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hi minna ! first time posting a one shot !!

here it is ! hope you like it !!

comments will be love !!

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..Ai Nante..

dore dake aruitekitan darou
furimuitara namida no ato
kizutsuke kizutsuki tadoritsuita basho
ima koko ni kimi ga iru


Just how far have I walked?
If I look back behind me, I'll find a trail of tears.
I was wounded, and hurt other in return.
And now the place I finally reached is where you are.


I stood outside his room trying to suppress my feelings.
I can’t let him see me sad, not now..
I slowly opened the door and entered, he was there, lying on his bed.
He quickly looked at me and smiled , I smiled back at him and sat on his bed
I suddenly felt the urge to hold his hands
I took his hands and held it by my face
“how are you? I missed you..”
I waited for his answer but nothing came…he just stared at me…with sadness in his eyes


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ai nante
kimi dake sa
itsudemo motome sugite
ai nante
kimi nashi ja imi nai yo
ikirarenai


Such a thing as love
It's only you, I guess,
Who always ask for too much.
Such a thing as love
If you aren't there then there's no meaning anymore
I won't be able to live.


“I love you” he said. I was suddenly taken aback..
But I smiled and replied “I love you too”..i thought he will smile at me like any other days..
But I suddenly saw a tear fall down his cheeks..his tears looks so fragile..like a crystal about to break..
Then my heart ached..i don’t want to see him like this..but I just can’t hold it any longer…I wiped his tears and said “without you there’s no meaning to my life”…*crack* my heart was like this…I can’t hold it my tears started to fall down..my tears that I’ve been hiding since I’ve known..my tears that I have been trying hard to suppress..since i….
“Please don’t say that” he spoke, wiping my tears and holding up my face..i looked at his eyes and I realized that I need to treasure him forever..i want to be with him forever..he wrapped his arms around me and comforted me..fighting my tears I whispered
“I can’t live without you”


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hontou ni kokoro de aiseteiru no?
ima demo fuan da yo yeah
hitokiri yume no naka tadoritsuita basho
furueteru kimi ga iru yo



Do you truly love me from your heart?
Even now, I feel insecure yeah...
On my own, within my dreams, the place where I finally reached,
You were quivering there.



A week has passed since I last visited him..
Yes I’ve been busy with work..but that’s not just the reason..
I just don’t want him to see me like this..i’ve been crying all night..
I even dreamt of us..growing old together..but I know it’s impossible..NOW it’s impossible..
I don’t want you to die..even the thought of it makes me shiver..
I wish I could be with you ..that I could die with you..but…
I know that that’s not what you want for me..
Every night I cry..hoping that time will stop so that..
What’s happening now…you alive and with me..may always be a forever..


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nakanaide
hanasanai yo
subete wo nagesute temo
Mirai nante
kimi nashi ja mienai yo
Iranai yo


Please don't cry;
I won't let you go,
Even if I have to throw everything away.
Such a thing like the future,
If you aren't there then I can't see it.
It's unnecessary.


*ring* my phone rang..it was his mother..i answered it..knowing that something is wrong..”moshi moshi?”..my eyes widened..i didn’t know what I am supposed to feel..
When his mother hung up..i rushed to the hospital..my tears were continuously falling..
I opened the door of his room..trying hard to breath..i rushed to him and hugged him..
“what’s wrong?” he asked..
“I’m scared”
He released my grip and made me look at him..
“please don’t be” he answered
When I heard this I became angry
“how can I not be scared?” I shouted
I hugged him and whispered
“please don’t let me go..don’t leave me” I felt his tears as he hugged me back..
“I’ll always be with you”
“but !!” I shouted as tears continued to fall..
“stop it please..i will never let you go..but you need to let me go..we can’t always live in a world of dreams..we must face the reality” when I heard this..i burst out crying..he cried with me ..tightening his arms around me..
Both of us knowing that there’s only a month for him to live..


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Asa no hiizashi ni
Kimi no negao to tereta egao de
Ureshiku nareru kana
Sonna hibi wo kanjita ai yo
Eien ni


The morning rays of sunlight
Shone upon your sleeping face and I smiled, embarassed
Because we were happy then
I wish that the love I felt during those days
Would continue forever




Today we’re going out..i asked the doctor for permission and he granted it..
I planned everything..i brought him to our favorite place..the place where we first met..
It was the oak tree beside the river surrounded by grasses..we decided to lay down by the tree..
We layed there..starring at the sky
“I wish I’ll be the sky”I said..well I really do
“why?” he asked..i immedietly thought of an answer
“coz I know that I’ll be close to you and I can follow you anywhere” I answered with a smile on my face..
“I love your smile..i’ll never forget it” he suddenly said..
I frowned for a bit..i took his face and looked into his eyes
“please don’t say that you’ll always be here”..he just smiled at me..i closed my eyes and layed my head on his chest..
I can hear his heart beating..doki doki..doki doki..doki doki..
He must have thought that I was asleep..because he suddenly started talking
“I love your sleeping face” he said..i smiled
“you must be dreaming..i wish that this was all a dream” my heart suddenly ached..i myself also wished that this was all a dream..then he continued
“if this is a dream..i’ll wake myself up and continue my life without this regret..without seeing tears falling down on your face..i’ll love you so much..for all eternity”
I just continued to pretend that I’m asleep..trying hard not to let my tears fall..


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ai nante
kimi dake sa
itsudemo motome sugite
ai nante
kimi nashi ja imi nai yo
ikirarenai

Aishitemo Aishikirenai

Mirai nante
kimi nashi ja mienai yo
Iranai yo


Such a thing as love
It's only you, I guess,
Who always ask for too much.
Such a thing as love
If you aren't there then there's no meaning anymore
I won't be able to live.

No matter how much I love you, it seems like it's never enough

Such a thing like the future,
If you aren't there then I can't see it.
It's unnecessary.



Everyday he grew weaker..he can’t sit up without help now..his skin is so pale..
I feel like the time is near..the time when he will……I just can’t say it..i was always by his side..everyday..carefully telling him stories..
“how much do you love me?” he asked..
“you already know that” I told him…but he insisted
“ it’s just nice to hear it from you again and again..”
I smiled at him…
“I love you even if it’s impossible..i love you so much that I can’t live without you..”
I stopped talking..my tears starting to fill my eyes..all those days that I’ve been with him..i’ve been hiding my pains from him..but now I’ve reached my limit..every second now counts.. I burst out my tears..my tears that kept on hunting me..
He suddenly kissed me and hugged me with all the strength that is left to him..
“I’ll never leave you..i’ll be the sky and follow you around..i will let the sun shine when I see you happy because I’m happy too..but when I see you sad I’ll let the rain fall..this all means that I need your shining smile to comfort me..i’ll miss you forever ..i’ll treasure you forever…please..live on” I felt his grip loosen..
And I knew from then on that it’s time for him to go..
The last thing I told him was..
“Yamapi I’ll love you forever”
Then he drifted to sleep forever..
A sleep where he’ll never wake up eternally..
That night…the rain fell from the sky..
And I knew..that he doesn’t want to leave me too..




hope you liked it ! tnx for reading ! ^^

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uwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!
huhuhuhuhuhuhuhuhuu

that story made me cry!!!!
really!! huhuhuhuhu!!!!!!
i cant stop!!!! suuuch a saaaaaaaad story!! huhuhuhuhu!!!
who sang that song again???
huhuhhuhuhu i love this story!!!
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tegoshi wrote it. he sang it together with shige and ryo.

*is still reading the one shot* will comment later.
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omg. so nice. it's great. it almost made me cry. D': looking forward to reading more of your fics.
Posted 11/7/08 , edited 11/7/08
i love this one. it's sad. and you can feel the emotions in it. ^^

great job sis! ^^
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that's..
AWESOME!! ^-^
I love it pi-chan!!
it reminds me of One litre of tears!!
gosh!!
I'm getting so addicted to tragic love stories!! ^-^
great one!!
Posted 11/7/08
A very touching Oneshot! It's very original..
I LOVE the song u used too!

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awww this is awesome!!
its so sad TT^TT~ it made me cry~
it kinda reminds me of Koizora for some reason ^-^;;
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mochicocoa wrote:

awww this is awesome!!
its so sad TT^TT~ it made me cry~
it kinda reminds me of Koizora for some reason ^-^;;




oh.. did haruma die in koizora?? o.O
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mochicocoa wrote:

awww this is awesome!!
its so sad TT^TT~ it made me cry~
it kinda reminds me of Koizora for some reason ^-^;;




oh.. did haruma die in koizora?? o.O



yeshh TT^TT
[[if i remember right ^-^;;]]
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mochicocoa wrote:


hsj9392 wrote:


mochicocoa wrote:

awww this is awesome!!
its so sad TT^TT~ it made me cry~
it kinda reminds me of Koizora for some reason ^-^;;




oh.. did haruma die in koizora?? o.O



yeshh TT^TT
[[if i remember right ^-^;;]]




awwwww!!
that's really sad!! like this fic!! T.T
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hsj9392 wrote:


mochicocoa wrote:


hsj9392 wrote:


mochicocoa wrote:

awww this is awesome!!
its so sad TT^TT~ it made me cry~
it kinda reminds me of Koizora for some reason ^-^;;




oh.. did haruma die in koizora?? o.O



yeshh TT^TT
[[if i remember right ^-^;;]]




awwwww!!
that's really sad!! like this fic!! T.T


I agree TT^TT
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awww... :(( so sad. It reminds me of both koizora and one litre of tears. uwaaaa!

anyway, I was just about to make a oneshot of ai nante. It's just that I was lazy to google it. anyway, nice oneshot!
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mochicocoa wrote:

awww this is awesome!!
its so sad TT^TT~ it made me cry~
it kinda reminds me of Koizora for some reason ^-^;;


uwaa! same here! reminds me of koizora. :((
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uwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!
huhuhuhuhuhuhuhuhuu

that story made me cry!!!!
really!! huhuhuhuhu!!!!!!
i cant stop!!!! suuuch a saaaaaaaad story!! huhuhuhuhu!!!
who sang that song again???
huhuhhuhuhu i love this story!!!


tnx so much !
honto??

tegoshi yuya sang it..^^

uwaa ureshii.. !
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