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I never really had a tolerance for angst. But the shorter poems were better written.



oic... so i should write happy stuff for you then?

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atatakakunai wrote:


Lexer wrote:

I never really had a tolerance for angst. But the shorter poems were better written.



oic... so i should write happy stuff for you then?

^^


What? No. Don't write for me.

It's not really a thing against sad stories. Angst, when applied properly, can create compelling drama and Character Development. But angst, like humor, can be taken too far and kills the emotional impact. About the time when I want to slap the character and scream "JUST GET OVER IT ALREADY!"
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Lexer wrote:


atatakakunai wrote:


Lexer wrote:

I never really had a tolerance for angst. But the shorter poems were better written.



oic... so i should write happy stuff for you then?

^^


What? No. Don't write for me.

It's not really a thing against sad stories. Angst, when applied properly, can create compelling drama and Character Development. But angst, like humor, can be taken too far and kills the emotional impact. About the time when I want to slap the character and scream "JUST GET OVER IT ALREADY!"


Who else am I writing for? just about everyone has left aside from you and a couple other people. this is like our little commune of writing >.<
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Posted 10/27/08

atatakakunai wrote:


Lexer wrote:


atatakakunai wrote:


Lexer wrote:

I never really had a tolerance for angst. But the shorter poems were better written.



oic... so i should write happy stuff for you then?

^^


What? No. Don't write for me.

It's not really a thing against sad stories. Angst, when applied properly, can create compelling drama and Character Development. But angst, like humor, can be taken too far and kills the emotional impact. About the time when I want to slap the character and scream "JUST GET OVER IT ALREADY!"


Who else am I writing for? just about everyone has left aside from you and a couple other people. this is like our little commune of writing >.<



I thought we wrote mostly for ourselves?

Well, at least I am. Im still looking for an artist for my visual novel project, and the one doing Bewildering Impending Spiriting Away is taking his time with the illustrations. I should probably show off his work here.
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Lexer wrote:

I thought we wrote mostly for ourselves?

Well, at least I am. Im still looking for an artist for my visual novel project, and the one doing Bewildering Impending Spiriting Away is taking his time with the illustrations. I should probably show off his work here.


I'd love to see em eventually... but I tend to write for others, I want to share what I feel. the sorrows the joys the Pains and the pleasures of this soul of mine. I write so that others may share in a glimpse at something outside their normal perspective. I write for you, for Bluesander, for Kujin-Jump... I write for all the eyes that may lay their sights upon the words, and feel the connection in their hearts.
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Posted 10/27/08

atatakakunai wrote:


Lexer wrote:

I thought we wrote mostly for ourselves?

Well, at least I am. Im still looking for an artist for my visual novel project, and the one doing Bewildering Impending Spiriting Away is taking his time with the illustrations. I should probably show off his work here.


I'd love to see em eventually... but I tend to write for others, I want to share what I feel. the sorrows the joys the Pains and the pleasures of this soul of mine. I write so that others may share in a glimpse at something outside their normal perspective. I write for you, for Bluesander, for Kujin-Jump... I write for all the eyes that may lay their sights upon the words, and feel the connection in their hearts.


Oh cool. I write because I like super powered lolis beating the crap out of each other.
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Oh cool. I write because I like super powered lolis beating the crap out of each other.


Yeah, I like that too >.<
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No, I liked this story. it has room for improvement, sure, but it's got majorly huge potential!! i would like to see this as a longer story with more detail. ^^

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