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Part 6
Opening Song: Fiesta by NEWS http://jp.youtube.com/watch?v=iHT2IafI-KY

Miaka: Phew! I thought she would catch me…again. *breathing deeply*

Ramu: *sad face* Why does she always run? All I wanted to do was talk…*sigh*
Kei: *pats Ramu’s back* Don’t worry…
Sayaka: Yea! No need to force her to join the club.
Ramu: But…
Ryosuke: Heh.
Ramu: What?! You got a problem? *snaps at Ryosuke*
Ryosuke: Daaaang girl! Your so moody *smirks*
Ramu: Grrr….*jumps at Ryosuke*
Ryosuke: *falls back* AH!
Sayaka & Kei: *pulls Ramu off of Ryosuke*
Kei: Cool your head.
Ramu: …demo…I just hate him! *points at Ryosuke*
Sayaka: But no need to start a fight!
Ryosuke: *sitting on the floor looking up at Ramu*
Ramu: Hmph!
Ryosuke: Well…
Kei: *puts a hand on Ryosuke’s shoulder* You should let her cool off…
Ramu: I’m going to go to the school rooftop! I need to think.

Ramu ran out of the auditorium. While she was running, she bumped into Miaka.

Miaka: Ah! Watch it!
Ramu: Yoshioka-san!
Miaka: *stood up and walks away*
Ramu: Chotto! Matte! (Wait a minute!)
Miaka: *stops and looks down at Ramu* What?
Ramu: Can…can you give me some of your time?
Miaka: *sighs* Fine…

Miaka follows Ramu to the rooftop.

Ramu: Sorry for forcing you to join my club…it was really selfish of me.
Miaka: …
Ramu: Demo…the only reason I wanted you to join, was because of my plan. The reason I made this club was for people with opposite personalities to come together, and accept their differences.
Miaka: Wouldn’t that be making the whole school join, then?
Ramu: *shakes head* I feel, that the people I asked to join right now, really needs to join this club. I can hear their hearts screaming for help. Except for Yamada…*looks pissed off* He should really go. He’s so--
Miaka: *sigh* Fine, you win.
Ramu: Huh?
Miaka: In some way, what you just said made me give up. I’ll join.
Ramu: What?! Really?
Miaka: Yea…*smiles a little*
Ramu: Yay! *grabs Miaka’s hand*
Miaka: *pulls her hand out of Ramu’s grip* I don’t like these…gushy stuff. It’s really disgusting.
Ramu: *smiles*

Ramu returned to the auditorium, with Miaka behind her.

Ramu: Yay! We have a new member!
Kei: Eh?
Sayaka: Make that two.
Ramu: Huh?
Kei: *whispers* Arioka-kun just came.
Ramu: Hontou?!!!
Kei: Yup.
Ramu: *walks up to Daiki and holds out her hand* Welcome to the club!
Daiki: *has arms crossed then glares at Ramu* Thanks.
Ramu: *sweat mark* Great…we have another Yamada, but worst.
Sayaka: Oh yea! Yamada-san went to the health office. It looks like you hurt him.
Ramu: Huh? Me?
Kei: Yea...he twisted his wrist.
Ramu: Wow, he’s really sensitive ne?
All: *stares at Ramu*
Ramu: What?
Yuto: You should say sorry.
Ramu: Me? What for?
Hikaru: Because you hurt him.
Ramu: pffft! He asked for it.
All: *stares at Ramu again*
Ramu: Fine, fine! I’ll go say sorry…sheesh!

Ramu walked out of the auditorium and went to the health office. She heard Ryosuke mumbling “ouch”. She knocked on the door and went in.

Ramu: Shitsurei shimasu~ (Sorry to interrupt.)
Ryosuke: *looks at the person that came in, but when he saw that it was Ramu, he looked away*
Ramu: Does it hurt?
Ryosuke: No…*not facing Ramu*
Ramu: Gawsh! Boys are always like this! They act so tough…
Ryosuke: Are you here to lecture me?
Ramu: …Sorry
Ryosuke: For?
Ramu: For jumping on you…and being rude.
Ryosuke: Apology NOT accepted. *laughs a little*
Ramu: Why you!
Ryosuke: Nuh-uh. *points at his wrist*
Ramu: *smiles at him annoyed*
Ryosuke: Well, lets go back to the auditorium.
Ramu: Yea.

Ramu’s POV
Right now, I feel different. Not my usual self. It’s weird, because I’m not on a roller coaster ride, but my stomach feels like I’m on it and just went down a big fall. What’s this feeling? At first our opinions weren’t the same, but now it feels like I understand him. He belongs in this club. No, everyone belongs in the club. His smile and snobby remarks make my heart skip a beat. His presence make me smile and fill an empty spot in my heart. Our differences make us one. I didn’t know it then, but that was when I fell…in love

Ramu: Hey you guys! I brought this booger back.
Ryosuke: What did you just call me?
Kei: Hey! Is your wrist okay?
Ryosuke: Yea…no thanks to Miss Hulk.
Ramu: What?!
Haruka: *giggles*
Sayaka: Well, girls don’t usually tackle guys…
Ramu: Really?!
Miaka: Well, I’ve never heard of it. Have you? *asking the guys*
Yabu, Yuto, Hikaru& Kei: Nope.
Ramu: *pouts* Whatever.

They all laughed and got ready to go home.

Ramu’s next mission was to get Arisa to join the club. She was determined to ask that mean girl to come so she could make her true feelings come out. But she didn’t know how hard it would be to make her join. In the meantime, she will try to become friends with the members she have now. She was so excited.

Closing Theme: One Love by ARASHI
-----------------End of Part 6-----------------
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ahah i love it...it's so funnie...especially the auditions!! they were hilarious....ahaha keep up the good job guys!! more please!!
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ahah i love it...it's so funnie...especially the auditions!! they were hilarious....ahaha keep up the good job guys!! more please!!


:] thanks for commenting!
and yea deen-chan's working on the next part
i just can't wait! lol
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lol, luv this!!
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more more more... hahaha...^^ thanks nee..^^
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wow!!
so fast!!
i love it!!
the story's so cute!!
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-------------Part 7-------------

Opening Theme: Fiesta By NewS

Ramu: Yosh… so only Hattori san is left~
Kei: eeehhh!!!! You… you’re going to make her join to?!!!!
Ramu: why?
Kei: k… kowaii!!!
Miaka: oi Ari-o-ka~ why did you went here?
Daiki: why? Is it even your business?
Miaka: WHAT!!!
Daiki: sorry, but I don’t have any interest in girls~ specially you… ohh yeah… come to think of it your not even a girl~ hahahaha!!
Miaka: arrrg!!!! He’s getting into my nerves!!!!
Sayaka: calm down you two~ doing things like that… that’s how my grandparent loved each other~
ALL: EHH?
Sayaka: so if you don’t wanna be with each other~ hahaha stop fighting!!
Daiki: oi! [walks over to sayaka] what do you meant by that! [stares]
Miaka: [pushes daiki] can’t you see you’re dealing with a girl? What are you? A homo?!
Daiki: what! Do you want a fight?
Miaka: bring it on HOMO~
Daiki: Nani!!! [almost punch miaka but since miaka didn’t dodge it he didn’t continued it] Hmf-
Miaka: what… scared? Haha~
Daiki: good thing im not in the bad mood today…
Ramu: ok enough enough… lest just start with the audition for both of you…
Kei: there’s only one script left!
Ramu: which means both of you will act this.
Daiki reads the script…
Daiki: a boy… confesses his feelings, with a girl. Then the girl will dump him.
Miaka: hahaha! Perfect! Yosh!~ Ikkou!
Ramu: ok starto!

Daiki: oi I like you. [bad manner way]
All: [fell down]
Ramu: what the heck was that!
Daiki: confessing?
Ramu: take two!!! Action!

Daiki: I like you… go out with me…
Miaka: your not worth-it!
Daiki: what!
Miaka: are you deaf? I said YOU-ARE-NOT-WORTH-IT!
Daiki: what did you just said! [shouts angrily way] are you perfect! You damn girl!
Miaka: nani! You’re confessing yet your like that!
Daiki: who would confess to a tomboy like you!
Miaka: Nani!!!!!!
Sayaka: wahahahahaha!!! Nice nice!!! More more!!!
ALL: O_O
Ramu: ok that was good cut cut!! You pass! :sweatingbullets:

Miaka: GRR!! [catches daiki] you wont get away with this you HOMO!
Daiki: Ore wa Homo janai! [LOL nakatsu type]
Miaka: why are you aren’t interested in girls! Because you’re a HOMO!!!
Daiki: [stops running]…..
Ryosuke: oops… got the weak park…
Miaka: n… nani…
Daiki: [low voice] don’t… ever… talk to me again… [Went back to the chairs]
Miaka was frozen to what daiki said…
Miaka: what the heck was that…

Miaka’s POV
What’s wrong with him! Getting mad like that! Arg! I can’t read him at all! I hate him! Saying those things to me… what’s the matter with him? Maybe he’s really a homo… well I was a bit shocked when I saw his face from what he said to me…

Daiki’s POV
Is coming here the wrong way? I shouldn’t have come here! I don’t want to see her again! But of course I cant do that. Were in the same club. I wont ever talk to her again. That tomboy! Hmf…

Ramu: ok… so can anyone of you bring Hattori-san here tomorrow?
Sayaka: well were in the same class so, I’ll try to convince her.
Ramu: ja I’ll take care of Sawa-san.
Sayaka: un~
Ramu: Minna, first of all, I would like to thank you for all cooperating and coming here! You really saved me from those teachers! And for helping me forming my own theater club. Arigatou! *bows*
All: [applauses]
Ramu: ja minna, see you again tomorrow.
Sayaka: bye Ra-mu chan~!
Ramu: you called me by my first name!!! Kya!!
Sayaka: hehehe~ were friends right?
Ramu: un~ thanks!
Haruka: sayonara, Kinoshita san.
Ramu: sayonara~
Ryosuke: [sees ramu] oh.
Ramu: [nods]
Kei: ja ne ramu-chan~
Ramu: bye Inoo-kun~ thanks for helping!

They all left the school and went straight back at their home…

@ miaka’s home.

M.Mom: dinner!
Miaka: hai!
M.Mom: ne! why do you always wear your cap?
Miaka: urg~ there’s a reason for that~
M.Mom: and what’s the reason?
Miaka: why should I tell you!
M.Dad: you look like a tomboy!
Miaka: am not!
M.Dad: look how you walk! The way you speak and the way you act!
M.Mom: otousan yamete…
Miaka: thanks for the food… [went to her room]

@ her room

Miaka: arg! Why do they even have to care for me! They don’t even care so why would they talk to me like that! *sigh* [looks at her cap] if they only knew why I would wear you all the time and act like this… [leans back but bump her head on the wall] Ouch!!! I shouldn’t have remove this cap! Grr! And that boy! What’s his name again? Ah arioka daiki! What’s the matter with him! Acting so tough! He\ll be down too! Someday~

@ ramu’s home.

R.Mom: Ramu~ dinner!
Ramu: hai! Itadakimasu!
R.Dad: was it delicious?
Ramu: yeah it is!
R.Mom: sleep early ok?
Ramu: hai!

@ her room

Ramu: yatta~ I made my club! My own theater club! And my members too! *sigh* why am I so confused about him? I think I’ll just throw this feelings away! Because… I don’t wanna get hurt by him~ especially a guy with the attitude of him! Good luck my self!

@ Sayaka’s home.

S.Mom: sayaka~ so was your outfit look good on you?
Sayaka: why wont it be?
S.Mom: look! I bought another! Black and red striped!
Sayaka: AHH!! Really!! Kakkoi!! Thanks! I’ll wear this tomorrow!
S.Dad: haiizz… what’s wrong with these two~
Sayaka: ohh yeah! I joined the theather club! And I passed!
S.Mom: honto? Wow! So tell me whenever your going to play ok?
Sayaka: okay~

@ Sayaka’s room

Sayaka: that was great! I had friends again! Hahaha and they were so funny! Specially that miaka and daiki~ fighting like that~! And those geeks! Ahahah old fashions!!! Ahh~ it was a great day for me~

@ Arisa’s home

A.Mom: was it great?
Arisa: not actually…
A.Dad: study hard ok? You will be the next heir of our company~
Arisa: hai otousan.

@ Arisa’s room

Arisa: arg! I sont wanna be the heir! They only control me! Hmf. And that Ramu, what the heck was she? Saying things like that. It was stupid! Grrrr!!!

@ Haruka’s home.

H.Mom: so, how did it go?
Haruka: this day was great mom!
H.Dad: really? Tell me if there’s a boy approaching you ok?
Haruka: eh! Otousan!
All” hehehehe!

@ Haruka’s room

Haruka: I can’t believe I actually said those words in front of him! And he also did! He even tapped my head! Kyaa~~!! Memorable day of my life!!! If it is only true!

@ Ayumu’s home

Ayumu: aahh~ bored…
A.Sis: eh why?
Ayumu: nothing happened!! Grr!!
A.Sis: there’s still a tomorrow~ =)
Ayumu: yeah right~ gotta sleep now…

Next morning…

@ School

Miaka: [stretches] ahh~
While walking, miaka saw daiki walking towards her
Miaka: [lowers her head and ignored daiki] ….
Daiki: ohayo…
Miaka: [stopped from walking] Oh... ohayo…
Daiki: you seemed depressed
Miaka: why do you even care?
Daiki: hmf
Miaka: aren’t you the one who told me don’t talk to me?
Daiki: I did? I don’t remember~ [whistles]
Miaka: hmf! I’m going now!
Daiki: ittarashai~ be careful not to slip down…
Miaka: eh? [slipped down to the floor] Kyaaa!!! [her cap was removed]
Daiki: [caught miaka] I told you~ hazukashi ne?
Miaka: ah! My cap! Where is it!
Daiki: here~ clumsy~
Miaka: Clumsy?
Daiki: blind…
Miaka: BLIND?!!
Daiki: can’t you see the sign? Wet floor?
Miaka: ah! Grr!!! Hmf! [walks to her classroom]
Daiki: [smirks]

@ Break time

Ramu: Hattori-san!
Arisa: ha? What?
Ramu: I was wondering if you could join our club…
Arisa: EH?

Closing Theme: One Love by ARASHI

----------End of part 7-----------
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uwaaaaaaaaa.
loveit!
longerlonger and moreeeee.lol^^
gomen for my hyperness
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uwaaaaaaaaa.
loveit!
longerlonger and moreeeee.lol^^
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hahaha charu chan!!~
=P hihihihihi!
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yamachan-kakkoi wrote:

uwaaaaaaaaa.
loveit!
longerlonger and moreeeee.lol^^
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hahaha charu chan!!~
=P hihihihihi!


why r u laughingggg???
hahaha
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ahah it's so funny!! especially this part!!



Daiki: oi I like you. [bad manner way]
All: [fell down]
Ramu: what the heck was that!
Daiki: confessing?
Ramu: take two!!! Action!


it's so funnie..i want more..lol..it's too good!! keep it up ne..yuuki-chan and deen-chan!!
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lol that was hilarious XD!!!!!
its so good >w<
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Ramu-chan asked me to join her club??
Hmp..
not so fast!!
j/k!!
I;ll join in the end!!
I'm excited!!
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ahah it's so funny!! especially this part!!



Daiki: oi I like you. [bad manner way]
All: [fell down]
Ramu: what the heck was that!
Daiki: confessing?
Ramu: take two!!! Action!


it's so funnie..i want more..lol..it's too good!! keep it up ne..yuuki-chan and deen-chan!!


hahaha thanks mai-chan!!! EI! have you forgotten your picture?
dont forget it ok?


mochicocoa wrote:

lol that was hilarious XD!!!!!
its so good >w<


honto??? thanks!!


hsj9392 wrote:

Ramu-chan asked me to join her club??
Hmp..
not so fast!!
j/k!!
I;ll join in the end!!
I'm excited!!


hahahah!!! hintay hintay llng....

And also you! Your picture!!! dont forget it ok?!!!
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Mai-Lee wrote:

ahah it's so funny!! especially this part!!



Daiki: oi I like you. [bad manner way]
All: [fell down]
Ramu: what the heck was that!
Daiki: confessing?
Ramu: take two!!! Action!


it's so funnie..i want more..lol..it's too good!! keep it up ne..yuuki-chan and deen-chan!!


hahaha thanks mai-chan!!! EI! have you forgotten your picture?
dont forget it ok?


mochicocoa wrote:

lol that was hilarious XD!!!!!
its so good >w<


honto??? thanks!!


hsj9392 wrote:

hahaha!!
hai!!
i'll post kpag npost n ni mai ung kanya..

Ramu-chan asked me to join her club??
Hmp..
not so fast!!
j/k!!
I;ll join in the end!!
I'm excited!!


hahahah!!! hintay hintay llng....

And also you! Your picture!!! dont forget it ok?!!!



haha!!
pagnagpost n c mai..
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