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Posted 10/30/08 , edited 10/30/08
woohh!! my secOnd one - shot .. hihi .. totally inspired by esereth - chan (bowling1991) wee! i hope ya'll like it and btw .. the song is translated by jill - chan (jill17) .. thanks to her!! .. even though my english is just basic/simple .. hope ya'll like it and please comment .. it's ok if you don't like it though..:D

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(word) - lyrics
blue - tagalog song
red - english translation
green - narration
violet - flashbacks


Kapag ako ay nagmahal
when i'm inlove
Isa lamang at wala nang iba pa
one and nothing more
Iaalay buong buhay
i'll give all my life
Lumigaya ka lang, lahat ay gagawin
just to make you happy i'll do anything


I woke up in the morning feeling empty .. everyday's just the same, rising from the bed, thinking about only one person. and that person is her. She is the only person that I love.. My first and maybe my last loved one. I hate myself! i hate myself for being loyal... for loving her .. only her and no one else. I don't know why it's hard for me to move on.. I keep on asking myself the "WHY" question.. Why did God allowed me to meet her that she will not do any goodness to me.. she would just stab my heart or rather break my heart into pieces.. even until now, 2 years have passed.. I could exactly still remember how we met ..


[at tokyo high] :: first day of school ::

"ah.. sumimasen.. are you from class 2A?" she asked me. "ah hai.. nande?" i asked without looking her yet. "ahm.. i was wondering if we could go there together .. because I still don't have friends here.. actually, I’m new here.."she explained to me. I looked at her, i was amazed by her beauty that the light of the sun flashed on her blooming face. I cannot speak.. i ran out of words because of the amazement of her beauty. My mouth suddenly hanged that I didn’t notice. She laughed and introduced herself. “hi there .. I’m Natsumi Ayumi, I’m a junior student too.. so, do you mind?” she said with a perfect smile painted on her face. I shooked my head and said, “ah .. hai .. heheh … gomen for my expression ne, I was just shocked.. Oh, I’m Daiki Ariyoka… yoroshiku desu! .. so, let’s go?” “hai! ..” she answered.


Tumingin ka man sa iba
even though you look for another person
Magwawalang-kibo na lang itong puso ko
my heart will just ignore it
Walang sumbat na maririnig
there will be no complains that you'll hear
Patak ng luha ko ang iniwang saksi
and the evidence is my only tears!


Damn it! .. my tears fell again, good thing I’m the only person left here in the house.. ‘cause my parents are in America.. for some sort of work. But it’s bad because I have no one to talk to and to tell my problems.. well .. I could even still remember all the memories that we’d have for the past months.. the time when she left me ..

“Yosh! Time for school again .. !” I said to myself when I woke up in that morning. When I arrived in school… I saw her with someone else.. I couldn’t move, my mouth hanged again.. but I shooked my head and tried to ignore the hugging scene. I just simply walked to her place and they slowly parted. When she saw me, she introduced him to me.
“oh! Ariyoka – kun!” she said. “I told you to call me daiki already, ‘cuz were already friends remember?” I said to myself. “oh .. gomen.. daiki – chan .. meet Chinen Yuri ..” she said happily with a smile. “oh .. hajimemashite .. Ariyoka Daiki desu..” I said with a little smile.. a little happy because she didn’t introduced him to me as his boyfriend.. but I was wrong.. she continued. “my boyfriend ..” she meaned with a wide smile. “oh ..” I murmured and faked a smile then walked straighly to the room.


Bakit nga ba mahal kita
why do i love you?
Kahit 'di pinapansin ang damdamin ko
even though you dont recognize my feelings
'Di mo man ako mahal, ito pa rin ako
you dont love me, but i'm still here
Nagmamahal nang tapat sa 'yo
loving you truly


I don’t know why I love her so much! She don’t even recognize any of my feelings.. eventhough my expressions were so much obvious. I know she don’t love me even from the start, but I still keep on loving her unconditionally.

Bakit nga ba mahal kita
why do i love you?
Kahit na may mahal ka mang iba
even though you love someone
Ba't baliw na baliw ako sa 'yo
why am i so crazy about u?
Hanggang kailan ako magtitiis
until when do i have to suffer?
O, bakit nga ba mahal kita
oh!why do i love you?


Dingdong .. Dingdong .. oh! I heard a doorbell.. I went to the door, not thinking who it is, I just opened.. and suddenly my eyes grew wider. “Oh! It’s you Ayumi” I said with an expressionless face. “hai!” she replied with a gorgeous smile. Oh.. her beauty, I saw the most beautiful woman that I’ve ever seen again. “ah, please come in..” I said respectively. “ahh .. okay!” she said happily and I don’t know why. “so.. what’s up Ayumi?” I asked. “eh?! You don’t know?” she asked very shocked. “no.. what is it?” I asked. So.. she didn’t even cared about me,.. she never even noticed that I don’t call her anymore. Because before .. I call her almost everyday. “I’m engaged! .. haha .. I’m so happy!” she explained. “Oh..” I said with a fake smile, “aren’t you happy for me?” she asked with a sad expression. “ofcourse I am.. heehee .. sorry.. I’m just not in the mood this day ne.. or maybe I’m just not feeling well..” I explained. “oh.. gomen ne..” “it’s ok.. uhmm .. I think I’ll just have to buy some medicines out there..” I said. “oh.. let me buy those .. just relax there..” she offered. “uh .. no, it’s ok, I’m fine .. just wait here ok?” I neglected. “oh .. ok.. I’ll wait here.” So I went outside .. going through with the lie that I said to her, ‘cause the fact is I’m feeling well today.. I just can’t recover on what she just said. I walked through the road.. I felt dizzy and didn’t notice that there is a car speeding up to me and I felt the hurt,.. I felt my head and my backbones broke when I landed on the floor. I heard an angelic voice shouting. “Daiki – kun! .. wake up! .. help! Somebody help me! .. please call an ambulance!” oh .. it was Ayumi .. I fought my pain and said my last sentence to her. “Ayumi – chan .. I loved you ever since I saw you.. you just didn’t noticed .. I wanted to tell you this, but I realized that you only treat me as friend, and you love Chinen more than your friendship love against me.. so I stop on calling you and tried to be happy and move on for you.. but I can’t .. I knew it .. I knew it that you my FIRST LOVE & MY LAST LOVE .. my everlasting love will never fade even if I’m already gone.. I love you Ayumi..” and I heard her voice for the last time .. calling my name .. “Daiki – kun … Honto ni, .. Gomen Nasai ..”

Ano man ang sabihin nila
no matter wat they say
Pagtingin ko sa 'yo'y 'di kailan man magmamaliw
my feelings for you will never change
Buong buhay paglilingkuran kita
i'll serve you for all my life
'Di naghahangad ng ano mang kapali
and i'm not expecting in return


I forgive her .. always .. and even if I’m up here .. I still love her.. and I could still remember my last words … because that is a promise that I kept for her…


I LOVE YOU NATSUMI AYUMI .. and no one else .. forever .. & that’s my promise to you .. your loving bestfriend, Ariyoka Daiki.

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Posted 10/30/08
UWAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
why must daiki has to die ??
oh im so sad
daiki !!!
i've always read fanfic about u in this group,
and u were always being a good friend .
and i love u !!! (ohmy ! deen-chan gomen XD)
ouh this is sooo sad !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
sobsobs ..
dai-chan . uwaaaaaa ..
if ayumi doesnt love u , so choose me choose me !!!! (oh deen-chan gonna kill me soon ! ahahaha joke XD)
thumbs up emkyuu-chan !!!!!!
another super great one-shot !!
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i was ...
the first one who cmmnted ??
great !! this is my first tyme !! XD
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nawa94 wrote:

UWAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
why must daiki has to die ??
oh im so sad
daiki !!!
i've always read fanfic about u in this group,
and u were always being a good friend .
and i love u !!! (ohmy ! deen-chan gomen XD)
ouh this is sooo sad !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
sobsobs ..
dai-chan . uwaaaaaa ..
if ayumi doesnt love u , so choose me choose me !!!! (oh deen-chan gonna kill me soon ! ahahaha joke XD)
thumbs up emkyuu-chan !!!!!!
another super great one-shot !!


hahaha ... arigatou nawa - chan!!! .. :)

gomen for making you cry .. eheheh ..

i really didn't plan to kill daiki here but .. there's no other choice ..

gomen ne ... honto ni,.. gomen nasai!

so,.. deen - chan loves daiki?? .. ahahah!
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nawa94 wrote:

i was ...
the first one who cmmnted ??
great !! this is my first tyme !! XD



ahaha .. yes you are .. haha .. CONGRATULATIONS!!! .. :p
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uwaaaaa!!! huhuhuhu!!!! sooo sad!!
daiki!!!!! why did you kill him!! haha joke!!
wahahahah!!
yeah i love him wahahahaahha!!!!!
ne what song is that??
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oh!!
interesting!!
a love triangle between chii and daiki!! xDD
this is sad!!
so sad that I love it!! ^-^
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deen22 wrote:

uwaaaaa!!! huhuhuhu!!!! sooo sad!!
daiki!!!!! why did you kill him!! haha joke!!
wahahahah!!
yeah i love him wahahahaahha!!!!!
ne what song is that??



eheheheh! .. gomen for killing daiki ne .. heheh ..! :DD

waah .. i know you love daiki .. gomen nasai! .. :((

oh .. this song is "Bakita nga ba mahal Kita" by Roselle Nava
it's translated by jill - chan .. (jill17)

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waaaaaa that's so sad...but it's tooo good~
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hsj9392 wrote:

oh!!
interesting!!
a love triangle between chii and daiki!! xDD
this is sad!!
so sad that I love it!! ^-^


waah .. you love it?? .. arigatou gozaimasu!!! ..
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awww, so sad ;~;
but i luv it <3
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awwww... this is sad. poor dai-chan.
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nawa94 wrote:

UWAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
why must daiki has to die ??
oh im so sad
daiki !!!
i've always read fanfic about u in this group,
and u were always being a good friend .
and i love u !!! (ohmy ! deen-chan gomen XD)
ouh this is sooo sad !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
sobsobs ..
dai-chan . uwaaaaaa ..
if ayumi doesnt love u , so choose me choose me !!!! (oh deen-chan gonna kill me soon ! ahahaha joke XD)
thumbs up emkyuu-chan !!!!!!
another super great one-shot !!


hahaha ... arigatou nawa - chan!!! .. :)

gomen for making you cry .. eheheh ..

i really didn't plan to kill daiki here but .. there's no other choice ..

gomen ne ... honto ni,.. gomen nasai!

so,.. deen - chan loves daiki?? .. ahahah!


haha thats okay . its worth to cry actually .. yeppiieeee
hahahaha yeah she likes him XD a lot !! hahaha XD
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Posted 10/31/08

Mai-Lee wrote:

waaaaaa that's so sad...but it's tooo good~


arigatou for reading !! .. (tears of joy)
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mochicocoa wrote:

awww, so sad ;~;
but i luv it <3


arigatou for reading & appreciating it .. :))
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