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Rules- you have to add to the story. can be anything u want. get creative. As u can see this isn't that creative- thats why i have u guys to start it up and finish it.

Please don't bring actual real anime characters into this- u can add characters but made up ones. ok. Let the story begin.



Every town has a secret waiting to be reveled. But what are the Hanazono's secrets.

Twins Riku and Ren have always lived on the edge of life. never folowing the rules, always walking on the wild side.But, the closer you look at them, you can almost say there's something ODD about them.
One day when Riku came home after school, she found goverment agents searching her brother's room because............
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Every town has a secret waiting to be reveled. But what are the Hanazono's secrets.

Twins Riku and Ren have always lived on the edge of life. never folowing the rules, always walking on the wild side.But, the closer you look at them, you can almost say there's something ODD about them.
One day when Riku came home after school, she found goverment agents searching her brother's room because ren was murdered be someone..........................
Posted 10/30/08 , edited 10/30/08
Twins Riku and Ren were all alone in the world,their parents had been shipwrecked and they had been stranded in a foreign land,they struggled to live through the hardships but eventually settled and lived happily,but then,one day,as Ren came home she saw government agents looking around her home,a neighbor quickly grabbed her and told her everything,the new emporer of the country had decided to completly isolate the nation from the outside world,and to do that all foreigners were to be exectued.She saw them go into her brothers room,and she saw riku jump out the window,they ran and dint look back.Later they find that they are wanted and bounty hunters are after them,an assasin girl meets up with them at first to kill them,but when she finds about the corruption of the new emporer she decides to work with them instead.
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Twins Riku and Ren were all alone in this world. Their parents had died when they were 10, and since then they had always been together, just the two of them, living of the money left to them.
One day when Riku came home after school she found Ren lying on the floor face down. He was not moving, and Riku ran over to him, screaming:REN, REN! She turned him around, but as she saw his face, she screamed and let his head bang against the floor. His face... his face was... gone. She felt as though she was looking at something out of this world. Her legs were shaking as she slowly got to her feet. What was going on? Was Ren Alive? Her beloved brother, she didn't even dare touch him. She had to get help. As she turned her back to the boy, the image of what she had seen beneath his blond curls that always hung over his left eye was seared into her mind: flesh, blood and bone, and in the middle of the gruesomeness, a hand white like ivory, nails black as the night.
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Twins Riku and Ren were all alone in this world. Their parents had died when they were 10, and since then they had always been together, just the two of them, living of the money left to them.
One day when Riku came home after school she found Ren lying on the floor face down. He was not moving, and Riku ran over to him, screaming:REN, REN! She turned him around, but as she saw his face, she screamed and let his head bang against the floor. His face... his face was... gone. She felt as though she was looking at something out of this world. Her legs were shaking as she slowly got to her feet. What was going on? Was Ren Alive? Her beloved brother, she didn't even dare touch him. She had to get help. As she turned her back to the boy, the image of what she had seen beneath his blond curls that always hung over his left eye was seared into her mind: flesh, blood and bone, and in the middle of the gruesomeness, a hand white like ivory, nails black as the night.


Riku was running as fast as she could. Her vision was blurred by tears and the cold autumn breeze brushed against her bare cheeks. She didn't know where she was headed. She didn't know anybody. Ren had always been afraid of leaving the house, so they had spent most of their time reading or playing inside. Ren... She shivered at the though of him... was he dead? He probably was. No, she couldn't think like that. Turning right towards the town center, she bumped into a boy. Help me! My brother is hurt, help me please! she cried, bowing her head hoping the boy would take pity in her. Sure, i'll help, said a voice so hollow that Riku had to look up. She did not have time to scream before the ivory hand grabbed her, reachin out from the face of her own brother................

Ok, this was a really bad story, sorry. It probably wouldn't make much of an anime either. Maybe if Ren and Riku both get posessed by the evil Ikki the White who uses other people as arms and start going around eating people's faces, but then the bond between them starts to make them relize who they really are and make them fight Ikki throug a mindgame... OR NOT! A bit tired right now, so this is getting really stupid. Hope you didn't get scared or anything... If you did I apologize.

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Posted 10/31/08
Well seeing as people are actually posting a story...

~moved thread to Forum Games and edited topic headline

Stay on topic please!
Posted 2/7/09
Continue:

But their was an extra villan that took ":her" away and the villain was a vampire
So...he bit her.....and then she dies...the end *worst story ever...xDD*
Posted 10/30/08
When -zehDollMaster- came he/she saw a thread asking to write a story but, of course,being -zehDollMaster- he/she wouldn't give a shit.He/She will continue to wander around Crunchy Forums, to make people angry, to make other people realize that they just did the stupidest thing in their lives.He/She will continue to give justice to those fucktard weaklings who cannot fight for themselves.He/She, indeed,is zeh justice.

Zeh End.
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Posted 10/30/08
she was a alien and they took her away and ren save riku
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