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Posted 11/14/08 , edited 12/30/08
Disclaimer: Nope, don’t own Gakuen Alice. Though I do enjoy torturing the said below characters of my own free will.
Written by: Orange_Sorbet

Pull the Trigger

Dedicated to:
PaCho de Nacho

You make me laugh when I can’t.

“Memory is a way of holding on to the things you love, the things you are, the things you never want to lose.” --- Kevin Arnold

-Orange_Sorbet-




This one was kind of long, and I hope you all enjoyed this chapter. The second chapter might take some time, so please be patient. Now, don’t forget to comment, to help boost up my spirits and it also helps get rid of the writer’s block currently residing in me! And PS: The language Natsume speaks at the end is French, the language of romance! *squeals*

Translation:

Ne t'inquiète pas. Je pas. - "Don't worry. I won't."


- Orange_Sorbet



Posted 11/14/08

Orange_Sorbet wrote:

Disclaimer: Nope, don’t own Gakuen Alice. Though I do enjoy torturing the said below characters of my own free will.
Written by: Orange_Sorbet

Pull the Trigger

Dedicated to:
PaCho de Nacho

You make me laugh when I can’t.

“Memory is a way of holding on to the things you love, the things you are, the things you never want to lose.” --- Kevin Arnold

-Orange_Sorbet-





This one was kind of long, and I hope you all enjoyed this chapter. The second chapter might take some time, so please be patient. Now, don’t forget to comment, to help boost up my spirits and it also helps get rid of the writer’s block currently residing in me! And PS: The language Natsume speaks at the end is French, the language of romance! *squeals*

Translation:

Ne t'inquiète pas. Je pas. - "Don't worry. I won't."


- Orange_Sorbet






this was very good!! lol i like it! xD

Posted 11/14/08
that was so so so niceee cant wait forr the nesxt chappieee
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Posted 11/14/08
that was good. I LOVE IT!
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Posted 11/15/08
you should just make other ones that continues with it like powerpuffsgirl-san. hers cool like yours
Posted 11/16/08

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you should just make other ones that continues with it like powerpuffsgirl-san. hers cool like yours


heheh ...uhh..thanks lol ^^

Posted 11/16/08
and btw she is bussy with it!!! xD ( chapter 2 )
Posted 11/18/08
OMG! The story is extremely good. I'll rate between 4 - 4 1/2 star. The other one or half star will be for (no offence but still great work) a better grammer and more use of vocabulary or nice phrases. Great work anyway!!! I really love it and your story is able to draw my attention. Keep up the good work and keep going. I can't wait for the next chapter to be posted. ^o^

Can I ask a question? Is it your ambition to be an author?
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Posted 11/22/08
Yeah, it is. My two greatest ambitions are to be a novelist and a violinist (which, by the way, is in the making)
Posted 11/24/08
when is Chapter 2 comming??????? ^^
Posted 11/26/08
I'm sooo excited! I can't wait for the next chapter!! When is it comming out??? ASAP can? PLZZZZZ!!!

~BIG THANKS~
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Posted 11/29/08 , edited 1/1/09
I'm so sorry everyone! I know you've all been waiting expectantly for the second chapter, but please be patient. Good writing takes time, you know. And I've been very busy lately, with Christmas and school coming up after all. And I'm almost graduating from elementary! I'm almost in high school now, just a few more months...!
Posted 11/30/08
Well we can wait =) ^^ XD Good luck with it!!!
Posted 12/7/08
God this is amazing! Keep it up, I really would like to read the next one asap! =]
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Posted 12/27/08
i agree with rhiley...you'll become a great noelist for sure..since it's so good
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