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Posted 11/15/08, edited 11/15/08
Its an easy one! lets make a story in from of an poem! ( it just came to my mind XD) Anways you can rhyme how you want! (abba/aabb/ abab..)

You are allowed to have 6 lines for your paragraph, but please not more. Quote the last one and add your lines! = )

Let me start then ( sry thats not so great):

Thru the heavy clouds,
breaking with imense speed,
you can see floating the red coloure infront of your eyes,
the surce of power is a deep hidden seed,
the red knight appears when all hope dies...
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Posted 11/18/08, edited 11/18/08

miuanna wrote:

Let me start then ( sry thats not so great):

Thru the heavy clouds,
breaking with imense speed,
you can see floating the red coloure infront of your eyes,
the surce of power is a deep hidden seed,
the red knight appears when all hope dies...


a seed is born
sow with tears and blood
a desperate attempt
of a dream so distant
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Posted 6/2/09
rain trinkled down
the scarlet knight's face
for it was a gloomy day
at that time
but the shine of the scarlet
stopped it all
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Posted 6/19/09

EricaYulaAthha wrote:

rain trinkled down
the scarlet knight's face
for it was a gloomy day
at that time
but the shine of the scarlet
stopped it all


finally, someone answered. i tot i was the only one.

determination is a must.
a must to do
a must to stop.
i shall not stop until i stop
the war.
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