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Chapter 7-Servent of the Devil

It all seemed quit fast

And I knew I could not NEERLY feel as strong as Emily,and Raine did,but what I DID know was that they loved them,and that they would do ANYTHING for them.

And thats all I needed

Love was strange wasn't it?

I had never felt any sort of emotion that they had felt before

I had only ever felt love for my mother,and my soon to be little brother or sister.And my father that I never knew.

But at least knowing THAT much would help right?

After saying my goodbyes and sorrys to Emily,and Raine for the trouble I had caused them I skipped in the direction of home

Not paying much attention to my surronding

Which mama had always told me to do.

"heh"I heard a snicker from somewere,making me stop in my tracks.And have an earie feeling

I turned around,scarcly.Looking for something,someone

"Looking for someone kitten"I heard a whisper in my ear,making me jump and quickly turn in the direction of the voice to find no one

"U-Um...Someone their?"I yelled,studdering

Suddenly I felt hands on my shoulders pushing me into a tree,I sturggled,shivering at the cold from the hands and tryed to see the persons face.

not suckseeding

"Scared?"The person whispered in my ear,sending a tremor of terror down my spine

He spoke softly but it sounded...sounded so cruel.So evil!

I didn't say anything,to terrified to speak

The person seemed to get annoyed and pushed me into the tree harder till a tointy part of the tree picked my skin and made a river of blood,come down my forhead.

"Well?"He continued to taunt

This time I was too scared to move

He was going to kill me

I had never felt so scared

Except from that dream...or that reality I had a few hours ago

It felt like a dream itself.

I nodded,scratching my head harder into the tree,making it bleed more

The person chuckled darkly

"Do you have any idea who I am?"He asked,continuing to chuckle

I didn't dare to speak a word,though i doughted he was looking for a response

"What you are..?'He added

I felt a nudge against my head,and felt a faint chill spredding across my head

'so cold'My thoughts whispered

I heard him breath in

Almost as though he were breathing in the sent of me,or my hair...?

I shivered as I felt him sniff,or breath? again

"You probly don't"He chuckled

"Stupid cretures"He hissed darkly,crushing my body against the tree harder

I gasped in pain as more blood pooled down my forhead

Making my eyes see red

His laughing became louder,no whispering anymore

My pain was funny to him?

Was he one of those bad people that mama often talked about?

I winced,one of my eyes closing as blood blinded me

His cold body pressed against me,ignoring my struggles.Making it seem as though what i did were nothing

"Please"I whispered,wincing once again as his body crushed mine

"Stop..."I gasped in pain

He ignored my gasp "hah!You think you'll live?"He whispered

A chill went down my spine

"Goodbye"He whispered darkly

And soon,I felt more pain come through me

And a sharp point dig into my side

And a warm tiggly feeling along with pain fall down my body

Almost dripping

Blood?

It was the only warm thing I felt other than the throbbing of my head

"Stop"I whispered,feeling the point dig deeper into my skin,making the pain feel more real

'goodbye'the words whispered in my ears,as my heart thudded in my ribs making it hard to think

Though their wasn't much to think about

Except the fact that I never could be their to take care of mama,and my little brother or sister.To protect them

I wanted that most

And the fact that Emily or Raine might blame themselves for this

I could hear what they'd say

That it was their fault for not walking me home,not seeing if I made it home saftly

I didn't want the blamb on themselves

For that matter,the whole problem was my fault,well it seemed to be in this boys words

"Ah"I heard him gasp,it was more like a relization sort of gasp and felt the pointy object leave my side instantly

Pain spredding across my body

As fast as the blood poured down my legs,and to the gound.The earth

And I felt myself fall to my nee's as the boys weight on my back left me and I fell to the ground,more or less slid down the tree to the ground

My eyes began to flutter close,as I felt my heart thud loader.Ringing in my ears

This wasn't a dream

This wasn't a nightmare

Well it was partly

But i didn't want anyone to be hurt thats all

I'd rather have them not care whatsoever what happened to me

But I knew that woundn't happen,since they were good poeple

People I loved

Poeple I charished

My family

My SMALL family

That I loved..

Tears welled up in my eyes but not for the pain,but for the pain of the ones I loved

I wished I could have said goodbye

And had given Emily her birthday gift on time...

I felt my heart soon slow down but the ringing continue in my ears.

"Damn,I wasn't supposed too."I heard the boy his from my right

"Dammit she made me lose controll"He hissed

"How could a damn angel..."He continued to curse

Angel?

What was he talking about?

He growled once again but soon I felt arms under my legs and neck and soon felt myself be lifted into the air

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It was dark,but it didn't seem to be the same place as my dreams..nightmares,were often held

It was dark,but soon I felt hands leave my eyes and a beutiful light apeer into veiw

It shinned gloriously,and it wasthe most pretty thing I had ever seen

I turned around to see a person,but the person had no face

The person smiled at me,a very gental smile and motioned for me to go towards the light

I did as the person wanted without meaning too.Once again an out of body experiance

Walking towards the light I felt something

An invisible force push me bck making me fall backwords into the hands of the faceless person...man?

He shock his head and pursed his lips,looking as though he were thinking and before I knew it the image fadded out and I found myself in the sky

Gliding through clouds,and birds

Actually flying,and felt someones lips against my head

Breathing in my sent-

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WAKES UP

It was dark,and I heard the sound of water dripping in the distance

And felt as though I were in an uncomfortable postion

Tossing and Turning to try and find the right way to feel comfortable and slowly I opened my eyes

To find a boy with red hair

His eyes were open,staring at me as Im relized just what had happened

Flying up into a seating postion I felt myself get pulled back onto the boys chest

A evil grin appering on his face

"So IT lived"He murmured,darkly

My eyes widened as he pushed my body down some more into the cold body

My warm body clashing with his cold body

A warm blush stained my feturs as I continued to try and get up but not suceeding

"W-Who are you?"I whispered,trying my best to not sound rude,but also trying my best to make sure he wouldn't hurt me.

He stared at me,rather he peered at me for a few short seconds but soon pushed me off

Throwing me against the edge of the coach were I had slept

"I am the demon Kratos,I have come here for the devil to destroy you"He said,not sounding displeased at all

"You are also what i eat"He added

I shuddered and backed away from him,but he didn't seem to aprove as he grabbed onto my rists with his ice cold hands a pushed my down,so that my head hit the cusions

I closed my eyes,and flinched away as his lips touched my skin leaving a trail of cold up my neck and to my jaw

I didn't feel any pain,so I took a chance and opened my eyes to see the devil smirking and seeming to hold another dark laugh at me

"Such a stupid THING"He laughed

I shivered at how dark his laughing and face seemed to look and continued to look at him pitifully

"B-But why do you want to eat me?"I asked in a studder,continuing to shiver and flinch away from him whenever he came near me

"You really don't know"He frowned,stopping his laughing and staring at me deviously

I shock my head,trying to ignore the sharp pain that happened when I did this

"Your going to be an angel when you die"He said simply

I stared at him with shocked eyes

An angel?

Me?

I didn't understand...

He looked into my eyes,with his cruel ones

"Your born to die"He continued

"God wants you to be an angel,while the devil can't deal with another distraction,nor more help for God.Plus Angels are the top food chain for devils"He sneered

I shivered

He really was seriouse wasn't he?

I was born to die?

"But I'm not an Angel"I whispered,sounding more controlled now

"Not YET"He corrected me

"Angels taste good,but their always spicey.While humans wh are destened to ecome angels taste deliciouse and taste sweet"

He paused

"Though their aren't anymore humans that are supposed to become angels around as much and it takes centuries before one becomes avalible"He murmured seeming absent

Not worrying about me trying to escape

"Thats why I'm lucky.You were quit hard to get you know"He teased darkly,growling at the same time

"And you seem to smell even more wonderful than any human I have EVER smelled before"He continued

"Mouthwatering"He whispered,placing his head above mine,smelling once again

"Its hard to keep controll with your blood aroun"He hissed through a mouthful of my hair

I shivered as he shifted his weight off one leg onto the other

"I'm going to die?"I whispered

"By me"He chuckled

"I look forward to it,I deffinitly won;'t let God have you,and leave this deliciouse meal alone"He whispered acidly to himself

I shivered again,feeling his cool breath still over my neck

Why would I have been givin this sort of fate?
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LONGEST CHAPIE YET~!!!lol
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cool! hee hee hee the guys personality reminded me of this story i made that had a guy with the same personality...
he was messed up, intimidating and cruel ^^ hee hee hee
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cool! hee hee hee the guys personality reminded me of this story i made that had a guy with the same personality...
he was messed up, intimidating and cruel ^^ hee hee hee


LOL really!??
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kyahikaru wrote:



cool! hee hee hee the guys personality reminded me of this story i made that had a guy with the same personality...
he was messed up, intimidating and cruel ^^ hee hee hee


LOL really!??


yeah really.
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sgurlrox67 wrote:


kyahikaru wrote:



cool! hee hee hee the guys personality reminded me of this story i made that had a guy with the same personality...
he was messed up, intimidating and cruel ^^ hee hee hee


LOL really!??


yeah really. :D


u should write it later~~~ I'm sure it good
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kyahikaru wrote:


sgurlrox67 wrote:


kyahikaru wrote:



cool! hee hee hee the guys personality reminded me of this story i made that had a guy with the same personality...
he was messed up, intimidating and cruel ^^ hee hee hee


LOL really!??


yeah really. :D


u should write it later~~~ I'm sure it good :P


i wrote it along time ago just never typed it up
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hehe u should write ^-^ if u got some idea of what it was about again lol
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Chapter 8-I'm Interesting?

It felt eirie walking home,knowing that someone was following close behind

Aspecially if that person was a devil

He stayed a few feet behind me but you could feel his cold body heat behind you,as though he were right beside you

Finally I reached home,worried that mama was worried I speed walked towards the door,and made sure to keep it open for the devil (for some reason)

"Mama,I'm home!"I called out

It was silent for a second as though no one were in the house,but soon I heard my mothers feet against the hard tiles in the kitchen,running towards me

She put her hands on my shoulders and pulled me into a hug

"Were the hell have you been!"She gasped out

She had never cursed,or swore in front of me before

I knew she must have been worried and hugged her back,and towed her towards the sofa

Seating her down as she pulled me out of the hug

"I was worried sick!"She gasped

Tears welled up in my eyes

I didn't want to cause her so much pain

What if I ACTUALLY had died today?

What would have become of her,of my little sibling?

"Gomen mama"I whispered,pulling her into a hug again

"I was just out with my-"I paused to think,I glanced behind my to see that the devil wasn't their

Turning back to mama I said "My friend"I murmured

The room fell silent

"Anna Grace!Why didn't you call me"She sobbed leaning her head into my shoulder

"I fell asleep"I answered truthfully

I didn't like to lie to her

It was silent for afew short seconds and soon mama got up

"You better not do thoughs sort of things EVER again!"She hissed

I had NEVER seen her so..so scary

I nodded vigurously

"You better not think I'm the bad guy in this whole thing!You should NEVER worry your mother like this!"She gasped using a fashionable term for it

Using 'mother' in er sentance instead of 'mama'

And soon she send me to my room

Tears ran down my cheeks

Not sure about what I should have said that would have made her feel better

'Gomen mama'I whispered in my thoughts multiple of times

I turned the door knob slowly,not really thinking to much

"What the hell was that about"I heard a voice grumble

I jumped back from the voice,slowly relizing who it was

"Kratos-kun"I murmured

He chuckled darkly to himself "Whats with the 'kun',don't tell me you want to be friends with the one who is going to kill you"He snickered

"W-What!?What are you doing in my room?"I gasped

He continued to chuckle darkly "You don't think I'll let my meal walk around,and escape from my clutches do you?"He grummbled,pulling my arm at the same time when I came close to him.Pulling me down to his level,landing on the bed under him

"Tears from an angel taste good too"He murmured mulichiously

Licking one of the tears that moved down my cheek

I flushed from his icy cold touch

"Don't"I gasped

Flinching away from him,and his tight grasp on my rist

"I-I've got to go to bed early,so please go"I murmured in a studder

"To do your little 'secret carrier'"

I gasped

"What do you know about it!"I gasped,pulling my hand out of his grip as it began to burn

"Everything"He smirked

"Who do you think gave you a personal interveiw with the paparazi?"He snickered

For once in my life,I wasn't scared of him I felt...inraged!

My throught tightened and burned

And my face felt hot with rage

'Hes trying to make you lose it to make you break a rule of being an angel'A voice whispered in my head

It wasn't my voice though?

But why would he want to do that?

Wasn't he just going to eat me?

'When you die even if hes the one who kills you,and eats you,you will still become an angel and thats not what the devil wants'The voice continued

Who?

I tryed to pay close attention to it,even through my rage

And acidity

"Why would you do that!?"I hissed,sounding a bit more controlled

He snickered

"I'm a devil,your an angel,or ment to be anyway,I have to break my enemy up somehow"

So that voice had been right

I growled

"Thats wrong!Even if you hate me-"

"Who ever said I hated you"He murmured,but he seemed sarcastic

"Didn't I tell you,your the most interesting pray I've had in a long time"He chuckled darkly

"Usually god would give the damned angel anything they wanted to make them happy"He murmured

"But then they often got greedy and the devils would eat them"He laughed

"Tricking them so that they'd agree to it"

"Stupid cretures"He murmured acidly to himself

"But you"He continued,bringing his attention to me once again

"You,don't have anything your fathers dead.You live in a small townhouse,and your attention is only being givin to that child that your mother is having"He laughed

"I guess god learned that the hard way is the right way"

A hiss ascaped my mouth

"I don't care!"I gasped

"My father was a hard working,and loving father!And he loved us all VERY much!"I gasped

I was amazed by how much I sounded like him

With the hate in my words I mean..

Was I becoming a bad person?

He seemed shocked for a few short seconds but soon snapped out of it,shacking is head and laughing darkly to himself

"Interesting"He repeated

I stared at him with shock as my anger level lowered

He seemed almost...cute when he laughed

Even though it was a dark laugh,and it was for a terrible reason it almost sounded...cute?

Slowly his laughing ended and a dark smirk apeered on his face as he moveed my body that was under him up,so that my head was on the pillow

"Get some sleep then"He said darkly

"But don't think I am a good person,don't think someone who is serving the devil will beome kind,or sincear.If you try to escape your fate then someone you care about will die.It may not taste good enough but you WILL cry,and seeing your tears makes us devils stronger"His voice slowly became distant and before I knew it he was gone,and slowly my eyes closed.

Making the room darker...

The lights slowly flickered off from an 'unknown' force.And slowly I fell unconciouse..
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Chapter 9-The Album that will be the start of my carrier...

I woke up the the sun beating down into the room,making shadows along the wall

I felt small breaths move my bangs,making my scratch my face.And my eyes open slowly,burning from the bright sun

"huh?"I murmured,my brain not working at the moment

A boy with red hair stared at me with black eyes,curiuose,and looking as though they were thinking hard.Yet amused

"Kratos!"I gasped,my face flustered,and red as I jumped back only to fall off the bed on my butt

"Eti"I winced as I rubbed my butt

He laughed darkly,but it had humor in it.At my pain

"I've never seen someone wake up in such a way"He chuckled to himself

"I don't always wake up like this!"I gasped out,sounding small.My face was now BRIGHT red.

"I know"He continued to laugh

My expression changed,into a stare

How would he know something like that???

"H-How would you know!?"I gasped

I already ad guessed the answer to this..

"I checked in on you,on the tour to see you,many demons cameto see if you were worth the challeng"He murmured absently

Probly thinking back..

My face was even more flushed now as I got up,now sitting on the edge of the bed as far away as I could

"Though"A smirk apeered on his face "I'm sure you remember,since many PLAYED with you"He smirked darkly

He was probly the one who had put the shocken Coke can,in my lunch...

"And for other reasons"He murmured to himself,as he pulled my arms around my back and forced me to place my head on his nee's

His face inches away from mine

"You were almost nakid that night"He laughed

My face reddined as I recalled that I didn't have any clothes to wear to bed,and wore my bra and underwear to bed

"Pervert!"I gasped out trying to move,only making it harder to escape the devils hands

"hhmm,thats why I'm here"He snickered darkly to hmself

LATER

After getting dressed,I left without another answer to mama

She didn't seem to want to talk

Though she didn't say anything about me going to work

It felt strange

I didn't want her to be mad at me nor hurt.But I didn't want to quit...

I was so selfish

But today I had to try my best!

I'd put my whole heart in the song and make sure to have mama listen to it!

I looked up at the bright blue sky,anticipating the day

Even if a devil would try and ruin it.I would make it through it all somehow...

I placed my wig on my head,making sure to check my mirror before walking in.Making sure no strands of blond hair weresticking out

So far,it seemed to be perfect

"heh,why try so hard?"I heard a voice snicker

I turned towards Kratos wh stood beside me,close

Feeling the cold aura as he followed me

"Because!Its my dream"I smiled at him,as he looked away

Looking annoyed

I wouldn't give up,I thought as I stared at him with a smile pressed to my face

I finally walked into the building,with high hopes,and dreams...

5:30 P.M

The day had gone by quickly as I sang my heart out,not being told to stop or anything

But their were no compliments so I tried even harder

Hoping someone would notice my hard work

Relizing I was seriouse,and trying my hardest

Kratos stood in the back of the room,noticed by Koi-san.And soon I noticed many girls around the building staring at him as we walked in and out of rooms,for break and more work

And soon,the day ended.

Missing yet another day of school

But it never really occured to me

"Well done Angel!"I heard a voice from behind me,as I stepped out of the studio

I turned to the producer who had somthing in his hands and had tears running down his face

"I had my doughts on your hard work,but knew you had the talent!!But now you sound even more magnifisent!"The producer sobbed

I stared at him,and all the faces that smiled at me.Looking all happy,and almost proud to be working with me

My face soon changed into a smile,my cheeks turning pink in a light flush at the compliments

And that all the hard work had paid off

"This album will be out on shelves by next week!"One of the workers cheered

Everyone cheered at that

Along with me,who mostly smiled

I had never felt so happy,to be usful to someone

"Good work everyone!"I heard another voice say

"Angel"Koi-san said inturuptting my thoughts

I turned to her,smiling

"Yes,Koi-san?"I asked,looking curiouse at her seriouse face

Wasn't she happy for me?

"You wil be having a concert to promot this CD on Saturday"She said emotionlessly

"And soon afterwords the CD's will be in stores"She continued

"Are you sure you want to go through with this?"She asked,sounding nervouse

My smile disapeared as my expression turned into a seriouse stare

"Yes!"I gasped out,as I bowed my head to her

My eyes on the floor

"Please promot my CD Koi-san!"I continued,my eyes closed now

Not sure of what emotion would show on them...

I could hear the smile on Koi-sans face as she spoke "Then,good luck Angel Belle"

"It will be harder from now on."

I nodded vigourusly

"I know"I whispered,sounding seriouse

My head still bowing at the floor

"I'll try my best!"I yelled,putting my arm in the air

Koi-san smiled for the first time,which only lasted for a few seconds.But it was nice to see

I had NEVER seen Koi-san really smile before,let alone for me...

"Then you better get some rest"She said,as she waved her hand at me,as she turned away to talk to the producer

Yes,I HAD to try my best

This Album was going to be the start of my carrier after all,The start of my dream...

"Oi,Are we going"Growled Kratos,in my ear

I nodded,my teeth chattering togeather,from how cold his body seemed to have grown over the day

"Yes..."I murmured,remembering I didn't have to long to live

Either Kratos was going to eat me as a snack,or I'd die by gods hands to become an angel

Either way,it didn't seem to happy...

Even if it would make either of them happy...
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havent you noticed in most anime/manga the leads all have the same personality? That's why my characters are so whacked up. I try to make then like me, which is way different from other people.
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havent you noticed in most anime/manga the leads all have the same personality? That's why my characters are so whacked up. I try to make then like me, which is way different from other people.


hehe,I'm bad at that TT^TT Its still good though right??? lol but yeah urs are SO funny!!haha
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kyahikaru wrote:

havent you noticed in most anime/manga the leads all have the same personality? That's why my characters are so whacked up. I try to make then like me, which is way different from other people.


hehe,I'm bad at that TT^TT Its still good though right??? lol but yeah urs are SO funny!!haha


your stories are awesome! but when ever i read any of your stories i always picture the leads as the same person.
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kyahikaru wrote:

havent you noticed in most anime/manga the leads all have the same personality? That's why my characters are so whacked up. I try to make then like me, which is way different from other people.


hehe,I'm bad at that TT^TT Its still good though right??? lol but yeah urs are SO funny!!haha


your stories are awesome! but when ever i read any of your stories i always picture the leads as the same person.


*nod* yeah I tend to do that by accident even,when I'm tryin to make it seem like the totally oposite!!lol ;P
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yeah them i strain my head trying to imagine them differently
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