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The clock beside GuiGui's bed ticked.It was way past midnight, but she was still sitting up,leaning against the wall.She was no longer crying,no longer sulking.She only had a blank expression on her face as the incident that happened today flashed repeatedly in her brain.

GuiGui: I don't get it...Why did I...Ah Bu...My heart is aching, but it isn't aching for WangZi...I shouldn't have shouted at Ah Bu...It wasn't his fault...

It had been nearly all day, GuiGui had never stopped thinking about what had happened.She still could not figure out why she actually hug Aaron.The word -Why- kept appearing in her mind.She didn't dare believe she perhaps was in love with Aaron.She didn't dare believe that she did not like WangZi anymore...

GuiGui: WangZi is mine.Ah Bu isn't...

Then, her handphone started vibrating...A voice message from Aaron appeared.

" Gui, I will be going to Hong Kong to hold my concert tomorrow.For everything that happened today, I'm very sorry...I really didn't mean it...Perhaps, we shouldn't see each other for a period of time...Explain to WangZi properly.He loves you very much...He will understand...Okay, i shall go now...Bye................."

Click, the line when blank.GuiGui couldn't help feel so hopeless...

GuiGui:(Whimpers) Ah Bu...(Whimpers louder) Ah Bu!!!!! (Starts cyring again)It wasn't your fault...It really wasn't!I don't want to not see you for a period of time.I want to see everyday...Everyday...Sorry Ah Bu..

GuiGui didn't need to think anymore.She didn't need anyone to tell her.Right at that moment, she knew the answer for everything.She liked Aaron.It wasn't like the brother-sister type of like.She truly liked him.She wanted him for herself.She wanted to follow him where he went.She wanted him to continue protecting her like he always did.

GuiGui rushed out of her apartment.Down the steps,to the bus-stop,and caught the bus straight to Aaron's house.She couldn't wait to tell Aaron.She didn't care if he liked her, she just wanted to tell him how she felt.Tell him that she was sorry...Sorry for everything...Sorry for all the trouble that she had caused.

She dialed his phone number...

GuiGui:Ah Bu...I really want to see you now...Really...Can you come out?

Aaron: (concern) GuiGui? What is it? It's already so late...

GuiGui:(desperate) I am outside your house...Come out okay?

They met at the park.When Aaron appeared running and in his pyjamas, GuiGui didn't know if she should cry or laugh.She was glad to see him, yet he looked so comical and cute in his cartoon-liked pyjamas.

Aaron:(Panting, places his hands on her shoulders) GuiGui, what happened?Don't cry...

GuiGui stares right into Aaron's eyes and hugs him.

GuiGui: Yalun...I'm sorry.I shouldn't have shouted at you.I...I am so so so stupid.I...I should have realised that I have always liked you...I should have realise earlier...

Aaron:(shocked) Huh?

GuiGui:(Speaks louder) I like you! I really like you! Ah Bu...It's okay if you don't like me.I...I just want to tell you...

Aaron:GuiGui...I never said i didn't like you...If you tell me you don't like me, then i will tell you i like you.If you tell me that you like me, i will tell you...i love you...

GuiGui's heart stopped for a second.As she stopped hugging Aaron.

GuiGui:(stunned) Huh?

Aaron said nothing.He just pulled GuiGui close.So close that they could hear each other breathe.Then their eyes started to close as their faces moved closer and closer..........

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woaaaa~ luv luv luv this chapter..hahaha
you sure is fast...keep uploading..^^


aniwei, Aaron in cartoon pyjamas must be soooo cute.haha
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woaaaa~ luv luv luv this chapter..hahaha
you sure is fast...keep uploading..^^


aniwei, Aaron in cartoon pyjamas must be soooo cute.haha


haha because i didn't like the last chapter...Very sad?So I didn't want that chapter hanging in our minds for too long.So i quickly wrote the next

Haha...sure is cute.Imagine if he were to be wearing some huge night slippers with a cartoon character's head.HAHA i will laugh non-stop
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I can't wait for the next chapter omg I'm so exciting right now
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Agrove_g1na wrote:

woaaaa~ luv luv luv this chapter..hahaha
you sure is fast...keep uploading..^^


aniwei, Aaron in cartoon pyjamas must be soooo cute.haha


haha because i didn't like the last chapter...Very sad?So I didn't want that chapter hanging in our minds for too long.So i quickly wrote the next

Haha...sure is cute.Imagine if he were to be wearing some huge night slippers with a cartoon character's head.HAHA i will laugh non-stop


HAHAHAHA..i cant stop laughing.. :w00t:
aniwei, if he were to wear those slippers, it has to be STITCH!!
then he and gui gui would have couple slippers


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wznaz wrote:


Agrove_g1na wrote:

woaaaa~ luv luv luv this chapter..hahaha
you sure is fast...keep uploading..^^


aniwei, Aaron in cartoon pyjamas must be soooo cute.haha


haha because i didn't like the last chapter...Very sad?So I didn't want that chapter hanging in our minds for too long.So i quickly wrote the next

Haha...sure is cute.Imagine if he were to be wearing some huge night slippers with a cartoon character's head.HAHA i will laugh non-stop


HAHAHAHA..i cant stop laughing.. :w00t:
aniwei, if he were to wear those slippers, it has to be STITCH!!
then he and gui gui would have couple slippers




LOL! That's a good idea...Maybe i can use that idea when they are dating...Imagine GuiGui forces Aaron to wear stitch clothes... just thinking of me makes me laugh so bad hahas
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Agrove_g1na wrote:


wznaz wrote:


Agrove_g1na wrote:

woaaaa~ luv luv luv this chapter..hahaha
you sure is fast...keep uploading..^^


aniwei, Aaron in cartoon pyjamas must be soooo cute.haha


haha because i didn't like the last chapter...Very sad?So I didn't want that chapter hanging in our minds for too long.So i quickly wrote the next

Haha...sure is cute.Imagine if he were to be wearing some huge night slippers with a cartoon character's head.HAHA i will laugh non-stop


HAHAHAHA..i cant stop laughing.. :w00t:
aniwei, if he were to wear those slippers, it has to be STITCH!!
then he and gui gui would have couple slippers




LOL! That's a good idea...Maybe i can use that idea when they are dating...Imagine GuiGui forces Aaron to wear stitch clothes... just thinking of me makes me laugh so bad hahas


Hhahahahahahaha....awesome!!!gonna be so so so funny. :lol:
guilun n lilo and stitch have similarity..they are super cute..
i never get bored just by thinking about them

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awwwww!! this chapter is so cute!! im in luv wit it! and having gui gui force arron to wear stich clothes or a key ring to put on his cell phone is not a bad ideas!! keep it up!
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HAHA~
this part quite confusing


Aaron:GuiGui...I never said i didn't like you...If you tell me you don't like me, then i will tell you i like you.If you tell me that you like me, i will tell you...i love you...



aha~ omg, this is so cute, abt e pjs part!!

They met at the park.When Aaron appeared running and in his pyjamas, GuiGui didn't know if she should cry or laugh.She was glad to see him, yet he looked so comical and cute in his cartoon-liked pyjamas.

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HAHA~
this part quite confusing


Aaron:GuiGui...I never said i didn't like you...If you tell me you don't like me, then i will tell you i like you.If you tell me that you like me, i will tell you...i love you...



aha~ omg, this is so cute, abt e pjs part!!

They met at the park.When Aaron appeared running and in his pyjamas, GuiGui didn't know if she should cry or laugh.She was glad to see him, yet he looked so comical and cute in his cartoon-liked pyjamas.



yeah it a bit confused but i like that part the most when arron said he will said i love u if gui gui said she like him!
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hahas...
The part about aaron in pyjamas was funny...
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this story is getter cuter... and the part about arron in his pjs is funny--oh yeah in the xin wo mv he wore his pjs right? that is sooo cute
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flhfanlh wrote:

HAHA~
this part quite confusing


Aaron:GuiGui...I never said i didn't like you...If you tell me you don't like me, then i will tell you i like you.If you tell me that you like me, i will tell you...i love you...



aha~ omg, this is so cute, abt e pjs part!!

They met at the park.When Aaron appeared running and in his pyjamas, GuiGui didn't know if she should cry or laugh.She was glad to see him, yet he looked so comical and cute in his cartoon-liked pyjamas.



oh ok then i shall explain. Aaron is actually trying to tell GuiGui that he loves her...

Aaron is trying to imply that if GuiGui WERE to say she didn't like him, then he will tell her that he likes her still.But now that she tells him that she likes him, he wants to tell her, he loves her.

haha yeah.Hope you can get it.If can't..Haha sorry for the bad explanation
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flhfanlh wrote:

HAHA~
this part quite confusing


Aaron:GuiGui...I never said i didn't like you...If you tell me you don't like me, then i will tell you i like you.If you tell me that you like me, i will tell you...i love you...



aha~ omg, this is so cute, abt e pjs part!!

They met at the park.When Aaron appeared running and in his pyjamas, GuiGui didn't know if she should cry or laugh.She was glad to see him, yet he looked so comical and cute in his cartoon-liked pyjamas.



yeah it a bit confused but i like that part the most when arron said he will said i love u if gui gui said she like him!


oh ok then i shall explain. Aaron is actually trying to tell GuiGui that he loves her...

Aaron is trying to imply that if GuiGui WERE to say she didn't like him, then he will tell her that he likes her still.But now that she tells him that she likes him, he wants to tell her, he loves her.

haha yeah.Hope you can get it.If can't..Haha sorry for the bad explanation
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hahas, i can get it, hehe~
nice job, heex~
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