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waah waiting for chap 7!!!
poor them...megumi's scaring them!
but i think i'm smelling a makeover here..
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waaaaa...sugoi..takaki..he's so nice...ahah well...yeah...ahha..can't wait till next chap!! i pity megumi!! baka yamapi..you'll regret this!! ahah...
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whoaaaa hahah im too laaate!!! hahahahah!!
anyway hahaha like the evilness!!!!
uwaa my Poor Daiki!!!!
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Can't help but pity Megumi more than ever~

geez...
took the akumas so long to help her!
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sugoii ne angel-chan waiting for the next chappi(:
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really poor daiki and hika-chan wa hontoni kawaii~!! I want to more moooreee
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Thanks for reading it, Ati-chan~!!!!! <33333
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Thanks for reading it~!!!!
Haha~~to all the ppl~!!!! THANKS FOR READING IT!!!!!!!!!!
i'm really happy~~~~~~~**touched**

Chapter 07: Megumi revolution… or not?

“Ah… a peaceful morning without Hikaru’s…” Takaki was saying when they heard a ear piercing scream , “… ear piercing scream.” He ended, disappointed that the serenity was ruined so quickly.
“What is it now????” Yabu sighed as he turned towards the door, doing a silent count down, “3… 2… 1…BAM!”
Just at that exact moment, Hikaru barged in, pulling Inoo behind him and the room was flooded with their fans! Shocked, all three akumas stood up on their chairs as the girls pawed and clawed all over them, screaming and squealing with delight. “What is this!?!?!?!” Takaki hollered, “Hikaru!!!! Did you bring them in!?!?!?”
“I didn’t!!!!!” Hikaru screamed just as his bag was being robbed from him, “when they saw me and Inoo-Chan arriving in school, they just started chasing us for no reason at all!!!!! I have no idea what’s going on!!!!”
“Dai Suki!!!!!”
“We love you!!!!” they heard the girls scream and realized that the girls were all their fans.
Delighted that he has fans, Takaki pushed his hair to the back beautifully, “Well… I guess no one can resist my charm.”
“Now’s DEFINITELY NOT the time to show off your charm, Takaki-Kun!!” Arioka yelled over the commotion, “Think of a way to get us out of here!!!!!”
“Alright…. THIS IS WAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!” Hikaru exclaimed, punching his fist in the air.


“Yaotome Hikaru… Inoo Kei…” Yamaguchi sensei started, “what’s with the reformation of your school uniform?”
Yamaguchi glared at the class as they tried to stifle their laughter by covering their mouths. The two boys were not only late for class but their hair was in a mess! Besides that, their blazers had been so badly trampled on that it had the footprints of the various students that stomped on it… their blouse had been kissed by so many girls that it had so many different colors of the lipsticks on it. Hikaru then showed his tattered math text book to his sensei and said, “Sensei… that’s not the only thing that was reformed.”
Yamaguchi shook her head and pointed to their seats, “Okay… I get it now… go back to your seats.” She sighed.


“Whew…” the akumas heaved a sigh of relieve upon seeing that there were no fan-girls gathering out side their clubhouse, “finally…”
“Megumi! Come…!” they whispered, signaling for Megumi to come over and then pushing her into their clubhouse, afraid that they’ll be caught hanging out with a nerdy girl.
Opening the door for their assistants, the akumas gestured for them to come in quickly. “Okay… GHOST… here’s all of our personal make-up artists and fashion designers etcetera…” Hikaru introduced, “all of them are here only for one reason… that is to change you!”
While Hikaru, Takaki, Inoo and Daiki are busy with Megumi, Yabu had just finished cleaning up the class and was walking towards the clubhouse when he heard a commotion coming from the ladies. Curious, he stood at the entrance and watched a girl being bullied by some other girls. Grinning, he stood by the door silently and crossed his arms coolly, “this looks like fun… can I join in?” he muttered.
One of them turned around as the other two continued to drench the poor victim with water, “Who are you to care!?” she yelled as she turned around, then covering her mouth in horror when she saw that it was one of the akumas!
Tugging at her friends’ blouses, they turned around, irritated at first, then one of them dropped the running hose in horror when they saw Yabu Kota, “Akuma…” they muttered under their breath, frightened.
“Why are you stopping?” Yabu asked as he entered the washroom boldly, tucking his hands into his pockets handsomely, “Please continue… I’m still watching the show.”

“We… we…” one of them muttered.
“Suddenly speechless?” Yabu asked, “may I know what wrong has she done to deserve this?” still smiling at them as they trembled in fear, their eyes wavering for they are too scared to look at him.
“Are you going to leave by yourselves or do I have to send you an invitation?” he asked, still looking at them with a cold smile on his face that signifies danger.
“You got lucky this time!” one of them hollered to the girl before they scrambled out of the ladies.
Turning off the hose, Yabu swept some dirt of the girl’s shoulder as he asked with concern, “Are you alright?”
The girl had two low ponytails tied by the sides of her head and was looking at him with her big-round watery eyes as she shook her head timidly. Yabu extended his hand, wanting to help her up when she looked away and stood up by herself instead, refusing his aid. “What’s your name?” he asked curiously, “why are they doing this to you?”
“Sakurai Ayame.” Ayame whimpered, still not looking at him.
Yabu lifted her chin gently as he spoke, “you have a beautiful face… don’t look down.”
Pushing his hand away she looked anxiously behind him, “what are you looking at?” Yabu asked as he turned around to see.
“Bunny.” She said and pointed towards a damp toy rabbit about the size of a human baby, lying on the wet floor.
Yabu went over and picked it up for her when she snatched it from him and hugged it tightly like a little girl would, “Don’t worry. I don’t want it… I’m just picking it up for you.” Yabu explained and looked at the girl kindly but the girl took off before he could say anything else.
“Chotto Matte! Where’re you going!?” he hollered after her as he watched her disappear down the stairs, “Sakurai Ayame…” he muttered under his breath, “… interesting.” He remarked as he smiled to himself and continued walking to the clubhouse.


“Sorry I’m late… was busy with some stuff.” Yabu apologized as he entered the room, “WHOA!!!!” he exclaimed when he noticed the gorgeous lady standing in the middle of the well-furnished room, “Who is she?”
“She’s the GHOST!!!!” Hikaru exclaimed excitedly as he sat down to admire his work of art, “aren’t you glad about the change????” he asked Megumi gaily, leaning against the backrest of his big armchair.
“Happy~” Inoo said in a sing-song voice as he sat down beside Takaki, who was sleeping on the sofa. “She’s Megumi?” Yabu asked in disbelief, staring at the gorgeous lady in front of him with curls like a little doll and brown contacts that made her big round eyes more beautiful than ever.
“Ummm…” Megumi muttered timidly, “Isn’t this skirt a bit too short…?” she asked as she tugged at the short checkered skirt that they dressed her in.

“It’s not short at all!!!” Hikaru exclaimed, “It’s FASHION!!! FASHION!!!! You get it?????”
Megumi then looked at him, deeply puzzled as she knew nothing about being fashionable. Hikaru then slapped his forehead in despair as he muttered, “Forget about it… I guess you know nothing about being fashionable.”
Yabu then examined her carefully as he tucked his hands into his pockets, “So… now that we’ve changed you…” he said, “this means that you can leave us alone right?”
Then, pointing to the door behind him, he muttered, “Get out.”
Megumi then stared at them in bewilderment as she exclaimed, “But…! But…! You have yet to teach me how to get Yamapi back!!!!!”
“I’m giving you 5 seconds…” Arioka started the countdown, “5… 4… 3…”
Megumi picked up her scattered uniform in a rush and shut the door at the count of one. Leaning against the door, she whined, “Oh no… what should I do now…?”


As the Akumas sauntered through the hallway, making their way to their clubhouse, Erika Toda stopped them in their tracks. “Chotto-matte.” She said with her arms spread out wide to prevent them from moving forward.
Yabu then smiled coldly at Erika and her clique and replied as the Akumas started to walk away, “as if we’re going to listen to you.”
“Yabu Kota-Kun… don’t you think that you’re being unfair?” Erika said as Yabu brushed past her.
Confused, the gang of Akumas turned around to look at her, “unfair?” Yabu asked, suddenly interested in what she was going to say.
“Sakurai Ayame… why did you save her? You never interfered with anything that has got to do with girls… but why… Sakurai Ayame?” Erika questioned with her arms crossed, demanding for an explanation.
Yabu replied with a smirk, “Excuse me, Erika-Chan… but… I help whomever I wish to and trample upon those I don’t like… that has always been my policy and I have no obligation what-so-ever to explain why I helped her.”
Erika was left speechless, embarrassed and boiling with rage. Stomping her foot, she muttered with gritted teeth, “Just you Akumas wait…! I’ll definitely get my revenge!”
“Oh~” Arioka suddenly realized, “So… I’m guessing that those immature tricks were played by you? Ah~ as expected of Erika Toda ne~”
“It’s a waste of time talking to her! Let’s just go...” Takaki said in an annoyed manner as he threw his bag over his shoulder and walked off.


“Geez… who exactly is that Sakurai Ayame girl that Erika-Chan was talking about anyway…?” Arioka asked as he flung his bag onto the table in their clubhouse.
“Eh!?” Hikaru exclaimed, “Yabu-Chan… you’ve got a new girlfriend already???” he asked, blinking at Yabu with his saucer-like eyes.
Yabu then rolled his eyes as he tried to explain himself, “I saw her being bullied the other day so I just helped her…”
‘Yabu-Chan is a really good guy! ^^’ Inoo remarked on his cell phone as he smiled at Yabu.
Just at that moment, there was a knock on the door, “Hikaru… DOOR!” the rest of the Akumas said in unison as Takaki pointed at the door.
Hikaru slumped his shoulders and moaned, “Why are you guys bullying me like this~!?” then, as he twisted the door knob and opened the door, he screamed and fell backwards, “WHOA~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!”
“What is it now….?” Everyone moaned and fell onto the floor almost at the same time when they saw Megumi standing at the door, “WHOA!!!!” they screamed and slapped their foreheads.
“What have you done to...YOU!?” Hikaru asked horrified that Megumi had changed back to her old self.
“Well… I sort of… like it like this.” Megumi stammered without looking at them.
Takaki was really frustrated by Megumi’s obstinate attitude towards things and went up to her, “Look… no one will like a nerd!” he hollered, “So if you don’t change yourself…”
“Yamapi does!” Megumi interrupted him, staring at him straight in the eye.
“Pardon!?” Arioka couldn’t believe his ears, “You say that… Yamapi-Kun likes nerds like you…?” he said with a smirk on his face, “you must be nuts!”
Yabu was irritated as well and he grabbed Megumi by her shoulders and shook her hardly as if he was trying to wake her up, “that was the past!” he muttered with gritted teeth, “he left you now, didn’t he! Why won’t you just snap out of your dreamland!?”
Megumi then looked away as her lips trembled and a tear slid down her cheek. She wiped it off with the back of her hand as Arioka chimed in, walking towards her, “if you don’t even want to put in the effort to change yourself… then why request help from us?”
Hikaru was infuriated and remarked, “It’s just a waste of your time and our time…”
Walking out of the clubhouse with their blood boiling, they left Megumi standing foolishly at the door of the clubhouse, staring at Inoo. Closing the door, Inoo felt dumb that he had pitied her and he stormed off after pasting a post-it note onto Megumi’s forehead, disappointed that the efforts that the Akumas had put in yesterday had went down the drain. “BAKA.” Megumi read and she yelled at Inoo, who was walking away, “who are you calling an idiot, you idiot!?!?!??!??!”


END~ (^-.-^)
“Sakurai Ayame… interesting.”
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Waaa..great ONE, angel!!XDhahaa..i really like it!!!^_^hahaha..Gambatte ne~!haha..I will try to catch up wit ur story!!!
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Atij wrote:

Waaa..great ONE, angel!!XDhahaa..i really like it!!!^_^hahaha..Gambatte ne~!haha..I will try to catch up wit ur story!!!


haha~^^ thanks for reading~!!!!><
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waa.. angel-chan~! oh gosh.. i lab it really.. lol...

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sugoii ne ! angel(:
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I think Yabu's gonna fall with that Ayame~ *wootz*

I think the akumas' effort really had gone to waste...
it's just that, they didn't help her too much with Yamapi, that's all~
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waa.. angel-chan~! oh gosh.. i lab it really.. lol...

:)

haha~ thanks for reading~!!!

i wonder... which Akuma do you like?
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sugoii ne ! angel(:


haha~ thanks for reading it~ i'll try to read chapters 02 and 03 of your fic soon~
sorry~
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