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Posted 11/26/08 , edited 11/27/08
This is another fanfaction GA(gakuen alice) story. however, the main character is Rosa Karina, a new transfered student. THe story take place a few weeks after Mikan came in. When Mikan is still a no star and when she hasn't sat beside Natsume yet. So the story is twisted a little. Enjoy!



I know it's a little long. Forgive me. I know that for some of the characters i write sounds a little insultive but pls don't take it to heart. Chapter 2 will take a while but pls do look forward to it!!!
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Posted 11/28/08
woowowow its good
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Posted 11/28/08
That was really fun to read. Good Job ^_^
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Posted 11/29/08

jasmint94 wrote:

This is another fanfaction GA(gakuen alice) story. however, the main character is Rosa Karina, a new transfered student. THe story take place a few weeks after Mikan came in. When Mikan is still a no star and when she hasn't sat beside Natsume yet. So the story is twisted a little. Enjoy!



I know it's a little long. Forgive me. I know that for some of the characters i write sounds a little insultive but pls don't take it to heart. Chapter 2 will take a while but pls do look forward to it!!!
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Posted 11/29/08

jasmint94 wrote:

This is another fanfaction GA(gakuen alice) story. however, the main character is Rosa Karina, a new transfered student. THe story take place a few weeks after Mikan came in. When Mikan is still a no star and when she hasn't sat beside Natsume yet. So the story is twisted a little. Enjoy!



I know it's a little long. Forgive me. I know that for some of the characters i write sounds a little insultive but pls don't take it to heart. Chapter 2 will take a while but pls do look forward to it!!!
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Posted 11/29/08
clap clap clap!!! that was amazing!!! i wanna write that amazing when i grow up!
Posted 11/30/08
Thanks^-^ Really! I like to some some words first. Please be honest aka if the story is aweful, then tell me politely so that i can improve. Thank you people!

And huhlo, i'm sure you can write great stories too!!! If you plan to write any story, tell me so that i can read. If you need help, feel free to find me. I'll be glad to lend you a helping hand! ^-^ I luv helping my friends! THIS IS TO THE OTHERS TOO!!!

BIG THANKS AGAIN!!! Wait for next chapter-chapter 2. It's gonna be out soon!^o^
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Posted 11/30/08

jasmint94 wrote:

Thanks^-^ Really! I like to some some words first. Please be honest aka if the story is aweful, then tell me politely so that i can improve. Thank you people!

And huhlo, i'm sure you can write great stories too!!! If you plan to write any story, tell me so that i can read. If you need help, feel free to find me. I'll be glad to lend you a helping hand! ^-^ I luv helping my friends! THIS IS TO THE OTHERS TOO!!!

BIG THANKS AGAIN!!! Wait for next chapter-chapter 2. It's gonna be out soon!^o^


you so nice!!
Posted 12/1/08
Sorry if it's long!!! I've put up chapter 2 already (happy?) Enjoy!


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Posted 12/2/08
wow. i really liked it. it looks interesting. keep up the good work XD!!
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Posted 12/2/08
Wow! It's really good jasmint94. It's very different, then most normal Gakuen Alice stories. You know not, the usual Mikan getting mad a Natsume, or something It was really fun to read, and you had really good grammer, and spelling. Good luck.
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that was excellent! Would you like me to be your illistrator? i'll find the best pics for you and macth the moods plz tell me!!!
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Posted 12/2/08
btw where are our other writers???? and illistrators????? GET EXCITED PPL!! SHOW OFF AND SPEAK UP
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Posted 12/2/08
big claps!!! the second chapter was awesome!!
Posted 12/2/08
Hi people! Thnaks so much for all your great comments and motivation, Really!

I have a tiny winy bit of changes in chapter 2 below:



Just in case you've forgotten, that's permy's line.

Chapter 3 will take a while before i post it up so please wait. Thanks!!!
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