Post Reply A Hearts Prison
Posted 10/29/08 , edited 1/16/10
A Hearts Prison



I needa update this too XP
LOL


**Jan16 ~ EDITED BUT NOT UPDATED ;3



ChiChi: (Main Char)
••••••••••••Born*- Tokyo, Japan :]
••••••••••••Age/Gender*- 10 years old/female



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When Chi-Chi chan was 12 she got in a big argument with her boyfriend, now 3 years later when she turns 15 she sees her boyfriend once again, at a New Years party. They're not exactly on good turns even after 3 years. Rio, Chi-Chi Chan's boyfriend was not always the nice, caring type, of course like in every relationship their are hardships. Chi-Chi chan broke Rio's heart. And therefore things will get more complicated from here on.
LOLLL LMAO really Kokochan? XD WOW
your funny =w=






Not So Happy New Year
"Happy new yearrrrrrr Chi-Chiiiiii~" Ya-Ya said with a drunken voice. "Jeez! Ya-Ya why must you get drunk every new year!?" I asked her, facepalming. "Hehehe~" Said Ya-Ya with a drunken laugh too. "Listen, liiisten, I only had kool-aid okay!? No beer, lol. Okay mama will get mad if I actually drank!" Ya-Ya explained drinking some more 'kool-aid', it dripped down her chin as if it was dripping blood. "Ugh..." I moaned as I got a handkerchief and wiped her chin clean. "Why...don't you...drink some kooool-aidddddd with meee?" Ya-Ya said with another new drunken voice. I sighed.

"Ya-Ya why don't you stop acting like your drunk...you're only drinking kool-aid, SILLY!" I slapped Ya-Ya's back as I said silly.

"Hey! Drunkies!~ The new year dance is about to start~ Get ready." Said a random girl coming up to me and Ya-Ya. "Okiiiiiieee..Dokiee?" Ya-Ya said trying not to laugh. "Ya-Ya stop it!" I said finally. Not like it would help anyways.

..

"Hey, Chi-Chi do you want to be my partner in the dance?" Said the boy who owned this big house, and hosted this new years party, he wore a nice tux. "S-Sure~" I said as we started dancing to a slow song in the middle of the room. A cute song was playing~♪♫ La, la, la, la, laaaa, LAAA, I want to be with you foreeevverr, FOREVER IN A MILLION DAYS, I wish you would hold me tight until then, so we don't have to separateeee. <3

[^ o_o..... AHHAAA]

"You can dance well, Chi-Chi." He said smiling at me.

"N-No...well yes I guess a little." I said with a sweat drop as the other couples started dancing around us.

♪Minutes later after the "awesome" dance. . .♪

"W-well thanks for the dance, Shinjji!" I said while laughing barbarically. "Um, you okay?" Shinjji asked with consent. Everyone had cleared out, it had been about 3-4-5am in the morning. [xD yeah. any of those XD XP] Ya-ya had somehow walked home drunk...?

"I'm fine...just a little tipsy. Hahaha~" I said continuing to laugh. "Well...I suppose kool-aid does that to you." Shinjji laughed too. I smiled. "Boy...I sure am tired..." I said yawning real loud.

"Anyway, thanks for coming to my new years party, I appreciate it." Shinjji said smiling at me sweetly. "Ah, its no problem, I had fun. And so did Ya-Ya, haha." I said as Shinjji took my hands in his all of a sudden...

"Chi-Chi, you'll like me no matter what right?" Asked Shinjji still holding my hands. "W-what is this about, Shinjji?" I asked him slightly blushing while trying to look away. "I just want to know." Shinjji said as he let go of my hands. "I-I don't believe there should be any reason to not like you...Um..."

My sentence was cut short as I noticed Shinjji was coming closer to my face. "Chi-Chi I-" Shinjji's sentence was cut short...because a couple had just walked into Shinjii's house.

~Confrontation~ [o.o]

"...Shinjji, who are they?" I asked trying to get a closer look at them. "I don't know...I'll go find out though, they may have forgot something is all." Shinjji said coming up to the couple. DoReMiFaSo♫ I hummed to myself. Shinjji sure has a big house...I thought as Shinjji came up to me.

"So? Who were they and what did they want?" I asked. "It seems like I was right, the girl forgot her coat, that's all." Shinjji said as he waved to the couple that were leaving. I just stared at Shinjji waving happily to...strangers, he was nice. "Oh! Chi-Chi would you like to meet someone for me?" Shinjji asked as a boy started walking our way.

"Sure... I guess? Who is he?" I asked about to turn around to see who was coming our way. There was a moment of silence while I heard Shinjji say, "Rio, a dear friend."
to.be. CONTINUED :D



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Kawaii desu<3 x]
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i ilkeyy the title name
FANTASIST STORY!
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i likey the title name
FANTASIST STORY!


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Posted 12/26/08 , edited 12/26/08
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OMG.
Rio is back O.o Wait, how old was he when he was DATING a ten year old girl...? O.O Only, you said a MAN walked up to them O.o
Posted 12/27/08
Rio age: 12.. o-o
Chi-chi age: 10 o.o
YES a MAN....as in RIO :O
did i answer all yur questions? xD
HOPE SOOO
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ay_bay_bay wrote:

Rio age: 12.. o-o
Chi-chi age: 10 o.o
YES a MAN....as in RIO :O
did i answer all yur questions? xD
HOPE SOOO :D


Sooo, Rio would be 17 now??
Sorry, it's just that when I think of "MAN" I think of... above 20 O.o So he would have had to be like 15, and dating a 10 year old, which would have been...
Creepy...
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Posted 12/28/08
LMAO o_o
oh my...................god = =
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Posted 12/28/08
.^^.
That's meh. Always over thinking things xD
Posted 12/29/08
perspective aren't yu =-=
on tha whole "MAN" thing :O
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ay_bay_bay wrote:

perspective aren't yu =-=
on tha whole "MAN" thing :O


xD
I ish confuzled..... =_=
Posted 12/31/08
why are yu "CONFUZLED?"
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UUUPPPDDDAAATTTEEE!!! i luv this story!!!
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Owo
You always seem to want teh stories that are CENTURIESOLD but i wanna update thisz >w<
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onlie cuz its funny andi actually reread it xD
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yea yea i kno thats cuz i never get to go on cuz l have to babysit useless kids
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