First  Prev  1  2  3  4  5  6  7  8  9  10  11  12  13  14  15  16  17  Next  Last
[RP] Bleach
21500 cr points
Send Message: Send PM GB Post
M / Visor Lair
Offline
Posted 5/15/07
Seth sat on a lamp post in Tokyo watching over the humans as they, and their lives, passed by almost meaninglessly. Seth just sighed and looked at his cell phone.

"Still nothing huh. Damn it gets so boring around here sometimes. I hate sitting around. There was that sudden power flow. It was small and I was busy then but I am free now. Maybe I should check it out. Nothing better to do."

Seth stood up and was about to jump off the post when suddenly there was a horrible pain in his chest. Seth grabbed his chest with his right arm.

"Heh, feels like my dark side is getting restless. I better teach it some manners later."

Seth takes a deep breath calming himself. Seth then continues on his way.
3327 cr points
Send Message: Send PM GB Post
25 / M / The Castle That N...
Offline
Posted 5/16/07
Some time later in Soul Society(From Seth's story I'll deduce it's night)

" The moon is shining brightly....And I stil haven't gone there."
"Don't be stupid!... No one can go there" My alter ego said
I laughed. The air was fresh and clean and the night was warm. I was sitting under a cherry blossom tree.
"Senbonzakura! One thousand Cherry Blossoms! Isn't a capitan whose Zanpaktoh has that name?"I thought to myself. I lowered my mask and fell asleep.
21500 cr points
Send Message: Send PM GB Post
M / Visor Lair
Offline
Posted 5/16/07
Seth arrived where the power had originated. Seth got down and began to search for clues. There was almost no trace of the power left.

"Guess I'm a little late. Should've come sooner I guess. Oh well can't be helped."

Seth got up and was about to leave when suddenly he felt it. It was dim but it was there. The power was still around. Seth determined which direction it was coming from and began tracking it.

"Guess my luck hasn't run out yet."
4193 cr points
Send Message: Send PM GB Post
23 / M / Poplar Bluff, Mis...
Offline
Posted 5/16/07
~bad guy

"Someone has sensed me." Atop a building the white figure stood feeling the shinigami looking for him after his blast of power. "Who is that? That is not Kurokai. If someone stands in my way to Kurokai, they shall be destroyed." He looked down upon a shinigami. He seemed of low rank. No one in particular. Not a captain or vice captain. It wouldn;t matter if he attacked him. He dropped from the building, falling quickly, and landed silently behind the shinigami. "Who the he-" The shinigami was cut off as the area suddenly went dark. The shinigami could see nothing but the white figure. The figure raised his hand and it seemed like the darkness around him was being sucked into his hand. The darkness formed into a ball and floated above his hand. "Now it is time for you to die. No one stops me from getting to him." He started forward quickly towards the shinigami. He stopped but not for a second. During the stop the look on the figures face went from calm to frightened but only lasted for the second of the small hesitation. He continued forward at frightening speed and, before the shinigami could move the man had shoved the darkness into his chest. The ball seemed to disappear and the mans hand landed flat on his chest. The man jumped back. The shinigami was frozen and in pain. He dropped to his knees and grabbed his chest. The man started to walk away, then turned around. More darkness formed infront of the man making a barrier, slightly larger than the figure. The shinigami looked up and started to yell in pain. Only a small yell came from his mouth before suddenly the darkness shot out of his mouth, nose, eyes, and ears, followed by blood. The shinigami then exploded as this shadow pushed out in every direction from the inside of his body. The barrier blocked the blood and pieces of the man. "I told you nothing would stop me." He jumped back onto the building, still looking for a way to get to him.

~Kurokai

"That power is back." Kurokai said aloud during a vice captains meeting. "I have to go." He left before anyone could stop him. *I have to get to the real world. I need to talk to mom and dad.*

---------------------------------------------------

Kurokai had finally convinced everyone to let him, Rashiruru, and Arisu to go to the human world. "We are first going to dad's shop." Kurokai told the group. "Whatever...why did I even have to come?" Rashiruru sighed. "Because they are your real parents and I thought they might want to see you." "So why did I come? Is it 'cause you guys need me?" Arisu said excitedly. "No...i just thought it might be funny. We need someone to act dumb." *Kurokai was still acting serious. He is always like this when we go back to the human world. So serious and kinda depressing. I wonder why. Maybe he is just being a baby.* Thought Rashiruru. "We will be at the shop soon." Kurokai looked up as Rashiruru said this and saw the gate to the human world. He looked inside and saw that when he entered he would be right next to the shop. *I need to know what this is. Where is this power coming from?*

~Bad guy (This one is short.)

"I feel him. He is in this world. In another city. I must hurry." He ran through the city, sword drawn just incase any shinigami showed up. The sword made the ground seem bright in contrast, The blade wasn't black but the aura around it was. The aura of evil. It seemed to be calling for blood. He got to the edge of tokyo. "No one." He put his sword back onto his lower back where it hangs at his waist line, floating there with nothing to hold it. The shadow crawled from his sword, traveling out and up above his head where it dived over him, forming into something. It made him look like a human. He chose the form of a random human near him. He revealed himself to the humans and such and quickly killed the human,taking over his identity. "This will work for now."

(Btw i would appreciate feedback on my writing. If you dont mind send me a pm with your opinion on my writing above. thanks!)
21500 cr points
Send Message: Send PM GB Post
M / Visor Lair
Offline
Posted 5/17/07
Seth almost thought he lost the trail when he felt a surge of power and a horrible scream of death. Seth sped up to see what had happened. Seth reached the spot and all he could find was blood and guts all over the ground. Although the power was very strong here.

"I am definitely on the right track and whatever this thing is it isn't a small fry. I better be ready for a battle if I meet up with it."

Seth continued now at a higher speed hoping he would catch up before anymore lives were lost. As Seth ran his mind was oblivious to the world around him, he was set on this goal, and for once in a while he was actually interested in something. This made the vibration in his pocket nothing but a bump on the ground.

Heather, Seth's Vice Captain, was frustrated. She had been trying to call Seth for almost an hour now. Ever since that vice captains meeting she has been worried sick about him. Heather just hoped he was taking care of a hollow and not after the same thing Kurokai was. Heather was too worried and decided to follow Kurokai into the human world. After Kurokai and his group went through the gate Heather dove in as the gate was closing.

"Oh please Seth don't do anything stupid. I don't want to lose you...or see you like that ever again."
3327 cr points
Send Message: Send PM GB Post
25 / M / The Castle That N...
Offline
Posted 5/17/07
"Did you feel this?"Zodiak asked
Xurik woke up. "Darkness! Pure one...That kind is rare. We beter go and see what that hell is hapening......So do you know where it came from."
"I thought you knew!?"
"So we don't know where it came from. There it's only one option!" Xurik said in a serous way
"Kill people until we find out?" Zodiak asked
"No..Sleep!" Xurik said smiling. His serious expression vanished in a second
" ARE YOU STUPID! IS SLEEP THE ONLY THING YOU KNOW HOW TO DO?"
"No! It's only the thing I like the most doing!" Xurik rise up from the tree and started walking
"Where are we going?"
"To the human world."
"Why?"
"You want to find the pure Darkness don't you?"
"I thught you didn't know where it was!"
"I lied!"

------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

~Narrative~

Xurik strated walking. It was almost day. xurik went to the capitan's room. He stared at the door for a while. Something about that dark energy remeberred him of the days when he was still in Zieg's body. He went in. hee put his head inside the door leaving his body compleatly out of the room.

------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

"Capt'n are you there?"Xurik asked with a funny voice
"You embarasse me do you know that?"Zodiak said
"Looks like the capt'n isn't here."
"HEI DON'T ACT LIKE I'M NOT HERE!"
"Where could he gone?" Xurik said Ignoring him compleatly
"LISTEN TO ME!"Zodiak shouted so loud Xurik's head almost blew up
"Shut up." Xurik said in a serious face"I can't concentrate with you screeming inside my head."

------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
~Narrative~

Xurik heded to the gate. He steped out near Urahara's shop. he noticed that the capitan was in the human world. He started smiling and his face started geting red as he looked at the window to Yourichi's room.

Is this long enough Sotta228?
4193 cr points
Send Message: Send PM GB Post
23 / M / Poplar Bluff, Mis...
Offline
Posted 5/17/07
(yeah it was fine.)
~Kurokai

"Dad!" Kurokai yelled as he entered the shop. Urahara ran up to the door. "Hey Kurokai. Why are you back so suddenly?" "I had a serious question. Lately i have felt this power surge everyonce in awhile. It is only for a split second but it's strong. When I feel it i just freeze. No one I spoke to seemed to have felt anything. Do you know what is happening?" "Well," Urahara replied, " I haven't felt anything but, my spirit recording device has felt some strange things." As he said this he brought out a small box and opened it up revealing a strange looking, square box with a needle going across the top bending down to point at the center. "It works similar to a seismograph, which records stuff about earthquakes. This, however, doesn't record on paper, it just plays back the movement according to the time. Watch." He pressed a few buttons. In truth Kurokai had no idea how it worked or how he turned it on. After he had pressed a few buttons the top started glowing. The needle gently swung a tiny bit back and forth. "Now I didn't have time to use any of my better machines so sorry about this. Now this is where it started to get weird." The needle went from swinging gently to swinging violently back in forth. The machine started shaking in his hand. The needle almost broke by trying to go to far and the machine sputtered and died. "Every time it shows this there is an overload. It just dies and i can't get it working for another hour. The same thing happened a night later and this time it was worse. It seemed to either have gained power or gotten closer. I reccomend staying home. I heard over the phone on the new news thingy they put in the phones that a shinigami was recently killed. It seems he had exploded. No one knows how. I don't know if this is connected but I wouldn't stay here right now." "I guess I will go back." I sighed. *This hasn't helped much.* "Hey where is mom?" Rashiruru asked. "Yoriuichi is in her room. She is a little grumpy right now so I'd leave her alone." "Well we are going back for now." "Wait, Kurokai, Rashiruru, their...friend, someone has been listening to this conversation. I am gonna guess they are outside right now and are running away after being found out. Seems about Vice strength. Not an enemy. But please try to keep this quiet. We don't want people worrying more than they already are."

~Bad guy

"I am being followed still. By who? He seems strong but right now, no match for me." The figure was walking through the town amidst the humans, still disguised. "Hey! Hey wait up!" A young woman ran up to him. "Where did you go last night?" This girl must have known the man he took the identity of. "I...I have to show you something." "What?" "Follow me to the alley. I found something in here." The woman followed the man back into the alley where he must do what must be done. "I can't let you have seen me. I'm sorry." "What?" The woman said laughing. "Goodbye." Darkness appeared around his hand and formed into his sword. "What the fu-" She was cut off when he shoved his sword into her stomach. "No one can see me." He pulled his sword out. Blood spilled onto his body. "Now people will see me." His body seemed to turn into shadow. The shadow burst off his skin showing his original form. "I will find someone else soon." He walked out of the alley and jumped onto another building. "Where are you Kobayashi?"
4193 cr points
Send Message: Send PM GB Post
23 / M / Poplar Bluff, Mis...
Offline
Posted 5/17/07
Announcment

There are 4 skills of the shinigami combat;

Sword fighting

hand-to-hand

foot combat (and shunpo...running fast.)

and kido (magic.)

I want u to write what u are best in from best to worst in your profile

mine would be like this:

swords 10/10
hand-to-hand 8/10
foot 7/10
kido 2/10

as u can see my character sucks at magic (not counting normal fire spells that he uses like just shooting flames which isnt the same as kido attacks.) he doesnt use it that much. he can cast it but sometimes it backfires. i am great at sword. now that u see this decide what order your skills are in. dont post what your skills are like i did until i make another post that involves this subject. after that you will send it to me in a pm and we will make sure it checks out. till then dont ask about the skill matter.
21500 cr points
Send Message: Send PM GB Post
M / Visor Lair
Offline
Posted 5/17/07
Name: Heather Niona
age: 18
description: Casual soul reaper outfit. Pink mid back length hair. and sexy body. Bankai: Heather becomes naked except for a brown cloth that covers her entire torso and down to mid of her thighs.
Zanbaktou: Yunlata- Shikai: A long Flute. Bankai: Flute dissappears and Heather gets fairy wings as well as her voice becomes super powered. Power: Heather's flute/voice can put creatures to sleep or obliterate them with massive sound waves. Once Heather designates who she is putting to sleep or damaging it is up to the person to try to stop her before they fall asleep or fall dead. Blocking ears, attacking Heather, things such as work to halt her.
Bio: Heather graduated high in her class and had always had a crush on Seth. Seth was just so mysterious, dark, and cold. Heather was elated when she actually got placed in the same division as him. Heather watched Seth climb to Captain of the division. Heather then worked hard and was finally appointed as Vice Captain. Heather feels that Seth will definitely fall for her now. Heather has seen Seth's dark side before. She had to stop him that time and realized that she is the only one who can. She can now see why she was placed with him and made his vice captain. Heather never wants to witness that again but she will do what she has to.

Sword 1
Hand to Hand 10
Foot 9
Kido 7
21500 cr points
Send Message: Send PM GB Post
M / Visor Lair
Offline
Posted 5/17/07
OOC: The double post is only to keep the profile and post seperate.

Seth was in the town now. No one could see him he was in his shinigami form to make things easier.

"I am getting close I can feel it. Where are you, where are you?"

Seth turned a corner and saw something move in an alley.

"What was that? Lets find out."

Seth ran to the alley and went down it fast. He found the body of a human woman dead.

"Still fresh blood and the body is warm. I am close very close. So close I can feel him, and he can feel me."

Seth looked around him then looked up where he caught a glimpse of a figure.

"Found you."

Seth drew his sword and began to run.

"Reap, Grimacerain!!"

The sword turned into a scythe as Seth ran up the side of the building towards the figure.Seth was gaining fast and prepared to bankai if he needed it.

"Your mine now."


Heather had heard the conversation. Now she knew Seth was going after something bad if just waves of it's power being close and break that machine. Heather was then shocked to feel a burst of rieatsu that she recognized and knew all to well.

"Oh god no. Please Seth be fighting a hollow and not engaging this thing."

Heather hurried in the direction of Seth's rieatsu hoping to catch up to him in time.
4193 cr points
Send Message: Send PM GB Post
23 / M / Poplar Bluff, Mis...
Offline
Posted 5/18/07
heathers skills are fine( since she is a vice) but i dont want anyone else to do it yet cuz i am trying to figure out how to do seats. if a captain and the lowest seat had a 10 in the same skill it wouldnt be right so i am thinking still.
21500 cr points
Send Message: Send PM GB Post
M / Visor Lair
Offline
Posted 5/18/07
OOC: Well I wasn't sure what to do with the points but I was thinking that looked right. This is mostly just a post so you don't have to double post.
4193 cr points
Send Message: Send PM GB Post
23 / M / Poplar Bluff, Mis...
Offline
Posted 5/18/07
~bad guy

"Who is that?" The figure said looking at the approaching shinigami.Shadow started to form around his hands and go into the sleeves of his robe.
(I'm not exactly sure what his clothes are like but for now he will have a shinigami robe with the colors switched. White robe and sandals. black socks *are those called socks or something else? whatever.* as i said just invert the black and white colors. I am still deciding how i want his hair so for now use your imagination. He lookes about 18 years old. anyway back to the story.)
Where the shadow went now came blades of pure black. The blades came off his arm about 6 inches. "I will fight you if I must, but i warn you, if you try to fight you might end up dead. I need to find him and nothing will stop me."
8306 cr points
Send Message: Send PM GB Post
26 / M / s'pore
Offline
Posted 5/18/07
welll... my Rating would be

hand-to-hand = 10
kido=4
foot=10
sword = 7
21500 cr points
Send Message: Send PM GB Post
M / Visor Lair
Offline
Posted 5/19/07
Seth smiled at the figure.

"Kill me if you can. You won't be the first to try!!"

Seth jumped up and slashed down at the man with his scythe.
First  Prev  1  2  3  4  5  6  7  8  9  10  11  12  13  14  15  16  17  Next  Last
You must be logged in to post.