: Darn ..

After the battle , Kira went home ..

Kira: He got away ..
Natsume: Thats sad ..
Paladin Dragon: He's strong ..
Kira: i'm going for a bath ..
Paladin Dragon: ok ...

Soon the next day , Kira and the others have their breakfast as they went home . As they reach home, the piano played by itself. Soon he drove the bike out , Paladin Dragon became a mystic ball and flew to Kira as it changes to a belt and Diskette appear at Kira's right hand.

Kira: Henshin !!

Kira placed the diskette into the belt . The belt announced: Red Mode !! Soon he became KR Paladin.
Soon he saw the zombie ..

KR Paladin: This time you are not going anywhere !!
Rat Zombie: Look whose talking !!

Rat Zombie rushed at KR Paladin , as he flew and landed in front of the bike . As he get on the bike and getting ready to attack him.

Rat Zombie: Nice bike you got there !! But its useless !!
KR Paladin: Oh ya ?? we'll see about that !!

Soon the both of them rushed after they got hitted , the zombie flew a distance away .

KR Paladin: Time to finish you !!

KR Paladin remove the diskette and put in again , the belt announced: Full Power !! After the belt had annouced , the bike suddenly turned from white to black . As its horns appear infront of the bike , he drove towards the zombie and hit him .
Soon the zombie started cracking as it burst into flames . After the zombie was destroyed, the bike return back to white .

KR Paladin: wow !!
Paladin Dragon: Must be connected or something .

Soon Kira drove back home as they saw foods on the table .

Natsume: I bought it when you were fighting .
Kira: Ok thanks !! i never knew you're this good in cooking .
Paladin Dragon: Taste good !!
All: Lets eat !!

End of Episode 4 ^_^
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Episode 5: The new form !! Blue Form !!

After that motorcycle battle, Kira was thinking about the forms KR Paladin may have .

Paladin Dragon: A new form ?? haha maybe its not the time yet
Kira: Really ?? I don't really think so ..

Natsume came out from the house carrying 2 cups of cold water as she was walking , she trip and fell as the water spill at Kira ...

Natsume: Opps ...
Kira: Be careful next time !! Ah choo !!!
Paladin Dragon: How about taking a rest ?
Kira: Ya maybe its good ...

After taking a hot shower , Kira started thinking about the bike .

Paladin Dragon: What are you thinking ??
Kira: I wonder why when the full power is announced , the bike changed colour , not only that , The horns appeared infront of the bike .
Natsume: Maybe its a upgrade ?? i don't know ..

Soon the next day , Kira started playing piano as Paladin Dragon and Natsume woke up .

Kira: Sorry did i wake u up ??
Natsume: ya, that music was nice
Paladin Dragon: It gives me a great feeling .
Kira: oh ok ..

Soon the piano played by itself. Soon he drove the bike out , Paladin Dragon became a mystic ball and flew to Kira as it changes to a belt and Diskette appear at Kira's right hand.

Kira: Henshin !!

Kira placed the diskette into the belt . The belt announced: Red Mode !! Soon He became KR Paladin
After awhile , he reached a shopping mall and get off the bike .

KR Paladin: Where is he ??
Tiger Zombie: here i am !!

Soon the zombie took out a sword from its back and faced it at KR Paladin.

KR Paladin: A sword ??
Tiger Zombie: i will fight you if all i got !!

Soon Tiger Zombie charged at him and slash him , as KR Paladin quickly dodge all the slashes . Soon the Tiger Zombie stopped attacking and move back a few steps .

Tiger Zombie: Guess i will end with one strike !!
KR Paladin: Can you really do that ??
Paladin Dragon: Do not underestimate your enemy .

KR Paladin remove the diskette and put in again , the belt announced: Full Power !! Soon both of them charge at each other as the zombie used its sword and block the kick and soon a wave appear from its sword and slash KR Paladin as he flew a few metres away.

Tiger Zombie: See you next time

Soon the zombie vanished immdiately ..

KR Paladin: Darn !!

Soon Kira drove back home .

Kira: We got to think of something ..
Paladin Dragon: i am not sure what to do ..
Natsume: How about a rest .

Soon the next morning , Kira went to the shopping mall as he saw the zombie .Paladin Dragon became a mystic ball and flew to Kira as it changes to a belt and Diskette appear at Kira's right hand.

Kira: Henshin !!

Kira placed the diskette into the belt . The belt announced: Red Mode !! Soon he became KR Paladin.

Tiger Zombie: You again !!

Soon the Tiger Zombie slash KR Paladin as he receive the hit and flew a few metres back .

KR Paladin: Maybe we got a new form .. Like blue ??

Soon the belt announced : Blue Mode !! and his armour and eyes became blue .

KR Paladin: How i use this form ??

End of Episode 5 ^_^
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i will stop for awhile cuz my computer screen got problem when my com can work again i will put ep 6 and 7 ^_^
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Episode 6: Spear vs Sword !!

After changing into blue mode , KR Paladin is excited about the new form .

KR Paladin: Alright !! time to finish you !!

After rushing towards the zombie and delivered a punch , the zombie turned back and slash him with its sword as KR Paladin flew a few metres away ...

KR Paladin: The punching power has gone weaker !!
Tiger Zombie: Can you actually defeat me ??

Soon Tiger Zombie ran away as KR Paladin became Kira and went home ..

Kira: what the heck is that form ?? its powers is weak !!
Paladin Dragon: This form is blue in colour ..
Natsume: You can't figure how to use the blue mode ??
Kira: Its strange about it ...

The next day, Kira, Natsume and Paladin went on a trip to Kira and Natsume's old school .

Kira: This place brings back memories ..
Natsume: ya ...
Kira: Lets go !!
Natsume: Remember that table ?? you always take that seat ..
Kira: you were spying on me ??
Paladin Dragon: Couple love ...
Kira: who are calling couple love ??
Paladin Dragon: You .....

Soon the three of them went to the basement of the school , as soon as they reach the basement , the door went shut and the three of them are trapped .

Kira: What happen ??
Natsume: This shouldn't be happening.
Paladin Dragon: Whats wrong with the door .
Tiger Zombie: Enjoy while you can !!
Kira: you !! Get us out of here !!
Tiger Zombie: you can't !! the door is covered with cement !! bye bye !!
Kira: Darn !!
Natsume: Kira ...
Paladin Dragon : Lets break this door !!

Paladin Dragon became a mystic ball and flew to Kira as it changes to a belt and Diskette appear at Kira's right hand.

Kira: Henshin !!

Kira placed the diskette into the belt . The belt announced: Red Mode !! And he became KR Paladin.

KR Paladin: Lets destroy the door !!

KR Paladin remove the diskette and put in again , the belt announced: Full Power !! KR Paladin used his leg to kick the door as it explode . After he came out of the basement , KR Paladin belt announced: Blue Mode !! as his armour and eyes became blue .

Paladin Dragon: Why you go this mode again ??
KR Paladin: I must know how to use it .

After talking, the zombie used its sword and slash him as he hit a group of boxes .

KR Paladin: What do i do ??
Paladin Dragon: Try pressing the circle button on the belt ..

KR Paladin press the circle button on the belt and a spear appear on his right hand .

KR Paladin: Cool !!
Tiger Zombie: Bring it !!

Both of them rushed towards each other as KR Paladin use its spear to attack the zombie but its blocked by its sword , Soon KR Paladin used his leg to kick the zombie as it moved back a few steps .After kicking , KR Paladin remove the diskette and put in again , the belt announced: Full Power !! KR Paladin charge towards the zombie and slash the zombie into half and explode /.

KR Paladin: Victory !!
Paladin Dragon: Alright !!

After the battle , Kira went home happily and Natsume was happy for him .

Kira: Time i play my piano !!

Kira started playing piano gracefully .

Natsume: Its nice .
Paladin Dragon: I love that piano music ..

End of Episode 6 ^_^
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new form after another. lol. damn i'm so so bored these few days. i was hoping u might came up with very interesting plot
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