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hehe... I made a little story with Chunnie, not with TOP~~ the story of me and my bro 
Spoiler Alert! Click to show or hide It was ten years ago when I found out that my mom died... I was feeling terrible, I didn't want to see anyone, to talk to anyone... My dad tried to make me go to school again, but I was only 13 that time, I was spoiled and I thought my world ended when my mom left me... But then, after two years, my dad told me he was about to marry another woman. And my world was destroyed again~ I didn't want to meet that woman, not her and not even her kids... One night, I met my new "family": she was trying to make me like her and her kids were looking at me like I was insane or something. But the older one, he was trying to make me pay attention to his actions. He was acting nice with my father and I realized then that I won't solve anything with my selfish attitude. So I started to play the game and acted nice in front of them... it was the first time when I saw my dad happy again. Since that day, my new family moved into our house and we lived together. But it wasn't enough, I felt that something was missing, that someone was out there alone, without us. One night, my older "brother" came into my room.
-Are you crying? He said.
-No, I'm not, get out!
-I won't... tell me, what's wrong? We're a family now, we need to support each other...
-Yoochun, get out!
But he didn't. He came to me and hugged me tight, patting my hair.
-It's ok, you can cry... I know it's hard to loose a mother... I lost my father, but it feels the same.
-How did he die?
-He didn't... he left...
And so we continued to talk the whole night and I began to trust him more and more... and he became the brother I never had. He helped me whenever I needed and he was there for me when I wanted someone to listen to me. In fact, the thing that now I have two brothers is the best thing ever happened to me... even the price was to loose my mom...
-So? How was your day, sis?
-It was good, but I had some problems at high school.
-I will solve them.
-No, Chun, thanks! But anyway... I love you, bro!
-I love you too, sis!
And so I came to like my new family. My dad was happy to hear that I'm ok with them and I couldn't be more happy than now...
hahah! that was cute! ^____^
I guess your are my sister-in-law? lol xPPPP
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alex1990 wrote:
hehe... I made a little story with Chunnie, not with TOP~~ the story of me and my bro
Spoiler Alert! Click to show or hide It was ten years ago when I found out that my mom died... I was feeling terrible, I didn't want to see anyone, to talk to anyone... My dad tried to make me go to school again, but I was only 13 that time, I was spoiled and I thought my world ended when my mom left me... But then, after two years, my dad told me he was about to marry another woman. And my world was destroyed again~ I didn't want to meet that woman, not her and not even her kids... One night, I met my new "family": she was trying to make me like her and her kids were looking at me like I was insane or something. But the older one, he was trying to make me pay attention to his actions. He was acting nice with my father and I realized then that I won't solve anything with my selfish attitude. So I started to play the game and acted nice in front of them... it was the first time when I saw my dad happy again. Since that day, my new family moved into our house and we lived together. But it wasn't enough, I felt that something was missing, that someone was out there alone, without us. One night, my older "brother" came into my room.
-Are you crying? He said.
-No, I'm not, get out!
-I won't... tell me, what's wrong? We're a family now, we need to support each other...
-Yoochun, get out!
But he didn't. He came to me and hugged me tight, patting my hair.
-It's ok, you can cry... I know it's hard to loose a mother... I lost my father, but it feels the same.
-How did he die?
-He didn't... he left...
And so we continued to talk the whole night and I began to trust him more and more... and he became the brother I never had. He helped me whenever I needed and he was there for me when I wanted someone to listen to me. In fact, the thing that now I have two brothers is the best thing ever happened to me... even the price was to loose my mom...
-So? How was your day, sis?
-It was good, but I had some problems at high school.
-I will solve them.
-No, Chun, thanks! But anyway... I love you, bro!
-I love you too, sis!
And so I came to like my new family. My dad was happy to hear that I'm ok with them and I couldn't be more happy than now...
hahah! that was cute! ^____^
I guess your are my sister-in-law? lol xPPPP
Well... sort of... one of my best friends says she's Chunnie's wife too so... I'll have two sisters-in-law xD
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alex1990 wrote:
Sugar1992 wrote:
alex1990 wrote:
hehe... I made a little story with Chunnie, not with TOP~~ the story of me and my bro
Spoiler Alert! Click to show or hide It was ten years ago when I found out that my mom died... I was feeling terrible, I didn't want to see anyone, to talk to anyone... My dad tried to make me go to school again, but I was only 13 that time, I was spoiled and I thought my world ended when my mom left me... But then, after two years, my dad told me he was about to marry another woman. And my world was destroyed again~ I didn't want to meet that woman, not her and not even her kids... One night, I met my new "family": she was trying to make me like her and her kids were looking at me like I was insane or something. But the older one, he was trying to make me pay attention to his actions. He was acting nice with my father and I realized then that I won't solve anything with my selfish attitude. So I started to play the game and acted nice in front of them... it was the first time when I saw my dad happy again. Since that day, my new family moved into our house and we lived together. But it wasn't enough, I felt that something was missing, that someone was out there alone, without us. One night, my older "brother" came into my room.
-Are you crying? He said.
-No, I'm not, get out!
-I won't... tell me, what's wrong? We're a family now, we need to support each other...
-Yoochun, get out!
But he didn't. He came to me and hugged me tight, patting my hair.
-It's ok, you can cry... I know it's hard to loose a mother... I lost my father, but it feels the same.
-How did he die?
-He didn't... he left...
And so we continued to talk the whole night and I began to trust him more and more... and he became the brother I never had. He helped me whenever I needed and he was there for me when I wanted someone to listen to me. In fact, the thing that now I have two brothers is the best thing ever happened to me... even the price was to loose my mom...
-So? How was your day, sis?
-It was good, but I had some problems at high school.
-I will solve them.
-No, Chun, thanks! But anyway... I love you, bro!
-I love you too, sis!
And so I came to like my new family. My dad was happy to hear that I'm ok with them and I couldn't be more happy than now...
hahah! that was cute! ^____^
I guess your are my sister-in-law? lol xPPPP
Well... sort of... one of my best friends says she's Chunnie's wife too so... I'll have two sisters-in-law xD
ROFL! Its like Polygamy. lol xP
Now. i understand why they do it. lol.
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alex1990 wrote:
hehe... I made a little story with Chunnie, not with TOP~~ the story of me and my bro
Spoiler Alert! Click to show or hide It was ten years ago when I found out that my mom died... I was feeling terrible, I didn't want to see anyone, to talk to anyone... My dad tried to make me go to school again, but I was only 13 that time, I was spoiled and I thought my world ended when my mom left me... But then, after two years, my dad told me he was about to marry another woman. And my world was destroyed again~ I didn't want to meet that woman, not her and not even her kids... One night, I met my new "family": she was trying to make me like her and her kids were looking at me like I was insane or something. But the older one, he was trying to make me pay attention to his actions. He was acting nice with my father and I realized then that I won't solve anything with my selfish attitude. So I started to play the game and acted nice in front of them... it was the first time when I saw my dad happy again. Since that day, my new family moved into our house and we lived together. But it wasn't enough, I felt that something was missing, that someone was out there alone, without us. One night, my older "brother" came into my room.
-Are you crying? He said.
-No, I'm not, get out!
-I won't... tell me, what's wrong? We're a family now, we need to support each other...
-Yoochun, get out!
But he didn't. He came to me and hugged me tight, patting my hair.
-It's ok, you can cry... I know it's hard to loose a mother... I lost my father, but it feels the same.
-How did he die?
-He didn't... he left...
And so we continued to talk the whole night and I began to trust him more and more... and he became the brother I never had. He helped me whenever I needed and he was there for me when I wanted someone to listen to me. In fact, the thing that now I have two brothers is the best thing ever happened to me... even the price was to loose my mom...
-So? How was your day, sis?
-It was good, but I had some problems at high school.
-I will solve them.
-No, Chun, thanks! But anyway... I love you, bro!
-I love you too, sis!
And so I came to like my new family. My dad was happy to hear that I'm ok with them and I couldn't be more happy than now...
hahah! that was cute! ^____^
I guess your are my sister-in-law? lol xPPPP
Well... sort of... one of my best friends says she's Chunnie's wife too so... I'll have two sisters-in-law xD
Now. i understand why they do it. lol.
Haha, well I guess it's allowed for him to be polygamist since half of the planet says they're Chun's wife xD
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Sugar1992 wrote:
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Sugar1992 wrote:
alex1990 wrote:
hehe... I made a little story with Chunnie, not with TOP~~ the story of me and my bro
Spoiler Alert! Click to show or hide It was ten years ago when I found out that my mom died... I was feeling terrible, I didn't want to see anyone, to talk to anyone... My dad tried to make me go to school again, but I was only 13 that time, I was spoiled and I thought my world ended when my mom left me... But then, after two years, my dad told me he was about to marry another woman. And my world was destroyed again~ I didn't want to meet that woman, not her and not even her kids... One night, I met my new "family": she was trying to make me like her and her kids were looking at me like I was insane or something. But the older one, he was trying to make me pay attention to his actions. He was acting nice with my father and I realized then that I won't solve anything with my selfish attitude. So I started to play the game and acted nice in front of them... it was the first time when I saw my dad happy again. Since that day, my new family moved into our house and we lived together. But it wasn't enough, I felt that something was missing, that someone was out there alone, without us. One night, my older "brother" came into my room.
-Are you crying? He said.
-No, I'm not, get out!
-I won't... tell me, what's wrong? We're a family now, we need to support each other...
-Yoochun, get out!
But he didn't. He came to me and hugged me tight, patting my hair.
-It's ok, you can cry... I know it's hard to loose a mother... I lost my father, but it feels the same.
-How did he die?
-He didn't... he left...
And so we continued to talk the whole night and I began to trust him more and more... and he became the brother I never had. He helped me whenever I needed and he was there for me when I wanted someone to listen to me. In fact, the thing that now I have two brothers is the best thing ever happened to me... even the price was to loose my mom...
-So? How was your day, sis?
-It was good, but I had some problems at high school.
-I will solve them.
-No, Chun, thanks! But anyway... I love you, bro!
-I love you too, sis!
And so I came to like my new family. My dad was happy to hear that I'm ok with them and I couldn't be more happy than now...
hahah! that was cute! ^____^
I guess your are my sister-in-law? lol xPPPP
Well... sort of... one of my best friends says she's Chunnie's wife too so... I'll have two sisters-in-law xD
Now. i understand why they do it. lol.
Haha, well I guess it's allowed for him to be polygamist since half of the planet says they're Chun's wife xD
rofl. true. XP
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okay here's my story. hahaha. im in a biiter mood right now so im going to pick TOP coz im really into him nowadays!! =)
Spoiler Alert! Click to show or hide it was a friday morning when my classes are over. i entered the elevator to go down and have lunch with my friends at the foodcourt in our school. im actually alone in the elevator and i was listening to Big Bang's Haru Haru. (LMAO). suddenly it opened in the 6th floor and then out of the blue, TOP entered the elevator. he had been my crush for a long time and it was actually the first time that we are alone. it was obvious to him that i admire him and so awkwardness was in the air when suddenly the elevator stopped!!! it didn't take long for us to notice that we are stranded in a dark elevator. i am a claustrophobic and i am really scared of enclosed spaces so my knees are going weak and TOP noticed it.
he then said:
"are you okay?".
i replied:
"yeah. . . im okay. . ."
"but why are you shaking?"
"it's just that i always have the fear of enclosed spaces. . . "
he then became silent. i thought that he would think of me as a weak person so im really nervous but i can't hold my fear anymore that i bagan to cry. tears kept falling in my eyes and my visions are blurry. then i fell a sudden pull at my side and the next thing i know TOP was hugging me saying. .
"don't worry. im just here. don't be scared anymore. . . "
so i cried harder and he was hugging me tighter. i love the feel of his arms around me.
to be continued. . .
is this long? oh well. you can delete it though. hahaha. =) and you can continue the story if you want too. =)
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okay here's my story. hahaha. im in a biiter mood right now so im going to pick TOP coz im really into him nowadays!! =)
Spoiler Alert! Click to show or hide it was a friday morning when my classes are over. i entered the elevator to go down and have lunch with my friends at the foodcourt in our school. im actually alone in the elevator and i was listening to Big Bang's Haru Haru. (LMAO). suddenly it opened in the 6th floor and then out of the blue, TOP entered the elevator. he had been my crush for a long time and it was actually the first time that we are alone. it was obvious to him that i admire him and so awkwardness was in the air when suddenly the elevator stopped!!! it didn't take long for us to notice that we are stranded in a dark elevator. i am a claustrophobic and i am really scared of enclosed spaces so my knees are going weak and TOP noticed it.
he then said:
"are you okay?".
i replied:
"yeah. . . im okay. . ."
"but why are you shaking?"
"it's just that i always have the fear of enclosed spaces. . . "
he then became silent. i thought that he would think of me as a weak person so im really nervous but i can't hold my fear anymore that i bagan to cry. tears kept falling in my eyes and my visions are blurry. then i fell a sudden pull at my side and the next thing i know TOP was hugging me saying. .
"don't worry. im just here. don't be scared anymore. . . "
so i cried harder and he was hugging me tighter. i love the feel of his arms around me.
to be continued. . .
is this long? oh well. you can delete it though. hahaha. =) and you can continue the story if you want too. =)
Haha, it's not long and it's great, I'm not going to delete it I'm looking forward to see the rest of the story
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thanks lex!! LOLz i guess i have to continue it now. =)
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the continuation. . .
it was only a matter of minutes until the elevator moved again and i started to feel he don't know what to do. so i moved away from him and wiped my tears, saying, "thanks! i really appreciate it. . . " then i was looking for my hanky but he handed his to me.
"no problem. you can use my handkerchief."
and with that the elevator doors opened and he rushed outside. i was left standing in the elevator thinking "is this really happening?!".
anyways, my friends and i meet up in the foodcourt and i was debating within myself whether i will tell them about what happened in the elevator. you see, i have one tactless friend who can share the stories to anyone and she really had a big mouth. so i was confused when she suddenly burst out:
"did you see TOP today? he really was acting weird! i think something happened. i heard he's having problems with his girlfriend. . "
i can feel everyone's eyes are on me since when it comes to TOP, they know im a bit sensitive. but since what happened in the elevator is still fresh from my mind, i smiled and said:
"it's okay guys! i can handle it!"
and right at that moment TOP and his girlfriend walked past us and we caught each other's eyes.
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thanks lex!! LOLz i guess i have to continue it now. =)
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the continuation. . .
it was only a matter of minutes until the elevator moved again and i started to feel he don't know what to do. so i moved away from him and wiped my tears, saying, "thanks! i really appreciate it. . . " then i was looking for my hanky but he handed his to me.
"no problem. you can use my handkerchief."
and with that the elevator doors opened and he rushed outside. i was left standing in the elevator thinking "is this really happening?!".
anyways, my friends and i meet up in the foodcourt and i was debating within myself whether i will tell them about what happened in the elevator. you see, i have one tactless friend who can share the stories to anyone and she really had a big mouth. so i was confused when she suddenly burst out:
"did you see TOP today? he really was acting weird! i think something happened. i heard he's having problems with his girlfriend. . "
i can feel everyone's eyes are on me since when it comes to TOP, they know im a bit sensitive. but since what happened in the elevator is still fresh from my mind, i smiled and said:
"it's okay guys! i can handle it!"
and right at that moment TOP and his girlfriend walked past us and we caught each other's eyes.
I have some ideas right now....
Spoiler Alert! Click to show or hide *TOP's point of view* I glanced over to her and I felt her eyes upon me. It was a strange situation and after what happened in the elevator, I didn't know what to do or what to say. But I stopped and turned around, looking at her again.
-Are you feeling better? I asked.
Her eyes widened and she was speechless. Her friends were looking at us in a certain way and I wanted to yell at them to disappear but I couldn't.
-Um... yeah... thanks...
She blushed and looked away and I smiled. But then...
-Who is this? My girlfriend asked.
She was getting on my nerves sometimes really bad and this was one of those moments.
-Just a friend. I helped her today in the elevator.
-Oh... you helped her... that way? Or the normal way?
I sighed and looked at the table. Her friends were looking at us as their were watching a movie and all I wanted to do was to leave but I couldn't. She looked at me in a scared way.
-Um, it's not like that, she said. I am claustrophobic and...
-I don't care! Stay away from my boyfriend understood?
I got really angry, pulled her arm and left that place. My "girlfriend" will soon become my ex-girlfriend...
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corpz0714 wrote:
thanks lex!! LOLz i guess i have to continue it now. =)
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the continuation. . .
it was only a matter of minutes until the elevator moved again and i started to feel he don't know what to do. so i moved away from him and wiped my tears, saying, "thanks! i really appreciate it. . . " then i was looking for my hanky but he handed his to me.
"no problem. you can use my handkerchief."
and with that the elevator doors opened and he rushed outside. i was left standing in the elevator thinking "is this really happening?!".
anyways, my friends and i meet up in the foodcourt and i was debating within myself whether i will tell them about what happened in the elevator. you see, i have one tactless friend who can share the stories to anyone and she really had a big mouth. so i was confused when she suddenly burst out:
"did you see TOP today? he really was acting weird! i think something happened. i heard he's having problems with his girlfriend. . "
i can feel everyone's eyes are on me since when it comes to TOP, they know im a bit sensitive. but since what happened in the elevator is still fresh from my mind, i smiled and said:
"it's okay guys! i can handle it!"
and right at that moment TOP and his girlfriend walked past us and we caught each other's eyes.
I have some ideas right now....
Spoiler Alert! Click to show or hide *TOP's point of view* I glanced over to her and I felt her eyes upon me. It was a strange situation and after what happened in the elevator, I didn't know what to do or what to say. But I stopped and turned around, looking at her again.
-Are you feeling better? I asked.
Her eyes widened and she was speechless. Her friends were looking at us in a certain way and I wanted to yell at them to disappear but I couldn't.
-Um... yeah... thanks...
She blushed and looked away and I smiled. But then...
-Who is this? My girlfriend asked.
She was getting on my nerves sometimes really bad and this was one of those moments.
-Just a friend. I helped her today in the elevator.
-Oh... you helped her... that way? Or the normal way?
I sighed and looked at the table. Her friends were looking at us as their were watching a movie and all I wanted to do was to leave but I couldn't. She looked at me in a scared way.
-Um, it's not like that, she said. I am claustrophobic and...
-I don't care! Stay away from my boyfriend understood?
I got really angry, pulled her arm and left that place. My "girlfriend" will soon become my ex-girlfriend...
COOL!!! LOLz nice one!! im actually enjoying it. hahaha. =)
im actually putting the continuation of this story in my page. i entitled it "The Hidden Love". LOLz you can see it ther lex. =)
after i started this story i could not help but to continue it. =)
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lol. very good. I'm waiting for more? lol xPPPPPPPP
kekeke.
Man. I'd be weak seeing TOP. haha
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lol. very good. I'm waiting for more? lol xPPPPPPPP
kekeke.
Man. I'd be weak seeing TOP. haha
LOLz hey!! thanks. oh and you can check my profile's page though but i will also post here if you want. LOLz i decided to turn this "mini" story into a fic. wahahaha. =)
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My head started to spin.
I've always hated first days of school.
Today wasn't going to be any different especially since its High School.
My pencil fell out of my hands and smacked onto the desk.
I looked at the girl next to me and saw that she was looking at me.
I just gave a dorkily awkward smile and grabbed my pencil and looked straight at the board trying to tune back into the lesson.
I found myself dazing off again... thinking about what my mom was going to make for dinner... grilled beef and chicken... I licked my lips. Then i remembered i was in class and came back to reality.
It was already half way into class, when someone noisily slammed the door open and walked calmly in like nothing happened.
Everyone was surprised and in shock wanting to see who would appear.
He walked in and said, "What are you looking at?"
TO Be Continued... xP [If someone wants they can continue... or not. or write a new one. xP]
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Spoiler Alert! Click to show or hide My head started to spin.
I've always hated first days of school.
Today wasn't going to be any different especially since its High School.
My pencil fell out of my hands and smacked onto the desk.
I looked at the girl next to me and saw that she was looking at me.
I just gave a dorkily awkward smile and grabbed my pencil and looked straight at the board trying to tune back into the lesson.
I found myself dazing off again... thinking about what my mom was going to make for dinner... grilled beef and chicken... I licked my lips. Then i remembered i was in class and came back to reality.
It was already half way into class, when someone noisily slammed the door open and walked calmly in like nothing happened.
Everyone was surprised and in shock wanting to see who would appear.
He walked in and said, "What are you looking at?"
TO Be Continued... xP [If someone wants they can continue... or not. or write a new one. xP]
Nice~~ I'd rather want to see what happens next than to continue it myself xD
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Nice~~ I'd rather want to see what happens next than to continue it myself xD
Haha.
I honestly don't have any inspiration right now. xP
Maybe one day. I will figure out who the guy is. keke.
[Or someone else. *winks*] >.<
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