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yeah them i strain my head trying to imagine them differently


lol sry!!!
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yeah them i strain my head trying to imagine them differently


lol sry!!! :P


ah1 no its okay!!
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yays!!
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Awesome story!^^ Im really excited about this one!
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hehe ty I'll try and make her a lil different then others,Though shes VERY shy and doesn't know much about love and such so she likes him,and having a dangerouse relationship with him but is afraid of him and doesn't know it haha
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I love your stories! I must have said this 1000 times but 1000 times it was worth
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I love your stories! I must have said this 1000 times but 1000 times it was worth


aawww ty TT^TT u don'ts knows how much that means to me!!!But I love urs more!!And mine aren't neerly as good as urs TT^TT
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kyahikaru wrote:

I love your stories! I must have said this 1000 times but 1000 times it was worth


aawww ty TT^TT u don'ts knows how much that means to me!!!But I love urs more!!And mine aren't neerly as good as urs TT^TT


im not sure about that! i always rush down to the point and im not that good at describing the surroundings...
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kyahikaru wrote:

I love your stories! I must have said this 1000 times but 1000 times it was worth


aawww ty TT^TT u don'ts knows how much that means to me!!!But I love urs more!!And mine aren't neerly as good as urs TT^TT


im not sure about that! i always rush down to the point and im not that good at describing the surroundings...


me neither though
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kyahikaru wrote:

I love your stories! I must have said this 1000 times but 1000 times it was worth


aawww ty TT^TT u don'ts knows how much that means to me!!!But I love urs more!!And mine aren't neerly as good as urs TT^TT


im not sure about that! i always rush down to the point and im not that good at describing the surroundings...


me neither though :)


im working on shuffled mix chapter now! ^^
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Chapter 10-Wings,and feathers

It had been 2 days now and tomorrow I was going to sing at the concert

I couldn't imagine it,imagine going on stage

I hadn't thought of a way to allow mama to let me go to the concert yet

But I had an idea of how

"Annoying"I heard a voice hiss from behind me,I turned to see Kratos lying across my bed

"W-What?"I questioned in a small voice

"How long are you going to practice for?"He grummbled

"Its so damn annoying hearing the same song over and over again"He hissed

I stared at him,frowning "I'm sorry.."I murmured

Wait!Why was it my fault..?

I heard him chuckle darkly "What an idiotic angel"He mused

My face turned bright red

My head flung back in the direction of the desk that I sat at,practicing my singing

"B-But I need to practice still"I studdered,re-reading the peice of paper

I heard a grummble from behind me,but ignored it and continued to read the peice of paper

But wasn't I supposed to sing it,not read it

"Yes,you are supposed to sing it not read it"I heard a voice say from beside me

My breath got caught in my throat as I saw him floating in the air,above my bed

Black feathers were spread out across his back creating..wings?!

"Pretty.."I whispered in shock

"What!?"The demon growled

"What a stupid angel,finding a tool 'pretty'"He taunted

Sounding annoyed

"No"I whispered "Beutiful"I corrected myself

They really were beutiful

Midnight black feathers,thats reflected off the desk lamp that I had turned on

Kratos seemed annoyed by this

"Gee,your making me blush"He joked sarcastically

I stared at him as the seconds ticked by,the akward silence soon became noticable

"Ah!"I flushed a light pink

"S-Sorry,I was just um..."I whispered shyly

"Honestly"The devil grummbled,the beutiful feather wings dissapearing.Making his body fall onto the bed

"For a food group to comment on the attire that will,and CAN kill them"He murmured

"Ano.."I placed my hand in the air

"What?"

"W-What do you mean by 'tool' and 'killing attire'?"I questioned in a studder

He smirked playfully,and instantly I found myself against the wall

"Do you want to find out?"He cocked his head to the side playfully

My face reddined "O-O-O-Of course not!"I gasped out

His face grew closer but he quickly moved far away walking towards the bed,and sitting on the edge of it

I stood there,my hear thudding against my ribs

What?Was that?

He patted the side beside him

His cold body seeming to freeze the bed sheets that he had been lying on before

I slowly seated myself down next to him

To scared to resign against the offer

I seated myself against the demon

Feeling his cold body even though I wasn't touching him

The spot were he had patted for me to sit,now had a cool frost glaced over it

I couldn't imagin what it was like were he was sitting now

"Demon feathers are often used to capture the angel"He said,grabbing my warm hand with his cool one,and placing it against his cold face

"We use them to paralise Angels"My body shuddered at the thought if Kratos doing such a thing to many angels

Paralising them,and then killing them.Eating them.

My hand slowly felt colder and colder,as my hand stayed placed to his face as his hands had directed my hands to do

"Theirs a small poison in our wings for us devils to use to capture our pray.It does a great deal to angels,it seems that they have a small alergetic sindrom to it"He chuckled at an old memory,or thought

"It does a great deal to angels,and a small deal to humans.It paralises them,but it only works for a few minutes were angels can last for hours.Every angels time limit is different"I began to shiver from the cold that seemed to cast through my body,and by the obviouse cruelty demons had to both angels and humans

He seemed amused by this

"T-Thats awful"I whispered

He grinned evily my hand slowly slipping away from his now defrosted face

"You might get the honor of being the first angel for me to use my feathers on"

I shuddered "F-First?"I studdered

He grinned

"I haven't yet found a pray interesting enough to try it on"

I looked up at him,as a small light shone through the room,his beutiful wings apearing once again on his back

He grabbed my now cold fist and opened it.Rubbing his cold thumb along the lines in my hand

Making my hand burn

He soon stopped this as I winced and reached his other hand to slowly pick a feather off his wing

He then twirled it in his hand,flashing it to me in the palm of his hand

It shinned a great midnight black shine,that could only be described as "beutifully mistick"

He then placed it in between his fingers as though he were holding a pen,and brough it down to my hand

"A-Ah! K-K-Kratos-kun!Please don't-"And before I could say another word or move me hand out of the way,the feather pricked my skin

A overwelming chill filled my body

Making my breathing stop in its tracks as the cold filled my body

From my hand,down my arm towards the upper and lower half of my body

And before I could say another word,the room fell dark

The sound of my heart beat,echoeing in my ears

Nothing else

It was an omiouse quiet,a scary quiet...

And it felt as though it had been not only days,but weeks since I had seen light

It was AWFUL

I couldn't imagine dieing in such a way

"Wake up"I heard a voice enter my ears,and slowly I heard the snap of the voices fingers

My eyes flung open to find Kratos above me

"Finally"He grummbled

As though it hadn't been HIS fault

"T-T-T-That was awful" TT^TT I cried

My face in my hands

The room was quiet except for my sobbing

The alone feeling still in my heart

"Quit crying"I heard Kratos growl

I looked up from my sobbing to see the annoyance in his eyes

He WAS devil,it wasn't as though I were expecting him to worry about me...

I sniffled as he sighed and placed a cold hand under my chin

Lifting my head,and licking my tears away

"Oi,quit crying already"He growled

My face brightened red

"Your tears don't taste good after that poision got into your amun system.So quit it"He growled,placing his cold hand against my forhead

Cooling my head

For once the cold helped

"B-B-B-But it was scary"I whispered in horror

I felt his black eyes observing me but didn't have the need to think of it

I WAS scared

I couldn't imagine being a TRUE angle and having to go through that for more than an hour

For almost all of your body functions shutting down so you can't move,feel,hear,think,or hear

And dieing at the thought of that,I TRULLY couldn't bare it

"No more water works"He shushed

I glanced up at him

At his pure black cold eyes

Scary

What WOULD I do IF,or WHEN he used that feather on my again one day?

I shuddered at the thought of this

How awful

I heard Kratos let out a sigh and soon felt his cold hands leave my head and push my down onto a pillow

"Go to sleep"He shushed

"It won't help if you cry all night and miss your crappy carrier right?"He grummbled

I stared at him with tears in my eyes but nodded

"O-Okay"I whispered

He nodded,slowly fadding away

The lights flashed off,and soon I felt a pair of cold arms around me once again

Pulling me into a cold body

"I'm too cold,and if you DARE to move I'll kill you on the spot"He hissed

I was still in some sort of horror mania,and I couldn't dwell over it.Aspecially with Kratos there

He would just use another feather

And slowly after many hours for all I know,the cold of his body helped me fall asleep

Dreaming about the future for tomorrow.
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I-i though he was going to do something to her... Like what happened in 'Im what?'... *cold chill*
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I-i though he was going to do something to her... Like what happened in 'Im what?'... *cold chill*


LOL no,as u said before hes got a crazy twiste mind,and finds bullying her ALOUT of fun.He won't do anything to her,just tease her.She going to be the one falling in love with himm first actually.Cuz shes never fallin in love before,and cuz shes really shy shes going to blush alout and such lol
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I-i though he was going to do something to her... Like what happened in 'Im what?'... *cold chill*


LOL no,as u said before hes got a crazy twiste mind,and finds bullying her ALOUT of fun.He won't do anything to her,just tease her.She going to be the one falling in love with himm first actually.Cuz shes never fallin in love before,and cuz shes really shy shes going to blush alout and such lol :D


you really like experimenting with love? lol well i like sticking to the unfangirlish and stubborn type. My cjaracters are so realish cause i make em based on me.
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I-i though he was going to do something to her... Like what happened in 'Im what?'... *cold chill*


LOL no,as u said before hes got a crazy twiste mind,and finds bullying her ALOUT of fun.He won't do anything to her,just tease her.She going to be the one falling in love with himm first actually.Cuz shes never fallin in love before,and cuz shes really shy shes going to blush alout and such lol :D


you really like experimenting with love? lol well i like sticking to the unfangirlish and stubborn type. My cjaracters are so realish cause i make em based on me.


yeah,actually I just don't want them all to be the same as u had said before.Plus its good to try knew things.Though I REALLY hate it when the girl is always embarressed,and falls for the guys first lol
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