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Yay! This is my "your welcome" gift to Deen-can because she wrote a oneshot about me.

So I wrote a oneshot about her too! yay!

So the song I used is Koishikute by UVERworld. This is my UBER favorite song :)

Please enjoy!

*i didn't include the Romanji*

+Deen's POV+
It's been years since Daiki and I became more than friends. It was the best time of my life. I was in heaven that time. No. Everyday was heaven when I'm with him. We spent time as if there's no tomorrow. We expressed our love as if we will never love another. WE spent our life to the fullest. Being a girlfriend of the most popular band is very lucky. I've never expected for us to gone this far. I was just an ordinary fangirl before. Being Daiki's girlfriend is like winning a lottery. Not because you'll have nonstop morning calls from a celebrity, but a person calling you every now and then even though he's very busy. But, am I really lucky?

+Daiki's POV+
Being a celebrity is a hassle. A lot of girls are surrounding you. You’re always in the limelight. You should act cool all the time. But when it comes to Deen, you'll witness how clumsy Arioka Daiki is. My weakness was her. I was nothing without her. I can't do my best if I don't see a glimpse of her. Ever since I met her, it's like love first before work. But one day, Chinen talked to me. I changed a lot according to him. It was bad. So I thought twice.. Am I doing the right thing?






The last honest talk about our dreams I had with you turn out well.
The time that I should have spent with you, was spent on work or friends.
But why, even though I was surrounded by so many people,
I felt like as if I was the loneliest person on Earth.
I started searching for your shadow.



"Deen-chan, sorry! I have photoshoot tomorrow." "Gomen! I have a new drama! We'll be shooting it next week!" "Don’t worry! I will make it up to you!" "Sorry! We have a get together with all JUMP." Deen-chan heard all those reasons from Daiki. Daiki had been very successful member of hey say jump. Acted in different dramas, sang numerous songs, and danced a lot of dances. He was in the spotlight with the HSJ members. He had all the support from his fangirls, family, friends, and of course, his one and only girlfriend.
"Hai. Gambatte, ne?" This was the phrase Deen-chan kept on saying. In every reason Daiki gave, he always get this reply.
One night, Deen-chan mailed Daiki, "its over. Goodbye"


+Daiki's POV+
Nani? It's over? But... I did my best for her! I tried my best to balance my work to my personal life. But.. I guess it wasn't enough. I don't know where to place myself. Deen-chan was my only source of hope, but now, she's gone. I'm like a puzzle that can never be solved. She completes me. And now, she's missing. I must find her.




I love you; I call your name repeatedly.
It would have been great if I could continue loving you.
The word "goodbye" was repeated many times.
Even though it marks the end, I can't forget you.


"Deen! Please open the door!" Daiki shouted outside her door. Deen was staring at him, crying her heart out. The pouring rain made her even more regretful. She shouldn't have done that. " I love you! It's not over yet, ne? NE?" Daiki cried. Daiki begged her. He didn't want it to over.

+Deen's POV+
Sorry, Daiki-kun. I don't really want to do this. But it's for your own sake. I know it's hard but forgetting me is just what you need. I'll be such a big nuisance in your work life. Because of me, you might not do your best in your work. You might be cooler if you forget about me. If you do, your head ache will lessen for sure. But for sure, my happy memories with you will be forever irreplaceable.




The rain never teaches anything, it only continues to fall.
Always, at the same time in the last train, people are being accompanied by their lovers.
The feelings and desires that keep piling are unexpectedly not fading.
Even though time has passed, the clouds won't clear and the tears from the sky
Still won't stop falling.


It's been 2 months since Deen and Daiki was over. The JUMP members saw the gloomy Daiki throughout those 2 months.
"Nice work today!" The director said. "You may go now." he announced. Daiki went to Chinen "Chii! Let’s eat somewhere after work." Daiki said. "Uh.. Sure!" Chinen replied. Then chinen's phone rang. "Matte, I'll just answer this." Chinen excused himself and talked. When Chinen went back, "Anoo, sorry, dai-chan, Aya and me will go out. It's our first monthsary." "Oh... sou desu ka? okay. jaa!" Then Daiki left. When he went out, he saw different banners saying, "Give your loved ones chocolates this coming valentine's day." "Oh yeah, It's valentines tomorrow. I guess I'll be alone." Daiki thought to himself.


+Daiki's POV+
Why did we end up here? It's been two months. In those two months, I just felt great need for Deen. Everyday, I longed for her soft voice. The more the days passed, the more missed her. No. I missed her since she said it’s over. That moment, I felt my world was breaking down. There was darkness all over me. I felt numb unlike before. Until now, I'm still waiting for her to come back. But will she ever come back to me? Or is she just waiting for me?



I love you; I call your name repeatedly.
It would have been great if I could continue loving you.
I had become a coward.
If you were the flower that blooms,


Daiki went to Deen's house that Valentine's day. He prepared 2 bouquets of roses and a box of chocolate. But when he arrived, no one was there. So he asked her neighbour about them. Their neighbour told them that they just left and will return to the Philippines. Daiki was so shocked. Her neighbor gave him a letter, addressed to him. When he read the letter, he dropped the roses and chocolates and he was on his knees. "nande?" was all that he can say.

*Deen's POV is also the letter*

+Deen's POV+
Sorry, Daiki, if I have to leave. It was for your own good. Forgetting about me is the only thing I can help. Please understand. You can't have a good future with me. I'm just an ordinary girl. A celebrity like you should also be with a celebrity. I don't deserve you, neither have you deserved me. We're living in two different worlds. I shouldn't be mixed up in your world. I know, I'm such a coward not telling you this face to face, but, I don't think I'll be able to face you despite what I did to you last last month. I know, in that time, you were really wondering why it was over. but now, I've said it.

Anyway, good luck with your work. I know you can do your best without me. Sayonara.


I have given you too much water such that you wilted;
I protected you so much that I had deprived you of sunlight.
I have no idea why, but I miss you
Honey that is too sweet is being hated because of its sweetness.
When the perfect balance is broken and it starts to crumble, I became scared.


Daiki searched for her. She didn't want the moment they were together be suddenly put to waste. He cherished every moment with her. He rushed to the airport, thinking that they were still there. He wanted to see her for the last time. No, he wanted her to stay. He didn't want her to leave. While running, he can feel his tears rolling down his sad face. Everyone around him was looking at him, recognizing him. He ran as fast as he could. When he arrived in the airport, he searched, and searched, but he didn't find her. He wanted to scream. He was so down. He didn't know what to feel. he felt so miserable about what happened. But then, when he glanced back, he saw Deen.


When I understood what was important,
I let go of love.
Separation is the beginning of a new rendezvous,
You taught me that.
Even today, I am still moving on but-


"Deen!" Daiki hugged her tightly. "Ikanaide (don't go)" he said. He felt tears on his shoulders. Deen was crying. "Gomen," that was all she can say. "Please! I'm begging you. Don't go. You're my everything! please! I don't want you to leave!" Daiki begged her over and over. "Gomen ne, Daiki-kun. I have to go now. You can do it by yourself, ne?" Deen said. "No! I can't! I can't do anything without you. See. I'm nothing without you." Daiki reasoned out, crying. "Iie, you can do it. I know, your work is really important to you. Just like what I've said in the letter, we live in different worlds. Please, you have to let go of me now. Daijoubu (it's okay) I'll never forget the memories we had together. ne? If we let go of each other, we can do much better than before. You can concentrate in your work and school, and I can pursue with what I want. IF we di this, we can help each other. You have to move on. " Deen explained. "demo..." Daiki answered. "Jaa.. I have to go now, I can hear our flight is now. mata, ne?" was the last words from Deen.

+Daiki's POV+
Why did she have to leave? Just becaue of THAT reason? I hate it! Why do I have to be like this? I lost someone important to me because of work. We don't live in different worlds. But somehow, I understood what she was saying. She wanted me to be successful and she also wanted to be successful. It means, that she treats love as a trouble. Since I love her, I should respect what she wants. I should follow what she think is right. And with this, we'll meet again. just like she said, "mata, ne?" We will see each other again.



I love you; I call your name repeatedly.
My heart still can't understand. T
he word "goodbye" was repeated many times.
Even though it marks the end, I can't forget you.


"Good Job, Arioka-kun!" The director told him. "Arigato gozaimasu!" Daiki replied." are are! The gloomy Daiki became blooming Daiki! What's up?" Yuto asked. "Deen wanted me to do my best, so I just did my best. :D" Daiki answered. He was lively and energetic after he realized what Deen wanted him to do. He got more projects in the show business, recieved a lot of awards and all. He also got more popular than Yamada Ryosuke, who used to be the most popular member of the group.
After work, his assistant handed his phone, "arioka-san, you have a phone call" "Who is it?" He asked "From the philippines, I heard." His assistant answered. When he heard the word Philippines, he suddenly grabbed his phone, "Moshi moshi(hello)?" "Are you Daiki Arioka?" the voice asked "Hai. I am. And you are?" Daiki said. " I am Deen's mom." "Oh. hello, where's deen?" He asked. He was very excited to hear Deen's voice again "It's about Deen, actually... Last month, she was diagnosed of this illness. We never expected it to happen" then her mom started to cry. "what happened to her? She survived, right? RIGHT?" Daiki was already starting to cry. He already knew what they were going to say when he heard her cry. " S-she wasn't able to survive. She told me to call you before her surgery started."


+Daiki's POV+
this is not fair. She told me that we'll see again. But where is she now? She left me. I'm all alone now. I don't know what to do. I'm frozen. I feel so stupid. Why did she have to go? I did my best for her. I did what she wanted me to do to do my best in everything I do. I did my best so that we'll meet each other again but now? Kami-sama. Why did you take her away from me? She was my only hope. Now, how will I live without her.



Even though I am aware that we won't be able to meet again,
I am still searching for the reason.
The word "goodbye" was repeated many times.
I can't deceive my heart.


Daiki had no choice but to forget about her. It was the best option. He really had to move on what happened. He tried not to remember any single moment with her. He tried to love other girls, but he can't. He went into a lot of relationships after Deen, but still, they can't replace deen so he dumped him. He was already called "The dangerous loverboy" but he only wanted someone to replace deen.
One day, he was in a rooftop of a building, not knowing what to do. he was so confused. He decided to jump off the building. "If Deen's gone, I better off be gone too." He told himself. He stepped on the edge of the rooftop. When he was about to jump, a flock of birds suddenly appeared and it made him fall back. He suddenly realized that Deen was telling him not to do it. "hai.." Daiki said and cried.


+Deen's POV+
Daiki, you have to live on. Be the best for me. It would be much better if you continue to live on and live your dream. It's important for you to live. Live for me. You're very lucky to be still here on this world. You're really blessed, so please, don't let yourself and everyone around you to suffer. Please understand. I want you to live your dream. I believe that we would still meet, someday, somehow. We just have to wait and do our best in the remaining time. I know you love me and I love you, but this is for your own good. koishukute.


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>>honto ni, GOMEN NASAI! deen-chan! I didn't want you to die. But the last 2 stanza made me kill you. sorry! I didn't mean to! :((

>>the underlined sentence in deen's POV means i strongly disagree with that. Inoo and I can still be together. Wait for me, Inoo. I will go to Japan. <3 :)) haha! XD just kidding<<

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Wow! sugoii! Nice one Jally-chan!
Very Touching! Hope you write more! ^^

P.S. : I'm sure Deen-chan will like it!
Hope you can go to Japan!
I disagree to that too.
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awww, this ishh so sad TT^TT
but its a cute story
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hahaha .. this is good jally - chan! .. whew! .. haha .. it was loong! .. XD
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HUHUHUHUHUHUHUHUHUHUHUHUHUHUHUHUHU!!!!!!!!!! =((
it... it... made me really cry!!!!! promise!! huhuhuhu UWAHUHUHUHU!!!!
JALLY CHAN THANKS!! HUHUHUHUHU!!!!!!!
Thanks really! huhuhu!!!

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awwww...sugoi jally-chan..it's so good! waaa so sad too!! ur sucha great writer just like deen-chan!! good job!! really loev it!!
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omg I LOVE FICS.
esp urs JALLYCHAN!
uwaaaaaaa.this is sooo sad.
please write more ficsss!!!hehe
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aww really nice ~!
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how nice. it's very touching. love it. ^^
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Asuka-chan_12 wrote:

Wow! sugoii! Nice one Jally-chan!
Very Touching! Hope you write more! ^^

P.S. : I'm sure Deen-chan will like it!
Hope you can go to Japan!
I disagree to that too.


aww... yeay! thanks a lot, asuka-chan! and YES, I hope I can go to Japan. and I'll prove it to you! XD


mochicocoa wrote:

awww, this ishh so sad TT^TT
but its a cute story :D


aww.. yay! thanks!


emkyuu wrote:

hahaha .. this is good jally - chan! .. whew! .. haha .. it was loong! .. XD


wahahahaha! XD Gomen ne, if it was long. I tried to make it shorter but I can't. XD


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HUHUHUHUHUHUHUHUHUHUHUHUHUHUHUHUHU!!!!!!!!!! =((
it... it... made me really cry!!!!! promise!! huhuhuhu UWAHUHUHUHU!!!!
JALLY CHAN THANKS!! HUHUHUHUHU!!!!!!!
Thanks really! huhuhu!!!



:tears: Waaaa! Dou itashimashite! XD
Sorry if I killed you. The song told me to kill you. XD


Mai-Lee wrote:

awwww...sugoi jally-chan..it's so good! waaa so sad too!! ur sucha great writer just like deen-chan!! good job!! really loev it!!


aww. Thanks mai-chaan! I know, it's so sad. I tried to make it a happy oneshot but the song is an emo song. :(


yamachan-kakkoi wrote:

omg I LOVE FICS.
esp urs JALLYCHAN!
uwaaaaaaa.this is sooo sad.
please write more ficsss!!!hehe


aww.. :((( thanks! lols. I'll try to do more fics. haha!


lialialia wrote:

aww really nice ~! :D


yay! thanks! :D


bowling1991 wrote:

how nice. it's very touching. love it. ^^


weeee! the-chan! my senpai in writing oneshot! hahahaha! XD >> I just made that up. anyway, thanks, senpai! XD
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hahaha the song told you to kill me?!!!
hahahaha
thx again!!
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yes! XD haha! the song told me to kill you. the song talked to me. XD haha!
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ne.. just wondering whats Koishikute? hahahahah!!
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ne.. just wondering whats Koishikute? hahahahah!!


koishikute is another word for I love you. haha!
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another sad oneshot . deen-chan is now *sobs* she's *sobs* hahaha .
okay this one is so touching ! stop making a oneshot ! u are making me cry all the time !
haha jokejoke . tears are nothing compared to this daiki !!!!!!!!!! u are so lucky being love by everyone here , *sigh* im jealous u know . hahaha XD
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