Do you want me to write these drama ideas?
Posted 11/2/08 , edited 11/2/08
I have two story ideas and tell me if you like them and if you want me to write them
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This story is about a young woman named Eun Mi. Half of Eun Mi’s face is burnt and her right eye is blind. When she was younger her father tried to murder her mother, but Eun Mi got in the way and acid was poured onto her face. Her father was sent to a death penalty. Even though her appearance us unappealing and often lands her being taunted, she has a beautiful singing voice and a lively personality. Eun Mi decided for her last year of high school she would stop being homeschooled and attend a normal high school. There she meets a popular guy named Ryu Hun who at first treats her like everybody else, but falls in love with her perspective on life. She also makes enemies with Ryu Hun’s sister and her friends. She befriends a misfit photographer and a painter.

This story is about a high school senior named Hea Jung. Hea Jung was adopted by her uncle after her parents were found dead. Her uncle is also the leader of a notorious gang in Korea. Hea Jung, who was traumatized by her past grew up cold and emotionless. She is a trained fighter, ballet dancer, pianist, and excels in her academics. Hea Jung hates being touched and never smiles. But after an assassination attempt, Hea Jung's uncle send her to live in a small town with her two body gaurds. There she experiences true love, friendship, and learns how to smile again.

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Posted 11/2/08
Eventho it sounds like a typical Korean Drama plot....but its good
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Posted 11/2/08
the first one sounds like a fdrama+kdrama plot

the second one sounds like yankumi's back story
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Posted 11/2/08
my thoughts about your drama stories:

-the first story is touching, but i have a feeling the ending would be a little cliche. [the unfortunate girl will have the popular, cool guy falling for her]
-i like the second one better, and i'm curious of how it will turn out :]
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Posted 11/2/08 , edited 11/2/08
i love your idea in the first story..<3
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Posted 11/2/08
pretty good!
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Cool I like both but have you ever think maybe I don't know how to say it. What about this girl who is about to get marry to this guy and on her wedding day she is kidnapped. They treat her bad and made her parents worry and they want alot of money for her life. At the end it could be that her bestfriend and her boyfriend are the ones responsible for her kidnap. Like a betray and then at the end she falls in love with her kidnapper. I don't know I hope you guys like it. It sounds kind of sad but the way people can see the horror and the desperation of kidnapping ( I sorry about my english guys you can tell that Im not good on writting).
Posted 11/2/08

caprichosa wrote:

Cool I like both but have you ever think maybe I don't know how to say it. What about this girl who is about to get marry to this guy and on her wedding day she is kidnapped. They treat her bad and made her parents worry and they want alot of money for her life. At the end it could be that her bestfriend and her boyfriend are the ones responsible for her kidnap. Like a betray and then at the end she falls in love with her kidnapper. I don't know I hope you guys like it. It sounds kind of sad but the way people can see the horror and the desperation of kidnapping ( I sorry about my english guys you can tell that Im not good on writting).


I like that story idea, but I think that it needs something special to stand out. So the girl gets kidnapped by this paid kidnapper who has been doing this kind of thing for a long time now so hes pretty use to it. He thinks that nothing can make him feel sympathy for the people he kidnaps and its all about the money, but this particular girl is special and different from the others. Shes kind and can see past what hes letting others see. Her boyfriend and her best friend paid the kidnapper to kidnap her, but what all of them know except the girl is that shes weeks pregnant.
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Posted 11/2/08 , edited 11/2/08

kawaiicute18 wrote:


caprichosa wrote:

Cool I like both but have you ever think maybe I don't know how to say it. What about this girl who is about to get marry to this guy and on her wedding day she is kidnapped. They treat her bad and made her parents worry and they want alot of money for her life. At the end it could be that her bestfriend and her boyfriend are the ones responsible for her kidnap. Like a betray and then at the end she falls in love with her kidnapper. I don't know I hope you guys like it. It sounds kind of sad but the way people can see the horror and the desperation of kidnapping ( I sorry about my english guys you can tell that Im not good on writting).


I like that story idea, but I think that it needs something special to stand out. So the girl gets kidnapped by this paid kidnapper who has been doing this kind of thing for a long time now so hes pretty use to it. He thinks that nothing can make him feel sympathy for the people he kidnaps and its all about the money, but this particular girl is special and different from the others. Shes kind and can see past what hes letting others see. Her boyfriend and her best friend paid the kidnapper to kidnap her, but what all of them know except the girl is that shes weeks pregnant.


It may sound scary but I have the same Idea but without the pregnacy stuff but really it was the same thing and the boyfriend and the bestfriend are doing all that kidnapping stuff because they want to steal all the money of the girl's wealthy family so they can go somewhere out of korea or japan let's say to the USA. When the girls finds what really happen she feels like she wants to give up and then the kidnapper helps her to escape. But Im still thinking about a sad ending or happy ending or those kind of endings when you don't know what will happen next.
Posted 11/2/08

caprichosa wrote:


kawaiicute18 wrote:


caprichosa wrote:

Cool I like both but have you ever think maybe I don't know how to say it. What about this girl who is about to get marry to this guy and on her wedding day she is kidnapped. They treat her bad and made her parents worry and they want alot of money for her life. At the end it could be that her bestfriend and her boyfriend are the ones responsible for her kidnap. Like a betray and then at the end she falls in love with her kidnapper. I don't know I hope you guys like it. It sounds kind of sad but the way people can see the horror and the desperation of kidnapping ( I sorry about my english guys you can tell that Im not good on writting).


I like that story idea, but I think that it needs something special to stand out. So the girl gets kidnapped by this paid kidnapper who has been doing this kind of thing for a long time now so hes pretty use to it. He thinks that nothing can make him feel sympathy for the people he kidnaps and its all about the money, but this particular girl is special and different from the others. Shes kind and can see past what hes letting others see. Her boyfriend and her best friend paid the kidnapper to kidnap her, but what all of them know except the girl is that shes weeks pregnant.[/quot

It may sound scary but I have the same Idea but without the pregnacy stuff but really it was the same thing and the boyfriend and the bestfriend are doing all that kidnapping stuff because they want to steal all the money of the girl's wealthy family so they can go somewhere out of korea or japan let's say to the USA. When the girls finds what really happen she feels like she wants to give up and then the kidnapper helps her to escape. But Im still thinking about a sad ending or happy ending or those kind of endings when you don't know what will happen next.


Being totally truthful and I hope you dont mind, but I think that the story is predictable. It has potential though, just play around with the plot. good luck!

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Posted 11/2/08

kawaiicute18 wrote:


caprichosa wrote:


kawaiicute18 wrote:


caprichosa wrote:

Cool I like both but have you ever think maybe I don't know how to say it. What about this girl who is about to get marry to this guy and on her wedding day she is kidnapped. They treat her bad and made her parents worry and they want alot of money for her life. At the end it could be that her bestfriend and her boyfriend are the ones responsible for her kidnap. Like a betray and then at the end she falls in love with her kidnapper. I don't know I hope you guys like it. It sounds kind of sad but the way people can see the horror and the desperation of kidnapping ( I sorry about my english guys you can tell that Im not good on writting).


I like that story idea, but I think that it needs something special to stand out. So the girl gets kidnapped by this paid kidnapper who has been doing this kind of thing for a long time now so hes pretty use to it. He thinks that nothing can make him feel sympathy for the people he kidnaps and its all about the money, but this particular girl is special and different from the others. Shes kind and can see past what hes letting others see. Her boyfriend and her best friend paid the kidnapper to kidnap her, but what all of them know except the girl is that shes weeks pregnant.[/quot

It may sound scary but I have the same Idea but without the pregnacy stuff but really it was the same thing and the boyfriend and the bestfriend are doing all that kidnapping stuff because they want to steal all the money of the girl's wealthy family so they can go somewhere out of korea or japan let's say to the USA. When the girls finds what really happen she feels like she wants to give up and then the kidnapper helps her to escape. But Im still thinking about a sad ending or happy ending or those kind of endings when you don't know what will happen next.


Being totally truthful and I hope you dont mind, but I think that the story is predictable. It has potential though, just play around with the plot. good luck!



Thanks for the advice
Posted 11/3/08
No personal threads please. Use the General or drama Help thread for this instead =]

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