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Posted 12/31/08
OMG the poems were all so amazing. i feel really bad now. congrats elenra and cosmic and to everyone else. u guys are amazing.

happy new year as well!!!

Posted 1/31/09
Is there gonna be another contest soon~~?
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elanra_moonlight wrote:

When an Angel Falls

I woke up today to a grey day
Looked out of the window
Searching the lake and the bay
The lake was frozen
The bay was empty
Trees shivering as if they were cold
Birds flying away to a warmer world

I walked outside to understand
Why was the world grieving?
The wind was quiet
Clouds were silent
Nature was in a halt
Not a single cricket sound
No noise from a single crow

I looked up in the sky
Seeking the answer: Why?
A rain drop fell on my face
Wind stroked my hair gently
Still quiet as if showing respect
But whispering softly to my ear
Telling me a story of an Angel

It told me, last night as I slept
Lying in my bed peacefully and dreamt
An Angel fell from the sky
And a love story ended with a lie
The wind told me how high the Angel was
Blazing like a torch with the flames of love
How graceful yet humble she was
How gloriously she reflected
The greatest emotion of the human heart

The gloomy voice of the wind
Telling me a story of an Angel
And I understood why
Why was the world greving?
Mourning for the fallen
Mourning for her love

Today I learned what happenes
When an Angel falls
God would cry
Living would be silent
Nature would venerate
Painting her pain on the earth's face

The wind whispered again:
One day in the future
Not very close
Not too far away
I would woke up to a bright day
The sun glistening on the lake
Birds singing a symphony
It said then I would see
The celebration of the Angel rising
Its voice fading away,
Whispering,

"Because, my dear human heart,
There is a rise for every falling"


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That ... is so good! The mourning of an angels love ...
It's very, very touching. I loved reading every bit of it.
I've got goose-bumps, see? *shows u my arm*
A fantstic ending to wrap up a tremendous piece of poetry.
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Posted 4/9/09
And i am also extremely curious to know if there will be another contest, maybe not for poetry, but a contest at least. Could you please organise another one so i can participate? (was not a member wen this contest was on ... XD) Thank u so much!
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Kujin-jump wrote:

And i am also extremely curious to know if there will be another contest, maybe not for poetry, but a contest at least. Could you please organise another one so i can participate? (was not a member wen this contest was on ... XD) Thank u so much!


First thank you so much for the comment and for showing me your arm

That was probably one of the most effective comments I got about "when an angel falls"

Arigato Kujin-sama.

And about another contest, yes we are planning to have another ones soon. I guess everyone is just waiting for me to come back. I am busy with moving and some other personal problems. When I am back I'll first thing contact the other mods to start another poetry or writing contest.

Have a truly amazing day!


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Oh, i see. Well, i give you good luck for your moving XD I'm sure everything will go well.
And really? The most effective comment? I'm glad 2 hear it

Can't wait for the next contest!! XD

And you also have a great day.
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