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Post Reply Shozouko Game Begin! (try not to die the first round)
Posted 11/20/08 , edited 11/28/08
Shozouko Game Begin!



Let's start with the "characters" first off.




+Main Characters+

Shueh Kimidora--->
<---Jin Feho


The Description::



Untru, a demonic game that can also mean the death of the players who lose, also known as "Shozouko" to most fans. Shueh Kimidora however, never heard of this game in her lifetime, seems like it was around when Shueh's parents were still kids. This game is played mostly on Weekends, some die, some survive. It's like survival of the fittest. It can include many idea's and rules. Truth or Dare. Anything you can think of that can be considered as a "game"! Jin Feho has been playing all kinds of games! But never once came upon Untru (aka Shozouko), In time Untru has taken over the world, and all the kids have died in denial. It's up to Shueh and Jin to changed the world and Untru, but wait. There's a catch...





-Extra Characters-

Ionita Gesque--->
<---Annete Gesque
















Chapter 1; Game Of Death...begin now.



~The game of death begins in 5 hours 2 minutes and 43 seconds.
Eh Brother! Would you stop playing that video game?! I made a fist and was about to rub my eyes because I have just woken up from a deep slumber. -Yawn- I'm so tired right now! I fell on the couch, my little brother was playing video games. Sis, maybe you should sleep more earlier! My brother requested smirking at me, thinking hes smarter than me. -Rubs eyes- Brother, maybe you shouldn't play the same game over and over again! You know you'll have to get glasses if you keep this up, it'll mess up your vision. Ah, stop talking about what's good for me! I know what's good for me, I'm completely capable of taking care of myself. Brother said proudly pressing the pause button on his video game. It made a beeping noise afterward. *ZZzZzz* I fell asleep on the couch next to Brother. Mumbling "completely capable huh...?" All he could hear was my snoring. -Sigh- I guess you'll miss the best game ever played here in Japan! It's call Untru! My brother said repeating the word "Untru" over and over again. "Untru"? What's that...? I woke up from my brothers annoying constant rambling... Untru, its going to be the most popular game in Japan soon! My brother bragged on and on. U-Untru huh? Hm. I widened my eyes intrigued. Ooooh I'm SO exited! Can you please take me to the enormous event? My brother got on his knees and held my legs tight, begging. Oh, fine! If you would stop your begging please! Aw, your the best sis! My lovely brother said giving me a big kiss on my cheek. Ew!~ I complained laughing on the inside. Oh, oh. It starts in less then 5 hours! So...hm. You know what!? We should go now! My brother said pulling my sleeve, trying to pull me out the front door. Hey, hey! If it starts in less than 5 hours... we have enough time y'know! I whined taking off my brothers hand on my sleeve gently. B-b-but... I really wanna go now! You and your persistence! Fine, we'll go, we'll go. I have nothing planned for today anyway. So, as you already know I'm taking my brother to the Untru event. I wonder what kind of game it is? I can tell this is just gonna be a drag... Announcer in background spoke "If you happened to have come early then great! You can purchase your tickets earlier then everyone else, and also the top players from last year are here as well! Please enjoy yourselves. -End. The top players are here too!? My brother said letting go of my hand and running off someplace where the top players were located. You're gonna get lost! Or even worse get yourself in trouble...! I shouted running after him, trying to be the responsible sister. Ouch! Oh~ My bad. My brother said with a sweat drop as he bumped hard into one of the top players. I was so embarrassed! Erm, s-sorry! I told the cool looking top players...they actually kinda looked cute. "Watch out next time." One of the players said, the other one said, "next time this happens again, you'll want to be taking care of this brother of yours more carefully, where's your responsibly as a big sister?" I gasped then said, "Don't threaten my- I didn't get a chance to finish my sentence because the player touched my lip forbidding me to talk. Wow! Oiu, your so cool! My brother said, then laughed in amusement. "You know this jerks name...!?" I thought to myself, then thought, why am I just letting him forbid me to talk? I pushed his hand away from my face, blushed a little, and that was it. Aw, the little girl likes you, Oiu. Said a different player laughing at me. WHAT?! I overreacted maybe just a tad as they were teasing me. Hahaha! If it bothers you so much sis, it must be true! My brother agreed with them. I thought you were on my side...!? Traitor! I yelled at my brother as he sang "Shueh and Oiu sitting on a tree, k-i-s-s-i-n-g, first comes marriage then comes.... I don't know the rest. My brother said stupidly, with a clueless face on. Ahah! Kids and their imagination! I rustled my brothers hair. Be quiet! I whispered in his ear as I bent down to his short height. So, its "Shueh" is it not? That jerk player questioned. What of it? I answered in a rude tone. Nice meeting you. That's all Oiu said then he walked away with his other players... I don't know...I seemed to have blushed more than I did before! I had a strange feeling at that moment, like I wanted it to last a little longer. Sis? Your spacing out again! My brother confirmed. W-what? Oh, sorry, I'm just...I didn't end my sentence, I really didn't want to at the time. Just what? If its what Oiu said, you don't have to worry, he won't actually hurt me. My brother said frowning at me. How do you...know that? I just do, I trust him. My brother said looking at me, then smiling. Trust? You don't even know the guy... I thought to myself. -Sigh- Just stay away from him okay? I hate guys like him! I thought to myself but I actually said it out loud. H-huh? My brother thought I had a thing for Oiu...but I don't! I just met the guy, how stupid would it be if I actually liked him?! -Deep sign- really, really, REALLY stupid! Oh, sis! There's the bulletin board, lets go check it out! My brother commanded running towards the bulletin board...and then there I saw IT, Oiu. I frowned turning back trying not to let Oiu see me. Oh, hey Oiu! You came to look at the bulletin board too!? My brother asked as Oiu gave him a glare. Yup, kiddo. A couple hours went by fast and it was time...for Untru! "LET THE GAMES BEGIN EVERYONE!" The announcer shouted in his microphone, while a bunch of people came. Oh, yeah! Untru is finally here! I can't wait to play games with Oiu! Some "fan of Oiu" shouted like she LOVED him or something. Huh? "Play games with Oiu?" I asked.






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IF YOU WANT ME TO CONTINUE THE STORY WITH CHAP 3; LET ME KNOW! I don't know why this always happens!!! ARGH!
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Posted 11/20/08
seems like an interesting description.... =]
write, write, writeeeeeeee
Posted 11/20/08

naruto330 wrote:

seems like an interesting description.... =]
write, write, writeeeeeeee


i will i willll ^0^
Posted 11/22/08
Awsomeee! Heehee! I like it so far! Kool story! I wanna read more!
More! More! More! ^.^ I can't wait!
Posted 11/22/08

Aqua1o1 wrote:

Awsomeee! Heehee! I like it so far! Kool story! I wanna read more!
More! More! More! ^.^ I can't wait!


hehee~ thankies
ima write more.......soon X3
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o-o WRITE FASTER KOKO-CHAN D;
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o-o WRITE FASTER KOKO-CHAN D;
-dies- xD


LOLOL! XD
NOO don't dieee!

lolz -starts writing more for tha sake of Kinnie-
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MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE person :3
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MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE person :3


lolz
kayyyyyyyyyyyyyy :]
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rainnie o-o
CALLING PPL PERSON ISHZ MY THING D:
AMD SO IS SOMEONE AND ALL THAT STUFF D: -thrws a book-
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rainnie o-o
CALLING PPL PERSON ISHZ MY THING D:
AMD SO IS SOMEONE AND ALL THAT STUFF D: -thrws a book-


AHHhahaha =D
Kinnie, atleast YOUR being original -o-
unlike some copy cats out theeeeeeeeereee D:<
mwahahha
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kintsuchl wrote:

rainnie o-o
CALLING PPL PERSON ISHZ MY THING D:
AMD SO IS SOMEONE AND ALL THAT STUFF D: -thrws a book-


AHHhahaha =D
Kinnie, atleast YOUR being original -o-
unlike some copy cats out theeeeeeeeereee D:<
mwahahha


lol xDDDD
Posted 11/23/08

kintsuchl wrote:


ay_bay_bay wrote:


kintsuchl wrote:

rainnie o-o
CALLING PPL PERSON ISHZ MY THING D:
AMD SO IS SOMEONE AND ALL THAT STUFF D: -thrws a book-


AHHhahaha =D
Kinnie, atleast YOUR being original -o-
unlike some copy cats out theeeeeeeeereee D:<
mwahahha


lol xDDDD


LMao i'm evvvviiillllllll >xD
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ay_bay_bay wrote:


kintsuchl wrote:


ay_bay_bay wrote:


kintsuchl wrote:

rainnie o-o
CALLING PPL PERSON ISHZ MY THING D:
AMD SO IS SOMEONE AND ALL THAT STUFF D: -thrws a book-


AHHhahaha =D
Kinnie, atleast YOUR being original -o-
unlike some copy cats out theeeeeeeeereee D:<
mwahahha


lol xDDDD


LMao i'm evvvviiillllllll >xD


LIES D:
-steals kookies n runs-
Posted 11/23/08

kintsuchl wrote:


ay_bay_bay wrote:


kintsuchl wrote:


ay_bay_bay wrote:


kintsuchl wrote:

rainnie o-o
CALLING PPL PERSON ISHZ MY THING D:
AMD SO IS SOMEONE AND ALL THAT STUFF D: -thrws a book-


AHHhahaha =D
Kinnie, atleast YOUR being original -o-
unlike some copy cats out theeeeeeeeereee D:<
mwahahha


lol xDDDD


LMao i'm evvvviiillllllll >xD


LIES D:
-steals kookies n runs-


ahhahah X)
dont lie to yurself Kinnieee >:DDDD
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