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Hey everyone!!^-^ Do you think you can write the best poetry? Will what are you waiting for?! Come and submit your wonderful work here where 3 great judges can read them!! If your poem is actually great, your work, username, and picture of either 1st, 2nd, or 3rd place will be posted on the front page where everyone can see!! (I know this isn't a great intro but please participate!! Thanks for those who do!! X3) Your topic can be anything you want it to be so be creative and start writing!! ^o^
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Posted 11/25/08
YAY!

*starts writing poetry 10 at a time*

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Posted 11/26/08
hehe cant wait!! ^_^
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oh yeah and whens the deadline? bcz november ends in a few days haha xD
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Posted 11/28/08
lolz yeah, i decided to extend the date to december 20th^-^
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I guess I'll be first post! :D:D:D:D

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There is darkness everywhere;
the cold wraps her body
and strangles her cries
She moans in despair

She cannot be free
for her body is chained
she cannot dream
for her soul is captured
Her vision of this world has darkened
for her past has hurt her

Time and time again
her mind will linger
on that one little past she had always remembered
It was a moment of true ecstasy
and the memory she had not long to be forgotten

An image of a boy,
with fair skin and longing dark eyes
held her warmly
where her head had fitted in his shoulders

Like a dainty prince
he had held her like a princess
her heart had soared
and she would never forget this feeling


Tears dripping down the chamber floor
Her body shuddering
Where had he gone,
but to the world
where there is no return

So empty,
and lost
there is no escape


*truth be told I really don't understand it, it just kinda..came to me, but yea..eck
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Posted 11/28/08
wahhh its soo gwd!! ^__^ i ♥ it~~ hehe
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sweet, thanks, I didn't think it would turn out too good >.<
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Posted 11/28/08
hrm.. heres mine, not too good though. T.T"

Goodbye.
(Inspired by Koizora, Sky of Love Japanese Movie)
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orientalcind4rella wrote:

hrm.. heres mine, not too good though. T.T"

Goodbye.
(Inspired by Koizora, Sky of Love Japanese Movie)


omg! I read this one on your profile and thought it was extremely good xDDDDD and I love Koizora <3

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Posted 12/1/08 , edited 12/1/08
here is mine:

Farewell
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A fair dream travels my mind,
as a reminder of you,
a reminder of me,
of us...
....
But it fades away slowly,
doesnt matter how much I hold on to it,
cause it's a dream,
it always has been,
like you...
like me...
like us...
....
Digesting things were told,
never been more harder,
words never reached this deep in me,
never caused more damage,
never felt more broken,
missing you...
missing me...
missing us...
....
You promised we were gonna fly together,
but near the abyss, you pushed me,
i fell and you turned around...you walked away,
you forgot something my dear...
you never thought me how to fly
now falling like you...
falling like me...
like us...
....
The ground gets closer
tears fall and my hands over my heart
guarding it,
protecting it,
saving it,
from you...
from me...
from us...
....
The dream disappers forever,
reality becomes the truth,
acceptance fill my heart
and...
i realise i can fly,
fly away from you...
away from me...
from us...
....
I see you below walking slowly,
i see sunrise greeting me,
i realise the truth then...
i am the one with the wings,..
flying over you to the sunrise
....
starting over,
like you...
like me...
....
but..
....
not like us...
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Posted 12/6/08 , edited 12/6/08
Well, here's my poem. I'm hoping people read it because I like feeback from people

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Gentle Suicide

Within my heart
There was the dark
Bleeding and screaming
For me, to be free
To forget thee
That tortures me

With these painful words that spear me
And these hurtful voices that try to kill me
I need to flee
I need to be free
Because I want to be me

But this torture that kills me so
That I know I must let go
That I must forget so
For I cry through endless nights
Where I fight with my might

I need to escape
I need to get away
I need to jump for me
So I’ll fall and let go

As I fell back
I felt me once again
So, I fell again back
Feeling the weight on my shoulders disappear
I felt as if the day were my today
I felt my spirit being whisked away
And my pain and sorrows flying away

So I completely let go and floated off to my destiny
In a world of clouds and wings surrounded me
Where angelic voices call to me
As I take their hands, my own wings grow from me
And I fly to my new home
Where you are free
Where there is harmony
Where you may love thee
To heaven where I shall be for eternity

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asianangel122890 wrote:

Well, here's my poem. I'm hoping people read it because I like feeback from people

asianangel122890 ©All Rights Reserved.

Gentle Suicide

Within my heart
There was the dark
Bleeding and screaming
For me, to be free
To forget thee
That tortures me

With these painful words that spear me
And these hurtful voices that try to kill me
I need to flee
I need to be free
Because I want to be me

But this torture that kills me so
That I know I must let go
That I must forget so
For I cry through endless nights
Where I fight with my might

I need to escape
I need to get away
I need to jump for me
So I’ll fall and let go

As I fell back
I felt me once again
So, I fell again back
Feeling the weight on my shoulders disappear
I felt as if the day were my today
I felt my spirit being whisked away
And my pain and sorrows flying away

So I completely let go and floated off to my destiny
In a world of clouds and wings surrounded me
Where angelic voices call to me
As I take their hands, my own wings grow from me
And I fly to my new home
Where you are free
Where there is harmony
Where you may love thee
To heaven where I shall be for eternity



do you mind if use that poem in apicture likeso its a picture it would be like on a picture ( I modifie pictures)
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Posted 12/6/08

dattebayo_kawaii wrote:


asianangel122890 wrote:

Well, here's my poem. I'm hoping people read it because I like feeback from people

asianangel122890 ©All Rights Reserved.

Gentle Suicide

Within my heart
There was the dark
Bleeding and screaming
For me, to be free
To forget thee
That tortures me

With these painful words that spear me
And these hurtful voices that try to kill me
I need to flee
I need to be free
Because I want to be me

But this torture that kills me so
That I know I must let go
That I must forget so
For I cry through endless nights
Where I fight with my might

I need to escape
I need to get away
I need to jump for me
So I’ll fall and let go

As I fell back
I felt me once again
So, I fell again back
Feeling the weight on my shoulders disappear
I felt as if the day were my today
I felt my spirit being whisked away
And my pain and sorrows flying away

So I completely let go and floated off to my destiny
In a world of clouds and wings surrounded me
Where angelic voices call to me
As I take their hands, my own wings grow from me
And I fly to my new home
Where you are free
Where there is harmony
Where you may love thee
To heaven where I shall be for eternity



do you mind if use that poem in apicture likeso its a picture it would be like on a picture ( I modifie pictures)


sure as long as you dun copyright the poem under ur name. Anyway, ummmm....what do u think of the poem
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Posted 12/6/08
its really good! I can send you the pic if you want!
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