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So this is our new poetry section in Me-Morii86 ~^_^~
The rules are no posting rude or vulgar poems, and rate the poem above you if you post.^_^

The woods it speaks to me,
With a calm and soft melody.
One of acceptance and condolence.
Telling to the depths of the heart will return no such a consequence.
The woods you understand me inside and out.
When fear overcomes I have no doubt.
You are protecting me with your gracious might.
Your presence is observant day or night.
The woods it speaks to me,
Now our connection is everlasting.
For it is where I am resting forevermore happily.
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Posted 10/26/08

YaoiHottie wrote:

So this is our new poetry section in Me-Morii86 ~^_^~
The rules are no posting rude or vulgar poems, and rate the poem above you if you post.^_^

The woods it speaks to me,
With a calm and soft melody.
One of acceptance and condolence.
Telling to the depths of the heart will return no such a consequence.
The woods you understand me inside and out.
When fear overcomes I have no doubt.
You are protecting me with your gracious might.
Your presence is observant day or night.
The woods it speaks to me,
Now our connection is everlasting.
For it is where I am resting forevermore happily.


this is so good! i really liked it
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Hey little butterfly, where'd you come from?
Dancin' in the meadow playing in the sun!

Hoverin' over flowers in the warm summer breeze
Silently making music with your wings as they tease.

Flitting high, flitting low,
through the garden gates you go
Until the perfect flower comes
to make your day in the sun

Free to linger, free to fly,
Free to mingle with the sky,
never showing you are shy
Just free to be a butterfly!

Hey little child, what do you know?
Before I could be free, I had to learn to grow

A wee little caterpillar with fur upon my back
The smallest little rock would seem a mighty stack

Crawling high, crawling low
Through the tallest weeds I'd go
Until I reached the next plateau
Safe and sound from the world below

Then my task had begun
Spinning my cocoon was work not fun.
Patiently forming in the sun
Until my silken pad was done.

Hey little butterfly, how'd you break free
Bound in your cocoon on a branch of a tree?

Well little child, in time I grew
My wings formed around me as my life became new
Changing from a caterpillar was work that's true
But when I emerged away I flew
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this one is so good too! XD

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I hide behind a mask
You can't see my face
Looking at first glance
I'm in a happy place
The truth is, that's a lie
But you can't really tell
that in the back of my mind
I think the world should rot in hell
What's the point of living
If we are all going to die
What's the point of being happy
If in the end we're going to cry
But this is something no one sees
This is something no one knows
And yet deep inside of me
This feeling of hatred grows
So even though this mask reveals a happy side of me,
I use the mask as a shield to look at what others can never see.
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Posted 10/26/08
so sad
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I know it is very sad but yet somewhat true

I took this one from my page

When tomorrow starts without me, & i'm not there to see your eyes full of tears, showing your love for me.
I wish you wouldn't cry so much, the way you did that day thinking
of the many things we didn't get to say.
I know how much you love me, as much as I love you, and each time you think of me, I'm thinking of you too.
So when tomorrow starts without me, please try to understand.
An angel came & called my name, & took me by my hand.
It was time for me to take my place, in heaven far above.
Leaving everyone behind, especially the ones I love.
As I turned & walked away, a tear fell from my eye.
Remembering the life I lived & why I had to die.
I do not want to go, with having so much to do, and it seemed almost
impossible, that I was leaving you.
So when tomorrow starts without me, don't think that we're apart.
For everytime you think of me, just look within your heart.
*random tear drop*
Posted 10/28/08
you write good poetry!
i like this one best tho ^^

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I'm sitting here
Sad and all alone
Crying lonely black tears
No one around to help me
No one, not that I can I see
Just leave me be
To cry my lonely black tears
Don't try to help
Your just to late
I can't escape
My lonely black tears
After all these years
I'm still sitting here
Crying my lonely black tears
One day maybe
They'll stop flowing
The tears will quit growing
Deep inside
And I will cry no more
Lonely Black Tears
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ur poems are lovely, ur a good writer =]

Crimson Red Rose

Small, and closed, crimson red rose
So innocent, suppressed inside your scarlet pedals

Consealed behind your crimson red walls
Hiding from what your scared of
Hiding from the warmth of love...

Soon you have fluorished and bloomed
Your beauty captivating
Assuming, promising never to fade
Luminescent, with happiness consuming

Lonely and divine, crimson red rose
Why has your warmth suddenly froze?
Time slips to nothing
Once ruby-red enthralling, now dead and withering

Your empty vow is meaningless
Your abondoned time is worthless

Once vivid and flawless, now fading to black
Perish and fallto pieces; never to come back.
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Eternal Corruption

Feel the darkness
Seep inside your soul
Each and everyday
Grows more and more cold
Continuous decay...

As the years grow darker
Our minds are corrupted
And our morals faulter
The world grows darker

Pierce through the darkness embrace
When the world's taken its toll
And drowned in corruptions face
Find the light and free your soul
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Me love a lot ^-^
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YaoiHottie wrote:

Me love a lot ^-^


oh.. hehe thnx, urs r much better tho =]
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YaoiHottie wrote:

Me love a lot ^-^


oh.. hehe thnx, urs r much better tho =]


I just wrote a couple a while back a bit and one today but the thing is I don't feel I should post them up because I don't feel like getting rejected
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YaoiHottie wrote:


BeckyNinjaFoo wrote:


YaoiHottie wrote:

Me love a lot ^-^


oh.. hehe thnx, urs r much better tho =]


I just wrote a couple a while back a bit and one today but the thing is I don't feel I should post them up because I don't feel like getting rejected


rejected?! why would u get rejected that's rediculous! ur poems are frigen awesome!
there's no such thing as a bad poem.. i dont think so any ways.. but that's not the
point! ur talented! post them NOW!!!... ahem.. i mean pleeeeaaasse.. lol
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