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Posted 10/26/08
hey i'm glad to see this thread growing alot looks like this will be nice for advice on videos. i'm sure i'll need it in the coming weeks
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Posted 11/2/08 , edited 11/2/08

shiftd0wn wrote:

Rahh, so here I am submitting one of my own before the firing squad D: Just to make it clear this is the rough draft and I'm currently still tweaking with it, but what's a better time to get an opinion than now?

Anime: Welcome to the NHK
Music: Set Sail by Scary Kids Scaring Kids

http://www.crunchyroll.com/media-351118/NHK-AMV-Set-Sail-rough-draft.html?h264=1


I do not claim to be an expert on amv making but this is just my opinion.

(Favorites!)
When she falls down at the end looked funny lol (i still see the serious side of it tho)
The whole video kept me interested.
(Problems!)
Pretty much what the last person said. the end probably did run too long but i didn't lose interest.
also the end clip was good but maybe there may have been a better clip.
(Soluitons!)
Try and find a better clip for the end.
somehow shorten the last bit. maybe bringing in the end scene a bit later.
(Rating!)
probably a 4 or 4.5 out of 5.
definitely rewatchable.
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this is my second latest video.
http://au.youtube.com/watch?v=eP4KAmv5Fcw
the intro of the actual song was a bit long and boring so i had to fade in. also with the end.
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Archangel768 wrote:

this is my second latest video.
http://au.youtube.com/watch?v=eP4KAmv5Fcw
the intro of the actual song was a bit long and boring so i had to fade in. also with the end.


I must say its much better than you gundam amv, but its still lacking. The opening scene was really wierd and out of place imo,The first half of the was boring beause you have scenes that was prolonged to much, so try like using nice and small scenes that makes sense. And i couldnt find out what kind of amv was it, you should work on the theme such if it's sentimental that way you'll have better scene selection etc. But over it is much better than te gundam. The quality could be alot better, I'm guessing the format was wwm.
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