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I always read stories in Quizilla and I really like how they wrote it. I will write this one-shot by using Quizilla format.Hope all of you enjoy it.



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Name:Okari Tomoyi
Age:16 years old
Crush:Takaki Yuya


February 14, 10.30p.m
At the Park

“So, why are you taking me to the park? I though you wanna take me to somewhere special,” you asked.
“Of course. I wanna bring you to the most special place, that is, in my heart,”replied Takaki. You and Takaki walked together in the quiet and kinda dark park.
The darkness and the coldness make you shiver but luckily Takaki put his arm around you.
“What do you mean by taking me into your heart?”You asked.
“You know,Tomoyi,you are the most beautiful girl that I had ever met. You so sweet and loyal too,”said Takaki. He kissed your hand gently.It somehow make you feel uneasy but just let it and you make a fake smile since you want him to feel that you are comfortable to be with him.
“Takaki-kun,of course I loyal to you.I love you so much and I never meet such a guy like you,” you said.
“Honto ni?”Asked Takaki.
“Hai!”You replied with a smile.
“Are you ready to be in my heart?”Asked Takaki.
“Eh?I don’t understand,”You said with a confuse face.
“You will understand later. Let sit over there,”said Takaki. You just nodded your head. Both of you walked toward the bench and sat on it.
“Tomoyi,look over there,”said Takaki while pointed toward the sky. You looked at the sky.
“WOW!!So, beautiful,”you said. You kept staring the stars without notice that Takaki was watching you.
“Yes,you are,” whispered Takaki in your ears. Suddenly, you felt something at your neck and kept pushing you down so you lies on the bench.It’s Takaki!
“Takaki-kun,stop it!I don’t like it,” you shouted but he kept forcing you.You tried to struggle from his embrace but he a lot stronger than you.
STOP IT!!!”You shouted.Unfortunately, the park was so dark and no one was there. You triend to kicked Takaki. You made it!But he slapped your face and tried to unbutton your blouse.Your tear rolling on your cheek and you almost gave up.
Then suddenly, a figure kicked Takaki and dragged him away from you.You sat up quickly and you saw that you were just alright.You sighed in relief but still you felt trauma with what had happened.
You saw two figures fighting in the dark. But you can’t see their face.You were too afraid to move anywhere. You could heard the punching and hitting sound. After a few minutes, you couldn’t hear any sound anymore.
You don’t know whether ‘your savior’ or Takaki that win the fight. A figure came toward you and stopped when he saw you frighten with his presence.
“I’m sorry. Are you alright,Miss?”Asked the guy, your savior.
You did not reply. The guy sighed. He threw his jacket to you and said, “Please take care of yourself. Not all human in the world are kind and no human ran from making mistake in their life. Please be careful,uruwashi no bad girl,”said the guy before he left.
You were speechless. You grabbed the jacket and wore it since you were so cold. You ran away and stopped a taxi


February 16, 9.00 a.m.
In the classroom

“Why didn’t you tell her that you were the one that save her on that night?”Asked Yamada Ryosuke, Nakajima Yuto’s bestfriend.
“I don’t know. Maybe I don’t want her to know about it,”said Yuto. He kept reading the book in his hand.But non of the word stick on his head cause he couldn’t forget about the girl that always bullied him.
“If you tell her, I’m sure that she will stop disturbing you,”said Yamada.
“Ryosuke, I don’t want her to reply at what had I done for her,I just helped her without asking any reply,”said Yuto.
“You know,Yuto, you were to naïve and kind. No wonder she always bullied you,”said Yamada. He don’t know how else to persuade Yuto to tell you the truth.
Yamada was about to open his mouth but stopped when you stood in front of them.
“Hi,Yamada!*looked at Yuto*Hi, weirdo!”You greeted them and then you walked toward your seat.
Yamada shook his head when he saw Yuto just let you call him ‘weirdo’.
Yuto still remember the reason you hate him so much.It is because of..
Flashback:
Yuto was late for his first day of school. He ran as fast as he could to reach his class. But suddenly, there were a bunch of girls walking in front of him. He tried to slow down his movement but unfortunately, he accidently knocked a girl(you) and she fell on the floor with cake on her face since she brought along a cake with her to the classroom.
“I’m so sorry,” apologized Yuto but the reply that he got was a cake being smack on his face.

End Flashback

Yuto looked at his bag. He still remembered on the day he lost it.

Flashback:

“Where is my bag?”Asked Yuto.He kept searching for his bag all around the school with the help of Yamada and finally they found his bag at the garden.It was wet. But there was no rain on that day. The only conclusion that they could make is..
“It’s her work,”said Yamada furiously. He was about to find you but Yuto stopped him.

“It’s no use,Ryosuke,”said Yuto.

End Flashback.

Yuto just sighed when he remembered everything that had happened between him and you. He don’t know why he couldn’t feel mad at you. He felt nothing when you bullied him.There just one thing that he knew. That is he wanted to protect you.


March 31, 8.00p.m.
At your house
“Tomo-chan, faster!Your friends are waiting,”shouted your mom from down stair.
“Hai.I’m coming,”you said. You looked yourself in the mirror and you make sure that everything is perfect. You love to be a perfect girl in front of the guys eyes but no one knew your bleeding heart except for that guy, your savior.
“Who is he?”You asked.You kept wondering about the guy identity.


March 31, 9.00 p.m
In the school hall
All eyes were on you as you walked into the school hall.
“Wow,you so beautiful,Tomoyi-chan,” praised your senior, Riye Hoshiro.
“Arigatou, Riye-sempai,”you said with a sweet smile.
Suddenly you heard someone started singing on the stage. You could see a few guys dance on the stage but you couldn’t see the singer’s face. The rhythm really made you feel comfortable.Suddenly, the light focus on a guy. Nakajima Yuto!Your eyes grew bigger. You never see Yuto like that. He so…so HANDSOME!


[NOTE:Blue is the lyric/Red is the translation of the lyric/purple is the situation. PLease listen to Uruwashi no bad girl by Nakajima Yuto for a better effect]

yabai yabai wakaranainda*Yuto sang while looking toward the crowd*
[Oh no!Oh no! I don’t understand!]
ijiwari ijiwari samattekunda*The girls started screaming*
[Bit by bit,bit by bit,coming nearer]
yurari yurari bokura no kage*Yuto dance and singing while full of energy*
[Swaying,Swaying within me]
ima Shoudou gamezameta yo Passion*Yuto finally found you!He look at you*
[My impulses have awoken the passion now]
wow yeah

hibiki sawagu atama no naka*Yuto stared at you from far*
[Echoing and making noise inside my head]
Merai HAATO moete irunda*Yuto touch his chest.Still looking at you*
[My heart is burning up]
karada kokoro kimi no shisen ni yarare chattenda*Yuto smirk*
[Body,heart, they’re what you looking at]

narihibiku sairen*The screaming from the girls became louder and louder.You closed your ears*
[A screaming siren]
ugokidasu Mirai*Yuto jumped down from the stage and walked toward you.You felt uncomfortable*
[The future start to move]
Hangeki no Love game*Yuto walked around you. You followed his daze*
[Love game’s counterattack]
sousa kimi ni misetsukete yaru*Yuto take your hand and took you with him to the stage*
[Yes,I will show you]
mawari mawari mawari mawari Merry Go Round*You and Yuto dancing. You still puzzled with this new looking Yuto*
[Spin,Spin,Spin,Spin, Merry-go-round]
kirari kirari kirari kirari yozora no Shining star*Yuto pulled you to ran with him out from the school hall*
[Twinkle,twinkle,twinkle,twinkle, a shining star in the night sky]
sou sa amai amai amai wana wo*You looked at Yuto grasp. Smile appeared on your face without you notice*
[Ye a sweet, sweet,sweet trap]
shibikake shikare raretari*Finally you and Yuto at the outside of the school.But not alone, you two were surrounded by the students in the school.The don’t want to miss anything*
[To catch and be caught in]
Koi wa mangekyou sa*Yuto whispered it in your ears*
[Love is a kaleidoscope]

mawari mawari mawari mawari Merry Go Round*Yuto circled around you*
[Spin,Spin,Spin,Spin, Merry-go-round]
kirari kirari kirari kirari kagayaku daiyamonda*He show the Stars in the sky and then he touch your cheek*
[Twinkle,twinkle,twinkle,twinkle, sparkling diamond]
sou sa kirei kirei kirei na hodo[/blue]*Yuto stared into your eyes and it make you blush.Yamada,who in the crowd, smiled*
[yes, beautiful,beautiful, beautifully]
ikusen no toge we kakushiteru yo*You stared back into Yuto’s eyes*
[Hiding thousand of thorns]
kimi wa uruwashi no Bad Girl*You eyes grew bigger when you finally realize that Yuto is the one who had save her on ‘that night’.Only that guy who called you like that*
[You are a beautiful bad girl]

As the song end, Yuto walked away from you. The crowd followed him except Yamada. You just stood there, staring to the ground. Yamada walked toward you and lifted your chin so you look at him.
“It’s true, Tomoyi.He is the guy that save you on ‘that night’.Are you shock to see his new look or shock because you know he is our savior?”Asked Yamada.
“I..I..I don’t know that he is the guy that save me..Oh,I’m so stupid!*your tears rolling on your cheek.You fall on your knee*..I wish I can return to the past and correct everything,”you said.
“It’s too late,Tomoyi…*Yamada looked at Yuto that were standing behind you.You don’t know about this*..Tomoyi, tell me, what you gonna do if you can turn the time backward?What you gonna tell Yuto?”Asked Yamada.
“I’m so sorry.I don’t know why I love bully and disturd you, Yuto..*Tears rolling on your cheek.You stared at the ground*..Maybe because..I want you to notice my presence in your life..Maybe because,…I love you,”you said while close your face with both of your hand, crying. Yamada already left her and Yuto alone.
“I love you too, Tomoyi,”said Yuto with a smile. You open your eyes when you heard the familiar voice.You saw Yuto kneeled in front of you.Your face turned red.
“Yuto,I..I..”Yuto closed your mouth with his right hand.
“I never mad at you.You always be in my heart,Tomoyi,”said Yuto while nudged your nose. You laugh a little. Yuto helped you up and wiped the tears on your face.
“You look beautiful tonight,”said Yuto. He stared at you deeply.
“I can say the same to you. By the way, I like your new look better.Where is your thick spectacles?”You asked.
“Hahaha..I don’t like that speck. Actually, this is my original look. The look that you always saw in the class is just a disguise,”said Yuto.
“Disguise?For what?”You asked blankly.
“I see you still didn’t noticed that I am Nakajima Yuto from a group called Hey Say JUMP,”explained Yuto.
“Hey Say JUMP?”You asked.
“Eh?You don’t know what it is?Haven’t you watch television?..Oh?Do you know what is television?”Asked Yuto. You knocked his head.
“Of course I know what is television!!I not dumb, okay?”You looked away, showing that you are mad.Yuto laughed.
“What are you laughing at?”You asked with those mad face and voice.
“You so cute when you mad,”said Yuto. You couldn't hide your laugh anymore. Yuto really made your night wonderful. Yuto stared at your face. He walked nearer to you and gave a quick kiss on your cheek. Then, he ran away.
You were shocked and stunned. Then, you realized that Yuto ran away without receive a punishment from you.
“Yuto!!!!!I gonna kick your butt!!!”You shouted while chase after him. Yuto just laugh while ran away.

Yamada, who stood beside Ati, just shook his head. He was glad that finally his best friend found his own happiness. He looked at his ‘happiness’ that stood beside him and smiled. He grabbed Ati’s hand and walked away.

The END!^_~


So, how was it??I hope all of you enjoy it!Sorry for any spelling error..Ja!!Oh,don't forget to leave a comment ne~..haha..Bye Bye!!
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This is really great~!
and you even had Takaki as a villain huh?!
*haha!* LoLz!
Yuto's pretty nice to her, but I think she better make-up for her bullying~!



So you're part and Yamada's part is always there huh?! XD!
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This is really great~!
and you even had Takaki as a villain huh?!
*haha!* LoLz!
Yuto's pretty nice to her, but I think she better make-up for her bullying~!



So you're part and Yamada's part is always there huh?! XD!


hahaha..Arigatou,shie-chan!!!^^Yup!haha..It seem i have to apologize to Takaki and his fans!!haha..XD

Shiiiii...It a secret!!!hehehe..
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wahahaah!!!! at first i was like
O_O TAKAKI DID THAT??!!!
aahahahah!!!
and then on the last
KYAA!!!! hahahahah it was chooo great!!!! ^_^
hahah i love it ^_^
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wahahaah!!!! at first i was like
O_O TAKAKI DID THAT??!!!
aahahahah!!!
and then on the last
KYAA!!!! hahahahah it was chooo great!!!! ^_^
hahah i love it ^_^


Hahaha..Sorry for making you shock!!^_~
I tried to not make it so detail..i hope Takaki won't mad at me!!!hehe..
Btw, Thanks for reading and like it!!
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ahhh ati u got yamada with u so not fair hahahaha ... ahh this is so sad . especially when yuto's singing .. . i thought takaki would be the hero in this fic but he's just a .. erghhh ... --censored- XD . yutoyuto ! i love u too !! muaahahah XD by using the word 'you' , you make my heart melting atij-chan XD
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wow, Takaki ishh so...uhm....something ^-^;; XD
kyaa~ awesomeee! luffies it:D
lol u and Yama-chan at the end XD
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Yaaaay! that was uuuuber cuuuuuuuuute!! ^_______________^!!
I love it! ^_____________^!!
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nawa94 wrote:

ahhh ati u got yamada with u so not fair hahahaha ... ahh this is so sad . especially when yuto's singing .. . i thought takaki would be the hero in this fic but he's just a .. erghhh ... --censored- XD . yutoyuto ! i love u too !! muaahahah XD by using the word 'you' , you make my heart melting atij-chan XD


hahaha..Gomen, i just wanna make Yuto as the reader's hero..hehe..
I so glad that you like it..^^Don't worry,i think Takaki is not like that..^^
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wow, Takaki ishh so...uhm....something ^-^;; XD
kyaa~ awesomeee! luffies it:D
lol u and Yama-chan at the end XD


Hahaha..Thanks for liking it!!^^Hopefully Takaki not like that!!haha..*Gomen Takaki-kun*
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Yaaaay! that was uuuuber cuuuuuuuuute!! ^_______________^!!
I love it! ^_____________^!!


Hi!!!haha..Thank you so much for reading it!!
Btw,Your name remind me of Mayonaka no shadow boy..^_~
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nawa94 wrote:

ahhh ati u got yamada with u so not fair hahahaha ... ahh this is so sad . especially when yuto's singing .. . i thought takaki would be the hero in this fic but he's just a .. erghhh ... --censored- XD . yutoyuto ! i love u too !! muaahahah XD by using the word 'you' , you make my heart melting atij-chan XD


hahaha..Gomen, i just wanna make Yuto as the reader's hero..hehe..
I so glad that you like it..^^Don't worry,i think Takaki is not like that..^^


haha thats okay . yeah i hope takaki is not like that . heee .
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Cherrilly17 wrote:

Yaaaay! that was uuuuber cuuuuuuuuute!! ^_______________^!!
I love it! ^_____________^!!


Hi!!!haha..Thank you so much for reading it!!
Btw,Your name remind me of Mayonaka no shadow boy..^_~


HAhaha! ^____^ Ppl call me cherry cuz they can't pronounce my whole name :P. LOL.
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nawa94 wrote:

ahhh ati u got yamada with u so not fair hahahaha ... ahh this is so sad . especially when yuto's singing .. . i thought takaki would be the hero in this fic but he's just a .. erghhh ... --censored- XD . yutoyuto ! i love u too !! muaahahah XD by using the word 'you' , you make my heart melting atij-chan XD


hahaha..Gomen, i just wanna make Yuto as the reader's hero..hehe..
I so glad that you like it..^^Don't worry,i think Takaki is not like that..^^


haha thats okay . yeah i hope takaki is not like that . heee .


hahaha..I hope too!!^^Btw, what can i call u??^^
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Atij wrote:


Cherrilly17 wrote:

Yaaaay! that was uuuuber cuuuuuuuuute!! ^_______________^!!
I love it! ^_____________^!!


Hi!!!haha..Thank you so much for reading it!!
Btw,Your name remind me of Mayonaka no shadow boy..^_~


HAhaha! ^____^ Ppl call me cherry cuz they can't pronounce my whole name :P. LOL.


hahaha..Souka!!^^You''re so lucky ne~
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