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do u think that this will turn out to be a good anime? or manga?
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Posted 11/28/08

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Posted 11/28/08
Lol, can't decide................
Posted 12/1/08

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???
Don't ask me!!!


you didn't have to say anything if you can't in the first place -_-'


U don't need to tell me
I just want to killing time and write some word
That's my right so up to me
U don't need to thrust nose into my business
MIND YOUR OWN BUSINESS!!!


lol then what you are doing is spamming and thats forbidden ^^
Posted 12/1/08 , edited 12/1/08
nice..just add more depth i guess..
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You know, you're acting really childish. Even tho in your later posts you say you're still a kid, but you're like already what? 19? 20? Anyway, I'm only 13 and I'm more mature? You're actually almost an adult, so wake up and start acting your age. If the matter has already solved, then just ignore this.
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not bad (:
Posted 1/2/09
it sounds like a mix of Tokyo Mew Mew, Bleach, and Naruto :\
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Misuki 12 year old girl that have a ordinary life in daytime( going to school ,hanging around with her friends,shopping.etc. that any other ordinary girls do in everyday until she reach her home) ...at night she goes out when she feels something strange...her pet cat follows her..(without her knowing).

until she reach that certain place where there is a portal...and a monster appear on it........

the monster sees her..and charge to her ..she form a seal (kinda like hand signals.. dont want to make this an example but to explain it easily..naruto hand signals ex:before using any ninjutsu technics,)...after that a barier form circled around her, blocking the attack.

the monster tries to pierce the barrier..she make another hand signal..the barries expand quickly (and disapear after a sec.) pushing the monster backward a few meters...

misaki saw an unexpected people near the place ( a couple , walking in the road near the park)
the monster sees them..since she cant attack the little girl with a barier..of course the monster will try another victim...the monster jump towards them while preparing for an attack..the couple heard the roar of the monster..looking up they are terryfied..misuki chant a spell firing a fire attack..it hit the monster sending it flying in the center of the park..the couple run..misuki chant a spell again ..making the couple stop their movement..kinda like a time freeze (also making them forget wat they saw, a brainwash). misuki chant a short spell and teleported the couple to another place

...the monster stands up..the fire attack didnt make much damage.the monster is angry ,fire a energy blast from its mouth..misuki create a barrier ..but the energy blast is strong she struggle to keep her barrier up...the energy finally worn out.also misuki's barrier disapeared..misuki seems to be exhausted..the monster sees the opportunity ...charging to her with full strenght..the monster raise its arm for and attack..misuki saw it coming but she dont have time to make a barier and she's also exhausted her body cant move..she cant do anything but to close her eyes..a small figure appeared running so fast like a bullet..a cat figure became a light..and the light started to grow big (in a second)..a monster got a strong kick on the face..the monster falls down and slide a few meters..misuki thought that she was dead.( asking herself.).. she heard a voice saying.."hey!..open your eyes." ..as soon as she open her eyes.. it caught glimpse of guy..he have black hair.(she can also see his back).he said "its okay now" then he turn around his face a little..exposing his cute/handsome face..his eyes are yellow that looks like an eye of a cat..he said " im here" he gave her a smile...making misuki blush

(well thats almost like episode 1 or chapter 1).

chapter 2 or episode 2 :

im out of time...so i will make it really a short summary
first its show the memory of her pet cat...that her parent gave to her..when she was 5 years old..when she was sad,,crying ,having a problem..her pet cat was always there to comfort her,(her pet cat is the only one she can talk to..her parents are always away cuz of work,she lives with his grandpa the one who trains her..but she dont want to make her granpa worry..so she only shared almost every thing/memories to her pet cat..)
the guy defeated the monster...the monster turns into a black shadow and the shadow was suck back to the portal...misuki chant a spell closing the portal...she decided to thank the guy ..the guy is gone!...the morning comes...she goes to school..thinking about the guy who saves her almost the whole day or course she cant forget the handsome/cute face with a strange yellow eyes.(she dont realize that it looks like a cat eye..she only remembers that its strange)..her mind is full of question about him...she went home..the guy was there.(depending on his looks and his height he was19-20 years old.when u compared their height.misuki is only half of his...misuki..was so suprised..(in deep shock..wondering why is he inside the house).the guy said "its been years since i want to talke to you" (she was still frozen in shock)..then he said "ow!..i see ..(half circle eyes)..you dont know who the hell am i.." he turns into a light ;;the light shrinks..turn into a animal figure..he was misuki's pet cat....
(misukireally cant believe wat she saw so she fainted)...when she wakes up...he was sitting next to her..so close her eyes again pretending that she still asleep..she thought..that handsome/cute.guy was my pet!!..and the embarasing thing she remembers, she always take a bath with his pet cat!!

( thats not the all the exact summary/details)
i can make a fanatic...is you really want?..but its time already..im gonna go home..

ive finished the continuation..just find it on page 3 of this thread


right well first its poorly written and there is no explination on how she knows how do do any of this stuff, then there's the fact that its not Original its like someone took a whole lot of anime and manga and put them together, oh and one other thing i know its an anime but you have to put a sence of reality in there im not saying you have to make it real or any thing but if a monster came out of nowhere and started attacking you you first off wouldn't know what to do but also you would probobly be weting yourself, but this is just my opinion so you don't have to take it to heart. best of luck on you work though.
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Posted 1/3/09
sounds awesome.
i think that she should be a bit older though.. (sorry if you may have already mentioned this) and she should wear lolita styled clothing.
Posted 1/3/09
me too I have a story!
Posted 1/3/09
its title is "FALLEN" actually i already think of 3 stories Its #1- FALLEN #2-VANILLA AND SALT #3-DIMENSIONAL LOVE. the fallen is about angels: the world is divided into 2 worlds the angel world and the human world the angels protect the humans form the monsters called "RODENDRONS".rodendrons are made by black-winged angels called SAFFRONS. hwen the saffrons send rodendrons to the human world there are angels that are sent to the human world to execute the RODENDRONS called VIVERS. well im out of time its just a short sentences in my story.
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Posted 1/3/09
too long ...
won't read,
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Posted 1/4/09

teaquila wrote:




You know, you're acting really childish. Even tho in your later posts you say you're still a kid, but you're like already what? 19? 20? Anyway, I'm only 13 and I'm more mature? You're actually almost an adult, so wake up and start acting your age. If the matter has already solved, then just ignore this.

Why should you guess my age?
And u know I AM NOT THAT OLD

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