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[Fanfiction] Tiramisu With You~
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GE: OMG This is my first fanfic! It may start out bad but no rude coments plz!
Tiramisu in Italian means "Please take me to heaven" So put it together it says "Please take me to Heaven with you~" Yeah the title may be bad but I thought it was kinda cute!
Ikuto: Shut up and start the fanfic.

Chapter 1: New Beginnings? Star class's new surprise!



YAH-HOO! (Oh god I sound like Kiba) First chapter done! I always dreamed of making my own Fanfic! Comments Plzz! But no mean ones! DD:< (Sorry for spelling mistakes)
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GE: OMG This is my first fanfic! It may start out bad but no rude coments plz!
Tiramisu in Italian means "Please take me to heaven" So put it together it says "Please take me to Heaven with you~" Yeah the title may be bad but I thought it was kinda cute!
Ikuto: Shut up and start the fanfic.

Chapter 1: New Beginnings? Star class's new surprise!



YAH-HOO! (Oh god I sound like Kiba) First chapter done! I always dreamed of making my own Fanfic! Comments Plzz! But no mean ones! DD:< (Sorry for spelling mistakes)


BTW The song "Chocolate Disco" belongs to the J-pop band Perfume.
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pretty good ^^
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not bad
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Posted 11/26/08
nicenice. when u starting on the next chapter?
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Thanks 4 the comments!

Chapter 2: Huh!? Eggs?! Burglar?!



Eh..he..he Sorry if it's bad... I did this early in the morning.
I changed it up a bit cause it sucked.
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This is pretty good hurry up with the next chapter XD
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NEXT CHAPTER please
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Posted 11/26/08 , edited 11/26/08
Glad you guys like it! I have to get at least 4 more comments before I post the next chapter.
Glad I started this on a weekend.


Chapter 3: Yuki's here! My chained heart, UNLOCK!



WOO-HOO! I really liked this chapter, a happy-moment chapter.
The song Cartoon Heroes belongs to the band, Aqua? I think.
COMMENT PLZZ!
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Also Yuki and Twilight Rocker drawn by my pal DeeDee_95. Thanks Naru-chan!

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DreamSinger97 wrote:

pretty good ^^





mariah10 wrote:

not bad





itchypeachy wrote:

nicenice. when u starting on the next chapter?





Gafoogleshankerz wrote:

This is pretty good hurry up with the next chapter XD





mariah10 wrote:

NEXT CHAPTER please




Thanks to the first people who gave great comments! It means a lot to me! :DD

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Posted 11/26/08
WOW it's so awesome! I want more but, i understand you're probably tired. XD
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Karin55 wrote:

WOW it's so awesome! I want more but, i understand you're probably tired. XD


Thanks! I'm kinda planning out what I'm doing for the next chapters hehe. XD

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Posted 11/26/08
Amazing! It's very creative and the eggs you created for Grace are unique and original as well as the drawings. It's very well done. A little more improvement in your writing and you may as well become an author. One tip: Don't say 'said' too much. The story loses feeling when the same word is repeated more than twice. Other than that keep it up. Can't wait until the next chapter! XP

Later~!
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Uhh, yeah I just HAD to get another chapter out today, since I love writing and I'm gonna kind of be busy tomorrow. HAPPY THANKSGIVING EVERYONE!

Chapter 4: The Hobo chase! Guardians make their appearance!

Sorry it's short, but I loled at this one. XDD
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