Poem that u wrote.
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i cant find dis topic.
so i make one.
here is my first poem that i ever wrote.

you are always there whenever i need you
you hear me laugh and cry
you are a friend, an angel to me
seeing you smile makes me delightful
seeing you cry makes me wanna die..
in deep silence i love you
in distance i adored you..
one day i braved myself to tell you
all my feelings towards you..
but all those feelings was crushed
vanished with the winds
as i saw you with her, holding hands
so happily together..
i put my crushed heart inside
in deep silence
in farthest distance
never want to reveal it
cause love really kills me softly..


is it good or bad?
hahahahah.
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how u can found it?
i cant find one.
huhuhu.
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it shows cleary on the general section <.<
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i mean the site for the previous poem topic.
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lol poems <3


amirax wrote:

how u can found it?
i cant find one.
huhuhu.


Uhmm ... I went to search and typed in poems
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xO_Skittles_Ox wrote:



lol poems <3

btw, your thread was are there any poets, which is irrelevant.. and differs in meaning by the whole..
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makimaki_sataandagi wrote:


xO_Skittles_Ox wrote:



lol poems <3

btw, your thread was are there any poets, which is irrelevant.. and differs in meaning by the whole..


It's about the poets on CR, the mods will see it as the same thing aswell
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So theres 4 similar threads about poems here eh?
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