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since I haven't seen any fanfic about this guy, I decided to make one for him~!
so, this goes for all who like Kei...
and this also goes for those who made sad fanfics that I've read...


Legends:
blue- Inoo Kei
purple- flashback
orange- fate
red-Natsuki
italicized-lyrics

since sad fanfics are raging all over, I decided to really make this as a SAD fanfic~<<if it's really sad, that is~
listen to this song so that you can feel the atmoshpere while reading this~
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LT-CcHE1MNY
enjoy reading~ *hehe*



Holding Tonight


I remember the times we spent together
On those drives
We had a million questions
All about our lives
And when we got to New York
Everything felt right
I wish you were here with me

Tonight

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I question myself, "why did I miss so many chances of confessing how much I need you??"... it's damn pathetic. How I wish I was never born, but if I really was, then I wouldn't see the light of my darkness... and it's you, my love, my Natsuki... Now... it's too late to say I'm sorry I'm neglectful, I'm sorry I'm blissful, I'm sorry because I love you too! You're gone, gone with the winds of the night... My mind, blank with the tears filling my eyes. My heart, throbbing with painstabs. Me, mourning because you have left me, eternally...

>>flashback<<

Natsuki: ohayo Kei-kun~!
Kei: *finally, I won't have to count the seconds for you to come, because you're here now* ohayo Natsuki~
Natsuki: ~ne, can you please go with me to the mall later??
Kei: *how could I ever refuse you??* ofcourse... if that's what you want 'best~'
Natsuki: *saddens* uhuh~ sure...
Kei: *what's wrong?? did I say something for you to be sad??*


That time, I was confused whenever you put your veil of sadness in your face... it felt like I should be more careful to what I should say, afterall, you 'were' my bestfriend... But it was something more that I feel towards you... and saying "best" just pricks my tongue whenever I call out to you, I guess it wasn't just me... I feel remorse behind everything about our fake "bestfriend" relationship, because it's more than just that, But we never really got to that point, where we could have each other's love.

I remember the days we spent together
were not enough
and it used to feel like dreamin'
except we always woke up
Never thought not having you
here now would hurt so much

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>>flashback<<

Natsuki: Kei-kun, let's go to that shop! there are so many trinkets...
Kei: sure~ *to see you happy, I would go where ever you are*
Natsuki: *holds a couple's necklace* ~ne Kei-kun, I bought this!
Kei: eh?? nande??
Natsuki: it's for us! ~ne ~ne, help me lock this one around my neck...
Kei: sure~ *as I place the necklace around you, I smiled, because it lays perfectly on you*
Natsuki: I'm gonna put this other one for you... *~ne, Kei-kun, I hope we'll always be together like this*
Kei: *my heart leaps for joy when you're this close to me* Natsuki-chan, it suits perfectly well...
Natsuki: yeah~ *I'm glad you liked this move I did for you to notice there's something more of me, only for you*
Kei: *demo, I can't let myself get carried away* this is really great, 'best~'...
Natsuki: *damn, I guess this isn't enough!* uhuh... yeah it is... *saddens*


Tonight I've fallen and I can't get up
I need your loving hands to come and pick me up
And every night I miss you, I can just look up
And know the stars are
Holding you, holding you, holding you
Tonight


I'm holding to my necklace, but where is yours?? it's there, out in the sky, with you... I'm so damn stupid for not telling how much you mean everything to me. What is love?? Love is like the feeling of floating up in the air, being high on heels and tasting happiness. But I will never have that anymore, because you wondered away.. so far away from me...
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Everyday, they grew tired of their little fake charade about their "friendship"... The girl cannot bear but shout it out loud already... turns out, it wasn't meant to happen.. It was bound to break their fragile hearts into dusts&particles...

On a rainy day, we were at Kei's house, I couldn't hold it any longer.. If I stay silent about how I feel towards you, then I would just break down in tears.. It's worst if I cry in front of you rather than hurting myself.

I remember the time you told me
About when you were eight
And all those things you said that night
That just couldn't wait

I remember the car you were last seen in
And the games we would play
All the times we spilled our coffees
And stayed out way too late

>>flashback<<

Natsuki: Kei-kun, could you please look at me first...
Kei: huh?? nande?? doushita no?? (huh?? why?? is something wrong??)
Natsuki: Kei-kun, we have been best friends for so long and yet, you still do not know if I really want our friendship...*saddens*
Kei: eh?? don't you like how I look out for you?? Is that why you're always so sad with me?? If something's wrong with me, I could always change it for you..
Natsuki: no Kei, it's me who's wrong... would you listen to every word I'm gonna say after this??
Kei: ofcourse I would... if it's for my 'best~', then I would...
Natsuki: Kei-kun...AI-SHI-TE-RU... the way you treat me, the way you care for me, the way you are gentle, it's killing every second of my consciousness... I fall so deep on my bestfriend, and it's YOU...
Kei: *whats this?? what am I hearing from you?? is this really true??* Nat...su..ki..-chan...
Natsuki: Kei-kun, I guess I can never be near you again huh?? Because I've broken our solemn friendship... *crying hysterically*
Kei: ch..cho..tto..ma..tte... Natsuki, are you leaving me?? *in near tears*
Natsuki: I can ony leave you with this Kei *kisses Kei's lips* gomenasai Kei-kun, I've got to go now..*runs away in the cold,raining outside*
Kei: *what's up with you Kei?! aren't you gonna chase her off?! Come on feet, move and run outside and go for her!*


I remember the time you sat and told me
About your Jesus
And how not to look back
Even if no one believes us
When it hurts so bad
Sometimes not having you here
I sing


Kei-kun, you're so cruel... You never said a word when I expressed what is truly inside my heart. Do you know, that it beats, only for you?? I run as fast as I could to nowhere... I was crossing the street, then, I saw a bright light flashing and coming towards me.. I felt pain all over my body, but it didn't overcame how I felt when Kei didn't see how much I love him, how much I care for him, how much I needed him in my Life.. Then, I heard his voice, such an angelic voice he has, but it was in panic, in fear.. and I knew, I can never sort things up now.. Because my Life, would now.. END here...

A sharp sound was heard all over the street... the screech of tires marked the end.. the DEATH of Natsuki.
Then there Kei was, standing in front of her lifeless body.. Calling out her name, crying for her sake.. But it's too late.. he'll never see his Natsuki.. NEVER again..

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Natsuki... It was the only time that fear has overwhelmed my very presence... You were too young to die! You were too sweet, too kind, too gentle to be taken so early by the heavens..I cradled you into my arms, hoping you would smile once again for me. But, it was all too late. I reached my hands out to your face, to see if I can still save you. But, all I saw was the fading light in your eyes..
Being here at the riverbanks where we used to play since we were kids, it's pretty nostalgic. Next thing I know is that silent tears came running down my face. I stare at the vast sky, the stars are shining for me. Does that mean you're shining for me too?? I gazed at my reflection at the edge of the water, I clearly see the coward I truly am.. So I've decided, I'm going to where you are, Natsuki..


Tonight I've fallen and I can't get up
I need your loving hands to come and pick me up
And every night I miss you, I can just look up
And know the stars are
Holding you, holding you, holding you
Tonight

Tonight, a decision has been made. Tonight, a love reposed would come back. And tonight, will be the period of Kei's regrets.. Looking above him, were the shiniest stars he has ever seen, because tonight, will be the last time he will ever see the grandeurs of the night..

As I sink deep into the waters, I know many will wonder why a young man drowned himself.. All I can say, is that, this young man in me was a coward. All he can do was die in a way he sparkles in the stars' reflections in the water.. Ottosan,Okaasan, arigatou for giving life to me and showing how beautiful life is.. But, my world ended when she left me.. There's no more reason for me to live on, I know I'm being selfish to take my life like this.. But it's the way I would be happy, and I know you want happiness for your only son, ME..

I sing
Tonight I've fallen and I can't get up
I need your loving hands to come and pick me up
And every night I miss you I can just look up
And know the stars are
Holding you, holding you, holding you
Tonight...


I hold out my last breath...


I DIE with Regrets, I DIE with Remorse, I DIE with my OWN Selfishness...
I am -Nothing-
I took out my hand, struggling out in the dark..
TONIGHT, I HAVE FALLEN...


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waaah! it feels like it's true!...huhu
so touching!...so they died together ne~..aww...
i felt sad for the both of them!!!...good job shie chan!...

waah 1st to comment..haha...
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awwwwwwww~
so sad ;~;
it feels so real....its so touching!
they both died TT^TT
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Eh?KEi die too??!!Huhuhu...Shie-chan!!!!Great!!^_~haha
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OMKei!!
how could you leave me??
xDD

this is great and sad!!
I love love the song you used!! ^-^
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arigatou~ minna for reading my one-shot of Kei~

*hehe!*

@geh-san: thanx for the 1st comment! *harhar!* I feel so good when you said you fet sad for them~XD! *i'm being evil to kill Kei*
@mochicocoa: so the fanfic touched you?? I killed Kei to so that it would be touching... *haha!* LoLz!
@Ati-chan: ~kyaa! thanx for always reading my one-shots...
@hsj9392: *haha!* so you're Natsuki huh... XD! the song was kinda my inspiration to write a sad fanfic 'coz it defines how someone feels whenever someone left them.. forever..

YATTA~! so I guess my SAD fanfic worked...
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yeah totally!! ^-^
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woah! .. kyaaa~!! .. yaaaaaahhhhhhh!!! .. i love it! .. haha .. demo .. kei died? ..huhuhuhu ...
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hsj9392 wrote:

yeah totally!! ^-^


*haha!*
*high five~!*
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woah! .. kyaaa~!! .. yaaaaaahhhhhhh!!! .. i love it! .. haha .. demo .. kei died? ..huhuhuhu ...


told ya it's gonna be a sad fanfic~ X3!

it's because there are so many sad fanfics that made me cry,
that's why it's my turn to let all of you CRY~ *harhar!*
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Posted 11/28/08
uwaaaaaaaa!!! huhuhu!!
its soooo sad again'!
anyway its a nice story again!!
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Posted 11/28/08
omgooosh.sadsadsad!
lovee it.sadficss rock!
loool
love ur fic shiechan^^
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waaa..it's so sad...it's too good too!! T.T...makes me wanna cry for them!!! it's so so so so sad...seems like someone wrote it on a based true event...awwww....good job!! really...it's a good story!!
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deen22 wrote:

uwaaaaaaaa!!! huhuhu!!
its soooo sad again'!
anyway its a nice story again!!


arigatou deen-chan~! XD!
I was just so into the revenge of making sad fanfics lately... *haha!* LoLz!
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yamachan-kakkoi wrote:

omgooosh.sadsadsad!
lovee it.sadficss rock!
loool
love ur fic shiechan^^


thanx for aLL the LOVE~!!!

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