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Okay i know i have like...2 other stories to updates ~.~ but this just suddenly came to me. I blame reading Twilight and New Moon. Anyway I needa get it down before i lose it >.> XD starts off like someone writing a diary x] Oh yeah! This isn't going to be based on Twilight...nvm maybe like bits and parts of it and some parts of New moon. xD just so you know
THOSE BITS AND PARTS ARE COPYRIGHTED TO STEPHENIE MEYER! THE AUTHOR OF THE TWILIGHT SAGA! THE CHARACTERS AND THE REST OF THE STORYLINE IS MINE! COPYRIGHTED TO KINTSUCHL/IRAIKAX3! >=O

~October 15, 2007~ [OKAYOKAY im editing this begining part~ X3]

Hey...It's been exactly 6 years since I left my best friends, Blake, Ken, Hannah, and Angel. The reason I left? This voice in my head told me. But...every since I left, horrible luck has been happening. Now i'm stuck, kidnapped by this...person who lured me heard using those words. She said somethin about her being a Vampire Hunter What's going to happen..? Oh! Maybe I should first tell you how I got into this mess o.e...

~Replay, September 12, 2001~

Tap. Tap. Tap.
My head moved alittle to the sound.
Tap. Tap. Tap.
My eyes slowly opened to see the teacher and her ruler taping on my desk. 'Oh snap...' I thought as I looked up scared at my teacher, Mrs. Lean. "H-Hey, Mrs. Lean." I said nervously. "Detention. After school." She clearly said then went back to the front of the class. "Nice going, Kimmy." Came one of my best friends, Angel. I stuck my tongue at her then went back to paying attention in class.

~After School~

"I'll talk to you later, Angel, Hannah! Say Hi to Blake and Ken for me!" I shouted then went to detention. The boringest part of the day. "Okay! We'll see you laterThey replied then left. I sat down at the desk, laying down, staring at the board that said 'Detention' and was underlined. 'Detention my ass, all detention does is make kids hate school even more, AND makes us want to do even more bad things to this school.' I thought, laying on the side of my head.

~After Detention~

"WHY DID YOU GET DETENTION?!" Screamed my abusive mother, hitting me roughly with a broom. I didn't answer her but just looked away. She whacked me again, causing another red bruise on my arm. I refused to show weakness. Every single god forsaken day, my mom beated me up for the stupidest reasons. I never told anyone, I never showed them my bruises, I just kept my life in secret. "You worthless piece of trash!" I heard her scream as she kept on hitting me. Every since my dad left us, she's been going out, geting drunk, all that junk. When ever she's mad, she'd just take it out at home...on me. I'm pretty used to it by now. I closed my eyes as she finally dropped the broom then went outside and into the car. Probably to get drunk again. I don't really care anymore. I slowly got up and went into the shower, wincing every time shampoo or hot water touched the bruises. I sighed then turned off the water and wrapped a towel around my head and body. I hummed softly getting my clothes and putting them on. My wet hair dripped onto my shirt as I combed it. "You okay, Kimmy?" Asked a voice behind me. I placed the comb down, as I slowly turned around. "Yeah." I replied hoping my long sleeved jacket was covering my bruises well enough. "Then what's with these?" He asked lifting up my arm, revealing red, slightly bleeding bruises. I quickly shoved my sleeve back down. "Their nothing, Blake." I mumbled turning around facing the mirror. I closed my eyes not wanting to see he's face. Blake. My bestest out of the 4 siblings, Angel, Hannah, Ken and Blake. Blake knew everything about me, but I kept the secret about my abusive mother. "You shouldn't lie." I heard him say, he's breathing near my ear. I didn't open my eyes. "...I'm sorry for lying about my mother." I whispered as I felt tears threatening to fall. "Everytime she's home she just hits me for the most stupidest reasons. I don't have enough courage to tell anyone, nor even you, til now." I whispered as the tears just slipped, while I hugged my legs. Blake closed he's eyes then turned me around and into he's cold arms. "It's okay." He whispered softly into my ear. I could feel something sharp on my neck as I stayed like that. 'You shouldn't be letting him hug you.' I heard. 'Why?' I thought. 'He's dangerous.' I heard again. Blake? Dangerous? 'No he's not!' I thought as I shivered from Blake's touch. 'You'll regret it...' The voice said and then faded away. "I'll make sure your mom doesn't hurt you any more." He cooled then let me go. "But...what if you finds out I told someone?" I mumbled, as he picked me up and placed me on my bed. "I told you i'll make sure she wouldn't hurt you anymore." He told me then kissed me on the forehead. "Good night, Kimmy." He said then disappeared out of the window. I laid in my bed for awhile, then thought about the voices from before. 'What do you mean by regret...?' I thought then falling asleep.

~Next day~

My eyes softly opened as no sun rised. I rubbed my tired eyes as I walked into the bathroom. I did my morning routine and decided to skip breakfast, not wanting to deal with a morning beating. I quickly slipped on my sneakers and jumped outside through the window. I landed on the roof of the house, and climbed down, walking towards the school. "Where is that worthless brat?!" I heard my mother shout from the house. I got scared and began running towards school. The only safe place in my life. "Woah, what's the rush?" Came Hannah's voice, as I ran through the doors, out of breath. "It's...nothing." I managed to say. "Go ahead and tell them, I already told them about your mother." Came Blake's voice from behind me. I jumped alittle then slowly nod. "I heard my mom shouting for me when I left..." I mumbled looking down. "Don't worry, we'll take care of your mom today!" Angel said smiling. "So don't worry about it." Ken said. I looked at them, then nod. 'Guess this might be the best for me.' I thought then closed my eyes then smiled.

~Lunch~

I walked into the cafeteria with my bagged lunch, just to see no one was at the table. 'Where'd Angel, Hannah, Ken and Blake go?' I thought sitting down and began eating. After most of lunch time they came back. "Heyyy, Kimmy what do you think about living with u-" Hannah never got to finish her sentance, because she was being dragged away by Angel and Ken. I stared at them as they left then looked at Blake. "What happened?" I asked him. "I'm sorry." He whispered, then grabbed me, taking me somewhere in the forest within seconds. "I need to tell you something." Blake said looking away. The sun peeked out as we stayed in the shadows. I stepped out into the sunlight, but was stopped by Blake. He's hand slightly in the light. I looked up to him, my eyes widen seeing he's teeth. "Your...your..." I couldn't get the words out. He pulled me close. "Please don't get scared of me." He whispered as I began shivering in fear. "I...know this is forbidden but...I love you, Kimmy." He whispered calmly into my ear. I blinked for a second my fear disappearing. "I love you too, Blake." I whispered burying my head in he's chest. He smiled, trying as hard as he could to resist the urge to bite me. Suddenly he pushed me away, and he jumped about 10 yards away...maybe more, with hunger in he's eyes. I was scared, really, really scared. I struggled to walk backwards and fell down against the tree. Within a blink of an eye, Angel, Hannah, and Ken appeared to hold back Blake. "Kimmy! Get out of here! Go back to class!" Angel shouted to me. I just sat there, frozen with fear. "I think she's to scared to move, let me take her." Hannah said appearing near me, and picking me up, running towards the school. Hannah gently placed me on the bench near the school. "You okay?" Hannah asked quietly, trying not to frighten me any more then I am already. "Y-You guys a-a-are..." I stuttered. "Yes, we're vampires, but we only feast on animals, not humans...just sometimes when we're, really hungry we'll feast on anything." Hannah explained slightly looking to the side. I took in a deep breath, then looked at her. "I think I should be okay about it now." I said to her, lifting part of my lips to a smile. My famous and very rare crooked smile. "If you say so." Hannah said smiling alittle. "Hey! Hannah! Kimmy! Let's get to class!" We heard Angel and Ken shout. Hannah and I smiled then ran towards them. I didn't want to ask about what happened to Blake right now, but i'll find out soon.

~After School~

"Hey, Kimmy, do you mind staying with us for awhile?" Hannah asked me suddenly as we walked away from the school. "Uh, reason?" I asked her looking at her, tilting my head. She hesitated a bit, then answered. "Blake...we kind of really hungry when we visited your mother and kind of..." She didn't finish. I froze a bit. 'Why should I care? All she ever did was abuse me.' I thought calming myself. "I don't care about her." I said to her firmly. She smiled a bit. "So your gonna stay with us?" She asked again. "With a family of vampires? That's gonna be fun." I said laughing alittle. She laughed with me alittle, then we got into her car. Seemed like hours til they finally got to the Suu's household. Their stood a cottage, which looked amazing from the outside, but for the inside? We'll see XP. "Come on!" Hannah said pulling me to the cottage. "We're home!" She shouted. "We're?" I heard Ken ask from somewhere. "We're! Kimmy and I!" Hannah said going...pulling me to the living room. "..." Ken grew quiet then went off mumbling something about puting Blake farther away. "Blake?" I asked. "After Hannah brought you away, we had to bring Blake home and calm him down. But since your here, we need to bring him farther away, so it wouldn't happen again." Angel explained from behind us. I jumped alittle then looked at her. "So your living here now?" She asked. I slowly nod. "I'll show you the guest room." Angel said smiling, taking my hand from Hannah's grip and dragging me upstairs. She opened the door, revealing a master bedroom. A king size bed, with light blue sheets, and dark blue pillows. The walls covered with stars, and a pale blue background. The carpet a sea blue, and a wooden desk at the side. A walk in closet, with clothes, shoes, and everything else. "Wow..." Was all I manage to say. "Sorry, if we over did it alittle." Angel said laughing alittle, rubbing the back of her head. "I love it!" I said to her smiling, then ran to sit on the bed. My eyes suddenly grew heavy, and then I fell onto the soft pillow asleep. I heard a soft "Good night." from Angel and that was it.

~Next day~ [Saturday, Sept 14, 2001]

"Kimmy...Kimmy...KIMMY!" Shouted a voice next to me. "WHAT?!" I shouted shooting up from my bed, my forehead hiting the person's forehead. "OWWW!" I shouted in pain and threw my head to the pillow. "Man, reminder never wake Kimmy up like that again." I heard her mumble. "Who told you to wake me up anyway, Hannah?" I asked getting up. "Uh, Blake, Ken, Rin, Tai and Angel." Hannah said. "Remind me to kill them later." I mumbled then got out of bed. "You can't exactly kill them." Hannah pointed out. I groaned at her, then went to change. I got into a blue spagetti strap & demin jeans, then walked downstairs. "Morning." Angel, Ken, Rin, and Tai said smiling. "Good morning, Kimmy." Blake said smiling. "Morning." I mumbled then took my seat inbetween Angel and Hannah. I sat there kind of lost in thought, replaying of what just happened yesterday, not noticing there was no food on the table, except my plate. 'Why the hell am I here anyway? Couldn't I just, live with dad?' I thought looking down at my hands. You could of, but chose your best friends. 'I chose my dad over my best friends...?' Yes, and now you just made another big mistake in your life. 'Another...I made another mistake?' The first mistake was when you became friends with them. The second is, living with them. Vampires. How stupid are you? Living in a house with vampires is even more dangerous then living with your mom OR dad!. 'Maybe...I should just leave...' I thought gripping onto my hand. "Kimmy? You havn't ate anything, you okay?" I heard a voice, but I simply ignored it, waiting for the response of that other voice in my head.Yes, you should just leave, let them just fall out of your head.[/]b] I closed my eyes, then decided, i'll listen to the voice. "I'm not hungry...I think i'm gonna take a walk." I told them, getting up from my seat, and leaving the untouched food on the table, walking out the door. As soon as I closed the front door, I ran towards the airport. 'Dad, i'm coming.' I thought, as I called the airlines, getting a ticket thing to Seattle. I hopped on the plane with seconds to spare, only to hear a familiar voice in my head. 'Kimmy...What's wrong? Why are you leaving Forks?! [<33 finally (i think? o-0) got something from the Twilight saga<3 x3]' I heard. I froze realizing who's voice it was. 'I love you.' Was my only response, with that the plane took off. "If this is the only way...only way to end this, i'll do it. If I made another mistake..no If I made the biggest most hugest mistake of my life. I'll regret it. But eitherway, I'm somehow...leaving you Blake..." I whispered, as the plane took off. I knew for once, that not even Angel or Hannah or even Blake could stop, or even find me now. This was my choice. My life. I could do whatever I want with it. So I would gladly say;

Fall, out of my hands
Out of my heart


Until I can no longer remember you
No longer hear you
No longer see you
No longer remember the feeling you gave me
But atleast you'll remember
How much I loved you...<3

[The one in Bold is from the song Fall, by ina (: suckyish ending eever x.X i got the dates wrong btw o-0...oh yeah! the voice in Kinmmy's head was...you'll find out on the squeal<33 now i can work on My Story the lost Chap5 draft lol xD]

*~,..,~*Last Farewell*~,..,~*

[okay for some reason i got an idea for this squeal o-0 alreayd got a part out ofr WNNKS [Watash no namae kinaki somi] XDD]

My eyes half opened, to see everything so...dark. 'What the hell?! Wasn't I on a plane to Seattle?' I thought trying to get things straight, my half opened eyes wouldnt fully open. "Your awake I see." I heard the voice. I know I heard it somewhere... "Your that voice in my head!" I shouted, my half opened eyes showed shock. "Why, arent you a smart girl." She said. Her voice sounded so ..evil...so wicked. I felt some thing sharp against my neck. "And are you a smart girl enough to know how stupid you were to leave those vampires?" She asked as she pressed the blade gently on my neck. "You tricked me! Just to get away from Blake and everyone else!" I shouted. "Why you are that smart enough." She answered chuckling and taking the blade off my neck. I glared at her. 'Kimmy! Wake up! Please!' I heard in my head. I realized that voice immediantly. [SP!] 'Blake!' I thought to him. I could hear him sigh in worried. 'Kimmy! Why'd you leave Forks! And why can't I find you?!' I heard him shout. 'I....was tricked to leaving Forks, and I cant really see where I am right now.' I told him. "Hm, talking to your little boyfriend aren't you? We'll fix that.' I heard the women said. My half opened eyes and widen. 'Blake I need to st-' I couldn't finished my thought, I was suddenly put to sleep. The last thing I heard was that women's wicked laugh...

*~,..,~*6 Years Later*~,..,~*

Well as you can see. It's been six years since I was kidnapped by that damn women. Whenever I had contact with Blake or anyone she'd put me to sleep. All I can do it write in this stupid journal. What to do what to do. Cause...if I dont do anything NOW i'm going to get turned into a vampire LKJASDKLAJSDALKSJD. And that's bad, cause, If Blake didn't want to turn me into a vampire, then I wouldn't either. Oh snap, she's coming!

*~,..,~*End journal entry*~,..,~* [Sorrie its short lol im lazy right now x3]

She snatched my journal and threw it into the trash. "What's the point in keeping a journal when it's going to be destroyed later?" She asked. I snarled at her then turned away. She grabbed my collar on my shirt then looked me in the eye. "You little brat, be lucky i was ordered to keep you alive or you would of been dead already!" She said then dropped me, and left. "Annoying women!" I cried out in annoyance. "I've been here for what six years?! And I still don't know her name too!" I cried out hitting my head against the wall. I frowned as I slid down and pulled my legs to my chest. "Blake...Angel...Hannah...Ken...Hurry..please...?" I whispered, then fell asleep.

*~,..,~*Couple hours later*~,..,~*

Poke.Poke.

I opened my eyes alittle to see a little kitten with a note attached to it's neck. "What do you got little guy?" I asked taking the note and reading it. My eyes glittered, as I smiled, scribbling down a response. "Here, take this back to whoever sented you this." I said to the kitten as i pushed it away. I leaned against the wall once again, and took out the diary that was in the trash can next to me. I opened it and traced the journal entries I placed in it. "I miss...you." I mumbled, gripping onto the book tightly. My eyes blurred more and more, as I felt something cold touch my cheek. I looked up to see a blurry image of Blake. "Shh, it's okay." He whispered holding me tight, then picking me up, running somewhere. After sometime I felt him stop. "Is she okay?!" I heard a voice. "Yeah, she should be." Blake answered. "I'm glad then." The same voice said. I felt the grip around me tighten. "She's coming." Blake mumbled. "I thought I killed her!" Shouted a guy's voice. "We did too!" Shouted 2 girl voices. "We needa get out of here." Blake said, then ran. "W-what's...happening..?" I mumbled. "Let's see, we're finally reunited but we have a vampire hunter on our trail." Blake said smirking alittle. "Ah." I replied closing my eyes. "Get some rest." He said. "I already did" I said popping one eye. "Well get more rest." He said smirking. "I dont want too." I whined. "Fine." He mumbled. I smiled. them closed my eyes. Next thing I knew I was asleep.

Poke....Poke Poke.

My face snapped at the finger poking me, biting it. "OWWWWWWW!" Cried the voice, probably sucking their finger. I felt somebody near me stiffen, as I licked the bottom of my lip. Blood. 'Oh sh**.' I thought shooting my eyes open, jumping far away from the others. Blake, Ken, and Hannah tried to resisted, as Angel was perfectly fine. 'How did....where did the blood come from?' I thought confused. They took a step closer, still trying to resist, Angel holding back. I looked at them, trying not to be afraid, but still took a step back. Next thing I knew I was on the ground, Blake on top of my, he's teeth almost touching my neck. I bit my lips then spoke. "Blake, calm down." I managed to say without any fear. I felt something wet sprinkled down my back as I screamed in pain. Angel watched in horror as Hannah and Ken had the urge to bite me too. My eyes grew blank as I stared at Blake. He's thirst for my blood seemed to have calmed, as he stared at me with horror. I bit my lips tightly as I felt faint, and pain throughout my neck and body. "I'm sorry Kimmy! I'm sorry..." I heard him say as I blacked out.

*~,..,~*.....Dots....*~,..,~*

"What...what do you mean!" "This can't be happening..." "This is all my fault, damnit!" "Don't blame yourself."
I don’t wanna be without you girl {OMFG This is gonna take awhile o-o since i needa look up big bang's last farewell lyrics and find things that fit into this scene]
"She's gone...she's gone..." "Why, why is this happening?!" "Wasn't she suppose to be turned into a vampire?" A sound of a wall crumbling was heard in a distance.
Where did we [I* I should put o.o but that'll mess up the song lyrics XD] go wrong my girl
"She wasn't able to handle the venom." "She was a strong girl, we all know it." "Then how come she didn't survive?!" Another sound of a wall crumbling was heard once again.
I don’t wanna be without you girl
"We're not sure, Blake! Please...calm down..." "How can I?! I killed her, damnit!" I killed her!" He broke another wall.
Going outta my mind
"This is my fault..."
cuz I love you
"I need you, Kimmy. {Lyrics were actually I need you girl}"
"Blake...don't...DONT DO IT!" "Blake! Think! Will Kimmy want you to do this?!" "Sorry."
"Let's call this our Last Farewell,."

*~,..,~*End*~,..,~*

I might as well ended it o-o since i had writers block since forever on this story. ;[ xD kind of a horrible ending though~ Oh well, good enough ^^,
Posted 10/29/08
awwwwww...some ^o^
hehee
Kinnyy~

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ahahaahah wow
all i can do is laugh
I LIKE IT THOUGH HOPE IT ISNT THA END -.-
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ay_bay_bay wrote:

ahahaahah wow
all i can do is laugh
I LIKE IT THOUGH HOPE IT ISNT THA END -.-


lol o-o;;
im way behind on my stories x.X
so i had to find a way to end 2 of the stories so i can work on the other one o-o..
now im finding some way to figure out what was in chap 5 >W<
anyway DIDNT JOOH READ THE
'who was the person in kimmys head...well you'll find out inthe squeal.' OR SOMETHING LIKE THAT PART o:
at the end of the last part..orw/e xD
Posted 11/9/08

kintsuchl wrote:


ay_bay_bay wrote:

ahahaahah wow
all i can do is laugh
I LIKE IT THOUGH HOPE IT ISNT THA END -.-


lol o-o;;
im way behind on my stories x.X
so i had to find a way to end 2 of the stories so i can work on the other one o-o..
now im finding some way to figure out what was in chap 5 >W<
anyway DIDNT JOOH READ THE
'who was the person in kimmys head...well you'll find out inthe squeal.' OR SOMETHING LIKE THAT PART o:
at the end of the last part..orw/e xD


i did, i did
BUT did YOU read meh stupid-ish vampire story? -o-
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ay_bay_bay wrote:


kintsuchl wrote:


ay_bay_bay wrote:

ahahaahah wow
all i can do is laugh
I LIKE IT THOUGH HOPE IT ISNT THA END -.-


lol o-o;;
im way behind on my stories x.X
so i had to find a way to end 2 of the stories so i can work on the other one o-o..
now im finding some way to figure out what was in chap 5 >W<
anyway DIDNT JOOH READ THE
'who was the person in kimmys head...well you'll find out inthe squeal.' OR SOMETHING LIKE THAT PART o:
at the end of the last part..orw/e xD


i did, i did
BUT did YOU read meh stupid-ish vampire story? -o-


yep awhile ago ^0^
Posted 11/9/08

kintsuchl wrote:


ay_bay_bay wrote:


kintsuchl wrote:


ay_bay_bay wrote:

ahahaahah wow
all i can do is laugh
I LIKE IT THOUGH HOPE IT ISNT THA END -.-


lol o-o;;
im way behind on my stories x.X
so i had to find a way to end 2 of the stories so i can work on the other one o-o..
now im finding some way to figure out what was in chap 5 >W<
anyway DIDNT JOOH READ THE
'who was the person in kimmys head...well you'll find out inthe squeal.' OR SOMETHING LIKE THAT PART o:
at the end of the last part..orw/e xD


i did, i did
BUT did YOU read meh stupid-ish vampire story? -o-


yep awhile ago ^0^


well i jus wrote lil more AWHILE AGO ; ]
do yu like it? -.-
i dont wanna get bored of it.
did yu know i have like 8 STORIES i need to work ON!?
never FINISHED >,<
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ay_bay_bay wrote:


kintsuchl wrote:


ay_bay_bay wrote:


kintsuchl wrote:


ay_bay_bay wrote:

ahahaahah wow
all i can do is laugh
I LIKE IT THOUGH HOPE IT ISNT THA END -.-


lol o-o;;
im way behind on my stories x.X
so i had to find a way to end 2 of the stories so i can work on the other one o-o..
now im finding some way to figure out what was in chap 5 >W<
anyway DIDNT JOOH READ THE
'who was the person in kimmys head...well you'll find out inthe squeal.' OR SOMETHING LIKE THAT PART o:
at the end of the last part..orw/e xD


i did, i did
BUT did YOU read meh stupid-ish vampire story? -o-


yep awhile ago ^0^


well i jus wrote lil more AWHILE AGO ; ]
do yu like it? -.-
i dont wanna get bored of it.
did yu know i have like 8 STORIES i need to work ON!?
never FINISHED >,<


XD i read it after jooh wrote lil more AWHILE AGO XD
n yeah i do (;
jooh could like write down ideas o-o..
n if i get bored of it i try to find the quickest way to end it
if i cant i fail xD
lolol xP
Posted 11/9/08

kintsuchl wrote:


ay_bay_bay wrote:


kintsuchl wrote:


ay_bay_bay wrote:


kintsuchl wrote:


ay_bay_bay wrote:

ahahaahah wow
all i can do is laugh
I LIKE IT THOUGH HOPE IT ISNT THA END -.-


lol o-o;;
im way behind on my stories x.X
so i had to find a way to end 2 of the stories so i can work on the other one o-o..
now im finding some way to figure out what was in chap 5 >W<
anyway DIDNT JOOH READ THE
'who was the person in kimmys head...well you'll find out inthe squeal.' OR SOMETHING LIKE THAT PART o:
at the end of the last part..orw/e xD


i did, i did
BUT did YOU read meh stupid-ish vampire story? -o-


yep awhile ago ^0^


well i jus wrote lil more AWHILE AGO ; ]
do yu like it? -.-
i dont wanna get bored of it.
did yu know i have like 8 STORIES i need to work ON!?
never FINISHED >,<


XD i read it after jooh wrote lil more AWHILE AGO XD
n yeah i do (;
jooh could like write down ideas o-o..
n if i get bored of it i try to find the quickest way to end it
if i cant i fail xD
lolol xP


hahahahaha=)
write down ideas?
im too lazy though i jus think of em at tha spot o-0
i dont wanna end it now ~...~
lololz that would be REETARDED XD
only 2 chaps.......
THE END!
HAHAHAHHA
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ay_bay_bay wrote:


kintsuchl wrote:


ay_bay_bay wrote:


kintsuchl wrote:


ay_bay_bay wrote:


kintsuchl wrote:


ay_bay_bay wrote:

ahahaahah wow
all i can do is laugh
I LIKE IT THOUGH HOPE IT ISNT THA END -.-


lol o-o;;
im way behind on my stories x.X
so i had to find a way to end 2 of the stories so i can work on the other one o-o..
now im finding some way to figure out what was in chap 5 >W<
anyway DIDNT JOOH READ THE
'who was the person in kimmys head...well you'll find out inthe squeal.' OR SOMETHING LIKE THAT PART o:
at the end of the last part..orw/e xD


i did, i did
BUT did YOU read meh stupid-ish vampire story? -o-


yep awhile ago ^0^


well i jus wrote lil more AWHILE AGO ; ]
do yu like it? -.-
i dont wanna get bored of it.
did yu know i have like 8 STORIES i need to work ON!?
never FINISHED >,<


XD i read it after jooh wrote lil more AWHILE AGO XD
n yeah i do (;
jooh could like write down ideas o-o..
n if i get bored of it i try to find the quickest way to end it
if i cant i fail xD
lolol xP


hahahahaha=)
write down ideas?
im too lazy though i jus think of em at tha spot o-0
i dont wanna end it now ~...~
lololz that would be REETARDED XD
only 2 chaps.......
THE END!
HAHAHAHHA


lxD
lmao XDD
lol o:
I TELL JOOH WRITE DOWN IDEAS (;
its weird o-o..like when icame up with watashi no namae kinaki somi
i dreamed that whole storie o-o........
but i forgot some parts so i made it up ^0^<3
xDDD
n n right now im writing my storie for my series THAT IM STIL LWAITING FOR IT TO BE APROVED [i made a video that has the intro in it x3...well whats the storie is about XD]
so far its weird o-0.......
Hereee

In the Maple world, there is two sides, the dark side and the Light side. The dark side wants to hold peace and help others, even though they don't look nice. As for the Light said, they want to take other the world. even though they look like innocent people. But in between the Dark and White sides, there's the Loners. The Loners don't want to take part in whatever is happening. They don't interact with others except to other Loners. And what happens when there's a fight between the Dark and Light side? There's the Saviors, or what they call themselves, ...I don't what to call them. HAHAHA >=], so i'll just call em 'Saviors' til one of you people tell me a good name >=]. Anyway, their job is too split up these fights, and try to not cause any more distructions. Buuuut, there's a new threat coming. But what is it?....

Poke.Poke.
'Huh?' Mika thought opening her eyes. Only to see her best friend, Suzu. Mika groaned then stabbed Suzu in the stomach. "You don't have to stab me for poking you!" Whined Suzu. Mika stuck her tongue out then went to get changed.
Ring. Ring.
"I GOT IT!" Mika heard Kinnie shout, and a bunch of mumbles. "MIKAAA! SUZUU! ANGELL! TACOOO! KEANA! WE'VE GOT A MISSION!" Mika heard Kinnie shout. Then everyone rushing downstairs. "Okay! The mission is to find out why the Loners at suddenly attacking the Light and Dark sides." Kinnie explained. "Off we go." She said grabing her wand and heading out the door. Mika stood there for alittle. 'My first mission eh? This should be fun.' She thought, then ran out after turning into a dark angel. Mika, she was born to be on the Dark side, but she didn't want to fight with the Light side. So instead, the Saviors allowed her to help them.
"W-What happened...here...?" Suzu asked shocked. There in front of everyone was dead people, barely any blood was splattered, but...everything looked...strange, like nothing even came through here. "Everyone pair up, and search for anyone that's awake right now, Taco you stay with me to heal." Kinnie ordered. Everyone noded, then paired up, and searched. "How could, the Loners do this much damage?" Kinnie mumbled, healing a person's wound. "Kinnie, are you sure they were the Loners?" Taco asked, healing a person. "Yes, i'm sure." Kinnie told her. "These attacks, these scatches, Kinnie they don't anything like the Loners attacks." Taco reasoned. Kinnie froze. "Does that mean we have a new threat coming...?" Kinnie whispered.
"Suzu! I found someone! But she's barely alive!" Mika shouted, as Suzu came over to her. "What happened?" Mika asked the girl. "These...these people...were attacking...us...they look-" The girl never finished her sentence. Mika checked her pulse to find nothing. Mika frowned along with Suzu. "She's gone." Mika mumbled placing the girl down slowly.
"Keana!" Angel shouted. "I found someone!" Angel said, as Keana came over. "What happened?" Keana asked. "These...angel looking people...and...monsters...were attacking..us..they said...something about...destorying...everything...to create...a better...world..." The guy said. "...We should get you to Kinnie and Taco." Angel said after memorizing every word he said. Keana nod, and put him on Keana's back, and flash jumped to Kinnie and Taco. "Kinnie! Taco! We need you to heal this guy!" Keana said placing him down in front of them. Taco checked he's pulse, then frowned. "Keana, he's already gone..." Taco mumbled. "But when we found him he was alive!" Angel said. "Well, he's gone now..." Taco mumbled getting up. "Got any clues?" Kinnie asked. "Yeah, the people who attacked looked like angels plus a bunch of monsters, and their plans are about somethign to destroying everything and then to create a better world." Angel replied, just as she replied Suzu and Mika came into view. "We found out nothing." Mika mumbled. Kinnie and Taco sighed. "Let's see if we can find anything in the nearby village." Suzu suggested. "It's probably dead, like here, but okay." Kinnie said, then disappeared with Taco, already teleporting to the city. Leaving Keana, Mika, Suzu, and Angel yelling "CHEATER!".
"I told you this place would be dead." Kinnie said looking at the dead empty place, some people hanging on the rails, dead. "How can someone die and have no evidence?!" Taco mumbled. "YOU GUYS ARE CHEATERS!" Shouted Suzu from behind. Kinnie and Taco laughed alittle then turned around. "You could of asked for door." Kinnie said smirking. "...I hate you." Mika said. "Now, now, hate is a verrryyy strong word." Taco said laughing. A growl could be heard from Mika, as everyone steped back, no one wanted to get Mika mad, but then again, we were to late when we stepped back. Mika's hair flowed down, her clothes turned into a grayish blackish dress and her star wand went into a dark gloomy color. Mika just went into the light side...the most evilest side so far..and if she turned into the white side...we were all going to have to fight her...

o.o as jooh can also see [maybe] the top part is in my newie groupie that im about to give up some boring reason lol
'The Tale' (:
Posted 11/9/08

kintsuchl wrote:


ay_bay_bay wrote:


kintsuchl wrote:


ay_bay_bay wrote:


kintsuchl wrote:


ay_bay_bay wrote:


kintsuchl wrote:


ay_bay_bay wrote:

ahahaahah wow
all i can do is laugh
I LIKE IT THOUGH HOPE IT ISNT THA END -.-


lol o-o;;
im way behind on my stories x.X
so i had to find a way to end 2 of the stories so i can work on the other one o-o..
now im finding some way to figure out what was in chap 5 >W<
anyway DIDNT JOOH READ THE
'who was the person in kimmys head...well you'll find out inthe squeal.' OR SOMETHING LIKE THAT PART o:
at the end of the last part..orw/e xD


i did, i did
BUT did YOU read meh stupid-ish vampire story? -o-


yep awhile ago ^0^


well i jus wrote lil more AWHILE AGO ; ]
do yu like it? -.-
i dont wanna get bored of it.
did yu know i have like 8 STORIES i need to work ON!?
never FINISHED >,<


XD i read it after jooh wrote lil more AWHILE AGO XD
n yeah i do (;
jooh could like write down ideas o-o..
n if i get bored of it i try to find the quickest way to end it
if i cant i fail xD
lolol xP


hahahahaha=)
write down ideas?
im too lazy though i jus think of em at tha spot o-0
i dont wanna end it now ~...~
lololz that would be REETARDED XD
only 2 chaps.......
THE END!
HAHAHAHHA


lxD
lmao XDD
lol o:
I TELL JOOH WRITE DOWN IDEAS (;
its weird o-o..like when icame up with watashi no namae kinaki somi
i dreamed that whole storie o-o........
but i forgot some parts so i made it up ^0^<3
xDDD
n n right now im writing my storie for my series THAT IM STIL LWAITING FOR IT TO BE APROVED [i made a video that has the intro in it x3...well whats the storie is about XD]
so far its weird o-0.......
Hereee

In the Maple world, there is two sides, the dark side and the Light side. The dark side wants to hold peace and help others, even though they don't look nice. As for the Light said, they want to take other the world. even though they look like innocent people. But in between the Dark and White sides, there's the Loners. The Loners don't want to take part in whatever is happening. They don't interact with others except to other Loners. And what happens when there's a fight between the Dark and Light side? There's the Saviors, or what they call themselves, ...I don't what to call them. HAHAHA >=], so i'll just call em 'Saviors' til one of you people tell me a good name >=]. Anyway, their job is too split up these fights, and try to not cause any more distructions. Buuuut, there's a new threat coming. But what is it?....

Poke.Poke.
'Huh?' Mika thought opening her eyes. Only to see her best friend, Suzu. Mika groaned then stabbed Suzu in the stomach. "You don't have to stab me for poking you!" Whined Suzu. Mika stuck her tongue out then went to get changed.
Ring. Ring.
"I GOT IT!" Mika heard Kinnie shout, and a bunch of mumbles. "MIKAAA! SUZUU! ANGELL! TACOOO! KEANA! WE'VE GOT A MISSION!" Mika heard Kinnie shout. Then everyone rushing downstairs. "Okay! The mission is to find out why the Loners at suddenly attacking the Light and Dark sides." Kinnie explained. "Off we go." She said grabing her wand and heading out the door. Mika stood there for alittle. 'My first mission eh? This should be fun.' She thought, then ran out after turning into a dark angel. Mika, she was born to be on the Dark side, but she didn't want to fight with the Light side. So instead, the Saviors allowed her to help them.
"W-What happened...here...?" Suzu asked shocked. There in front of everyone was dead people, barely any blood was splattered, but...everything looked...strange, like nothing even came through here. "Everyone pair up, and search for anyone that's awake right now, Taco you stay with me to heal." Kinnie ordered. Everyone noded, then paired up, and searched. "How could, the Loners do this much damage?" Kinnie mumbled, healing a person's wound. "Kinnie, are you sure they were the Loners?" Taco asked, healing a person. "Yes, i'm sure." Kinnie told her. "These attacks, these scatches, Kinnie they don't anything like the Loners attacks." Taco reasoned. Kinnie froze. "Does that mean we have a new threat coming...?" Kinnie whispered.
"Suzu! I found someone! But she's barely alive!" Mika shouted, as Suzu came over to her. "What happened?" Mika asked the girl. "These...these people...were attacking...us...they look-" The girl never finished her sentence. Mika checked her pulse to find nothing. Mika frowned along with Suzu. "She's gone." Mika mumbled placing the girl down slowly.
"Keana!" Angel shouted. "I found someone!" Angel said, as Keana came over. "What happened?" Keana asked. "These...angel looking people...and...monsters...were attacking..us..they said...something about...destorying...everything...to create...a better...world..." The guy said. "...We should get you to Kinnie and Taco." Angel said after memorizing every word he said. Keana nod, and put him on Keana's back, and flash jumped to Kinnie and Taco. "Kinnie! Taco! We need you to heal this guy!" Keana said placing him down in front of them. Taco checked he's pulse, then frowned. "Keana, he's already gone..." Taco mumbled. "But when we found him he was alive!" Angel said. "Well, he's gone now..." Taco mumbled getting up. "Got any clues?" Kinnie asked. "Yeah, the people who attacked looked like angels plus a bunch of monsters, and their plans are about somethign to destroying everything and then to create a better world." Angel replied, just as she replied Suzu and Mika came into view. "We found out nothing." Mika mumbled. Kinnie and Taco sighed. "Let's see if we can find anything in the nearby village." Suzu suggested. "It's probably dead, like here, but okay." Kinnie said, then disappeared with Taco, already teleporting to the city. Leaving Keana, Mika, Suzu, and Angel yelling "CHEATER!".
"I told you this place would be dead." Kinnie said looking at the dead empty place, some people hanging on the rails, dead. "How can someone die and have no evidence?!" Taco mumbled. "YOU GUYS ARE CHEATERS!" Shouted Suzu from behind. Kinnie and Taco laughed alittle then turned around. "You could of asked for door." Kinnie said smirking. "...I hate you." Mika said. "Now, now, hate is a verrryyy strong word." Taco said laughing. A growl could be heard from Mika, as everyone steped back, no one wanted to get Mika mad, but then again, we were to late when we stepped back. Mika's hair flowed down, her clothes turned into a grayish blackish dress and her star wand went into a dark gloomy color. Mika just went into the light side...the most evilest side so far..and if she turned into the white side...we were all going to have to fight her...

o.o as jooh can also see [maybe] the top part is in my newie groupie that im about to give up some boring reason lol
'The Tale' (:



awesome-nesss XD
LMFAO but i laughed everytime at tha word "TACO"
soo thats someones name?!?!!
AHHAHAHA.
anyway is this like... a new stowy?
& yur makin a video for it?! =O
p.s. added a pic of jameyyyyyyyyyyyy=)
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ay_bay_bay wrote:


kintsuchl wrote:


ay_bay_bay wrote:


kintsuchl wrote:


ay_bay_bay wrote:


kintsuchl wrote:


ay_bay_bay wrote:


kintsuchl wrote:


ay_bay_bay wrote:

ahahaahah wow
all i can do is laugh
I LIKE IT THOUGH HOPE IT ISNT THA END -.-


lol o-o;;
im way behind on my stories x.X
so i had to find a way to end 2 of the stories so i can work on the other one o-o..
now im finding some way to figure out what was in chap 5 >W<
anyway DIDNT JOOH READ THE
'who was the person in kimmys head...well you'll find out inthe squeal.' OR SOMETHING LIKE THAT PART o:
at the end of the last part..orw/e xD


i did, i did
BUT did YOU read meh stupid-ish vampire story? -o-


yep awhile ago ^0^


well i jus wrote lil more AWHILE AGO ; ]
do yu like it? -.-
i dont wanna get bored of it.
did yu know i have like 8 STORIES i need to work ON!?
never FINISHED >,<


XD i read it after jooh wrote lil more AWHILE AGO XD
n yeah i do (;
jooh could like write down ideas o-o..
n if i get bored of it i try to find the quickest way to end it
if i cant i fail xD
lolol xP


hahahahaha=)
write down ideas?
im too lazy though i jus think of em at tha spot o-0
i dont wanna end it now ~...~
lololz that would be REETARDED XD
only 2 chaps.......
THE END!
HAHAHAHHA


lxD
lmao XDD
lol o:
I TELL JOOH WRITE DOWN IDEAS (;
its weird o-o..like when icame up with watashi no namae kinaki somi
i dreamed that whole storie o-o........
but i forgot some parts so i made it up ^0^<3
xDDD
n n right now im writing my storie for my series THAT IM STIL LWAITING FOR IT TO BE APROVED [i made a video that has the intro in it x3...well whats the storie is about XD]
so far its weird o-0.......
Hereee

In the Maple world, there is two sides, the dark side and the Light side. The dark side wants to hold peace and help others, even though they don't look nice. As for the Light said, they want to take other the world. even though they look like innocent people. But in between the Dark and White sides, there's the Loners. The Loners don't want to take part in whatever is happening. They don't interact with others except to other Loners. And what happens when there's a fight between the Dark and Light side? There's the Saviors, or what they call themselves, ...I don't what to call them. HAHAHA >=], so i'll just call em 'Saviors' til one of you people tell me a good name >=]. Anyway, their job is too split up these fights, and try to not cause any more distructions. Buuuut, there's a new threat coming. But what is it?....

Poke.Poke.
'Huh?' Mika thought opening her eyes. Only to see her best friend, Suzu. Mika groaned then stabbed Suzu in the stomach. "You don't have to stab me for poking you!" Whined Suzu. Mika stuck her tongue out then went to get changed.
Ring. Ring.
"I GOT IT!" Mika heard Kinnie shout, and a bunch of mumbles. "MIKAAA! SUZUU! ANGELL! TACOOO! KEANA! WE'VE GOT A MISSION!" Mika heard Kinnie shout. Then everyone rushing downstairs. "Okay! The mission is to find out why the Loners at suddenly attacking the Light and Dark sides." Kinnie explained. "Off we go." She said grabing her wand and heading out the door. Mika stood there for alittle. 'My first mission eh? This should be fun.' She thought, then ran out after turning into a dark angel. Mika, she was born to be on the Dark side, but she didn't want to fight with the Light side. So instead, the Saviors allowed her to help them.
"W-What happened...here...?" Suzu asked shocked. There in front of everyone was dead people, barely any blood was splattered, but...everything looked...strange, like nothing even came through here. "Everyone pair up, and search for anyone that's awake right now, Taco you stay with me to heal." Kinnie ordered. Everyone noded, then paired up, and searched. "How could, the Loners do this much damage?" Kinnie mumbled, healing a person's wound. "Kinnie, are you sure they were the Loners?" Taco asked, healing a person. "Yes, i'm sure." Kinnie told her. "These attacks, these scatches, Kinnie they don't anything like the Loners attacks." Taco reasoned. Kinnie froze. "Does that mean we have a new threat coming...?" Kinnie whispered.
"Suzu! I found someone! But she's barely alive!" Mika shouted, as Suzu came over to her. "What happened?" Mika asked the girl. "These...these people...were attacking...us...they look-" The girl never finished her sentence. Mika checked her pulse to find nothing. Mika frowned along with Suzu. "She's gone." Mika mumbled placing the girl down slowly.
"Keana!" Angel shouted. "I found someone!" Angel said, as Keana came over. "What happened?" Keana asked. "These...angel looking people...and...monsters...were attacking..us..they said...something about...destorying...everything...to create...a better...world..." The guy said. "...We should get you to Kinnie and Taco." Angel said after memorizing every word he said. Keana nod, and put him on Keana's back, and flash jumped to Kinnie and Taco. "Kinnie! Taco! We need you to heal this guy!" Keana said placing him down in front of them. Taco checked he's pulse, then frowned. "Keana, he's already gone..." Taco mumbled. "But when we found him he was alive!" Angel said. "Well, he's gone now..." Taco mumbled getting up. "Got any clues?" Kinnie asked. "Yeah, the people who attacked looked like angels plus a bunch of monsters, and their plans are about somethign to destroying everything and then to create a better world." Angel replied, just as she replied Suzu and Mika came into view. "We found out nothing." Mika mumbled. Kinnie and Taco sighed. "Let's see if we can find anything in the nearby village." Suzu suggested. "It's probably dead, like here, but okay." Kinnie said, then disappeared with Taco, already teleporting to the city. Leaving Keana, Mika, Suzu, and Angel yelling "CHEATER!".
"I told you this place would be dead." Kinnie said looking at the dead empty place, some people hanging on the rails, dead. "How can someone die and have no evidence?!" Taco mumbled. "YOU GUYS ARE CHEATERS!" Shouted Suzu from behind. Kinnie and Taco laughed alittle then turned around. "You could of asked for door." Kinnie said smirking. "...I hate you." Mika said. "Now, now, hate is a verrryyy strong word." Taco said laughing. A growl could be heard from Mika, as everyone steped back, no one wanted to get Mika mad, but then again, we were to late when we stepped back. Mika's hair flowed down, her clothes turned into a grayish blackish dress and her star wand went into a dark gloomy color. Mika just went into the light side...the most evilest side so far..and if she turned into the white side...we were all going to have to fight her...

o.o as jooh can also see [maybe] the top part is in my newie groupie that im about to give up some boring reason lol
'The Tale' (:



awesome-nesss XD
LMFAO but i laughed everytime at tha word "TACO"
soo thats someones name?!?!!
AHHAHAHA.
anyway is this like... a new stowy?
& yur makin a video for it?! =O
p.s. added a pic of jameyyyyyyyyyyyy=)


xDD
LOL xD
nope its cuz her MapleStory IGN [in game name] is TacoBellBuff n im just used to calling her Tacoo ^0^
but in the video im gonna put 'Kelly' HER real NAME lol xD
n n yea o-o...its my plan for the video<3
n n okie -checks- x3
Posted 11/9/08

kintsuchl wrote:


ay_bay_bay wrote:


kintsuchl wrote:


ay_bay_bay wrote:


kintsuchl wrote:


ay_bay_bay wrote:


kintsuchl wrote:


ay_bay_bay wrote:


kintsuchl wrote:


ay_bay_bay wrote:

ahahaahah wow
all i can do is laugh
I LIKE IT THOUGH HOPE IT ISNT THA END -.-


lol o-o;;
im way behind on my stories x.X
so i had to find a way to end 2 of the stories so i can work on the other one o-o..
now im finding some way to figure out what was in chap 5 >W<
anyway DIDNT JOOH READ THE
'who was the person in kimmys head...well you'll find out inthe squeal.' OR SOMETHING LIKE THAT PART o:
at the end of the last part..orw/e xD


i did, i did
BUT did YOU read meh stupid-ish vampire story? -o-


yep awhile ago ^0^


well i jus wrote lil more AWHILE AGO ; ]
do yu like it? -.-
i dont wanna get bored of it.
did yu know i have like 8 STORIES i need to work ON!?
never FINISHED >,<


XD i read it after jooh wrote lil more AWHILE AGO XD
n yeah i do (;
jooh could like write down ideas o-o..
n if i get bored of it i try to find the quickest way to end it
if i cant i fail xD
lolol xP


hahahahaha=)
write down ideas?
im too lazy though i jus think of em at tha spot o-0
i dont wanna end it now ~...~
lololz that would be REETARDED XD
only 2 chaps.......
THE END!
HAHAHAHHA


lxD
lmao XDD
lol o:
I TELL JOOH WRITE DOWN IDEAS (;
its weird o-o..like when icame up with watashi no namae kinaki somi
i dreamed that whole storie o-o........
but i forgot some parts so i made it up ^0^<3
xDDD
n n right now im writing my storie for my series THAT IM STIL LWAITING FOR IT TO BE APROVED [i made a video that has the intro in it x3...well whats the storie is about XD]
so far its weird o-0.......
Hereee

In the Maple world, there is two sides, the dark side and the Light side. The dark side wants to hold peace and help others, even though they don't look nice. As for the Light said, they want to take other the world. even though they look like innocent people. But in between the Dark and White sides, there's the Loners. The Loners don't want to take part in whatever is happening. They don't interact with others except to other Loners. And what happens when there's a fight between the Dark and Light side? There's the Saviors, or what they call themselves, ...I don't what to call them. HAHAHA >=], so i'll just call em 'Saviors' til one of you people tell me a good name >=]. Anyway, their job is too split up these fights, and try to not cause any more distructions. Buuuut, there's a new threat coming. But what is it?....

Poke.Poke.
'Huh?' Mika thought opening her eyes. Only to see her best friend, Suzu. Mika groaned then stabbed Suzu in the stomach. "You don't have to stab me for poking you!" Whined Suzu. Mika stuck her tongue out then went to get changed.
Ring. Ring.
"I GOT IT!" Mika heard Kinnie shout, and a bunch of mumbles. "MIKAAA! SUZUU! ANGELL! TACOOO! KEANA! WE'VE GOT A MISSION!" Mika heard Kinnie shout. Then everyone rushing downstairs. "Okay! The mission is to find out why the Loners at suddenly attacking the Light and Dark sides." Kinnie explained. "Off we go." She said grabing her wand and heading out the door. Mika stood there for alittle. 'My first mission eh? This should be fun.' She thought, then ran out after turning into a dark angel. Mika, she was born to be on the Dark side, but she didn't want to fight with the Light side. So instead, the Saviors allowed her to help them.
"W-What happened...here...?" Suzu asked shocked. There in front of everyone was dead people, barely any blood was splattered, but...everything looked...strange, like nothing even came through here. "Everyone pair up, and search for anyone that's awake right now, Taco you stay with me to heal." Kinnie ordered. Everyone noded, then paired up, and searched. "How could, the Loners do this much damage?" Kinnie mumbled, healing a person's wound. "Kinnie, are you sure they were the Loners?" Taco asked, healing a person. "Yes, i'm sure." Kinnie told her. "These attacks, these scatches, Kinnie they don't anything like the Loners attacks." Taco reasoned. Kinnie froze. "Does that mean we have a new threat coming...?" Kinnie whispered.
"Suzu! I found someone! But she's barely alive!" Mika shouted, as Suzu came over to her. "What happened?" Mika asked the girl. "These...these people...were attacking...us...they look-" The girl never finished her sentence. Mika checked her pulse to find nothing. Mika frowned along with Suzu. "She's gone." Mika mumbled placing the girl down slowly.
"Keana!" Angel shouted. "I found someone!" Angel said, as Keana came over. "What happened?" Keana asked. "These...angel looking people...and...monsters...were attacking..us..they said...something about...destorying...everything...to create...a better...world..." The guy said. "...We should get you to Kinnie and Taco." Angel said after memorizing every word he said. Keana nod, and put him on Keana's back, and flash jumped to Kinnie and Taco. "Kinnie! Taco! We need you to heal this guy!" Keana said placing him down in front of them. Taco checked he's pulse, then frowned. "Keana, he's already gone..." Taco mumbled. "But when we found him he was alive!" Angel said. "Well, he's gone now..." Taco mumbled getting up. "Got any clues?" Kinnie asked. "Yeah, the people who attacked looked like angels plus a bunch of monsters, and their plans are about somethign to destroying everything and then to create a better world." Angel replied, just as she replied Suzu and Mika came into view. "We found out nothing." Mika mumbled. Kinnie and Taco sighed. "Let's see if we can find anything in the nearby village." Suzu suggested. "It's probably dead, like here, but okay." Kinnie said, then disappeared with Taco, already teleporting to the city. Leaving Keana, Mika, Suzu, and Angel yelling "CHEATER!".
"I told you this place would be dead." Kinnie said looking at the dead empty place, some people hanging on the rails, dead. "How can someone die and have no evidence?!" Taco mumbled. "YOU GUYS ARE CHEATERS!" Shouted Suzu from behind. Kinnie and Taco laughed alittle then turned around. "You could of asked for door." Kinnie said smirking. "...I hate you." Mika said. "Now, now, hate is a verrryyy strong word." Taco said laughing. A growl could be heard from Mika, as everyone steped back, no one wanted to get Mika mad, but then again, we were to late when we stepped back. Mika's hair flowed down, her clothes turned into a grayish blackish dress and her star wand went into a dark gloomy color. Mika just went into the light side...the most evilest side so far..and if she turned into the white side...we were all going to have to fight her...

o.o as jooh can also see [maybe] the top part is in my newie groupie that im about to give up some boring reason lol
'The Tale' (:



awesome-nesss XD
LMFAO but i laughed everytime at tha word "TACO"
soo thats someones name?!?!!
AHHAHAHA.
anyway is this like... a new stowy?
& yur makin a video for it?! =O
p.s. added a pic of jameyyyyyyyyyyyy=)


xDD
LOL xD
nope its cuz her MapleStory IGN [in game name] is TacoBellBuff n im just used to calling her Tacoo ^0^
but in the video im gonna put 'Kelly' HER real NAME lol xD
n n yea o-o...its my plan for the video<3
n n okie -checks- x3


ROTFL ; D
TACCOOO! XD XD XD
i cant wait to see tha viddd, <333
MAPLE STYLEE WHOO =}
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ay_bay_bay wrote:


kintsuchl wrote:


ay_bay_bay wrote:


kintsuchl wrote:


ay_bay_bay wrote:


kintsuchl wrote:


ay_bay_bay wrote:


kintsuchl wrote:


ay_bay_bay wrote:


kintsuchl wrote:


ay_bay_bay wrote:

ahahaahah wow
all i can do is laugh
I LIKE IT THOUGH HOPE IT ISNT THA END -.-


lol o-o;;
im way behind on my stories x.X
so i had to find a way to end 2 of the stories so i can work on the other one o-o..
now im finding some way to figure out what was in chap 5 >W<
anyway DIDNT JOOH READ THE
'who was the person in kimmys head...well you'll find out inthe squeal.' OR SOMETHING LIKE THAT PART o:
at the end of the last part..orw/e xD


i did, i did
BUT did YOU read meh stupid-ish vampire story? -o-


yep awhile ago ^0^


well i jus wrote lil more AWHILE AGO ; ]
do yu like it? -.-
i dont wanna get bored of it.
did yu know i have like 8 STORIES i need to work ON!?
never FINISHED >,<


XD i read it after jooh wrote lil more AWHILE AGO XD
n yeah i do (;
jooh could like write down ideas o-o..
n if i get bored of it i try to find the quickest way to end it
if i cant i fail xD
lolol xP


hahahahaha=)
write down ideas?
im too lazy though i jus think of em at tha spot o-0
i dont wanna end it now ~...~
lololz that would be REETARDED XD
only 2 chaps.......
THE END!
HAHAHAHHA


lxD
lmao XDD
lol o:
I TELL JOOH WRITE DOWN IDEAS (;
its weird o-o..like when icame up with watashi no namae kinaki somi
i dreamed that whole storie o-o........
but i forgot some parts so i made it up ^0^<3
xDDD
n n right now im writing my storie for my series THAT IM STIL LWAITING FOR IT TO BE APROVED [i made a video that has the intro in it x3...well whats the storie is about XD]
so far its weird o-0.......
Hereee

In the Maple world, there is two sides, the dark side and the Light side. The dark side wants to hold peace and help others, even though they don't look nice. As for the Light said, they want to take other the world. even though they look like innocent people. But in between the Dark and White sides, there's the Loners. The Loners don't want to take part in whatever is happening. They don't interact with others except to other Loners. And what happens when there's a fight between the Dark and Light side? There's the Saviors, or what they call themselves, ...I don't what to call them. HAHAHA >=], so i'll just call em 'Saviors' til one of you people tell me a good name >=]. Anyway, their job is too split up these fights, and try to not cause any more distructions. Buuuut, there's a new threat coming. But what is it?....

Poke.Poke.
'Huh?' Mika thought opening her eyes. Only to see her best friend, Suzu. Mika groaned then stabbed Suzu in the stomach. "You don't have to stab me for poking you!" Whined Suzu. Mika stuck her tongue out then went to get changed.
Ring. Ring.
"I GOT IT!" Mika heard Kinnie shout, and a bunch of mumbles. "MIKAAA! SUZUU! ANGELL! TACOOO! KEANA! WE'VE GOT A MISSION!" Mika heard Kinnie shout. Then everyone rushing downstairs. "Okay! The mission is to find out why the Loners at suddenly attacking the Light and Dark sides." Kinnie explained. "Off we go." She said grabing her wand and heading out the door. Mika stood there for alittle. 'My first mission eh? This should be fun.' She thought, then ran out after turning into a dark angel. Mika, she was born to be on the Dark side, but she didn't want to fight with the Light side. So instead, the Saviors allowed her to help them.
"W-What happened...here...?" Suzu asked shocked. There in front of everyone was dead people, barely any blood was splattered, but...everything looked...strange, like nothing even came through here. "Everyone pair up, and search for anyone that's awake right now, Taco you stay with me to heal." Kinnie ordered. Everyone noded, then paired up, and searched. "How could, the Loners do this much damage?" Kinnie mumbled, healing a person's wound. "Kinnie, are you sure they were the Loners?" Taco asked, healing a person. "Yes, i'm sure." Kinnie told her. "These attacks, these scatches, Kinnie they don't anything like the Loners attacks." Taco reasoned. Kinnie froze. "Does that mean we have a new threat coming...?" Kinnie whispered.
"Suzu! I found someone! But she's barely alive!" Mika shouted, as Suzu came over to her. "What happened?" Mika asked the girl. "These...these people...were attacking...us...they look-" The girl never finished her sentence. Mika checked her pulse to find nothing. Mika frowned along with Suzu. "She's gone." Mika mumbled placing the girl down slowly.
"Keana!" Angel shouted. "I found someone!" Angel said, as Keana came over. "What happened?" Keana asked. "These...angel looking people...and...monsters...were attacking..us..they said...something about...destorying...everything...to create...a better...world..." The guy said. "...We should get you to Kinnie and Taco." Angel said after memorizing every word he said. Keana nod, and put him on Keana's back, and flash jumped to Kinnie and Taco. "Kinnie! Taco! We need you to heal this guy!" Keana said placing him down in front of them. Taco checked he's pulse, then frowned. "Keana, he's already gone..." Taco mumbled. "But when we found him he was alive!" Angel said. "Well, he's gone now..." Taco mumbled getting up. "Got any clues?" Kinnie asked. "Yeah, the people who attacked looked like angels plus a bunch of monsters, and their plans are about somethign to destroying everything and then to create a better world." Angel replied, just as she replied Suzu and Mika came into view. "We found out nothing." Mika mumbled. Kinnie and Taco sighed. "Let's see if we can find anything in the nearby village." Suzu suggested. "It's probably dead, like here, but okay." Kinnie said, then disappeared with Taco, already teleporting to the city. Leaving Keana, Mika, Suzu, and Angel yelling "CHEATER!".
"I told you this place would be dead." Kinnie said looking at the dead empty place, some people hanging on the rails, dead. "How can someone die and have no evidence?!" Taco mumbled. "YOU GUYS ARE CHEATERS!" Shouted Suzu from behind. Kinnie and Taco laughed alittle then turned around. "You could of asked for door." Kinnie said smirking. "...I hate you." Mika said. "Now, now, hate is a verrryyy strong word." Taco said laughing. A growl could be heard from Mika, as everyone steped back, no one wanted to get Mika mad, but then again, we were to late when we stepped back. Mika's hair flowed down, her clothes turned into a grayish blackish dress and her star wand went into a dark gloomy color. Mika just went into the light side...the most evilest side so far..and if she turned into the white side...we were all going to have to fight her...

o.o as jooh can also see [maybe] the top part is in my newie groupie that im about to give up some boring reason lol
'The Tale' (:



awesome-nesss XD
LMFAO but i laughed everytime at tha word "TACO"
soo thats someones name?!?!!
AHHAHAHA.
anyway is this like... a new stowy?
& yur makin a video for it?! =O
p.s. added a pic of jameyyyyyyyyyyyy=)


xDD
LOL xD
nope its cuz her MapleStory IGN [in game name] is TacoBellBuff n im just used to calling her Tacoo ^0^
but in the video im gonna put 'Kelly' HER real NAME lol xD
n n yea o-o...its my plan for the video<3
n n okie -checks- x3


ROTFL ; D
TACCOOO! XD XD XD
i cant wait to see tha viddd, <333
MAPLE STYLEE WHOO =}


XDD
lol o:
but but i cant work on EP 1 cuz of maplesim x.X [Maplesim.com is where i can get maplestory characters n do whatever o-0;;]
it wouldnt work for me >=[
-emo corner- T^T
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