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Kei Inoo One Shot fanfic for Jally-chan~
Its My promise to her! hahaha! Hope u like this Coz
This is my first time making a One shot with a song hehe


Blue: Flash back
Red: Present
Violet: P.O.V.

Song: Last Cry - 5150
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZkuaO2B_bwE&feature=related



Yui<POV>
You left me… why did you do that? Didn’t you know it hurt so much? To left me all alone? When you left me, I was like a puppy being abandoned by its owner… but still, I was hoping if someday, you would be back again…






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Baby girl,
I love you so much
But I guess you don't understand how much I care
Everything we've been through
I've always stayed by your side
But I guess you don't see that
As much as it hurts deep inside
I gotta let you go
Cuz I've shed my last tear


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Kei<POV>
I didn’t know that I’ve hurt you so much. I’ve always left you alone. If I just knew that I’ve hurt you, I shouldn’t have done it that way. If you’ve just told me those things from before, it’ll never be like this.






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Hey where do I go from here now
It took us one hell of a while
So tell me how, we fell apart
When I gave you my all from the start
You was my angel
You and me together, we was untouchable
But when you let time play its role
It becomes unpredictable
Everything was changin'
Lies, Rumors
Everything inside me rearrangin'
Now I'm facin' hard decisions
And my life - In a twisted situation
But I gotta wonder why, Tell me why
Did it have to be this way
It's best that we go our separate ways


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Yui: kei kun? Is… is that you?
Kei: Anou, Yui-chan.
Yui: Yes Kei-kun??
Kei: etto, can we go back again the way we used to be?
Yui: …. I don’t know… what if you left me again??
Kei: no! I’ll never gonna do that again!
Yui: promise?
Kei: yes! I promise!
Yui: honto?
Kei: hai!!
Yui: [hugs kei] hai! I will! [Cried] did you know how long I’ve waited for you?
Kei: ja, I have something to tell you, At this Friday, on the Best Friends Restaurant at 6:00 pm!
Yui: ok!




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I tried to fight it
The way I feel for you
But girl this pain just won't let me go
Girl if you only
Could try to see
But I guess this love was just not meant to be
Though it seems love was our destiny
I could never love you
The way you wanted me to


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-Friday night-

Yui: ah! Gomen I’m late!
Kei: it’s ok! Pelase have a seat!
Yui: anou, so what do you wanna talk about kei-kun?
Kei: anou,
Yui: hai?
Kei: etto…
Yui: yes?
Kei: Yui-chan, Let’s get married!
Yui: Ehh… Maji?
Kei: Hai! Honto desu!
Yui: I’ll mary kei-kun?
Kei: anou, dame desu?
Yui: iie! Yes! I will! I will get marry to Kei kun!
Kei: arigatou!!




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I shed my last tear with you
I cried my last cry with you
But I'm sayin' good-bye to you
After all we've been through

I shed my last tear with you
I cried my last cry with you
But we just can't see it through
Even though I love you girl


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Kei: Hello Yui ~
Yui: oh Kei! Genki?
Kei: yeps! Ah… I have something to tell you?
Yui: any where? ^_^
Kei: ok! Ja, how about this Friday? At our favorite restaurant?
Yui: sure! That’ll be fine! So, same time same place?
Kei: ok!




Yui<POV>
Our wedding is now near, only 2 months left! Iyaa… wonder what would I look in a wedding gown? Im so excited!! I never thought this day would came!




-Friday Night-
@ the restaurant.

Yui: he’s late… here is he?...
-30 minutes passed-
Yui: he’s still not here! I think I should go home now. People are staring at me….




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So many times
You left me so confused
You've hurt me so much
Yet I couldn't stop loving you
So many nights
I cried myself to sleep
Goin' crazy wonderin' if I should leave
Girl I'll never, love another
Cuz you were my pride
And you were my life
And you were my last


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Yui: why didn’t you came!!
Kei: gomen! our… our marriage… it’ll be canceled…
Yui: na… nani? Nande!
Kei: i… I have to move to America.
Yui: eh? Why?!
Kei: my job. I must go to America. Gomen! honto ni gomen! *bows*
Yui: you told me you would never leave me! How could you do this to me!
Kei: I’m sorry! But there’s… there’s a reason why….
Yui: why!
Kei: you’ll know it… and we’ll still meet again… someday… somewhere…. By chance….
Yui: nani?! What the heck is that! [Crying]
Kei: I know but…
Yui: do you know how much I’m hurt from what you said?
Kei: I know but… I have to… let… you go… [cried]
Yui: You Idiot! [Ran away]




Kei<POV>
If you only knew the reason why… sorry I really can’t you why… because you’re just gonna be hurt…


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I shed my last tear with you
I cried my last cry with you
But I'm sayin' good-bye to you
After all we've been through

I shed my last tear with you
I cried my last cry with you
But we just can't see it through
Even though I love you girl


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After months…

Yabu: oh Yui chan!
Yui: hello yabu kun! Hisashiburi!
Yabu: so… have you heard about “it”?
Yui: about what?
Yabu: kei being diagnose with his sickness~
Yui: di...diagnose?
Yabu: yeah~ at first I didn’t knew that… he just left. But her mom told me that…
Yui: eh? Ja… that’s why he left?
Yabu: yeah… but, I didn’t know if he survived.
Yui: maji?
Yabu: yah… ah ja! I gotta go now! Jobs’ hard today…
Yui: ok ja…




Yui<POV>
I didn’t knew that he left me because of his sickness… that’s why he didn’t told me. Because he didn’t want to hurt me
.





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All I ever wanted was to make you happy
And all I ever wanted was to see you smile
All I ever wanted was for you to love me
But we just couldn't seem to work things out
Tell me why do things have to change
And tell me where did we go wrong
Cuz baby girl I'm tired of cryin'
I guess some way we'll just have to move on


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After 2 years….

@ Best friend restaurant midnight…

Yui: aah… it’s nice to bring back memories… this restaurant were closed for 2 years… I really miss this place…
[wind blows]
Yui: eh? Is there someone there? I think I can see a light… a man… eh? White clothes? Hmm… eh… K.. kei?
Kei: hisashi buri… yui chan… [Waving his hands]
Yui: kei!!! *cries* [runs towards him but] why... why are you getting farther?! Kei!!! Kei!!! Don’t go! Kei!!! Im soo happy to see you! Please don’t leave me!
Kei: go…me..n…. yu…i chan…. I…. Love…. You… bye….
Yui: KEI!!! No! don’t go!! Kei! I love you!




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I shed my last tear with you
I cried my last cry with you
But I'm sayin' good-bye to you
After all we've been through

I shed my last tear with you
I cried my last cry with you
But we just can't see it through
Even though I love you girl


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Kei<POV>
It’s hard to say that I’m gone, but it’s much hard to see you crying. But the times we were together, the times we spent… I will never forget that. Now, I’m in the different other side of the world. I can see you but I can’t neither hold, nor touch you. I wanted to kiss you, I wanted to hug you. But I can’t. I just wanna say to you how much I really loved you… Yui…


Yui<POV>
It’s the first time… that I saw him cry… maybe that’s why… I can’t accept the way he left me… that day, when I saw him, I was so glad that I saw him for years… but I didn’t know that he’s gone… he left me so much memories… the way he talked, move, and the day that he left me… I now understand what you said… some day, somewhere, by chance. I will never forget you Kei…




Thanks 4 reading =P
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awwww...... why did Kei have to die? :((( uwaaaah! anyway,

AWESOME!!! this is great! so great! Nice!

Thanks Deen-chaaan! XD thanks for this oneshot! I'm not scared anymore! XD

P.S.
Coincidence... I was just watching Yui's (the singer) movie, Taiyou no uta. I didn't know It was my name here. :O cool!.

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jally23 wrote:

awwww...... why did Kei have to die? :((( uwaaaah! anyway,

AWESOME!!! this is great! so great! Nice!

Thanks Deen-chaaan! XD thanks for this oneshot! I'm not scared anymore! XD

P.S.
Coincidence... I was just watching Yui's (the singer) movie, Taiyou no uta. I didn't know It was my name here. :O cool!.



uwaaa!! thanks!!!
haha gomen if i killed him hahahha!!!
thanks for reading! my poresento desu!
hehehehe
yeah YUI is the singer also in HINOKIO hahaha
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jally23 wrote:

awwww...... why did Kei have to die? :((( uwaaaah! anyway,

AWESOME!!! this is great! so great! Nice!

Thanks Deen-chaaan! XD thanks for this oneshot! I'm not scared anymore! XD

P.S.
Coincidence... I was just watching Yui's (the singer) movie, Taiyou no uta. I didn't know It was my name here. :O cool!.



uwaaa!! thanks!!!
haha gomen if i killed him hahahha!!!
thanks for reading! my poresento desu!
hehehehe
yeah YUI is the singer also in HINOKIO hahaha


ooh... I haven't watched that. :)) haha! anyway, It's okaaay! It's totally fine. XD
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weeeeeeeee!!
my kei!! T.....................................T
that's so sad!!
btw..
you're getting better and better at this!!
great job!! ^-^
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hah its ok!


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weeeeeeeee!!
my kei!! T.....................................T
that's so sad!!
btw..
you're getting better and better at this!!
great job!! ^-^


uwaaa!! huhuhuhu!! thanks!!!
omg you and jally chan.. baka magsabunutan kau kay kei!!! hahahaha
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omg..
keeeeei~
IM SO IN LOVE WTH UR FIC.this one is sooo touching.
hope u'll still write morenmore fanfic!hehe
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yamachan-kakkoi wrote:

omg..
keeeeei~
IM SO IN LOVE WTH UR FIC.this one is sooo touching.
hope u'll still write morenmore fanfic!hehe


hahahaah!!!!
thank you charu chan!!!!!!
remember my last one? seperated lovers? hahaha
i told you ill be making again hahaha!!!

IM REALLY A KILLER!! wahaha joke!
i cant kill daiki!!
hahahaah well... it depends on the story wahahaha!!
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yamachan-kakkoi wrote:

omg..
keeeeei~
IM SO IN LOVE WTH UR FIC.this one is sooo touching.
hope u'll still write morenmore fanfic!hehe


hahahaah!!!!
thank you charu chan!!!!!!
remember my last one? seperated lovers? hahaha
i told you ill be making again hahaha!!!

IM REALLY A KILLER!! wahaha joke!
i cant kill daiki!!
hahahaah well... it depends on the story wahahaha!!


LOVE ur ficccccccccccccc.
ive said tht havent i?ahahaha
wuaaaaah.
u'll kill daichan?!
looool^^
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deen22 wrote:



hah its ok!


hsj9392 wrote:

weeeeeeeee!!
my kei!! T.....................................T
that's so sad!!
btw..
you're getting better and better at this!!
great job!! ^-^


uwaaa!! huhuhuhu!! thanks!!!
omg you and jally chan.. baka magsabunutan kau kay kei!!! hahahaha




haha!!
di nmn..
cge kay jally n c kei..
may 9 hsj members p nmn ako db?? xDD
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hsj9392 wrote:


deen22 wrote:



hah its ok!


hsj9392 wrote:

weeeeeeeee!!
my kei!! T.....................................T
that's so sad!!
btw..
you're getting better and better at this!!
great job!! ^-^


uwaaa!! huhuhuhu!! thanks!!!
omg you and jally chan.. baka magsabunutan kau kay kei!!! hahahaha




haha!!
di nmn..
cge kay jally n c kei..
may 9 hsj members p nmn ako db?? xDD



hahahaha!!!! 8 nlng no!!!
=P=P
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yamachan-kakkoi wrote:


deen22 wrote:


yamachan-kakkoi wrote:

omg..
keeeeei~
IM SO IN LOVE WTH UR FIC.this one is sooo touching.
hope u'll still write morenmore fanfic!hehe


hahahaah!!!!
thank you charu chan!!!!!!
remember my last one? seperated lovers? hahaha
i told you ill be making again hahaha!!!

IM REALLY A KILLER!! wahaha joke!
i cant kill daiki!!
hahahaah well... it depends on the story wahahaha!!


LOVE ur ficccccccccccccc.
ive said tht havent i?ahahaha
wuaaaaah.
u'll kill daichan?!
looool^^


nooo hahahah!!
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omg!
this one-shot is really....sad =((
it sounded so realistic, like in a drama
it was nice of kei to not tell yui teh truth..T__T
demo..it was really sad!
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Yamada_Yuuki83 wrote:

omg!
this one-shot is really....sad =((
it sounded so realistic, like in a drama
it was nice of kei to not tell yui teh truth..T__T
demo..it was really sad!


uwaaaaa
honto?? thanks!!!!
^_^
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omg~ this ishh so sad TT^TT~
it sounds realistic tho....
but its so sad TT^TT!!
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