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hey guys ^_-
I've made a fanfic here!
I really need ur support! ur support will make my spirit better!
any request? just request what you want..^_-

and yeah..My grammar is not so good..so sorry =_=

ok..here i go...

Chapter 1

Lisa is busy packing her things up because she just had her master degree from a university at Malaysia. She want to go back to her own country,Korea. As she packing her things up, she found a box with glitters on its surface made by her own hand. She knew whats in the box. She open it up and look inside the box.

She see some letters in it and read one of them:-
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Hi Lisa!!!

How are you lately?Me and my friends are gonna make dancing out MV at Malaysia. I'm so happy that i can see you there!!! When I have my own cellphone number at Malaysia, I'll call you!! All you have to do is just wait!

Your handsome Oppa XP

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She smiles after she reads the letter and she remembered when he arrived at Malaysia and call her.

*Flashback*
Ring!!!Ring!!!Ring!!!
"Hello?"(In malaysia, Lisa uses hello rather than yoboseyo)
"yoboseyo!" the voice sounded really happy.
"Hey! You really make my heart pop out from my body you know! I'm shocked when you shouted like that!" She almost slipped her cellphone off her hand.
"Oh! Sorry! I was too excited when I arrived at Malaysia.Anyway, when and where can I see you?"
"I will tell you when and where but you have to answer me first. How did you get my number?"
"Oh, haha! You already forgot? that is unlike you at all! You gave me your phone number in our last letter!"
"Oh, sorry!!! I totally forgot about that. Meet me at Berjaya Time Square tomorrow night and don't be late!"
"Alright madam! I'll be on time so you wouldn't fire me, Lisa!"
"Thanks, Heechul."

The conversation ended and Lisa put back her cellphone on her table. She changed her dress to her pajamas and went to sleep.

The next morning she woke up and she went to her university. Her schedule was fully booked until lunch. While she was eating lunch, she heard a group of annoying girls was screaming like hell. Its Heechul!!! Its Heechul!!!

What is he doing right here? He already knew he couldn't come here because there are many papparazis here. It would make me have lots of enemies. Why is he here??? I'm dying right now!Help me! Help me!

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aahh!!! so sorry if its boring! I'll try my best!
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omo! you post it here!!!! congrats!!!! i'll be waiting for our posts!!!!
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oh,i like your fanfic.i will be support u.^_^
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michireicute wrote:

omo! you post it here!!!! congrats!!!! i'll be waiting for our posts!!!!


thanks michi!!!


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oh,i like your fanfic.i will be support u.^_^


thanks 4 ur support!
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Chapter 2

What is he doing right here? He already knew he couldn't come here because there are many papparazis here. It would make me have lots of enemies. Why is he here??? I'm dying right now!Help me! Help me!

"Hey! Nice weather!"(Heechul can't speak korean in malaysia so he uses english)
"Its raining.. do you like raining? oh! Heechul likes raining! Now i know more about my lovely Heechul!" the girls were really annoying!
"You are so gorgeous~"Heechul said as he puts his hand at one of the girls chin.

The girls was like a statue in front of Heechul with their mouth drooling. Heechul came directly to Lisa after he saw Lisa at the corner of the hall. Lisa saw Heechul came to her direction so she pretended that she didn't knew him.

"Hey Lisa!" Heechul calls her when he is front of her.
"Who are you?" Lisa still pretends and make weird face like she didn't know him.
Heechul doesn't get it why Lisa acting like that.
"You don't know me? Oh, come one! Its me Heechul!" He shouted so loud and make everyone stare at them.
"Hey, not so loud! I will be in danger if everyone knows about us." she whisper to him.
"Oh, sorry.. I kinda forgot about that. Now I know why you act like you didn't know me. At first I thought its because i was getting more handsome and you didn't know me...hehe."
oh, shut up! you always feel good about yourself! Anyway, why are you here? I didn't see any of your friends here.. aren't we gonna meet tonight?"
"Actually, I came here alone and tonight my schedule is fully booked. So I want to spend my time today with you after lunch."
"Why now? Can't we spend our time another day?" Lisa disagree.
"Today is so special. I really want to spend my time with you..ALONE..."
"Special?Why? Is there anything today?"

Heechul did not answer and just grab her hand and take her to Berjaya Time Square. Lisa was still thinking about the special thing that Heechul said about. When they arrived at Berjaya Time Square , Heechul take her to the roller coaster. Lisa was afraid to step her foot inisde the roller coaster. She never ride it before. "Don't be afraid my dear." Heechul said as he offers his hand to Lisa. She takes his hand and step into the roller coaster slowly.

"Are you having fun just now?" Heechul asked her and buy some fruit juice for them both.
"Yes! absolutely! Its kinda scary at first but it was nothing after that." Lisa said proudly.
"Oh yeah? You haven't try yet at United Kingdom. Its scarier than here. I bet you are gonna pee when you ride it."

They both laughed so hard.

"Do you know why I said today is special?" Heechul asked her just want to know what will she respond.
"No, Why?"
"You don't remember? I'm very sad!" Heechul acts likes he was crying and put his hand on his face.
"Huh?" Lisa tried to think why is so special and.."Oh! ITS YOUR BIRTHDAY!!!! sorry!!! i didn't remember! I was so busy until i forgot about it! sorry! I'll buy you a cake right now.. Lets go!" Lisa tries to persuade him.
"Ok! but don't you eva forgot about it again!"
"OK!"

and They eat cake together.
*End of Flashback*

Ring!!!Ring!!!Ring!!!
Her cellphone rings and wake her up from her day dream.

"Hello?"
"Yoboseyo! Hey, its me, Aliah!"
"Oh, the legendary girlfriend of KiBum!" jokes So Hee.
"Haha... I"m with Kibummie right now but I didn't turn the loudspeaker on so don't worry and yeah Heechul is here too with leeteuk."
Why is he there? Where are you guys going to? I don't want him to know that I'm gonna be back at Seoul."
"Why do you hate him so much? Just forgive him already. Its not like he's doing it on purpose."
Please, I don't want to talk about it. My heart hurts when I remembered it."
"Oh. come on! You already know him for years. You have gone to Malaysia for 6 years. You are 24 right now! You know him better!"
"Stop it! I'm not in the mood right now! Can we talk another time? I have to pack my things up as soon as possible. I'll meet you at Seoul this Friday ok?"
"Oh, alright! Goodbye then." Aliah hangs up the phone.

Lisa puts back all the letter in the box and start packing up. Her heart hurts a lot when she remembered the past. Aliah was right. I already know him for years but I can't forgive him like I never know anything about him. Why do I make such a big fuss about it?Why?
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"The girls was like a statue in front of Heechul with their mouth drooling'haha.it's funny!
"At first I thought its because i was getting more handsome and you didn't know me...hehe."==>yes,heechul is always..
"Lisa puts back all the letter in the box and start packing up. Her heart hurts a lot when she remembered the past. Aliah was right. I already know him for years but I can't forgive him like I never know anything about him. Why do I make such a big fuss about it?Why?"==>this make me so curious
excellent!i love this part.^_^!it's interesting.i'm so thrilling to wait the next part.^_^.
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WADAH...i'm the new viewer here...
i'm a kipas susah mati of hee chul...
can u put my name in your fan fic...
please....i wanna be her gf (if u dont mind)
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springhorse wrote:

"The girls was like a statue in front of Heechul with their mouth drooling'haha.it's funny!
"At first I thought its because i was getting more handsome and you didn't know me...hehe."==>yes,heechul is always..
"Lisa puts back all the letter in the box and start packing up. Her heart hurts a lot when she remembered the past. Aliah was right. I already know him for years but I can't forgive him like I never know anything about him. Why do I make such a big fuss about it?Why?"==>this make me so curious
excellent!i love this part.^_^!it's interesting.i'm so thrilling to wait the next part.^_^.


yeah! heechul is always like that! haha! thanks 4 reading!



na3asha_loly wrote:

WADAH...i'm the new viewer here...
i'm a kipas susah mati of hee chul...
can u put my name in your fan fic...
please....i wanna be her gf (if u dont mind)


oh..thanks!
hmm...actually Lisa is my friend..I just guilty for some reason.. I suprised her by putting her name..hehehe
I will make another fanfic of heechul and i promise i will put your name there! is that ok?
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springhorse wrote:

"The girls was like a statue in front of Heechul with their mouth drooling'haha.it's funny!
"At first I thought its because i was getting more handsome and you didn't know me...hehe."==>yes,heechul is always..
"Lisa puts back all the letter in the box and start packing up. Her heart hurts a lot when she remembered the past. Aliah was right. I already know him for years but I can't forgive him like I never know anything about him. Why do I make such a big fuss about it?Why?"==>this make me so curious
excellent!i love this part.^_^!it's interesting.i'm so thrilling to wait the next part.^_^.


yeah! heechul is always like that! haha! thanks 4 reading!



na3asha_loly wrote:

WADAH...i'm the new viewer here...
i'm a kipas susah mati of hee chul...
can u put my name in your fan fic...
please....i wanna be her gf (if u dont mind)


oh..thanks!
hmm...actually Lisa is my friend..I just guilty for some reason.. I suprised her by putting her name..hehehe
I will make another fanfic of heechul and i promise i will put your name there! is that ok?






i'm a little bit sad...but it's ok..really u wanna put my name in ur next fan fic....
thanks a lot....
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HI.. im a new reader..
your fanfics are nice too..
ah.. can you put my name too?
donghae gf?
if you dont mind...
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Chapter 3

Lisa finally arrived at Seoul airport in the evening. She is really excited to see her parents at home. She lives with her parents since she was little and she plans to move out into her own place when she've started working.

She stands outside of her house. She rings the bell. She really missed her house and her parents so much. Her mother opens the gate and the door and greets her daughter happily. Lisa smiles at her mother and hugs her very tightly.

"Hi Sweetie!Its been 6 years and now you've come come back!"
"I missed you so much mom! By the way, where is dad?Lisa kissed her mother on the cheek.
"I missed you too! He has gone to work. He will be at home tonight. By the way, where is he?You used to be with him all the time."Her mom asked because she can't see Heechul anywhere.
"He is currently working right now. His schedules are fully booked so he can't be with me right now." Lisa lied to her mother. I wonder what is he doing right now.Sorry mom..I didn't mean to lie to you Its just we aren't in a good situation right now.
"Ok, sweetie go get some rest. You looked very tired. I'll prepare something to eat."
"Its ok mom. I've already eat in the airplane. I want to go to sleep right now. I'm meeting with my friends tomorrow. Tell dad I missed him so much!" Lisa goes to her room and sleep.

Lisa waited Aliah for 15 minutes but she has not show up yet. Where is she? I'm wasting my time here. After 30 minutes waiting, Aliah shows up and quickly sit at a table with Lisa.

"Where have you been? I've waited for half an hour you know!"
"Sorry! I'm so sorry! Heechul wants to know who I'm meeting with and he wants to follow me. Good thing my Kibum was there If not, I would have come here with lots of bruises on my face!" Aliah explains everything.
"Sorry for making such trouble for you just for me Anyway, how did Heechul let you off?"
"His manager called him and Kibum quickly took him to his manager."
"Pheww! I really don't wanna meet him right now. Actually, I'm cuious about something. How they didn't knew I was on the phone with you?I bet if he knew about it , he gonna take your phone from your hand."
"Oh, Haha! I'm clever you know! I told them I was talking to my cousin. Don't worry, I got things cover up.When will you gonna tell him that you are lready here? I hope you tell him as soon as possible."
"When I'm ready." Aliah didn't get to speak more beause they were being interrupted by Lisa's phone.

Ring!!!Ring!!!Ring!!!
"yoboseyo?"
"You! Why didn't you tell us that you've already came home?" the voice sounded familiar. It was Kangin and Yesung.
Kangin continued talking.
"We are outside of the restaurant.Just happen we were passing by and we saw you inside.Can we meet you inside?"
"Sure!"Kangin and Yesung went inside.
"Sorry for not telling you guys. I'm just afraid the news about me coming back here are gonna get to his knowledge."
"Yah! Don't worry! If you tell us not to tell him, we wil never tell him." Kangin and Yesung smiles.
"Thanks guys! you are the best!"Lisa was glad to hear that.
"Damn that eun hye! Make our hyung and his girlfriend fighting!" Yesung babbling to himself but everyone heard his babbling especially Lisa.
"What? Her name is eun hye? You guys know her? Tell me about her!"Lisa said as she standing up from her sit .Everyone in the restaurant stares at her.
"Hey! Sit down! Don't embarace yourself!We'll tell you about her." Kangin tries to calm her down.
"Oops! I just embarace my self! What ashame!aah!" Lisa covers her face with her hands.
"Okay, calm down. Let me tell you something about eun hye. Her name is Yoon Eun Hye. She is really crazy about Heechul. She knows about your relationships with him. When you go study at Malaysia, she use the opportunity to flirt him. Heechul still loves you though. When we went to Malaysia, without our knowledge she followed us. We were really shocked when we saw she kissed Heechul on the cheek and that time you drop your juice and ran away. Leeteuk chased you but you were so fast! Heechul doesn't know that you left him and we told him and he ran around the building trying to find you but you but he can't find you anywhere. He is so sad and he told us to come to your apartment the next day but your friend told us that you weren't there. We already have to go back to Korea so we couldn't see you anymore. Poor Heechul..great thing we celebrate his birthday when we went back to Korea..he felt better after that but not so happy."Kangin told a long story.

"I was just came back from the toilet and buy him juice but I saw him hugging her and she kissed him on the cheek. I felt really hurt so I ran away."
"Were you guys talking about me?" the voice comes from Lisa's back She didn't regconized the voice but she can see Kangin and Yesung's face shocked and pale. Aliah looked very suprised.
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HI.. im a new reader..
your fanfics are nice too..
ah.. can you put my name too?
donghae gf?
if you dont mind...


oh thanks yana!!!
yes of course!
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omg ! you posted it here ! mwahahaha. congratulations !
somehow im blushing. lols. since theres my name. hahaha
i'll always wait for the next chapter ! keep going wadah !
HWAITING ! hahaha.
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"I was just came back from the toilet and buy him juice but I saw him hugging her and she kissed him on the cheek. I felt really hurt so I ran away."==>oh,poor heechul and lisa.but i belive heechul a good person,he didn't do this with eun hye.^_^

"Were you guys talking about me?" the voice comes from Lisa's back She didn't regconized the voice but she can see Kangin and Yesung's face shocked and pale. Aliah looked very suprised."===>i think it's eun hye.^_^

oh,love it.let's fighting wadah.^_^
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yana_yunho wrote:

HI.. im a new reader..
your fanfics are nice too..
ah.. can you put my name too?
donghae gf?
if you dont mind...


Okay! I don't mind


sleeqyLisa wrote:

omg ! you posted it here ! mwahahaha. congratulations !
somehow im blushing. lols. since theres my name. hahaha
i'll always wait for the next chapter ! keep going wadah !
HWAITING ! hahaha.


yeah..I decided to post it here..
thanks lisa!


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"I was just came back from the toilet and buy him juice but I saw him hugging her and she kissed him on the cheek. I felt really hurt so I ran away."==>oh,poor heechul and lisa.but i belive heechul a good person,he didn't do this with eun hye.^_^

"Were you guys talking about me?" the voice comes from Lisa's back She didn't regconized the voice but she can see Kangin and Yesung's face shocked and pale. Aliah looked very suprised."===>i think it's eun hye.^_^

oh,love it.let's fighting wadah.^_^


yeah, he is a good person, he never betray Lisa..^_^
well, let see who is the one talking!
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