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Posted 12/11/08

Rainnieh wrote:


ay_bay_bay wrote:


Rainnieh wrote:

I FINK ITS RANDOM BUT FUNNI AT TIMES :DDDDDDDDDD
AND I READ IT T^T
ppl force me to read stuff o.o;;


"T^T"
?
WHY THA FACE......]:
-,- i force yu tooo read til eterniiittyyyyyyy >;D
MWAHAHHAHAH
LOL OMG THAT SOUNDS LYKE A GOOD NAME
FOR A STORII O,o
=]
HMM....
"till eternity"


T^T FACE CUZ CUZ CUZ YUUH PPL FORCE MEH TEW READ STOWWIES O.o
AND OMGEE T^T -RUNS OFFF- NUUH FORCING ME READING D: (xDD)
AND TILL ETERNITY ? D:< -runs AGAIn_ cuz cuz
i noes theres a new stowi ;_;


LMAOOO XP
nooo I HAVENT MADE THA STORII [[YET]]
:P
N NOO I WONT FORCE YU TO READ IT xD
IM WORKIN ON CHIASA CHIYO NOWW o.X
DO U LIKE IT?
LMAO --->HAVE YU EVEN READ IT YET?! XD
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Posted 12/11/08

ay_bay_bay wrote:


Rainnieh wrote:


ay_bay_bay wrote:


Rainnieh wrote:

I FINK ITS RANDOM BUT FUNNI AT TIMES :DDDDDDDDDD
AND I READ IT T^T
ppl force me to read stuff o.o;;


"T^T"
?
WHY THA FACE......]:
-,- i force yu tooo read til eterniiittyyyyyyy >;D
MWAHAHHAHAH
LOL OMG THAT SOUNDS LYKE A GOOD NAME
FOR A STORII O,o
=]
HMM....
"till eternity"


T^T FACE CUZ CUZ CUZ YUUH PPL FORCE MEH TEW READ STOWWIES O.o
AND OMGEE T^T -RUNS OFFF- NUUH FORCING ME READING D: (xDD)
AND TILL ETERNITY ? D:< -runs AGAIn_ cuz cuz
i noes theres a new stowi ;_;


LMAOOO XP
nooo I HAVENT MADE THA STORII [[YET]]
:P
N NOO I WONT FORCE YU TO READ IT xD
IM WORKIN ON CHIASA CHIYO NOWW o.X
DO U LIKE IT?
LMAO --->HAVE YU EVEN READ IT YET?! XD


FINE FINE xDDD
I"lll READ IT THIS TIME WITHOUT ANY FORCE xPP
-tries to read anyways- :P
AND ARE YUUH REALLI GONNA MAKE ONE ON TILL ETERNITY?
Posted 12/12/08 , edited 12/12/08

Rainnieh wrote:


ay_bay_bay wrote:


Rainnieh wrote:


ay_bay_bay wrote:


Rainnieh wrote:

I FINK ITS RANDOM BUT FUNNI AT TIMES :DDDDDDDDDD
AND I READ IT T^T
ppl force me to read stuff o.o;;


"T^T"
?
WHY THA FACE......]:
-,- i force yu tooo read til eterniiittyyyyyyy >;D
MWAHAHHAHAH
LOL OMG THAT SOUNDS LYKE A GOOD NAME
FOR A STORII O,o
=]
HMM....
"till eternity"


T^T FACE CUZ CUZ CUZ YUUH PPL FORCE MEH TEW READ STOWWIES O.o
AND OMGEE T^T -RUNS OFFF- NUUH FORCING ME READING D: (xDD)
AND TILL ETERNITY ? D:< -runs AGAIn_ cuz cuz
i noes theres a new stowi ;_;


LMAOOO XP
nooo I HAVENT MADE THA STORII [[YET]]
:P
N NOO I WONT FORCE YU TO READ IT xD
IM WORKIN ON CHIASA CHIYO NOWW o.X
DO U LIKE IT?
LMAO --->HAVE YU EVEN READ IT YET?! XD


FINE FINE xDDD
I"lll READ IT THIS TIME WITHOUT ANY FORCE xPP
-tries to read anyways- :P
AND ARE YUUH REALLI GONNA MAKE ONE ON TILL ETERNITY?


LMAAOO NO xD
ITS GUNNA TAKE A WHILE TO MAKE ANOTHER STORII =.=
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Posted 12/14/08

ay_bay_bay wrote:


Rainnieh wrote:


ay_bay_bay wrote:


Rainnieh wrote:


ay_bay_bay wrote:


Rainnieh wrote:

I FINK ITS RANDOM BUT FUNNI AT TIMES :DDDDDDDDDD
AND I READ IT T^T
ppl force me to read stuff o.o;;


"T^T"
?
WHY THA FACE......]:
-,- i force yu tooo read til eterniiittyyyyyyy >;D
MWAHAHHAHAH
LOL OMG THAT SOUNDS LYKE A GOOD NAME
FOR A STORII O,o
=]
HMM....
"till eternity"


T^T FACE CUZ CUZ CUZ YUUH PPL FORCE MEH TEW READ STOWWIES O.o
AND OMGEE T^T -RUNS OFFF- NUUH FORCING ME READING D: (xDD)
AND TILL ETERNITY ? D:< -runs AGAIn_ cuz cuz
i noes theres a new stowi ;_;


LMAOOO XP
nooo I HAVENT MADE THA STORII [[YET]]
:P
N NOO I WONT FORCE YU TO READ IT xD
IM WORKIN ON CHIASA CHIYO NOWW o.X
DO U LIKE IT?
LMAO --->HAVE YU EVEN READ IT YET?! XD


FINE FINE xDDD
I"lll READ IT THIS TIME WITHOUT ANY FORCE xPP
-tries to read anyways- :P
AND ARE YUUH REALLI GONNA MAKE ONE ON TILL ETERNITY?


LMAAOO NO xD
ITS GUNNA TAKE A WHILE TO MAKE ANOTHER STORII =.=


WOOOT -DONT HAV TO READ ANOTEHR STORII- :DDDD
LUB YUUH FORR NOT MAKING ME TEW AS WELL :DDD
-HUGGLES_ :DDD
and yeshhh it takes for eva to make a new storii doesnt it >:DD
Posted 12/18/08

Rainnieh wrote:


ay_bay_bay wrote:


Rainnieh wrote:


ay_bay_bay wrote:


Rainnieh wrote:


ay_bay_bay wrote:


Rainnieh wrote:

I FINK ITS RANDOM BUT FUNNI AT TIMES :DDDDDDDDDD
AND I READ IT T^T
ppl force me to read stuff o.o;;


"T^T"
?
WHY THA FACE......]:
-,- i force yu tooo read til eterniiittyyyyyyy >;D
MWAHAHHAHAH
LOL OMG THAT SOUNDS LYKE A GOOD NAME
FOR A STORII O,o
=]
HMM....
"till eternity"


T^T FACE CUZ CUZ CUZ YUUH PPL FORCE MEH TEW READ STOWWIES O.o
AND OMGEE T^T -RUNS OFFF- NUUH FORCING ME READING D: (xDD)
AND TILL ETERNITY ? D:< -runs AGAIn_ cuz cuz
i noes theres a new stowi ;_;


LMAOOO XP
nooo I HAVENT MADE THA STORII [[YET]]
:P
N NOO I WONT FORCE YU TO READ IT xD
IM WORKIN ON CHIASA CHIYO NOWW o.X
DO U LIKE IT?
LMAO --->HAVE YU EVEN READ IT YET?! XD


FINE FINE xDDD
I"lll READ IT THIS TIME WITHOUT ANY FORCE xPP
-tries to read anyways- :P
AND ARE YUUH REALLI GONNA MAKE ONE ON TILL ETERNITY?


LMAAOO NO xD
ITS GUNNA TAKE A WHILE TO MAKE ANOTHER STORII =.=


WOOOT -DONT HAV TO READ ANOTEHR STORII- :DDDD
LUB YUUH FORR NOT MAKING ME TEW AS WELL :DDD
-HUGGLES_ :DDD
and yeshhh it takes for eva to make a new storii doesnt it >:DD


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Posted 12/20/08
.^^. I like it so far =D
It's a little random
and a little confusing
but I like it .^^.
It should be made into an anime, or a manga.

But, some tips ::
You might want to make sure all the things are consistent... I noticed that in some parts you have it as a third person story, and in some parts you have it first person with the main chari as the narrator [[ I think ^^' ]]
That can get a little confusing to the readers .^^.

Plus... I'd l-o-v-e to see what this Kane guy looks like .^^. I gotta see if he's actually that good lookin' ;D
lol xD
Posted 12/21/08

ember1116 wrote:

.^^. I like it so far =D
It's a little random
and a little confusing
but I like it .^^.
It should be made into an anime, or a manga.

But, some tips ::
You might want to make sure all the things are consistent... I noticed that in some parts you have it as a third person story, and in some parts you have it first person with the main chari as the narrator [[ I think ^^' ]]
That can get a little confusing to the readers .^^.

Plus... I'd l-o-v-e to see what this Kane guy looks like .^^. I gotta see if he's actually that good lookin' ;D
lol xD


hehe xDD
thanxs it was more like a ONE SHOT though 9.9;;
but thanxs for tha advicee! :]
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