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[Fanfiction] Tiramisu With You~
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Amazing! It's very creative and the eggs you created for Grace are unique and original as well as the drawings. It's very well done. A little more improvement in your writing and you may as well become an author. One tip: Don't say 'said' too much. The story loses feeling when the same word is repeated more than twice. Other than that keep it up. Can't wait until the next chapter! XP

Later~!
Senin~!


Thank you very much! People do say I use the word "said" alot, but all my teachers say I have a creative imagination. Most of this would have probably happened if I went to Japan and had guardian eggs. In the beginning of the school year I was separated from all my friends and put in a homeroom with only 7 girls! I wished there was a way to truly be myself and to be a popular student in the new class. It's kinda weird cause my wish came true! I became popular and now I get along with the girls and guys. My character at school is crazy and I'm the class clown. I'm just lucky. ...Wow this was a long response.
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~Grace-chan
(BTW the pic was made by my pal DeeDee_95 )

Posted 11/26/08 , edited 11/27/08
too short but LOL they thought she was a hobo wow thats funny
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too short bur LOL they thought she was a hobo wow thats funny


Yeah I stopped there cause my mom wanted me to help with the Thanksgiving table.
LOL I'm starting to like being the author of this Fanfic.
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ATTENTION PEOPLES!

Uhh, yeah I just wanted to say some stuff.
The character "Grace Suzuki" is me.
This story is a dramatic comedy. I have all sorts of ideas for it.
There may be only some couple parts, cause I'm not good at romantic scenes, Gomen! DD:
I'll do the best I can! If you like this fanfic tell your friends! It would really help me.
And umm... other stuff I will probably post later!

Thanks Everyone!~
-Grace-chan (Author of "Tiramisu With You~" )
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The Cast "Tiramisu With You~" (so far) :
WISHES YOU A HAPPY THANKSGIVING!


Grace: Note: PIG OUT ALL YA WANT! It's the only time of year you can pig out and not get any funny stares!
Amu: Happy Thanksgiving! Be Thankful for your would be selves in your hearts!
Cat Dude: Yo. Uhh.. be Thankful and stuff...
Yoru: Happy Thanksgiving Nya~ FISH PLEASE!
Yuki: Family and friends are the way to go!
Blonde haired kid: I haven't even shown up in the series twice!
Everyone: Thanks for Reading "Tiramisu With You~" And HAPPY THANKSGIVING!

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Posted 11/27/08 , edited 11/27/08
TAADDA! Chapter 5 is here! I can uplode these chapters pretty quick.

Chapter 5: My own way! The inner me!




Thank you! Come back for chapter 6!

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Character Profile.

Name: Grace Suzuki
Grade: Whatever grade Amu's in at the time.
Hair: Chocolate brown
Eyes: brown
Charas (so far): Yuki
Eggs: 3
Character Transformation: Twilight Rocker.
Attacks: Twilight Tune, Rocker's Encore.

Posted 11/27/08
nice chapter and HAPPY THANKGIVING (i like to type in caps)
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mariah10 wrote:

nice chapter and HAPPY THANKGIVING (i like to type in caps)


Thanks! HAPPY THANKSGIVING!

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Yayzz! Chapter 6!

Chapter 6: Char-nari Twilight Rocker! The X-egg Showdown!



Dramatic much? I would have make it a cliff-hanger but It would have been too short.
COMMENTS PLEASE! :DDD
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Check it out!



Yeah I know it's bad. I lost my pink pencil so I did Amu's hair with a highlighter.
And Dia's egg looks red but it's orange.
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Check it out!



Yeah I know it's bad. I lost my pink pencil so I did Amu's hair with a highlighter.
And Dia's egg looks red but it's orange.


you made creative eggs!
Posted 11/27/08
poor grace and the eggs you drew looked great
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Posted 11/27/08

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Melon_GE_ wrote:

Check it out!



Yeah I know it's bad. I lost my pink pencil so I did Amu's hair with a highlighter.
And Dia's egg looks red but it's orange.


you made creative eggs!





mariah10 wrote:

poor grace and the eggs you drew looked great


Thank you very much~
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