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april230 wrote:

Do you guy michi to stay alive or dead?
i have two ideal but i don know which one to chose...
so i let you guy chose~ =D



waah don't make anyone else dead pls...ok?..haha...
it would be very sad if you did it...=(


to make the story sound fun...
why not like that...
make her sick, sound like going to be dead
but not dead?
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april230 wrote:


Geh-san wrote:


april230 wrote:

Do you guy michi to stay alive or dead?
i have two ideal but i don know which one to chose...
so i let you guy chose~ =D



waah don't make anyone else dead pls...ok?..haha...
it would be very sad if you did it...=(


to make the story sound fun...
why not like that...
make her sick, sound like going to be dead
but not dead?


oh i see...hehe...so ur not going make everyone dead?
but ur going to make them think that someone's dead ne~?
am i right?
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Posted 12/14/08

Geh-san wrote:


april230 wrote:


Geh-san wrote:


april230 wrote:

Do you guy michi to stay alive or dead?
i have two ideal but i don know which one to chose...
so i let you guy chose~ =D



waah don't make anyone else dead pls...ok?..haha...
it would be very sad if you did it...=(


to make the story sound fun...
why not like that...
make her sick, sound like going to be dead
but not dead?


oh i see...hehe...so ur not going make everyone dead?
but ur going to make them think that someone's dead ne~?
am i right?


ya... i think so... hahas... and here part 9
i change the subject~
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april230 wrote:


Geh-san wrote:


april230 wrote:


Geh-san wrote:


april230 wrote:

Do you guy michi to stay alive or dead?
i have two ideal but i don know which one to chose...
so i let you guy chose~ =D



waah don't make anyone else dead pls...ok?..haha...
it would be very sad if you did it...=(


to make the story sound fun...
why not like that...
make her sick, sound like going to be dead
but not dead?


oh i see...hehe...so ur not going make everyone dead?
but ur going to make them think that someone's dead ne~?
am i right?


ya... i think so... hahas... and here part 9
i change the subject~


hai..thanks for telling..ehe...
i'll read it ne~ oh btw..have u read my oneshot?..its about chinen...
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here part 9

johnny: fine fine... but must take care....
michi: hai....
(than check her bag...)
yuto: i pack all the thing you need...
michi: thank... (than went up )
take her laptop and 29 blank disc...
than went down.
michi: amal time to go...
amal: hai...
michi: jaa ne minna
other: hai~ take care
(and when into the car)
michi: i wan to sleep 1st...
amal: hai.. rest 1st...
(the car start to driver a away)
-home-
johnny: whose cell phone is this??
hsj: not us...
maid: not our too...
johnny take and look at it...
yuto: i think it michi one...
chinen: how you know??
yuto: cos there a star...
johnny: soka... than you take it for her...
yuto: no way...
johnny look at him...
yuto: i mean... no way she put it at home...i pass it to her...
chinen: leaving now...
yuto: hai..
yamada: bye bye...
other : bye bye...
-a&m car-
amal wake michi up..
amal: here we are...
michi: hai... okk...
when michi came out... she felt dizzy... than she bang on amal...
and she help her...
amal: Daijobu??
michi: hai... just dizzy...
amal: i help you.. be careful...
michi: hai...Arigato...
class already start and they are late...
out side class... open door...
amal: so sorry that we are late...
michi: gomen.. honto ne gomen...
sensei: Daijobu... okk go back to your sit...
both: Arigato...
sensei(look at michi): are you ok? you look pale...
michi: Daijobu... i am fine...
sensei: okk than... go back to you sit...
both: hai~
sensei: now student pass your home work up...
all: hai~
all pass up to the teacher. and the teacher start to mark and other doing their work
than someone knock the door...
yuto: i think this is it...Sumimasen
sensei: come in~
when the door open the class look up and it yuto...
class screaming...
sensei: student quiet....
sensei: what do you need??
yuto: gomen ne.. can i see michi-chan for a while?
sense: michi, michi??
yuto: it okk... she doing your work yesterday that why she sleeping...
sensei: i see...
yuto: never mind i take it to her...
sensei: ok...
all looking at yuto...
yuto stand beside michi table and put her phone on the table
and leave a note that write "don forget next time... yuto"
yuto: thank i be leaving...
sensei: hai... watch your step...
sensei: class not do your home work....
than she walk to michi
sensei: michi-chan , are you feeling well??
michi: yes... i am alright... gomen ne...
sensei: eh??
michi: for not listening just now...
sensei: hai... daijobu...
michi: honto ne gomen ne...
sensei: you can rest it alright...
michi: hai... alrigato...
the teacher hand was on her back and she feel that she is shivering...
sensei: are you really ok?
michi: hai... =)
sensei: ok if you need anything just call miiee...
michi: hai...
the teacher keep teacher till break
sensei: class we will stop here... thank you...
student: thank you too....
amal walk to michi
amal: it break time ... you wan something??
michi: i have something to do...let go to the park...
amal: what are you going to do??
michi: you will know later...=)
start burning the video to every CD
-------------------15 min later-----------------------
michi: well well... all done...
amal: whoa that fast... can i see it??
michi: sure why not...
the song start playing and it like a video about their past they spent together...
after a while... the bell ring...
amal: i think it time to go back ne...~
michi: let go..
went back to the class and michi felt dizzy and everything look unclear... than she hold on the

door...
amal: Daijobu??
michi: h..hai...
amal: you are not...
michi: i am alright i will be fine...
amal: are you sure??
michi: hai... let go back to our sit..
**the teacher came in and start teaching...
time really pass fast... the time they can spent with their class mate getting lesser and lesser...
when bell ring, everyone left... michi start placing the CD under their table...
amal: I've help you...
michi: hai~ arigato ne...



***********
sorry for a short one... but i still really really hope you guy like it...
it might sound lame and stupid... like "how can johnny have a daughter?"
well well to those who think that... this is just a "FANFIC"...
as what i ask just now is



Do you guy michi to stay alive or dead?
i have two ideal but i don know which one to chose...
so i let you guy chose~ =D


but since Geh-san (can i call you that?) don't wan it sound so sad...
than i make it fun? (hahas... i sound so cold hearted *evil laugh*)
so i guess this it the end of my writing~ ( ENJOY~ )
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Posted 12/14/08

Geh-san wrote:


april230 wrote:


Geh-san wrote:


april230 wrote:


Geh-san wrote:


april230 wrote:

Do you guy michi to stay alive or dead?
i have two ideal but i don know which one to chose...
so i let you guy chose~ =D



waah don't make anyone else dead pls...ok?..haha...
it would be very sad if you did it...=(


to make the story sound fun...
why not like that...
make her sick, sound like going to be dead
but not dead?


oh i see...hehe...so ur not going make everyone dead?
but ur going to make them think that someone's dead ne~?
am i right?


ya... i think so... hahas... and here part 9
i change the subject~


hai..thanks for telling..ehe...
i'll read it ne~ oh btw..have u read my oneshot?..its about chinen...


is this the one?
Kokoro No Tomadowaseru [A Bewildered Heart]
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waah i like it...demo michi's feeling bad..
im starting to get worried
nwey, you can call me anything u want.. Geh-chan, Gin or Reiku is fine with me...
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Posted 12/14/08

april230 wrote:


Geh-san wrote:


april230 wrote:


Geh-san wrote:


april230 wrote:


Geh-san wrote:


april230 wrote:

Do you guy michi to stay alive or dead?
i have two ideal but i don know which one to chose...
so i let you guy chose~ =D



waah don't make anyone else dead pls...ok?..haha...
it would be very sad if you did it...=(


to make the story sound fun...
why not like that...
make her sick, sound like going to be dead
but not dead?


oh i see...hehe...so ur not going make everyone dead?
but ur going to make them think that someone's dead ne~?
am i right?


ya... i think so... hahas... and here part 9
i change the subject~


hai..thanks for telling..ehe...
i'll read it ne~ oh btw..have u read my oneshot?..its about chinen...


is this the one?
Kokoro No Tomadowaseru [A Bewildered Heart]


Hai it is!..hehe..i hope you like it ne~=D
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Geh-san wrote:


april230 wrote:


Geh-san wrote:


april230 wrote:


Geh-san wrote:


april230 wrote:


Geh-san wrote:


april230 wrote:

Do you guy michi to stay alive or dead?
i have two ideal but i don know which one to chose...
so i let you guy chose~ =D



waah don't make anyone else dead pls...ok?..haha...
it would be very sad if you did it...=(


to make the story sound fun...
why not like that...
make her sick, sound like going to be dead
but not dead?


oh i see...hehe...so ur not going make everyone dead?
but ur going to make them think that someone's dead ne~?
am i right?


ya... i think so... hahas... and here part 9
i change the subject~


hai..thanks for telling..ehe...
i'll read it ne~ oh btw..have u read my oneshot?..its about chinen...


is this the one?
Kokoro No Tomadowaseru [A Bewildered Heart]


Hai it is!..hehe..i hope you like it ne~=D


ok i go read it now... gomen ne... =)
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is it Kokoro No Tomadowaseru [A Bewildered Heart] ??
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ano ne~..enjoy reading it...and don't forget to put a comment about it deshou?

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Here part 10

when it done they went to the gate and michi felt dizzy again... the driver saw and went up to help her
driver: are you okk miss...
michi: hai... i am alright...
amal: this is not the 1st time....
diver: better go home early...
in the car michi was sleep and amal was reading a book....
reach home driver carry michi to her room and sleep...
amal: we are home...
maids: welcome back...
head of maid: how is she? is she okk?
amal: she just sleeping
head of maid: do you wan to eat something?
amal: maybe not... i am not hungry yet...
head of maid: hai....
amal went to her room and start using the computer...
after a few hour... johnny and HSJ is back home...
J&HSJ: we are home....
maid: welcome home...
johnny: where the girl?
maid: in their room...
johnny: how michi?
maid: sleeping... from the time she came back...
johnny: i go check on her...
maid: hai...^_^
michi was siting on the bed.. day dreaming....
(johnny knock on the door...)
johnny: michi-chan can i come in?
michi no reply
johnny just went in....
johnny: how are you?
michi just stare blankly on the floor....
johnny: michi
michi: HUH?? hai~
johnny: are you okk??
michi: hai~=)
johnny: how do you feel?
michi: fine..
johnny: dinner time now...let go down and eat...
michi: i go down later...
johnny: okk (than he went down...)
-HSJ-
yubu: can any one just go call amal-chan
yamada: i go... i am free anyway~
yubu: hai.. arigato ne...
yamada: lie~
went to amal door...
yamada: anou... yamada here... time for dinner...
amal: hai... coming...
than both went down...
yamada: so tomorrow going to a new school already... how do you feel?
amal: ehh?? scare??
yamada: daijobu... the student there are kind....
amal: honto ne?
yamada: hai~
amal: is it because you are a star?
yamada: maybe?
amal: hahas....
yuto: hey! long time no see...
amal: ya ya like real~
yuto: where michi-chan?
amal: i thought she here...
yubu: no she not...
johnny: she say she be here...
than there a crush loud sound came from the stair...
all look at the stair... seeing michi laying on the floor...
their mind was: omg...
yuto: daijobu????(with a worry face)
michi~ no reply...
johnny: what happen to you??(with a worry face)
michi: i... miss... the... step...
hikaru: are you okk? are you hurt?(with a worry face)
michi: lie... i... am... fine....(try to stand...)
yuto: i help you...
johnny: do you wan me to call a doctor?
michi: daijobu... gomen ne...
takaki: what the sorry for... your knee and your elbow is bleeding...
maid: i take the 1st aid...
yuto: bring her to the sofa 1st...
amal: hai...(amal and yuto was the one helping her....)
michi: itai... itai... itai... itai... itai...
johnny: be careful
yuto: did i touch your bleeding part?
michi: lie...
amal: or did you sprains your ankle?
michi: lie... daijobu...
amal: na.. sit here 1st...
michi: hai argato ne...
amal: daijobu... as long as you are ok...
michi: arigato...
maid: here it is... i help you...
michi: hai~ why not you guy go eat 1st?
maid: yapp.. your food are ready...
johnny: you scare me...
michi: gomen ne...
johnny: do you need a doctor?
michi: lie... really no need...
johnny: are you sure?
michi: hai~ go have your dinner...
johnny: come join us ok?
michi: hai~
maid: here it go...
michi: slowly pls....
maid: bear with the pain 1st ne...
michi: hai...(the pain start...) itai...
yuto: is that really pain?
ryutaro: are you crying??
michi: no i am not of cos...
maid: here you go...
michi: arigato...
maid: go and have your meal~
michi: hai....
other seeing her in pain...
ryutaro: it pain huh?
michi: no...
yamada: it written on your face...
michi: where??(touching her face)
other: <_<
michi: i just kidding...(walk to the chair and sit...)
michi eat 2 spoon and stop
maid: what wrong not nice?
michi: no.. i don't feeling like eating... thank food i going upstair...
johnny: are you okk? you wan other thing to eat?
michi: no.. thank i just want to sleep... good night
johnny: good night!~
-she went to her room quietly-
johnny ask amal: why is she acting like that?
amal: don't know, from the start of the class she already acting like this...
johnny: soka....
amal: don worry it will be alright....
johnny: take of her ne....
amal: hai!~
after they eat they went to bed....

hope you guy enjoy!~ =D
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waah michi slipped..huhu...
waiting for the next part!
ganbatte!
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waah michi slipped..huhu...
waiting for the next part!
ganbatte!


hahas,,, hai i will!~ =D
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Part 11

-The next morning-
Amal-chan wake up very early
She went down and starts reading...
Maid: read in the morning already?
Amal: that what I always do...
Maid: would you like to have your breakfast 1st?
Amal: maybe later.... thank you...
Maid: ok than i go do my work...
Amal: hai~
After a few min...
Chinen: ohayo... (Rub his eye)
Amal: ohayo~ you are early
Chinen: same go to you... what you reading?
Amal: a book...
Chinen: I know....
Amal: a reading book....
Chinen: I know too...
Amal: the book that have a lot of word in it...
Chinen: can you lead me after you read?
Amal: sure....
Johnny wake up and bath and went for his breakfast
Johnny: ohayo~
Amal: ohayo...
Chinen: ohayo, why so early today?
Johnny: there a meeting later...
Chinen: soka
Johnny: don be late... (Start eating)
Hikaru and yubu: ohayo~
Showily all other wake up expect michi...
Johnny: I be leaving~
All: hai... bye!
Takaki: michi not yet up?
Amal: haven sees her in the morning...
Maid: I go call her...
Walk up stair and michi was going to open the door...
Michi was looking at the floor so as the maid...
A bang on their head...
Michi & maid: ouch!
Maid: gomen ne...
Michi: hahahahaha....=D
Maid: what are you laughing at?
Michi: don you think it funny? Hahahahaha
Maid: ya right... go down and have you breakfast...=)
Michi: ya I don wan to be late for my 1st day...
(Walk down)
Michi: ohayo!
All: ohayo!
Michi: hahahahaha...
Amal: what so funny in the morning already?
Michi: nothing...
Amal: yes there is...
Michi: no there not...
Amal: yes there is....
Michi: no really no...
Amal: okk no there nothing...
Yuto thinking: who is she? I thought she sick yesterday?
Yuto: who are you?
Michi: Ehh??
Yuto: I just kidding... have your breakfast I don wan to be late..
Michi: okk, okk ....
After her breakfast, off they go to school
-In the car-
Michi: ohayo
Driver: Ohayo gozaimasu, miss you don have to greet me...
Michi: =)
Amal: why don you tell us more about your school..
Since we are new there?
Yamada: nami-chan, our class chair person...kanji our vice-chair person...
Michi: wait... why are you telling us...maybe we are not in the class...=)
Yuto: you are right too...
Michi: =P
Amal: I want to listen !
Yamada: in our class there a girl name ren, nobody wan to make friend with her...
Yuto: by the way I hate a boy call hiro... and the girls name miko & rika... although miko, rika and mayu always together but the kind one is mayu...
Michi: why?
Yamada: she doesn’t help miko and rika... but she help the one who is being bulled...
Amal: why don she just leave them?
Yuto: it because her sister is miko~
Amal: no wonder…
Michi: btw what class are your guys in?
Yamada: chinen 3A, miiee and yuto in 3B
Amal: o… I wish we are in the same class…
Yamada: hope so! ~
Non-stop talking about their school tills they reach…
Driver: here we are! Enjoy your day at school
All 4: hai~
Michi: whoa... This school is big!
Amal: bigger than I thought!
Michi: we can build a swimming pool here!
Chinen: we have one already….
Michi: who care built a bigger one!
The three boy look like this >>> =_=
Amal: what with that look?
Boy: no nothing….
-School bell ring-
Chinen: I think we go back to our class 1st…
Yamada: ja mata! ~
Amal: let go to the principal office
-At the principal office-
Principal: welcome to our school…. This is sensei Sachiko…
Your home room teacher…
Michi: Hajimemashite. Michi Kitagawa desu. Douzo yoroshiku.
Amal: Amal Ichirou desu. Douzo yoroshiku.
Sensei: Douzo yoroshiku… now i take you to your class...
Both: Hai!

part 11 already~ do you guy like the story??
i hope so~ hahas enjoy~
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