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One and My Own [Fanfiction]
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Posted 11/26/08

StarlIight wrote:

Sowwii... But I didn't like having to scroll down for the translations...

You shouldn't use too much Japanese, I got tired of scrolling down that
I didn't bother to finish reading


I know, I was gonna change it, but it was too troublesome..
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Posted 11/26/08

mariah10 wrote:

its very good BUT STOP USING JAPANSE ok im done


I know.. There's usually some Japanese that you don't need to know to understand..
Posted 11/26/08

iluvshaoran wrote:


mariah10 wrote:

its very good BUT STOP USING JAPANSE ok im done


I know.. There's usually some Japanese that you don't need to know to understand..


yeah but i dont like it.
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Posted 11/26/08 , edited 11/26/08
You should use less Japanese for the sake of those who don't understand. & It's kind of confusing. It also strays a bit too much from the anime/manga, making it hard to understand what you are trying to get across to the reader. Good try.
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