Posted 11/20/08
my poems:
(do not evr steal plz!!! >=l)

Your blood make's me weak.Your that guy hiding in that shadow,i thought i will never see your face
i feel your heart pounding on my heart just wanting me to be your love.
But,will we ever meet? i search and search just to see where you are i see your angels calling from heavn
i wrote this just for you,you know who you are..a god is telling me to stop and that guy will come for me instead,
I'm finding that guy with my other piece of heart.God see's right through me telling me you musn't look for him.BUT NO!i have to find that guy..god is just now sad but god said why? i answered because i 've waited for him for a long time but nevered came..i was shocked,now if he can't find me,i must find him! But,if I can't seek him down,I'm begging you to do it little angels fall from the sky i can seek you from your blood but I'm crushed from your beauty,hotness,personality.But what I'm mostly looking for is just.....You
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whn i watchd u all day is ''i luv u'' all u hav to say? ive luvd u evr since i saw u...u made me flow through ur heart ill kiss u further through the happy flowers cuz 1 day i'll leave you to meet sum1 better thn me i'll guard you through life.. i see you everywhere i look i cant stop thnking about you u made me strong i'll make you better n wen i die plz remember me! i hav ur charm forevr i will always luv u n 1 day ull see im not thr but truly in heavn i am with u i was born to protect u plz make sure taht other guy ur with is special thn me and iz protecing u..the next day ur see a letter from me with a present n wen u open the present ull see a picture of me jus waiting for u to see.but thz cant be im not thr to kiss u but in heavn im always thr to kiss u ill make u ull remember the day i died n u went to my grave putting taht picture of urslef to see u care for me but sumday ull forget me n wen i dont ill kno u do still remember me deep inside ur heart u can see wen u cry evry tear of mine but dont cry its only years apart ull see me up from heavn u will see sumthn tahtll say ''i luv u!'
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so just make a poem up!~
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Posted 11/27/08
a sailor when to see see see
driffting around on the water
to see wat he can see
all tt he could see
is de dolphin going to extinct
so come wif me
let save de dolphin

lolz.. does dis consider poem??
dis poem came out cos it was being forced by my lit cher to do de...
Posted 11/27/08
wow well all poems dont hav to rhyme..n yes it does count as a poem ^^
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Posted 11/27/08

tomB0yzz wrote:

my poems:
(do not evr steal plz!!! >=l)

Your blood make's me weak.Your that guy hiding in that shadow,i thought i will never see your face
i feel your heart pounding on my heart just wanting me to be your love.
But,will we ever meet? i search and search just to see where you are i see your angels calling from heavn
i wrote this just for you,you know who you are..a god is telling me to stop and that guy will come for me instead,
I'm finding that guy with my other piece of heart.God see's right through me telling me you musn't look for him.BUT NO!i have to find that guy..god is just now sad but god said why? i answered because i 've waited for him for a long time but nevered came..i was shocked,now if he can't find me,i must find him! But,if I can't seek him down,I'm begging you to do it little angels fall from the sky i can seek you from your blood but I'm crushed from your beauty,hotness,personality.But what I'm mostly looking for is just.....You
____________________________________________________________________________________________


whn i watchd u all day is ''i luv u'' all u hav to say? ive luvd u evr since i saw u...u made me flow through ur heart ill kiss u further through the happy flowers cuz 1 day i'll leave you to meet sum1 better thn me i'll guard you through life.. i see you everywhere i look i cant stop thnking about you u made me strong i'll make you better n wen i die plz remember me! i hav ur charm forevr i will always luv u n 1 day ull see im not thr but truly in heavn i am with u i was born to protect u plz make sure taht other guy ur with is special thn me and iz protecing u..the next day ur see a letter from me with a present n wen u open the present ull see a picture of me jus waiting for u to see.but thz cant be im not thr to kiss u but in heavn im always thr to kiss u ill make u ull remember the day i died n u went to my grave putting taht picture of urslef to see u care for me but sumday ull forget me n wen i dont ill kno u do still remember me deep inside ur heart u can see wen u cry evry tear of mine but dont cry its only years apart ull see me up from heavn u will see sumthn tahtll say ''i luv u!'
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so just make a poem up!~


well this looks more like prose than a poem to me but maybe if you put it in the right format it would but apart from that its pretty good. great job!!!! *gives you a thumbs up*
Posted 11/29/08
thnx!~ i rlly dont care about the format i jus wrote it cuz i wantd too.. lol
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All that we are is the result of what we have thought. If a man speaks or acts with an evil thought, pain follows him. If a man speaks or acts with a pure thought, happiness follows him, like a shadow that never leaves him.
crasp and understand these words for these words r what lie in ur heart
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winning numbers r 06 72 41 03
Posted 2/10/09
grt poem but wuts with the lucky numbers ?
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