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xoxmangoxox
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Posted 11/27/08
DIGGING;
deeper and deeper,
can't see the bottom,
what risk?

I JUMP;
no parachute,
plunge over the edge,
freefall.

FALLING;
faster and faster,
darkness all around,
blind.

THE END;
ground rushing up,
eyes scan the ground,
desperate.

CATCH ME;
as i fall,
you reach out,
save me.

SAVIOR;
keep me safe,
never let me go,
my love.

©2008 ~itsumoxx@deviantART.com
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Posted 12/3/08
That's a pretty cool poem I have forgotten what this type of poem is called but nevertheless its nice.
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