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Posted 12/22/08
very good poems all of you^^ your all really good!
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Posted 12/24/08 , edited 12/24/08
Its gonna be really hard to choose, tho I have an idea, when ever its the last day, the judges (including me) can make top three list and post it here, like

1.. Name of the poem _ And the Author
2.. same
3.. same

tho of course we would write it with an order, number one would be our fav. number two the second fav and like that............and whoever gets the most votes can be the lucky winner


and here is my third poem;

Illusion

Under the mist of the cold night
Through the mistic glowing of the moonlight
He walks to me
He talks to me
Not knowing how much he hurts me
Now feeling his hands around me
I sway on the spot
My eyes closed
Waiting for the moment to pass
Cause actually he isnt here
These arms I feel around me arent his
This warm whisper over my ear isnt his
These murdering kisses on my neck arent his
This overpowering smell making me unbalanced isnt his
It isnt
It cant be
I am dreaming again
Seeing you again
Crying in my pillow again
You are between the lines in every book
You hit me hard with every chorus
You smile cruelly from the Tv
You laugh outside torturing me
All my books, hide me no more
Songs, they kill me now
Dreams are nightmares
But I crave them
Longing for you
And each time the moon borns
My soul goes to the place...
Where you and I shared,
Where you and I escaped,

And now
Where I am chained...


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Posted 12/24/08 , edited 12/24/08
and the fourth and the last one:


The Ghost

With broken memories in my mind
Mourning after the gone
A vast emptiness in my heart
A land of dust without any sun
No funeral for the dreams
All died undone
...
A ghost is haunting me
I feel him in the sleepless nights
Strolling around with me
Touching me, holding me
Torturing with lies
...
My days are getting darker
The silky night suffocates me
With flashing memories over and over
The ghost at my bedside
Wiping my tears away
Knowing that it wouldnt help me
But doing it anyway
...
His every touch, I already cannot feel
Makes the pain worse
Every tear drop I thought would be the last
Leads another river which again, seems vast
I need him but he must go
I want him and he does me so
But he is a ghost
A ghost of broken memories
A ghost of dead dreams
He is killing me, I know
I should say "Let me go"
...
Now he looks down at me
Seing the pain he is causing me
A single tear slides down his transparent cheek
Leaving a glowing trace behind
He stands up and glides away from me
Looks deep down at me
And then,
Whispers painfully

"Now you are free"

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Posted 12/25/08
its going to be so hard to choose *chews nails in frustration and in worry*
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Posted 12/26/08 , edited 12/26/08

dattebayo_kawaii wrote:

its going to be so hard to choose *chews nails in frustration and in worry*


Now that I am thinking I think we shouldnt pick the winner here, we should send our top three list to the one of the judges with PM, who can count and then tell the result... this way it would be a suprise for everyone ^_^ why dont we send it to you dattebayo_kawaii?
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Posted 12/28/08 , edited 12/28/08
thats fine with me^^ and when people will send me their top three I'll send the my top three and we'll decide by majority I think that would be fair enough
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Posted 12/28/08 , edited 12/28/08
Its almost the end of the December, soo, I am posting my top three list:

1st. xxuseless-bulletxx _ The Doll Maker

2nd. cosmictourist _ An Ancient Love Story

3rd. YAYdudette123 _ ------------- (No Title to the poem)
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elanra_moonlight wrote:

Its almost the end of the December, soo, I am posting my top three list:

1st. xxuseless-bulletxx _ The Doll Maker

2nd. cosmictourist _ An Ancient Love Story

3rd. YAYdudette123 _ ------------- (No Title to the poem)


OMG YAY!!!! :DDD i didnt expect to be on anyone's top list. xDDD

thank yoo! *dont think my poem is any good* xDD
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Posted 12/28/08

xxuseless-bulletsxx wrote:


elanra_moonlight wrote:

Its almost the end of the December, soo, I am posting my top three list:

1st. xxuseless-bulletxx _ The Doll Maker

2nd. cosmictourist _ An Ancient Love Story

3rd. YAYdudette123 _ ------------- (No Title to the poem)


OMG YAY!!!! :DDD i didnt expect to be on anyone's top list. xDDD

thank yoo! *dont think my poem is any good* xDD

ur joking right??

that was one of the bests of I have ever read!! I loved yours so much I had to fight with a wild, unexpected urge of stealing
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LOL!!!






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xxuseless-bulletsxx wrote:

LOL!!!












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1st: xxuseless-bulletsxx_ The Doll Maker

2nd: elanra_moonlight_ When An Angel Falls

3rd: asianangel122890_ Gentle Sucide
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ok then here's my top three^^

1: xxuseless-bulletsxx _ The Doll Maker
2: asianangel122890 _ Gentle Suicide
3: elanra_moonlight _ When An Angle Falls

so there is^^ my top three! lol well I have to say that I was more then impressed with the poems and thus it was horribly hard to choose but I had too! so yeah..
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Posted 12/31/08
orientalcind4rella's votes, I dunno why but she send it to me

1st: elanra_moonlight_ When an Angel Falls
2nd: cosmictourist _ An Ancient Love Story
3rd: xxuseless-bulletsxx _ The Doll Maker
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Posted 12/31/08 , edited 12/31/08
according to these votes,

the December Poetry Contest Winners are:



1st: xxuseless-bulletsxx _ The Doll Maker

2nd: elanra_moonlight_ When an Angel Falls

3rd: cosmictourist _ An Ancient Love Story



and also big congratilations to asianangel122890, who just by placement missed the third place

Thanks everyone who joined and took it seriously to actually write something...

Well Done xxuseless-bulletsxx, your poem was incredibly good.... please keep writing
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