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Hello!!
Want a place to express yourself through poetry?
You've come to the right place!! =)
Just post your own collections of poems / thoughts here for other readers to judge, comment and rate (out of 10)
Feel free to add your own
Please put them in spoilers for organisation purposes. (^_^;)
Thank you are have fun!~

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Hope you like it~ ^^

You Are..

You Can..

S.M.I.L.E =)

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^ can I comment here? If so... I'll start. :] Well, your work is pretty cute and fluffy.. Really nice and how you expressed love in the first one was good. I loved reading it. Hope to see more of your poetry.
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It's fine. But it'd better if you quote the post you are commenting on. . . . I like her poems though it'd be more fun of there were rhymes but that's just me. . . >.<
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PurpleSkye wrote:

It's fine. But it'd better if you quote the post you are commenting on. . . . I like her poems though it'd be more fun of there were rhymes but that's just me. . . >.<


haha thnxx :] i do hav rhymes.. just keepsaking them for a while =P didnt want to put too much poems at a time ^^
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^ can I comment here? If so... I'll start. :] Well, your work is pretty cute and fluffy.. Really nice and how you expressed love in the first one was good. I loved reading it. Hope to see more of your poetry. :)


naww thankyou!! ^__^ *hugs* =) im sooo glad you liked it
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Tears&Lies.
(Inspired by the song "I Know" - Son Ho Young, about an unrequited love)
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PurpleSkye wrote:

It's fine. But it'd better if you quote the post you are commenting on. . . . I like her poems though it'd be more fun of there were rhymes but that's just me. . . >.<


haha thnxx :] i do hav rhymes.. just keepsaking them for a while =P didnt want to put too much poems at a time ^^


Ohhh...I see! Hahaha... cool!
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lol are yu going to post any? O.o ^^
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Should I..? Hahaha... it's too embarrassing...>.< Maybe later, I should... I'll just have to find the original copies (i don't have them in the PC yet)...
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Okay, here's mine.. hope you'll like it and comment. :]

Venomous Love

The last goodbye I heard from your touching kiss
It echoed with an agonizing hurt that stressed along my veins
Will I ever be able to love you again?
As the bliss of your eternal love left my heart?
I yearned for the happiness of being held again
With your arms along my wilting body
You were my shoulder day after day I slip into your embrace
Every time I see you pained, know that my everlasting love will never cease
I would stretch my burning soul for you, and grip it full of passion
I was intoxicated by your smiles, the one’s I was sure will left a mark
The dawn will break without you by my side
And night will appear breaking me into pieces
Please come back to me again my love
And bring the poisonous kiss I fell for


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i kinda made this a while ago and i've already used it as a chorus in one of my songs "When I Am" hope you like it i guess. really wanna know what people think of it

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okay im new here so here it gose my poems ^_^

~*angel*~


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sakuralockheart94 wrote:

i kinda made this a while ago and i've already used it as a chorus in one of my songs "When I Am" hope you like it i guess. really wanna know what people think of it



It's so sweet! >.< Lovely!
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okay im new here so here it gose my poems ^_^

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I like the meaning of this poem! ^^, It's very good!
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