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Editor orientalcind4rella 49999 cr points Send Message: 20 / F / oN tHe RoOf.. jk =P Offline	Permalink Reply Quote Posted 11/26/08, edited 11/26/08 Hello!! Want a place to express yourself through poetry? You've come to the right place!! =) Just post your own collections of poems / thoughts here for other readers to judge, comment and rate (out of 10) Feel free to add your own Please put them in spoilers for organisation purposes. (^_^;) Thank you are have fun!~ Writers Block rules&regulation applies ©All Rights Reserved.
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Editor orientalcind4rella 49999 cr points Send Message: 20 / F / oN tHe RoOf.. jk =P Offline	Permalink Reply Quote Posted 11/26/08 Hope you like it~ ^^ You Are.. Spoiler Alert!!! click to hide or show You are the stars, That glimmer as darkness overcasts its shadows. You are the sunset in the evening, When your presence eases my soul. You are the earth, A rich foundation to which supports me. You are a beautiful oak tree, Sheltering all the love i have for you. You are the soft white tissues, Wiping away my worries with comforting strokes. You are the clear crystal sky, Always there to watch over me. You are my thoughts, The one thing i ever think about. You are the letters, That strings together these words of mine. You are my love, My motivation to keep on living. You are my life, To which i would not exist without it. x3x3 You Can.. Spoiler Alert!!! click to hide or show What used to be is no more, Our love has decayed Our memories forgotten What happened to us? You can say that you love me but i know that you dont You can smile and act like nothings wrong but i know its just a window of despair You can look at me with your dazzling eyes but to me theyre nothing more than that You can promise me the world one day but to me its just another promise You can kiss me on the lips but i know its poison will seep through You can give me your warmth but its internally freezing me You can say you're thinking of me but you know its not true You can hold me tight to your chest but i know your holding back Through it all theres nothing more to it than you can. Because i know i can throw away This love, this heartache, this misery... S.M.I.L.E =) Spoiler Alert!!! click to hide or show S - howers of laughter M - ixed gently with love i - nto the depths of happiness L - onging for your comfort E - nriched by its beauty <orientalcind4rella>
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Member farfalla_12 10857 cr points Send Message: F / over there Offline	Permalink Reply Quote Posted 11/27/08 ^ can I comment here? If so... I'll start. :] Well, your work is pretty cute and fluffy.. Really nice and how you expressed love in the first one was good. I loved reading it. Hope to see more of your poetry.
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Head Writer PurpleSkye 5118 cr points Send Message: 19 / F / Philippines Offline	Permalink Reply Quote Posted 11/27/08, edited 11/27/08 It's fine. But it'd better if you quote the post you are commenting on. . . . I like her poems though it'd be more fun of there were rhymes but that's just me. . . >.<
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Editor orientalcind4rella 49999 cr points Send Message: 20 / F / oN tHe RoOf.. jk =P Offline	Permalink Reply Quote Posted 11/27/08 PurpleSkye wrote: It's fine. But it'd better if you quote the post you are commenting on. . . . I like her poems though it'd be more fun of there were rhymes but that's just me. . . >.< haha thnxx :] i do hav rhymes.. just keepsaking them for a while =P didnt want to put too much poems at a time ^^
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Editor orientalcind4rella 49999 cr points Send Message: 20 / F / oN tHe RoOf.. jk =P Offline	Permalink Reply Quote Posted 11/27/08 farfalla_12 wrote: ^ can I comment here? If so... I'll start. :] Well, your work is pretty cute and fluffy.. Really nice and how you expressed love in the first one was good. I loved reading it. Hope to see more of your poetry. :) naww thankyou!! ^__^ hugs =) im sooo glad you liked it
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Editor orientalcind4rella 49999 cr points Send Message: 20 / F / oN tHe RoOf.. jk =P Offline	Permalink Reply Quote Posted 11/27/08, edited 11/27/08 Tears&Lies. (Inspired by the song "I Know" - Son Ho Young, about an unrequited love) Spoiler Alert!!! click to hide or show Tears flood down my face With one look you said goodbye My heart rips, my heart shreds Can only think of one word, why? Amongst all the laughter we've shared, Amongst all the things we've been through Memories pour into my mind What happened to me and you? Standing here frozen, filled with emptiness I'm chained in a heartbreak Tightened by your carelessness Can hardly breathe, was this all fake? Why dont you love me anymore? Was it all a web stringed with lies? So many questions overcome me, How can i say my goodbyes? Deceived by your beauty Even more so with your lies But between us theres nothing left Except the love once long ago, now dies Shattered hastily into agony You walked away, leaving me here Abandoned on the sidelines Concrete engorged with tears. </3
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Head Writer PurpleSkye 5118 cr points Send Message: 19 / F / Philippines Offline	Permalink Reply Quote Posted 11/28/08 orientalcind4rella wrote: PurpleSkye wrote: It's fine. But it'd better if you quote the post you are commenting on. . . . I like her poems though it'd be more fun of there were rhymes but that's just me. . . >.< haha thnxx :] i do hav rhymes.. just keepsaking them for a while =P didnt want to put too much poems at a time ^^ Ohhh...I see! Hahaha... cool!
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Editor orientalcind4rella 49999 cr points Send Message: 20 / F / oN tHe RoOf.. jk =P Offline	Permalink Reply Quote Posted 11/28/08 lol are yu going to post any? O.o ^^
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Head Writer PurpleSkye 5118 cr points Send Message: 19 / F / Philippines Offline	Permalink Reply Quote Posted 11/28/08 Should I..? Hahaha... it's too embarrassing...>.< Maybe later, I should... I'll just have to find the original copies (i don't have them in the PC yet)...
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Member farfalla_12 10857 cr points Send Message: F / over there Offline	Permalink Reply Quote Posted 12/10/08 Okay, here's mine.. hope you'll like it and comment. :] Venomous Love The last goodbye I heard from your touching kiss It echoed with an agonizing hurt that stressed along my veins Will I ever be able to love you again? As the bliss of your eternal love left my heart? I yearned for the happiness of being held again With your arms along my wilting body You were my shoulder day after day I slip into your embrace Every time I see you pained, know that my everlasting love will never cease I would stretch my burning soul for you, and grip it full of passion I was intoxicated by your smiles, the one’s I was sure will left a mark The dawn will break without you by my side And night will appear breaking me into pieces Please come back to me again my love And bring the poisonous kiss I fell for ~
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sakuralockheart94 125542 cr points Send Message: 17 / F / Lost in Lonelyville Offline	Permalink Reply Quote Posted 12/13/08 i kinda made this a while ago and i've already used it as a chorus in one of my songs "When I Am" hope you like it i guess. really wanna know what people think of it Spoiler Alert!!! click to hide or show hold me when i am happy hold me when i am sad hold me when i am mad hold me when you know i miss you hold me when you know... i am gonna walk away... don't let go when i am laughing don't let go when i am crying don't let go when i am angry at you don't let go when you know i need you don't let go when you know... i'm gonna lose you...
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Member kito-atsukori 35676 cr points Send Message: 17 / F / in rose cottage Offline	Permalink Reply Quote Posted 1/2/09 okay im new here so here it gose my poems ^_^ *~angel~* Spoiler Alert!!! click to hide or show What is it around us? That we all fear? I know what it is. And its standing right hear. Its a cage where were looked in. No bars windows or doors. Its a cage called life. Where there is no room to soar. If you break down the wall, You will most-likely fall. But if you spread your wings, You can grow so tall. So soar little angel, Dont let others hold you down. Spread your wings and fly, And dont look back. I know you can do it You just have to try. So get up little angel. And I will help you fly.
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Head Writer PurpleSkye 5118 cr points Send Message: 19 / F / Philippines Offline	Permalink Reply Quote Posted 1/3/09 sakuralockheart94 wrote: i kinda made this a while ago and i've already used it as a chorus in one of my songs "When I Am" hope you like it i guess. really wanna know what people think of it Spoiler Alert!!! click to hide or show hold me when i am happy hold me when i am sad hold me when i am mad hold me when you know i miss you hold me when you know... i am gonna walk away... don't let go when i am laughing don't let go when i am crying don't let go when i am angry at you don't let go when you know i need you don't let go when you know... i'm gonna lose you... It's so sweet! >.< Lovely!
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Head Writer PurpleSkye 5118 cr points Send Message: 19 / F / Philippines Offline	Permalink Reply Quote Posted 1/3/09 kito-atsukori wrote: okay im new here so here it gose my poems ^_^ *~angel~* Spoiler Alert!!! click to hide or show What is it around us? That we all fear? I know what it is. And its standing right hear. Its a cage where were looked in. No bars windows or doors. Its a cage called life. Where there is no room to soar. If you break down the wall, You will most-likely fall. But if you spread your wings, You can grow so tall. So soar little angel, Dont let others hold you down. Spread your wings and fly, And dont look back. I know you can do it You just have to try. So get up little angel. And I will help you fly. I like the meaning of this poem! ^^, It's very good!
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