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Are we, Compatible?
By: deen22


Green = Song [Dont Matter by Akon]

Keito Okamoto
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Deen22= Extra =P


This was their story… a cute, funny, geek story of theirs. You may even question yourself. “Geek story? What’s that?” Now you will know what’s a geek story! Reading this story may make you… laugh? Ok just read this~

<Shie’s POV>
We were best friends since kids. But I became famous, and he too! But the most famous geek in our school. I can’t believe that guy! I didn’t even know why he said those! Is he nuts? We’ll he is because he’s the geekiest person in this school! He wears a very thick glass, curly hair, wears clothes that are O_O eww~


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Oh
Ohoohwooe
Oooh
Ooohhwooe

Nobody Wanna See Us Together
But It Don't Matter No
Cause I Got You Babe
Nobody Wanna See Us Together
But It Don't Matter No
Cause I Got You Babe



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<Keito’s POV>
I can’t believe I said those words to her! Huhuhu I’m so dumb! Now what will I do?


Flash Back<<<<

Keito: Shie…
Shie: what!
Keito: I like you!
Shie: eh? Are you kiddin’ me?
Keito: no I am not kidding
Shie: what will I do if people know that I’m dating a geek? Do you think its good for my image? Urgh~
Keito: but! Is that important?
Shie: O.o Duh~ yeah of course it is important! What will the people think~ a super famous girl in the school doesn’t even have a good type? Are you an idiot?
Keito: but! Aren’t we best friends?
Shie: yeah we are! But it’s only that! I thought you understand that I-AM-FAMOUS and you are a GEEK for sake!
Keito: but! I really like you! I cant live without you!
Shie: AARRGG!!! Enough with those dramatic words! I wont fell for that!


++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

Cause We Gon' Fight
Oh Yes We Gon' Fight
Believe We Gon' Fight
We Gon' Fight
Fight For Our Right To Love Yeah
Nobody Wanna See Us Together
But It Don't Matter No
Cause I Got You



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<Shie’s POV>
Well of course I felt guilty… but what can I do? What will you do if you’re famous then you’re only dating a geek? It’s impossible right? How can I possible date a person like that?

<Keito’s POV>
I thought you would understand me. I thought we were friends. Then what? Just because you’re famous you think I’m so-not-good? Well I am a geek… but! What if I change? You would like me too right? Nah~ common stories are like that. Geek changing into a handsome guy or a beautiful babe. I will not change! This is real, this is me, im exactly where I’m supposed to be now, gonna let the light shine on me!!! Mwahahahaha!


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Nobody Wanna See Us Together
Nobody Thought We'd Last Forever
I Feel I'm Hopin' And Prayin'
Things Between Us Gon' Get Better
Men Steady Comin' After You
Women Steady Comin' After Me
Seem Like Everybody Wanna Go For Self
And Don't Wanna Respect Boundaries
Tellin' You All Those Lies
Just To Get On Your Side
But I Must Admit There Was A Couple Secrets
I Held Inside
But Just Know That I Tried
To Always Apologize
And I'ma Have You First Always In My Heart
To Keep You Satisfied



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While Shie was having lunch break…

Keito: [carrying a bouquet, boxes of chocolates, even a box of I dunno] Shie!
Shie: eh! What are you doing here!!! What are those! [Low voice] hey! People are staring at me!
Keito: no! I wont go away! This… this is my love for you! [Gives all the things he was carrying]. Aishiteru!~
Crowd: Wooo!! [Applauses / tease mode]
Shie: What the heck!!!
Keito: See ya later shie ~


<Shie’s POV>
what the heck was that! He didn’t even changed at all! Well, I gotta admit that these chocolates are super yummy~ how did he knew I love chocolates? Ohh yeah we were best friends… no! no! no! I won’t definitely fall for these tricks! Eh? What’s this box? [opens the box] *saw a pink bracelet* kawaii!!! No! No! NOOO!!!! I know he’s rich but he’s still a geek for crying out loud!!!

<Keito’s POV>
Would she like it? Hahahaha im so genius! She’s my best friend! Of course I know what she likes~ I know even know her weakest point! Hahahaha! Im the super geek-genius!!


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Nobody Wanna See Us Together
But It Don't Matter No
Cause I Got You Babe
Nobody Wanna See Us Together
But It Don't Matter No
Cause I Got You Babe
Cause We Gon' Fight
Oh Yes We Gon' Fight
Believe We Gon' Fight
We Gon' Fight
Fight For Our Right To Love Yeah
Nobody Wanna See Us Together
But It Don't Matter No
Cause I Got You



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While Shie was walking in the school… she can hear some voices that are not really that good… students are gossiping about her and her geek suitor.

Students: [In a low voice] hey~ isn’t that miss famous who was confessed by Mr. Geek?
Students: yeah it’s her! Embarrassing ne? hahahaha!
Shie: [runs to her classroom] ITS IMPOSSIBLE!!!!!!
Deen: what’s the matter my dear friend?
Shie: what’s the matter??!! You were there yesterday right!! Huhuhu what will I do?!
Deen: he, is your best friend right?
Shie: yeah and so?
Deen: so… why don’t you give him a chance? Since you know each other~
Shie: it’s impossible!!! How could I ever date a geek!!!
Deen: but he’s your friend right!! Ohh come on shie~
Shie: No! No! NOOO!!!
Deen: hehe~ you’ll understand it someday~
Shie: what~
Keito: Shie~!!
Deen: here he comes~ hihihihi
Keito: shie~ what’s the matter shie?
Shie: what’s the matter? You wanna know what’s the matter??
Keito: uhh.. Yeah? [Fixes his glasses]
Shie: You’re my problem! Everybody is talking about me, dating a geek guy like you! Isn’t that embarrassing?!! You don’t know how it feels!
Keito: [Looks down] Sorry… SORRY! [ran away]
Deen: Shie~ look what you’ve done~ you made him cry! You didn’t even care about his feelings!
Shie: I’ll go home now! I can’t take it anymore!!


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Got Every Right To Wanna Leave
Got Every Right To Wanna Go
Got Every Right To Hit The Road
And Never Talk To Me No More
You Don't Even Have To Call
Even Check For Me At All
Because The Way I Been Actin' Lately
Has Been Off The Wall
Especially Toward You
Puttin' Girls Before You
And They Watchin' Everything I Been Doin'
Just To Hurt You
Most Of It Just Ain't You
Ain't True
And They Won't Show You
How Much Of A Queen You Are To Me
And Why I Love You Baby



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<Shie’s POV>
I felt guilty, that’s true… I couldn’t bare my feelings no more. I wanted to shout, scream or what ever just to let this anger or I don’t even know what it’s called out of me! I know that I hurt him. But do I have a choice?

<Keito’s POV>
I was hurt… so much! That time I didn’t know what to do. The girl that I most love hates me! My poor heart… please don’t be sad. I know that someday time will come for me!


++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

Nobody Wanna See Us Together
But It Don't Matter No
Cause I Got You Babe
Nobody Wanna See Us Together
But It Don't Matter No
Cause I Got You Babe
Cause We Gon' Fight
Oh Yes We Gon' Fight
Believe We Gon' Fight
We Gon' Fight
Fight For Our Right To Love Yeah
Nobody Wanna See Us Together
But It Don't Matter No
Cause I Got You



++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++


Shie was walking on the school… as ever, students are still gossiping about her.

Student 1: Shie-chan!
Shie: yes? [She smiled]
Student 1: you wouldn’t possibly date that geek right? Hahaha you know what I mean~
Student 2: yeah! You are so right! Shie-chan wouldn’t possibly date a geek! She’s very famous!
Deen & Keito was just looking at shie. Wondering how would she do.
Keito: she will just say that she’s not dating me… ne deen?
Deen: I don’t know…
Student 1: so I told you its not true that they are dating!
Student 2: yeah!
Shie: i… I am dating that geek! Do you guys have a problem with that?
Keito: what?!
Deen: told you~
Student 1: but would you date him? He’s a geek right?
Student 2: that man’s a geek shie chan!
Shie: He’s not a geek and He’s keito! He is my friend! And now im dating him! So back off!


Keito And Deen was stunned by what they saw to Shie.


++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

Oh Oh Oh Oh Oh
Cause I Got You
Cause I Got You
Ooooh
Cause I Got You Babe
Cause I Got You

Nobody Wanna See Us Together
But It Don't Matter No
Cause I Got You Babe
Nobody Wanna See Us Together
But It Don't Matter No
Cause I Got You Babe



++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++


<Shie’s POV>
me my self didn’t know why I said those words… maybe, I fell for him? Or I just felt pitty for him?

<Keito’s POV>
why did she said those words! I was… I felt like im in heaven! But… I know that she only feels pitty on me… I know that she dosen’t really loves me… maybe I should just go away from her… im being a burden to her. She’s always confused because of me. Maybe I really must leave….


++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

Cause We Gon' Fight
Oh Yes We Gon' Fight
Believe We Gon' Fight
We Gon' Fight
Fight For Our Right To Love Yeah



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After few weeks…

Shie: deen, its been weeks since I last saw keito.
Deen: eh~ maybe he left because he thought he was a burden to you.
Shie: what!!! No way!
Deen: ah! Or maybe she saw another girl like him also a geek then they are compatible then they ran away then-
Shie: WAAAAAAAAAA!! Enough, enough ok!! I get it ok?!
Deen: so, what are you going to do now?
Shie: I don’t knooooooow!!!!!
Deen: hey~ I thought you didn’t like him?
Shie: I don’t knooooooow!!!!! Maybe I did like him… well he’s my friend! My best friend!
Deen: out of pitty?
Shie: NOOOO WAAAAY! Maybe I should go to their house…
Deen: uwa~
Shie: hey!!!
Deen: okie okie fine!


++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

Nobody Wanna See Us Together
But It Don't Matter No
Cause I Got You
Nobody Wanna See Us Together
But It Don't Matter No
Cause I Got You Babe
Nobody Wanna See Us Together
But It Don't Matter No
Cause I Got You Babe



++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++


Shie Went to Keito’s House to look for him……

Shie: excuse me… aunt Okamoto?
K’s Mom: yes? Ah! Shie-chan! Wow you’re so big now!
Shie: yes! Umm… may I see keito?
K’s mom: umm… shie-chan, he’s not in the house today… he wanted me to give this letter to you.
Shie: thanks! Umm.. bye!
K’s Mom: bye!


-Out side-

Shie: letter huh~ let see..

Letter:
dear shie, sorry making you troubled at school. I really love you. But I know that you wont love me because im only a geek and im not compatible to you. Today, I’ll be riding the train, im leaving and going to our province to study there. Sorry for not saying anything. But I guess this is ust the right way. You wouldn’t like me anyway right? So… I guess this is good bye my dear shie…. I love you~
-Keito-

Shie: [tears starts to run down] why! Your not a burden to me! [runs to the train station to see if keito’s still there]

[Cause We Gon' Fight]
Shie: wait for me! Keito! Wait! Keito! [tears falling down to her cheeks]
Keito: Shie?? Wh… what are you doing here?

[Oh Yes We Gon' Fight]
Shie: why will you leave me! Don’t go!
[Believe We Gon' Fight]
Keito: but you don’t like me right? It’s just pittyness right? Right? [Shaking Shie]
[We Gon' Fight]
Shie: -_- can you stop shaking me? Im getting dizzy!
Keito: ohh sorry~
Shie: ok… any way… I don’t hate you! And I don’t feel pitty for you! I just realize that I like you. Just the way you are! I always remembered about our friendship! Were best friends right? And we cant only become best friends! We can become… more than that… right?

[Fight For Our Right To Love Yeah]
Keito: is that true Shie? [Hugs Shie] I love you shie!
[Nobody Wanna See Us Together]
Shie: so don’t leave me ok? Don’t ever leave me!
Keito: yes! Yes I wont! But… I promise you I will change!
Shie: no~ you don’t have to change anything about you! I like you just the way you are! I accept who you are! Even if you’re a geek or the Master of all Geeks!
Keito: I love you shie!
Shie: I Love you to!

[but It Don't Matter No]

<Shie’s POV>
I didn’t knew that we would became more than friends… I didn’t even know that I’m going to like him! But at the end, I still loved him. The way he is, he dosen’t have to change~ I love him…

<Keito’s POV>
I didn’t knew that Shie would like me! I was so happy! As if im the happiest geek in the world! That girl, was my whole life. I really cant live without her. Ahh~ bad luck I didn’t have to change~ I thought im going to be a cool person now~ mwahahahaha!! Ohh well! Love is just too wonderful to creat things like this! As for that person, Shie, I love you~


[Cause I Got You]

Now, wanna know the lesson? Mwahahaha!
Well, its just that, if you love a person love him/her withought hesitation! Don’t change your mind just for a small thing! If you love a person, even if she/he’s childish, even if she/he’s a geek, a monster, or anything else, you must love him/her. Fight for him/her! So… was this story good?


Hope Ya Like it!
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waaaaa it's was great..i love it...that is so right..love them for who they are...it was uber super good!!!!
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Deen: ah! Or maybe she saw another girl like him also a geek then they are compatible then they ran away then-
hahaha XD


ouh poor keito . thats why we cant hate a person so much or in the future u might be his partner , nee .
keito is always 'mwahahahahaha' hahaha i love it when he's laughing .
good shie , she doesnt even care whether keito is a geek or not .

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This is real, this is me, im exactly where I’m supposed to be now, gonna let the light shine on me!!!


well is that the song... "this is me??" hahas...
nice fic... love it... looking forward for more....=)
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lol~ this was funny! and i luffies it ^-^~
thats rightt! love them for who they are :]]
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Kawaaaaaaaaaaaiii!!!

I accept who you are! Even if you’re a geek or the Master of all Geeks!

I love that line!!! tooo cuuuuute!! >:] Geeks are adorable
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Mai-Lee wrote:

waaaaa it's was great..i love it...that is so right..love them for who they are...it was uber super good!!!!


uwaaa thanks!!! =D


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Deen: ah! Or maybe she saw another girl like him also a geek then they are compatible then they ran away then-
hahaha XD


ouh poor keito . thats why we cant hate a person so much or in the future u might be his partner , nee .
keito is always 'mwahahahahaha' hahaha i love it when he's laughing .
good shie , she doesnt even care whether keito is a geek or not .



hahahaha !!! yeah we cnt hate them much~ but actually i bully one boy in my classmate hahahaha!!!
its just that it annoys me everytime i see him! coz he always makes me mad hahaha!


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This is real, this is me, im exactly where I’m supposed to be now, gonna let the light shine on me!!!


well is that the song... "this is me??" hahas...
nice fic... love it... looking forward for more....=)


hahah yeah!!! its that song! =D thx for reading!


mochicocoa wrote:

lol~ this was funny! and i luffies it ^-^~
thats rightt! love them for who they are :]]


awww~~ thanks mochi-chan =p


Cherrilly17 wrote:

Kawaaaaaaaaaaaiii!!!

I accept who you are! Even if you’re a geek or the Master of all Geeks!

I love that line!!! tooo cuuuuute!! >:] Geeks are adorable


hahahahaha!!!! yea they are!
i dont think their style really sucks~ hahahaha!!!
thanks!
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OMG!! ... i love this deen - chan!! .. ahahah .. one - shot that i've read with a happy ending! .. wahahahahha! ...



THUMBS UP DEEN - CHAN! .. GALING MOH! .. :d
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OMG!! ... i love this deen - chan!! .. ahahah .. one - shot that i've read with a happy ending! .. wahahahahha! ...



THUMBS UP DEEN - CHAN! .. GALING MOH! .. :d


hahaha yeah! happy ending~ hehehehe!!!
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~mou, i'm feeling so guilty about me being bad in here~!

but I was so touched because no matter what happens, I will always love him~
arigatou deen-chan!!!
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Great story!!!^_^
At first i kinda feel bad for keito but i guess love is so unpredictable!!^_~
Nice story and I love it!!^_~
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shieLdembLem wrote:

~mou, i'm feeling so guilty about me being bad in here~!

but I was so touched because no matter what happens, I will always love him~
arigatou deen-chan!!!


hahahahaha!!!! really?? awww im happi 4 u!! [hugs hugs]


Atij wrote:

Great story!!!^_^
At first i kinda feel bad for keito but i guess love is so unpredictable!!^_~
Nice story and I love it!!^_~


hahah yeps... luve is enpredictable~ and unexpected~ lol my fanfic hahahah!!
Posted 11/13/08
haha. this story is really really nice. serious, yet funny. you know what i mean right? plus the lesson is really true. haha. ^^
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uwaaaaaaa~
im addicted to oneshots!!!
LOVEIT~
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haha. this story is really really nice. serious, yet funny. you know what i mean right? plus the lesson is really true. haha. ^^


hahayeah lesson is true...
but i dont follow it LOL hahahaha!!!!


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uwaaaaaaa~
im addicted to oneshots!!!
LOVEIT~


hahaha honto charu chan?!!! kya~~~~!!
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