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sorry i havent been commenting! my brother has been hogging the computer! ><


LOL its okay!!!I'm so glad I have no siblins,I couldn't stand it if my siblins hogged the computer.Though my parents are a bunch of kids and hog things in second thought lol! so do u like the story so far?Is it to slow,or too fast?


its kind of fast but not that bad since it has other things to back it up ^^
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kyahikaru wrote:

sorry i havent been commenting! my brother has been hogging the computer! ><


LOL its okay!!!I'm so glad I have no siblins,I couldn't stand it if my siblins hogged the computer.Though my parents are a bunch of kids and hog things in second thought lol! so do u like the story so far?Is it to slow,or too fast?


its kind of fast but not that bad since it has other things to back it up ^^


lol ty its cause I've never done an idol thing,its hard!!lol ;P ty though its mostly about this romance beween a--- never mind can't tell yeah its a surpirise!!But its a forbidon love ^-^
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Posted 11/22/08

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sgurlrox67 wrote:


kyahikaru wrote:

sorry i havent been commenting! my brother has been hogging the computer! ><


LOL its okay!!!I'm so glad I have no siblins,I couldn't stand it if my siblins hogged the computer.Though my parents are a bunch of kids and hog things in second thought lol! so do u like the story so far?Is it to slow,or too fast?


its kind of fast but not that bad since it has other things to back it up ^^


lol ty its cause I've never done an idol thing,its hard!!lol ;P ty though its mostly about this romance beween a--- never mind can't tell yeah its a surpirise!!But its a forbidon love ^-^


is it like a demon and angel thing?
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Posted 11/22/08

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sgurlrox67 wrote:


kyahikaru wrote:


sgurlrox67 wrote:


kyahikaru wrote:

sorry i havent been commenting! my brother has been hogging the computer! ><


LOL its okay!!!I'm so glad I have no siblins,I couldn't stand it if my siblins hogged the computer.Though my parents are a bunch of kids and hog things in second thought lol! so do u like the story so far?Is it to slow,or too fast?


its kind of fast but not that bad since it has other things to back it up ^^


lol ty its cause I've never done an idol thing,its hard!!lol ;P ty though its mostly about this romance beween a--- never mind can't tell yeah its a surpirise!!But its a forbidon love ^-^


is it like a demon and angel thing?


how'd u know?!!!!
...I mean!NO!!! *laughs* of course not...haha...
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Posted 11/22/08

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is it like a demon and angel thing?


how'd u know?!!!!
...I mean!NO!!! *laughs* of course not...haha...


heheh ^^ i hope it doesnt end like pita-ten did....
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sgurlrox67 wrote:


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is it like a demon and angel thing?


how'd u know?!!!!
...I mean!NO!!! *laughs* of course not...haha...


heheh ^^ i hope it doesnt end like pita-ten did.... :(


probly not ^-^ but yeah,I'm not sure.lol
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kyahikaru wrote:


sgurlrox67 wrote:


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is it like a demon and angel thing?


how'd u know?!!!!
...I mean!NO!!! *laughs* of course not...haha...


heheh ^^ i hope it doesnt end like pita-ten did.... :(


probly not ^-^ but yeah,I'm not sure.lol


Because they where separated forever. i cried while reading it
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Posted 11/22/08

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sgurlrox67 wrote:


kyahikaru wrote:


sgurlrox67 wrote:


kyahikaru wrote:

is it like a demon and angel thing?


how'd u know?!!!!
...I mean!NO!!! *laughs* of course not...haha...


heheh ^^ i hope it doesnt end like pita-ten did.... :(


probly not ^-^ but yeah,I'm not sure.lol


Because they where separated forever. i cried while reading it


aaww no way really!!I didn't really watch Pta-ten cause I got bored with it for some reason but thats ssoo sad TT^TT
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the anime was boring but the manga was 100000x's better! shia's memories was erased and she was kidnapped from the person she loved by an evil demon who fell in love with her too!

in misha's past she was making some kid happy but then he killed him self and misha got blamed for it and they locked misha up all by herself for 3 generations. And if she cant make kotoru happy shes going to die!

And after she makes kotoru happy (and they fall in love) heaven wants her back and make it so kotoru cant ever she her again.
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the anime was boring but the manga was 100000x's better! shia's memories was erased and she was kidnapped from the person she loved by an evil demon who fell in love with her too!

in misha's past she was making some kid happy but then he killed him self and misha got blamed for it and they locked misha up all by herself for 3 generations. And if she cant make kotoru happy shes going to die!

And after she makes kotoru happy (and they fall in love) heaven wants her back and make it so kotoru cant ever she her again.


aaww no way!!!Cause I remember watching the ending to the anime and saw her with Kotoru!!lol
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Posted 11/22/08

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the anime was boring but the manga was 100000x's better! shia's memories was erased and she was kidnapped from the person she loved by an evil demon who fell in love with her too!

in misha's past she was making some kid happy but then he killed him self and misha got blamed for it and they locked misha up all by herself for 3 generations. And if she cant make kotoru happy shes going to die!

And after she makes kotoru happy (and they fall in love) heaven wants her back and make it so kotoru cant ever she her again.


aaww no way!!!Cause I remember watching the ending to the anime and saw her with Kotoru!!lol :P


the anime's way off. its nothing like the manga version
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Posted 11/23/08

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sgurlrox67 wrote:


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the anime was boring but the manga was 100000x's better! shia's memories was erased and she was kidnapped from the person she loved by an evil demon who fell in love with her too!

in misha's past she was making some kid happy but then he killed him self and misha got blamed for it and they locked misha up all by herself for 3 generations. And if she cant make kotoru happy shes going to die!

And after she makes kotoru happy (and they fall in love) heaven wants her back and make it so kotoru cant ever she her again.


aaww no way!!!Cause I remember watching the ending to the anime and saw her with Kotoru!!lol :P


the anime's way off. its nothing like the manga version


no way really,thats so stupid!
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no way really,thats so stupid!

i know, i was so looking forward to the anime version but it never happened..
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no way really,thats so stupid!


i know, i was so looking forward to the anime version but it never happened..

:( so they pretty muh ruined it,thats so sad,but knowing me I'd probly like a happy ending better than a sad one but still its not right to change the plot line!!
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Chapter 6-Understanding the heart

"Anna,Anna are you all right?"I heard a voice saying and felt a pair of hands on my shoulders

My eyes opened slowly to find a face,Emilys face

"Emily?"I murmured dryly

My eyes wandered from her face and towards Raine

"Are you okay?"She asked,bringing my attention back to her

My eyes felt really dry and the room seemed to keep them that way,with all the blinds in the room closed and the lights off

I nodded absently

Feeling an overpowering turn in my stomach that made fear come through me

"What happened!?"I gasped as I sat upwords almost hitting heads with Emily

"We should be the one asking YOU that!"Raine growled,and walked forward

"We found you on the ground in an ally!"Emiy hissed

I stared at them,my eyes full of wonder

"In an ally?"I murmured to myself

I couldn't remember anything

What had I been doing in an ally?

"I don't remember.."I went on

Automaticly placing a hand to my throught

It hurt,and felt dry their

Once I touched my neck I flinched back,making Raine and Emily jump back too

"Are you okay Anna?!"Raine asked sounding concerned

I nodded absently

It...It felt ice cold their

And it seemed to burn

If that made any sence...

A mixture of terror and pain

"Ah"I gasped

"I didn't get your gift Emily!"I said looking up at her with sad eyes

How could I forget something like that

I was so awful

"That doesn't matter!"Emily and Raine roared,in sink

I jumped back at how seriouse they sounded

But before they could say another word I heard the door creak open

I looked around Emily to see seniors from our school who were known for being very popular

One had beutiful short brown hair,and the other had midnight sky black hair

The boy with black hair...seemed familior,his eyes were a warm black that could suck you in once you looked directly at him

The other boy didn't seem familior but was very handsome and had beutiful topaz eyes

I glanced over to my right to see Raine and Emilys faces red,and looking at them as though they were a diamond

Though they did,they were beutiful

My face seemed warm too

What was this feeling called again?

Oh yes,amazment

A smile began to apeer on my face as they walked towards Raine and Emily and hugged them both

Both of Raine and Emilys faces reddining

And the boys face calm,and compossed as though they weren't doing anything strange

"Ah"Emily gasped and quickly turned to me,moving out of the black haired boys hands

"T-This is Raymond...Ray"She flushed as she introduced him to me

"Pleasure"The boy smiled,grabbing my hand in his own and pecking it delicatly

But that one touch was ice cold

Aspecially when his lips touched my skin

My arms began to have goose bumps along them and up

"This is Leroy"Raine said,compossed as they were but still had the same flushed face as Emilys

She didn't move out of Leroys arms like Emily had done with Ray

She seemed so happy

It made me smile at their happiness and have a strange emotion cross over me

Envy?

I shouldn't be feeling such things when my friends were happy

It was wrong

So I shock off the feeling and smiled delicatly at thm both as Emily returned to Ray's arms

"Its nice to meet you both"

LATER

"hehe,Leroy-kun do you want some cake?"Raine chimed as she cut a peice of cake anyway and gave it to him

He nodded,smiling a breathtaking smile at her that made my heart skip a beat

"hehe"Raine flushed

I glanced over to my right to see Emily and Ray on the oposit side sitting togeather

It was strange,and different to see Emily-chan so quiet when she was always so talkative

But she looked happy

She had a grin plastered on her face,and her cheeks were flushed a light red,as she sat next to Ray who seemed quit quiet and ate next to him

Almost acting as though they were having a conversation

Just watching such things made me want to start singing

To sing the song I was supposed to sing as Angel Belle

I wondered if I could sing it right now

And would be praised by sensei and Koi-san

It made me think hard

I felt drowsy,and my neck still felt sore and dry no matter how many times I had a drink,the pain did not vanish

I wondered if I was coming down with a cold

Soon the night ended,with Ray,and Leroy leaving first leaving Raine,Emily,and I alone

"Kya~!!"Raine and Emily screamed out as soon as they thought Ray and Leroy were out of hearing range

"Ray-kun is so cool!!"Emily chimmed

"Leroys so sweet!"Raine cryed out

"Ano"I murmured,putting my hand in the air like I were about to answer/ask a question

Emily and Raine glanced at me as they sat themselves down on the coach

"What is it Anna-san?"Emily asked

"Does this mean your dating?"Emily and Raines faces turned red automaticly and soon they were up grabbing one of my two hands

"Yes"They said in sink

"When?"I asked

"A few days ago..."Raine murmured

They seemed down,I guessed they didn't want me to think they didn't trust me

I smiled at the two of them

"Thats great!"I laughed

Spinning us all around,they stared at my with wide and shocked eyes but soon smiled at me

"We're sorry for not telling you earlier Anna"Raine murmured

"We just didn't want to hurt you,yourthe only one not dating no.."Emily murmured

"I don't mind"I chimmed

They smiled once again at me as we spun around the livingroom

Bumping into variouse objects

And soon Emilys birthday ended

And I was left with emotions that understanded the heart...
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