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Posted 11/10/08
I Would, My Most Important.

I would do anything.
Give up the moon; reach up to the stars,
Let go of my dreams.
I would do anything to make them smile.
A soft curve to each of their lips,
Clutching their stomachs and arching their backs;
I would do anything to make them smile again.
To let them feel that happy.
I would do anything in the world.
Is that really such a crime?
To want the most important people in your life to smile?

I would be anything.
The most glamorous and ladylike; the most astonishing,
The cruelest in the world.
I would be anything to make them see truth.
A surprising shock in their eyes,
A long silence, hugs and tears and laughter and peace;
I would be anything to make them see truth.
To let them live purely.
I would be anything in the world.
Is that really such a crime?
To want the most important people in your life to know?

I would create anything,
The greatest castle, the most advanced technology,
The deepest darkest hole.
I would create anything to make them see change.
Astonished glances and tiring eyes,
While their working brains absorb everything outside of sense;
I would create anything to make them see change.
To let them have the knowledge.
I would create anything in the world.
Is that really such a crime?
To want the most important people in your life to see change?

Little by little, everything will be ok.
Just one more smile, one more pure night, one more difference.
Then, I promise you, my most important,
The world will be a better place.
So I can finally rest my head and watch you from the depths of my heart.
I would do it all.
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Posted 11/10/08
A lot of feeling, so nice and warm like the embrace from someone you love is written directly into it.

Abstract and yet so clear, so sincere.


This comes from the heart, something I gave up years ago >.<
Posted 11/12/08
I feel so touched by this piece of writing...Very genuine indeed...

Keep up the good work....
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Posted 11/14/08

atatakakunai wrote:

A lot of feeling, so nice and warm like the embrace from someone you love is written directly into it.

Abstract and yet so clear, so sincere.


This comes from the heart, something I gave up years ago >.<


Thank u so much i'm glad u liked it. ^_^
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Posted 11/14/08

sasukesrg wrote:

I feel so touched by this piece of writing...Very genuine indeed...

Keep up the good work....


Thanks! I loved writing it caus i thought it really did express wat i'd do 4 my friends ... A little corny but true all the same.
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