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Tasting The Sweet Sakura
Posted 11/1/08
iWhoop Whoop!
Okay you guys, powerpuffgirlsz told me to write my own fanfiction, so I am trying it out..
I don't think it'll do all that good but please just read the first one and enjoy.

If you notice, this will now be in Natsume's point of veiw, and I will add some changes.. I had to make this chapter simple and breif so yeah.. Thats why its all cramed together. I'll explain everything clearly and all that jazz when the other chapters come, anyway thank you! I hope you like it! Please send feedback, because if I don't get it then I don't know what to change and whatnot, so just tell me please.
Thanks=]
Posted 11/2/08
RHILEY!!!!!!! that was amazing!!!!!!! cool!!! better then myn!!!! sugooiii!! kawaii!! can't wait for the next chapter!!! owh yeah and btw...have you read Chapter 14 from my story??..its an bit rewriting..sort of..but...plz read it.
Your chapter 1 is great... !!! heheh ^^ can't wait for Chapter 2!!!
Posted 11/2/08 , edited 11/2/08
that was so so good can wait for the next chappie to com so please continu lol
is this going to be a mikan and natsume story lol
Posted 11/7/08 , edited 11/7/08
Sorry it took so long! hope you like it..
oh yeah and anything in italic is what he thinks..



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Posted 11/8/08
when is the next chapter comming. i love the story so much are you sure it your first story rhiley?

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Posted 11/8/08
this was cool rhiley!! can't wait for chapter 3!!! ^^
Posted 11/9/08
niceee cant waitt forrr the nextttt chapter to come outtttt
Posted 11/11/08
heheh yup..this was cool!!
Posted 11/13/08
heyy.. Yeah. I am going to work on it today, and I hope it'll be out by today!
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Posted 11/13/08
yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay
Posted 11/14/08

rhiley wrote:

heyy.. Yeah. I am going to work on it today, and I hope it'll be out by today!


haha i'm going to start Chapter 17 today too..lol... but good luck with it little sis!!
Posted 11/20/08

He reached the door to outside, and spotted Mikan with a middle school boy beside her. Then, he watched black reach out to touch Mikan's skin from behind the tree as she passed. His fingertip grazed her skin before flames covered the black hand.
"I should have known you would be here, Natsume. I only came to ask her a simple question." The black figure crept out from behind the tree. He was wearing a mask, with a black cloack. The middle school boy realized, took his stance and threw the girl behind him.


I don't exactly understand this part but i did enjoy it. Hopefully chapter 3 will be out soon!!!
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Posted 12/21/08
Wahhh , how nice , thanks for the post , I'm waiting for chapter 3 !!
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Posted 12/21/08
Nice story update soon
Posted 12/21/08 , edited 12/21/08
Haha, hey you guysss.. thanks.. but when i was writing this i noticed it was like a total disater to all writings =P
Sooo.. I am going to write a wayy better one and I am starting the 1st chapter this week, and I'll post it up on Fanfiction.net and on THIS forum cause I don't want to start ANOTHER forum saying FANFICFANFICFANFIC! So yeah, if I get a good response, I will continue with it, but thanks though!
Much Love,
~Rhiley
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