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IT WAS SO BEAUTIFUL, BUT WITHIN IT WAS PAINFUL~~~
written by Mai-chan!!!

MAIN CHARACTER-
NATSUKI IZUMOTO
TOMA IKUTA
YAMASHITA TOMOHISA
MOMOKO IZUMOTO(short: MOMO)


Red- Past of parts of her life/flashback
Blue- Present
Green- Her diary






END OF PART 1

THERE WILL BE TWO PARTS TO THIS!!!!!!



NEXT PART TO IT~! PART 2!!!




THE END!!!!!!!! HOPE YOU ENJOYED THE STORY!!!!



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wow!!
this is amazing!!
is she blind??
I thought at first she was.. autistic or something..
considering that she is "different"!!
LoL ^-^
can't wait for the second part!!
keep it up!!

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hsj9392 wrote:

wow!!
this is amazing!!
is she blind??
I thought at first she was.. autistic or something..
considering that she is "different"!!
LoL ^-^
can't wait for the second part!!
keep it up!!




waaaaa arigato for reading hsj-chan! hehe i gave out a lot of foreshadowing ne!!! also thanks for the comment!!
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uwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!
i cant wait for the second part!!!
huhuhuhu!!!
sooo sad!!
wonder wats wrong with her!! =((
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deen22 wrote:

uwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!
i cant wait for the second part!!!
huhuhuhu!!!
sooo sad!!
wonder wats wrong with her!! =((


waaaa arigto for reading deen-chan..gomen..you'll have to figure it out by reading the next part when i post it...hehe demo i gave out a lot of foreshadowing...hehe! and thanks for the comment!!
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woohoo!!
next part please!! ^-^
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kyaaa .. it's nice mai - chan .. but so sad .. huhuhuhuhu .. it made me cry ..
great job! .. and .. can't wait for the nect part .. ^^
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Posted 11/7/08
wow!~ its awesome :D
i wonder wat wrong with her >__< poor girl D:
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wow. it's nice. keep it up! looking forward to the next part~^^
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Posted 11/8/08
awwww... It's so sad. :(( why is her sister always crying? uwaa. :((

nice fic! haha! Like it!XD
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emkyuu wrote:

kyaaa .. it's nice mai - chan .. but so sad .. huhuhuhuhu .. it made me cry ..
great job! .. and .. can't wait for the nect part .. ^^



hehe i posted the new part...and thanks for the comment...i'm sorrie i mad u cry!!
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mochicocoa wrote:

wow!~ its awesome :D
i wonder wat wrong with her >__< poor girl D:


hehe thanks for reading! demo you'll have to find out on next part..which i posted already!!
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arashi369 wrote:

wow. it's nice. keep it up! looking forward to the next part~^^


hehe thanks for the comment...next part already posted!
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jally23 wrote:

awwww... It's so sad. :(( why is her sister always crying? uwaa. :((

nice fic! haha! Like it!XD



hehe thanks..well the reason why her sister always cried because she knows that natsuki wouldn't be able to do things like other normal kids can so since natsuki is disable! you know..its sister love! hehe oh..and new part already posted!
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Posted 11/8/08
awww~ D:
Momo-nee-chan died TT^TT
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